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sweetsampa39 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I always have to think so much before commenting on your updates Genious.

Again a twister of an update,evoking those emotions that I may not notice I have thats why I fail to name them.

I am unable undestand Geet's state of mind coz I didnt go thru what she did.And I wish no girl has to ever experience that.But yet I m glad that she listened to Arjun to let the doctor check her.Her denial only depicts to how much deep she's been hurt,by everyone she trusted.

Arjun's helplesness and anger can be felt as mine.He failed to protect her,everytime.The feeling itself is suffocating.But this time he didnt let her go and stuck with he at every step.
The police,oh God,their nature disgusts me.They tend to prove the victim as the criminal,in real life too.They wont listen to Arjun and let that worm live free.But he has to be punished,how thats upon you Reet.
Mr.Sahay has understood that Geet and Arjun share more than a teacher-student relationship,he respects that and even called him her guardian.
Thanx to Sunanda and her father,that she reamins to stay with Geet.

But Dia finally cudnt hold the dam of her emotions,specially after the small talk with Geet and blurted out all her hatred towards Geet and love towards Arjun.

Yet Arjun's didnt hear dia's confession,he heard " She said .. she doesn't want me ?
Move on ..??"
that Geet doesnt want him.
Ufff
"Yeh ishq nahi aasaan bas itna samajh lije

ik aag ka dariya hai,

aur doob ke jaana hai..."

After all the storms,he hadnt expected this.


But thanx to Satya,kya entry maari hai boss,love him.


Desperately waiting to read the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing ...

Loved it


Will add more ltr u know why


Dont hate me 4 saying this

I want to kill Satyas big mouth

Dia knows he is her husband before she does... Grrr... Hope she does not blab to Geet... That would just break her totally...

Superb the rest of it
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet 😃 really I never thought she will listen to Arjun. wen she said no to others for doctor checkup. Glad that she accepted for "his sake". Police not ready to take action. Vikas escaped 😡 only AR can solve this no. 😊 sunada amazing friend. Lucky geet to get a friend like her who is sooo supportive. Dia's emotional outburst 😲 😳. Satya 😃 love him.
Loved d beautiful updated 😃
Downhill thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i feel like i am reading this story at supersonic speed, given the accelerating heartbeats and the number of times my heart skips beat... this story is going to be the death of me👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for updating.Nowadays you are so quick in updating that many times i have not even read the previous update and the next part comes.keep it up.If there is a long period between updates the flow of story breaks and i have to go to last update again to continue.Thanks again
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Posted: 12 years ago
'Mysterious smile' of Mr Sahay...hmmm he knows all & understands all...after all he is princy have seen other teacher student relation before though maybe not so intense like this one😊
Police's reaction is normal one, they don't go against big wigs...they r for protection of influential people. At last the insecurities of Dia came up but she should have understood the depth of Geet & Arjun's relationship, Geet's denials to him are just superficial...even Mr Sahay who are not close to Geet & Arjun understood that he was her 'guardian' though for these days only & as Geet herself told that she has no one else other than Arjun so she is showing her anger, pain, helplesslessness to him only.
Satya's revelation was necessary to close Dia's mouth & make her understand that she is the outsider in Arjun Geet relationship but hope the truth don't get twisted against their favour. Geet's body will be healed but don't know how much time her soul will take & Reet, your stories move in such unpredictable way that don't know what may come next so waiting eagerly😊
Edited by Asmi13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Again emotional part...
the whole hospital scene left me amazed 👏
this is really awesome..
u r awesome di 😊
About geet's state I can't even speak..
so much pain,so much hurdle in way...
arjun hats off to you...
your care ,your love ...I salute you for that...
but still my heart pain for geet...
Dia's frustration atlast out...
hope maan doesn't MU geet cause dia told him geet doesn't need him anymore 😔
Satya right time entry⭐️
will be waiting for next part...
luv u di😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pata. Nahi aur kitna jhelna hai in dono. Ko
I wonder ki will they ever get their happy ending!!!!!
Nowadays seeing the phase of the story I feel u haven't been thinking
Something like giving a happy end. !!!😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
accha hua dia ko pata chal gaya...dekhte hai kya hota hau...dia ne apna rang dikhayi di...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Is his wife !

Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga

I keep on singing .

I am grinning like fool. Love you dear for the beautiful update. You take me through a roller coaster ride. At last Zor ka jhatka

Police station incident made my blood boiling. These people say a lot of procedures and section before arresting a hi-funda man. But nothing sort of that applies, if it is a common man. Even putting a comment in face back, u has to be cautious. Grrr😡

Thanks for keeping it realistic.

All the characters in your story got a dimension. Even it is the Arjun's cook who keeps on taking leave. 👏

Edited by riyasp - 12 years ago

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