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@ palin ..

r u sure ?

cause ..i did felt ..
after i re read ur comment ..i felt little better ..may be .. i was wrong !

actually i had written todays update yesterday itself ..but today i deleted an important part ..it was not suiting !!

thankx palin ..but always feel free to criticize !
because i want to improve .and i m not as wise as avi !

p.s
dont know y i cant press like button more than once in an hour !!

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

i was waiting for three comment .
avi palin and onir .

avi u did ..
can not express how glad i m ..I came home very late last night. Boy that guy can sure rock a concert... woke up this morning trying to formulate a comment.

about what u had said earlier ..u hated satya for blurting this .. dia knew before geet ..i will pm u .
but i loved ur reaction ..oh how biased i m about u .I am a possessive witch when it comes to my hubby although I never let it show😉, so I could not help my reaction. I suppose most women are about their loves. This to me gave Dia something about Geet which was not her right to know first.
my dear ..ur point is so right ..only you cud raise such question ..
that is y i depend on u .

but the question is do they know what is right ?


lastly .. i will reply u to the point after i update ..cause ..
i have deleted a part for four times till now ..
coudnt write it the way i want it to be.
it seems very difficult to me !

now after reading ur comment i m gonna write .
again



can u ask onir and palin to criticize me.. palin hasnt edited her comment ..if they dont wanna do that on thread ask them to pm me ..please ..
anything ..even if it is one liner.
i felt something is missing in the last update ..cant get what is it ?

whats wrong avi ??
do u think same ?

I have read and re-read that part obsessively. There is nothing in that which I could find a thing to complain at all. Every single thing was in line. Stop overthinking it Reet... WRITE

whr is onir ?
i havnt seen her since yesterday ..hope she is fine !


Rains in Mumbai are playing havoc with people's net connections. The size of her comments don't let her type it on mobile so she may be waiting for the net. I know she had a day off. Plus she shares lappy with family so maybe she did not get enough laptop time. I am sure she will comment as soon as she is able.

Res

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

@ palin ..

r u sure ?

cause ..i did felt ..
after i re read ur comment ..i felt little better ..may be .. i was wrong !

actually i had written todays update yesterday itself ..but today i deleted an important part ..it was not suiting !!

thankx palin ..but always feel free to criticize !
because i want to improve .and i m not as wise as avi !

p.s
dont know y i cant press like button more than once in an hour !!

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

kyu lag raha hai aisa

ke sab kuch tut kar bhi

kuch judaa hua baaki hai

aur

aur sab kuch

jodne ke liye

abhi bhi kuch

tutna baaki hai

kuch yu chali hawaa

ke sab kuch bikhar gaya

jo banaaya tha

maine apne pyaar ka mahal

woh sukhe patto sa bikhar gaya

unke bhikare hue sapno ke

chott yu lAGI mujhe

ke dekha jab aaiyna

to aayina bhi mujhe dekh kar

mujhe pahchanne se mukar gaya

Phew read it all.. 😊

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

first pm me..what u felt missing in last update baisakh ..i know u did feel that too!

i actually don't know reet.i can feel it that there's something missing but can't find it.will you update today??please update.i am dying to read it.it has actually become my medicine.

Originally posted by: dqno1

That's it...first practical, then mature now wise...Why don't you say what you mean to say? I am boring...😭

I give up on you! KATTI!!!😲

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

@ palin ..

r u sure ?

cause ..i did felt ..
after i re read ur comment ..i felt little better ..may be .. i was wrong !

actually i had written todays update yesterday itself ..but today i deleted an important part ..it was not suiting !!

thankx palin ..but always feel free to criticize !
because i want to improve .and i m not as wise as avi !

p.s
dont know y i cant press like button more than once in an hour !!

heyyy...
first of ol thanx for replying on my comment, dats a lot for me.
am folowing ur updats bt cnt comment ofton. dey r emotional fabulous nd heartwrenching ones. wen com across geet being restricted from mess cafeteria library classes it made me cry she was even didnt got fud fpr retaining her lof. where was arjuns sorry maans promis of protecting her being bsid as a support.
arjuns baat sahi nikli vikas wl couse her lif oneday it was too much from him. he should be punished bt by geet itself. he was planning everything.
geet still loves arjun despit of ol hapenings. bt she wl heartbroken wen she get to knw about arjun being maan. arjun s insecur of losing geet wen de truth of maan out tho wt about geets insecurity about him being vt dia even out of station overnight nd his nt confessing of feelings or the truth.
nw in last update also der dia gets outburst wen he repeat geet eventho she knws very well dat he is madly in love vt geet. is dat an overreaction?! as a matter of fact geet s never at fault wen she reacted in de fiest place wen she was deeply crazly in love vt him nd blindly trust on him blev him nd given him right on her nd share each nd everything dat goin on in herlif even about dev nd want to meet anant. bcos she s loving him trusting him nd he also claim for de same. bt in dias case its only she loves him. nd also geet ask dia for supporting nd lead hom in his lif sinc she wants happiness for him nd dats real pure love.
nd ha dias insecurities also a thing for ol dese happenings nd arjun was aware of it but he s nt aware of geets indecurities she was goin thru since wen god knws despit of his claiming of loving her knwn her. he cn handle geet very easily eventho he told about scholarship to her. bcos she thinks by getting scholarship she wl get close to her papaji prove her love for him bt he cn convince her for dat she dnt hv to do dat bt its for dos one who r in need for dat nd she hv to provid dat by herself to dem den her papaji wl be more happy nd vt her alwys. she wl understand for sure.
nd ha lastly i knw dis s ur story nd hv ur own way to portry nd proceed it bt am requesting... ol shud knw about geet nd maans past especially dia bt she wud nt be de first one knwn about it nd especialy from maans side bcos he only knwn about his sid nd she wl get dat only. so she wl think very low about geet as she ditched him in past also as per his saying. bt dats nt de real truth. so she shud knwn about it in full dat s de real truth nd ol dose resulted in geets reaction against maan. nd one more thing dat s behind my sying dis s geet shud nt knwn about maan from an outsider bt from arjun aka her maan himself otherwys it wl wors for her bcos already she knwn about his love nd ring frim dia nd things go on lik dis nd knwn maans truth also lik dis dat she cnt accept dat easily bcos its his responsibility to inform her nt anyoders. dat wl result in making things even worst nd she cnt be never forgivable for her to him. so pls let it be nd make knwing de truth to ol by som twist by geet. bcos wen she col for maan in her sleep dat dayy.. su nd zaria were nt clear dat wt maan she sying is a person or respect?! sooo...

its ur work boss...so u hv ur own ways nd i knw dat wud b somthing we didnt even thought about it. ur an awsom writer make us sit lik watching a film.
wt was de reason of geets hate towards dia in first place? is she realy hate her?! cn she dat vtout ny convinient reason. bcos she olways bend to help oders in everything den wt vt dia?!
nw watever geet getting r wer of out of pity or sympathy. cn she never get wt she deserv?!