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where's the update??i thought you'll update today & i'll comment on both together.will you update today??

i was waiting for three comment .
avi palin and onir .

avi u did ..
can not express how glad i m ..

about what u had said earlier ..u hated satya for blurting this .. dia knew before geet ..i will pm u .
but i loved ur reaction ..oh how biased i m about u .
my dear ..ur point is so right ..only you cud raise such question ..
that is y i depend on u .

but the question is do they know what is right ?


lastly .. i will reply u to the point after i update ..cause ..
i have deleted a part for four times till now ..
coudnt write it the way i want it to be.
it seems very difficult to me !

now after reading ur comment i m gonna write .
again



can u ask onir and palin to criticize me.. palin hasnt edited her comment ..if they dont wanna do that on thread ask them to pm me ..please ..
anything ..even if it is one liner.
i felt something is missing in the last update ..cant get what is it ?

whats wrong avi ??
do u think same ?

whr is onir ?
i havnt seen her since yesterday ..hope she is fine !

Originally posted by: baisakh45

where's the update??i thought you'll update today & i'll comment on both together.will you update today??

first pm me..what u felt missing in last update baisakh ..i know u did feel that too!

Originally posted by: palindrome

res😃

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Unperturbed to the curious , jealous and judging eyes...

you keep on amazing me with your immense writing caliber,reet..With in one line,you summarized the reactions of geet's hostel mates..I was able to imagine their faces...!!!!👏.👏.👏.👏

I liked Mr.Sahay's trust on Geet..He could not stop himself from feeling bad for her..and I guess,His keen eyes are able to see the "hidden".His mysterious smile said it all...!!!

a vase on it . flowerless.

Perfect symbolization..!!!

and I must say,you are perfect in giving some minute details,which I must have ignored for sure,if i was writing this story{I wish i could write like you..😛..},like Arjun noticing geet's room.Though it did not interest him but its a normal human reaction to notice the things in a new place...!!!you did not forget the part that he was visiting her room for the first time...!!!

The entire part where arjun convinced geet for medical check up was truly heart warming..One would smile amidst tears reading that..!!!

I was kind of aware,how police going to react to this case...!!! I don't know whether arjun would be able to punish vikas for his deed..May be Geet's grandpa would prove little useful here...Though i am curious,why did he ask dev to not to call geet...???

Dev seems genuinely in love with Geet..His care and anxiety on phone seemed real to me..!!!

you are good for him you know .. geet said . .. even as a lover .

And geet,finally said this..!!!

She wants a better "lover" for her "love"..I don't know whether to laugh or cry on geet's statement..!!! She is pushing her "punishment" beyond limits, i think..But her thinking this way did not amaze me..!!! She is still thinking about Arjun...and wants to keep herself away from him..But question is that,would she be able to bear if arjun actually moved on with Dia..??? Her "endurance" is not that strong...!!!

and Dia's outburst at last...!!!

You have chosen a perfect time to bring her feelings out ,reet..!!!

and I don't find anything wrong{ok one thing} in whatever she said..!! From her perspective,from her awareness about geet's and arjun's relationship,from the angle she is seeing both of them,her words were right..!!! She had tried alot to suppress her love and keep herself in check, but now when geet herself asked her to move on with arjun,she confessed her feelings ...!!! after all,we see what we want to see,sometimes..!!!

only wrong thing that she had uttered in her enraged state was,"geet does not need you sir.."..She stated the "conclusion" given by her mind after hearing geet's words when she asked her to take care of Arjun..!!! I don't know how arjun is going to take these words...!!!!

and Mr.Satya.😳.His entry brought out a big secret...I loved the way he entered..why do i feel there would be something between satya and dia in near future..I have deliberately ignored his smile that he had given to Dia's outburst in union room,in last chapter.I don't know why..May be i did not want to make myself present as a "match maker"...!!!😆

over all "perfect chapter" reet...👏.👏.👏..👏.👏 You rock!!!!!😃

as usual..waiting eagerly for next...!!!

being edited


details..oh ! ..
someone once told me its the detailing that makes it great observation .memory and reproduction of it ..as i said before i want u to see what i m feeling


palin u r being humble now
i know u are a talented writer even before u started reading this fic..i searched for ur pro and had it bookmarked to read every story u have written .
so i have stalked u before u did me'
who is better ?
lol

and palin should i say whose observation is better

onir u and avi u all three never stop amazing me
good god such a lucky writer i m..


about dia .ur perception is perfect about her .. she is a normal human being we all are bit selfish .. so she didnt want to see what geet actually needed

okay .yes..i m planning something but what i havnt decided yet

love cherish and wait for your valuable comment !

big hug fr u!

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

i was waiting for three comment .
avi palin and onir .

avi u did ..
can not express how glad i m ..

about what u had said earlier ..u hated satya for blurting this .. dia knew before geet ..i will pm u .
but i loved ur reaction ..oh how biased i m about u .
my dear ..ur point is so right ..only you cud raise such question ..
that is y i depend on u .

but the question is do they know what is right ?


lastly .. i will reply u to the point after i update ..cause ..
i have deleted a part for four times till now ..
coudnt write it the way i want it to be.
it seems very difficult to me !

now after reading ur comment i m gonna write .
again



can u ask onir and palin to criticize me.. palin hasnt edited her comment ..if they dont wanna do that on thread ask them to pm me ..please ..
anything ..even if it is one liner.
i felt something is missing in the last update ..cant get what is it ?

whats wrong avi ??
do u think same ?

whr is onir ?
i havnt seen her since yesterday ..hope she is fine !

@ reet..

kyu lag raha hai aisa

@ palin : just want to know

satyaaa ... loved him .. there has to be some twist .. now dia will know about geet

this is soo painful diii :(
Really soo painful :(
geet is lying there helplesss
she is soo stubborn all these turn of events made her like this but still arjun is the only one who can change her mind
dat bas***d vikas flew away :@@@ but im sure arjun is not gonna leave him
and dat police how dare he talk abt geet like that!! ok we know about her past records but stilll
dia i thought y is she shouting all tbose to maan as it hurts him more but acha hua
satya wat an entry!! pheww!!! sum other soul now knows that geet is married to Arjun!!
ohhh luvibg it diii
ye padte padte i missed my stop n reached last stop :( ;) :P
phewww u took me to a different world completely!!!