Should I die or live for a while? MG SS Last part - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Should I die or live for a while? Part 2

Finally the wedding day...
Geet was absolutely pretty in her red wedding attire.Maan was carried away by her beauty.He controlled herself.
Maan made her his by tying mangalsuthra around her neck and applying vermillion to the parting of her hair.She looked at his face seriously.

She could not believe that her dream to be Maan Singh Khurana's wife has come true.

Grihpravesh...
Geet kept her right foot inside the house.She was about to fall down.He held her tightly preventing a huge fall.They shared an eye lock.They broke the eye lock as elders were around them.
One elderly lady:While stepping inside the bride began to fall down.This is a bad omen.
Maan-Geet's face became dull.

Geet was really upset.Maan held her hand to comfort her.
MAAN:She began to fall down.But she did'nt fall.When we both are together nothing is going to affect us badly.
Geet looked at him with relief.They both smiled at each other.
MAAN:I won't allow Geet to fall down.
He lifted her up in his arms and carried her inside.They both were looking at each other while he was carrying her.
He placed her on the bed.She was shy.
MAAN:Geet,i know that you feel tired in this heavy wedding dress.So change your dress and come.
He gave her a red saree.She was surprised.
GEET:Wow Maan.I love red sarees.
He smiled.
She went to the dressing room.She removed her ornaments and wedding outfit. Then she wore the saree.She was relieved.
She came out.She was surprised to see the chandeliers in the room shining.
GEET:Wow Maan..you are amazing.You made arrangements within a limited time.Ok tell me how do i look in this saree?
He came towards her looking deeply at her.She became shy.He said softly:You look ravishing Geet.
She blushed.
His fingers moved through her face.They forgot themselves.



The next morning...
Geet took bath and came to the room.Her hair was wet.Maan who was lying on the bed and watching her found her attractive.She realized his eyes rolling on her.But he pretended to be ignoring her.So she sat near her and leaned her head towards his face.Water drops fell on his face from her hair.He could feel her.They shared a sensuous eye lock.

He raised his hand to touch her.She moved away from her with a naughty smile.
GEET:Now you have to get ready and go to the office.Don't waste time.
MAAN:Oh!
She giggled.


He came back home in the evening.
He was surprised to see his favourite dish on the table.
He saw Geet coming.
MAAN:Geet...this...
GEET:I prepared this specially for you.
MAAN:Thank you so much Geet.
He took the spoon to eat it.
She snatched the spoon from him.
GEET:You can't simply eat it.I will feed you.
He smiled.
She fed him.They both were very happy.

GEET:Tell me..how is it?
MAAN:Very tasty like you.
She blushed.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
such a lovely update...
superb...
thnks for the PM...
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
WAIT HE WAS MARRIED TO GEET
then where is she now
why aint she with him
man now even more curious to know whats going on
hmmm this is getting mysterious aint it
cheers for pm
haiyye what romance where did it all go
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
awesome updates
but maan ko geet ne maan chopra kyu kha?
thanks for the pm
continue soon
valli30 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
lovely update
maan is married to geet but why she is not with him
continue soon
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#26
that was a mistake as it was originally written 4 sinal.i corrected it

Originally posted by: angel_smily

awesome updates
but maan ko geet ne maan chopra kyu kha?
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
fabulous dear
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
hayee my maaneet married
bt kuj log
taunt dena nhi chodege haina chodo😡
aftwr morning naughtiness
n fedind dinner to each other
aww so lovey dovey dreamy yaar
lvd it
mere maaneet ko kisi ki nazar na lge😉😆😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...maaneet sooo cute...adorable...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
loved the updates
read both of them just now
so sad to see that maan has cancer
can't wait for the next update

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