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Hanamisuki thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
hats off to u reet.
u have written such a sensitive issue in a very nice manner.
there is no exaggeration of any thing.i just feel the situation in front of my eyes.
it is very difficult to write the aftermath of such issues,u have done it so naturally,
that, in no place i could feel it is awkward or overdose
the policestation scene is what i felt so normal,and that was the reality of soiety
maan's anger on vikas,his helplessness seeing geet's condition,his all emotions are so very nicely explained by u.
geet is no more going to be the same geet as before,i think.
she had faced the worst nightmare in the world,definitely she would have broken mentally,
physical injury may be healed but what about her mental state,
how she is going to recover?she needed arjun at this time,but she is not accepting it.
she is thinking that she doesn't deserve him.
she needs arjun's presence,his assurance that she is his,whatever may be the circumstance what ever might have happened between them,they are meant to be,they may fight with each other,but they can't be separated,they are one soul.
regardless of the consequences,geet must know about their relationship,it is high time arjun must tell her the truth.
then only he could get his geet back.at this time she needs a shoulder to support ,only arjun could give that.
but i wonder what is cooking in geet's mind?
why she is telling dia to take care of arjun?god dont make her to take any wrong decision.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing as always, i realy found Dia to be so human not atall irritated by d way she tried convincing arjun to move on with her, after all she's is normal gal with normal feelings n desire its realy hard n difficult to forget ur 1st love n a slightest hope can always ignite the fire to achieve it , realy waiting wat anant will do abt vikas as he had already warned tat worm to stay away yet he didnt pay any heed to d warning, hope so anant punish him well plzzz do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both Arjun and Geet are going through a tough phase...Geet is numb after all the happenings in her life...want to be left alone and Arjun is helpless seeing his geet in such condition...and corrupt system making him feel more helpless...the police is not ready to start investigation and blaming Arjun...this is the situation everywhere...always the innocent is suffered...feel so bad for Geet...she knows what is going to happen now...even in such a situation everyone will blame her only...as Rashi doubting her condition Was it truth this time ? rashi couldn't help herself and Geet' words"Let me guess 'they didn't take the diary .. as it was me the victim .. the faker ..lying bitch !

She let out a small maniacal laugh . you know what he had told me that .. !"

I loved Arjun taking care of geet as a guardian which he should have done anyway...but at the same time he is guilty for not being with her when she was all alone...blaming himself for her condition...finally he is realzing that he should have told her the truth... claimed her as his,then nothing would have gone wrong.

The conversation between Geet and Dia...ohh poor Geet wants Dia to be with Arjun...the same Geet who was so possesive of Arjun and can't stand them together...she is still punishing herself and thinks herself to be unworthy of Arjun...now that Arjun knows what Geet has told Dia,I hope he don't take it much seriously and hurt him and Geet in the process...

And finally..Dia knows the the truth and what Arjun couldn't do...Satya has done for him...I love you satya...you came at the end and took all the limelight...shutting Dia's mouth and making her realize what Geet means to Arjun...

now waiting for Anant's reaction to the whole situation and how he deals with it...and how that Vikas is going to be punished...


Loved these lines...


Dia looked back to find a guy in a maroon shirt and a dark jean standing at the door . his face seemed known to her . oh he was in the union room yesterday .

He must be a senior .. but the question wasn't that ..it was what he said .

As if reading the question on her face he said

He cant forget her ..

Excuse me..!This is a private conversation ..


No its not ! I m satya awasty .. your senior ..and very much related to both of them . to arjun singh khurana ..and geet raichanda

What ? how . ?whatever ..but I m talking to him right now .. you have no right to talk between us .

Yes I do .. because I m not an outsider .. you are !!

.because The person you are asking him to forget ..

Is his wife !


Again...thanks a lot for an awesome update.👏

Waiting for next...



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Posted: 12 years ago
Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
little light hearted update...
feeling bad for both...both are terrible wound up, phisically & more mentally ...
the police station part was a reality...earlier same inspector was ready to lodge the complaint again geet and for arjun but same policeman was not ready to register the complaint against vikas as he was polition son and geet has bad reputaion...how pathetic...
loved mr sahay...who could guess the relation of geet & arjun and silently suporting him...
glad that su is staying with geet...
starting i loved dia who is ready to help geet wtih anything but at last she changed with geet's one sentence and trying arjun to understand her love and move on with her...dekha pyaar kya kya karvata hai insan se...
omg loved staya...he stole the whole show with his entry at the end...
glad that he revealed the truth ...
scared wht if AR is entering in the show at this time...
dev...what should I say about him...what will he do if he comes to know about geet's attempted rape...I am sure he will leave her instantly...
now I worrying about arjun...he could understand what dia conveyed geet's message to move on...but he could not see that its her love that she doesnt want him to be tented with his full life and will regret...as she could guess the what happened in the police station and she could never get the justice, being all alone, no body will listen to her now...
cant wait for long...pl update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
RYNA123 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
I LOVED IT...PLEASE GIVE NEXT UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
ariz2000 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting 4 nxt update...
Thanks a lot 4 regular updates🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't want anything from you geet..

