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palindrome thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
res😃

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Unperturbed to the curious , jealous and judging eyes...

you keep on amazing me with your immense writing caliber,reet..With in one line,you summarized the reactions of geet's hostel mates..I was able to imagine their faces...!!!!👏.👏.👏.👏

I liked Mr.Sahay's trust on Geet..He could not stop himself from feeling bad for her..and I guess,His keen eyes are able to see the "hidden".His mysterious smile said it all...!!!

a vase on it . flowerless.
Perfect symbolization..!!!
and I must say,you are perfect in giving some minute details,which I must have ignored for sure,if i was writing this story{I wish i could write like you..😛..},like Arjun noticing geet's room.Though it did not interest him but its a normal human reaction to notice the things in a new place...!!!you did not forget the part that he was visiting her room for the first time...!!!
The entire part where arjun convinced geet for medical check up was truly heart warming..One would smile amidst tears reading that..!!!
I was kind of aware,how police going to react to this case...!!! I don't know whether arjun would be able to punish vikas for his deed..May be Geet's grandpa would prove little useful here...Though i am curious,why did he ask dev to not to call geet...???
Dev seems genuinely in love with Geet..His care and anxiety on phone seemed real to me..!!!


you are good for him you know .. geet said . .. even as a lover .
And geet,finally said this..!!!
She wants a better "lover" for her "love"..I don't know whether to laugh or cry on geet's statement..!!! She is pushing her "punishment" beyond limits, i think..But her thinking this way did not amaze me..!!! She is still thinking about Arjun...and wants to keep herself away from him..But question is that,would she be able to bear if arjun actually moved on with Dia..??? Her "endurance" is not that strong...!!!

and Dia's outburst at last...!!!
You have chosen a perfect time to bring her feelings out ,reet..!!!
and I don't find anything wrong{ok one thing} in whatever she said..!! From her perspective,from her awareness about geet's and arjun's relationship,from the angle she is seeing both of them,her words were right..!!! She had tried alot to suppress her love and keep herself in check, but now when geet herself asked her to move on with arjun,she confessed her feelings ...!!! after all,we see what we want to see,sometimes..!!!
only wrong thing that she had uttered in her enraged state was,"geet does not need you sir.."..She stated the "conclusion" given by her mind after hearing geet's words when she asked her to take care of Arjun..!!! I don't know how arjun is going to take these words...!!!!
and Mr.Satya.😳.His entry brought out a big secret...I loved the way he entered..why do i feel there would be something between satya and dia in near future..I have deliberately ignored his smile that he had given to Dia's outburst in union room,in last chapter.I don't know why..May be i did not want to make myself present as a "match maker"...!!!😆

over all "perfect chapter" reet...👏.👏.👏..👏.👏 You rock!!!!!😃
as usual..waiting eagerly for next...!!!





Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
Alamelu thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what an update...glad dia knows finally that arjun is married to geet...now geet needs to know that too and realize that maan is arjun and vice vers...
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Posted: 12 years ago
did i said

i m in love with satya



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Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woohooo satyaaa i luv u ...marvellously written update...it made me image the whole scenario n their feelings...geets inhibitions...dias hurt...n her luv for arjun...n ofcourse maans helplessness...luvd d update thoroughly...now waiting for anant raichandas reaction after knowin about d incident...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
how to explain about my feeling it such a delicate situation for both arjun and geet both are wounded and both need eachother for their wound to be healed but they are not able to do it. Oh god i just want to bang dia and dev they are creating more problems for geet and arjun. Wow kya entry maari satya ne loved it. She got big slap how satya told she is an outsider. Waiting for the reaction of dia after knowing geet is arjuns wife hope now she understands the depth of their relation.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊

satya told the truth in frnt of dia😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi, reet..

As always, this part is also awesome.. your writing holds some magic in it.. i cant get over of reading.. i want more of it.. not just more... its more , more , more , more and more...😊

... thanks to satya , for coming at the right time... I know its difficult for arjun to digest the geet wants him to move on with dia but i hope he will understand the situation of geet that why she said so,,,

i m waiting for next...


Thanks and love you

Karuna
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Posted: 12 years ago
they love each other and yet these things happen
i just want geet and maan to run to each other and hug shouting i love u...
huh...but that wont happen and that cant be happened tooo...at this situation
after everything maan gone through and after everything geet went through...
this is the worst situaation...
when ppl spoke abt geet before her...insulted her...dint allow her to classes library and canteen too...dint let her eat drink sleep or study...made her a lifeless soul...i thought wat worst could happen more than this...
when arjun stayed away from her...when his eyes spited hatred and when she saw it and felt his hate...i thought wat worst could happen more than this...
but yeah...here it happened...that bas***d vikas...
and now maan melted...
but geet...she is destroyed mentally and pysical torture is no less
but even now maan is unable to understand geet's words
she said...him to move on...forget her...leave her
but maan instead of taking the inner meaning of her words...how much she is hurt from inside and out...how much she is carving for him...for him warm eyes..soothing touch and safe arms...
he is yet taking just her outer words...
now what shld i say to him?
geet is alone and totally broken...
ufff...if i dont stop here na my comment will exceed ur post re
hope they meet soon...
awesome update
now plz update the next part quickly...
plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh my God, that was awesome, simplyy awesome reet...am goin crazy becoz of your story...hats off to ur brains for writing up such a wonderful story,...

i hate this dia for whatever she said to Maan...😡
i feel bad to see maans restlesssness to be with geet ...

am glad that satya said what he said...dia should know to be in her limits...😡 so this would serve the purpose i suppose...but Avi's comment made me think if she blabbers this in fronnt of geet , then wont the consequences be severe?? but again dia , i suppose, is a mature gal so may be she l not disclose this truth infront of geet if she get to know the entire truth...or may be she ll hate geet more???
anyways i haaate her...😡😡


very beautiful part..u just leave me speechless with every update of yours reeet...and moreover even after reading such a looong looong part, i crave for more... while reading each line i pray , God this should not be the end of the part..(yeah i seriously do that😳.)...

i lov lov lov lov this story sooo much😊😊😊
again thanku😃

waiting for the next part eagerlyyy...
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Posted: 12 years ago

...Dear...😊.





4 PM me...





same time 4 late...becouse m so busy with exam..😕..





dear..⭐️⭐️⭐️.





updates r just , ...




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i just... ...
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4 ur ...👏👏👏👏gr8 gr8






Dear...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼







keep ing dear...😃








dear...😳
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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