I can never forgive her dia...i can never forget..

Then there u go..

No.i wont... he murmured back in such voice that only she could hear pausing for a moment he spoke again... let you go..


Oh..
What a soothing relief for the aching heart of that poor soul as well as poor us.. dawn has finally broken down in their little melancholic world. But with hope a ray of light also gives us the visuality to the shattered pieces which the darkness can easily hide.

When we surpeessed our feelings in our heart shaped cage a pressure started to build up around it. With each passing second the pressure is incrising and after sometime it started becoming intolerable.so with the first possible leakage it bursts out with such intensity that we can only feel it that time but cann't be able gauge its strength. For that we have to wait for the storm to subdue.We have the sense what is right or wrong then also we cannt control ourselves.That exactly happend with dia.now i Am waiting to see how she will cop up with the aftermath.

Vikas,attempted rape on her...!dia stated just as a matter of fact...


I couldn't digest it.

About the police station fiasco i have a feeling that the agarwals have already started to play their cards cause now the opppnent is THE ANANT RAICHANDA.

Am i making any sense??
I think now my bottled up emotions are brusting out after reading the update.

Edited by sonai-adrica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

No .. I wont . he murmured back in such voice that only she could hear pausing for a moment he spoke again .. let you go .

Sunanda lashing out at Arjun along with Vikas and he gets the message. If there was a scratch on her he would suffer Su, but still a friend can't help her anger seeing the sight in front of her.

Rashi and Dia convo made me realize that Dia may have tough circumstances but she is not a pushover. She can stand up for things. I like and fear this about her.

For my sake...he brought the hand and placed the palm on his chest . on his heart .

She shivered as the throbbing beats her palm felt , he almost smiled feeling the shiver run through himself too

This was such a melty moment for me. She has done so much for that heart, the one she wanted to make a place in and even now all broken, she still feels for that heart. The one she is not sure she will ever have, yet she still does what it wants. I love her in this moment, like never before.

how many more times I have to beg mercy from you sir .. just tell me .

Arjun stared at her form that oozed denial from every ounce of it.

being with her , situation so grave like this made him forget at what end both them were standing .

Taking his help and being dependent on him does not go down well with her esp. when she is still bearing his punishment. Although at this point it does not seem to be just her punishment. It was always a punishment for both.

But seeing her like that , all over bruised beaten up sprawled like a broken doll in Arjun's arms a very little of them actually did think the same .

She looked so dreadful .and that can happen with anyone . being XX chromosome they knew it and they feared it . so they didn't make fun of her . instead just watched her in utter silence . a silence that had fear . she was the hapless girl today, tomorrow it can be any one of them .

Judge not lest you be judged. It reminds me of this. The fear wipes out all else. Their judging her, their looking down on her, their callous and cruel words fail when they realize it could be any of them.

Be with him dia .. help him .. to forget this .. all of this.

At this point, she is truly all alone. Even hope has left her, just like in the dark sky, the moon her only friend had left her. That song is still playing in my head. I have always liked it but now it will be the song that Reet's Geet sang. You owned it. The true lover that she actually is, she wants him to be taken care of in this moment. This is perhaps the ultimate sacrifice a woman can make. It is not possible that men would ever do this, only a woman's heart is this big.

She doesn't want me ? Arjun spoke in a trance .. catching only that part of the whole conversation .

She said .. she doesn't want me ?

Move on ..??

He kept repeating the words ..not grasping it quite .

The ultimate rejection which he has to face. Some brought on by himself when he went in to get revenge without knowing the facts fully. Now in all consciousness his errors will be glaring at him like never before. Everything that he hid from his name to the ring, everything will play on in his head now. Time for Arjun to step out of his thoughts and Maan to come forward and accept his punishment. She will hurt but she will also forgive cause she is a woman in love. We have no choices when it comes to the heart.

I was telling Onir this at the last update that I hope Reet does not update too fast as I want to read and re-read obsessively the last part. That has never happened to me before where I wanted an update to wait. The power of words and how to play with them and your characters is something you are magnificent with. I am in awe of the way you have carried us forth in this story.👏Thanks for updating. Sorry for the delayed comment but I could not put it together in words very fast.
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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