Should I die or live for a while? MG SS Last part - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
maan n geet got married...but where is geet...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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brilliant update
maaneet are married
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
part 2
oh wow so Maan and Geet were married...
then what happened?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesome out standing part
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
loved it..mg scence ws superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan-Geet are married...

does Geet knows about his cancer...

where is she...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Should I die or live for a while? Part 3

Maan and Geet went to Goa for honeymoon.
Maan wore a black outfit.
Geet was really impressed:Wow Maan!You are looking dashing.Very stylish.
MAAN:I know that i am dashing.But Geet...you are not matching my standard.You don't look stylish at all.
Geet got irritated:I will show you who i am.
She went inside the dressing room.
He laughed:Silly girl!
Geet came out.Maan could'nt believe his eyes.Geet was wearing a sleeveless blue frock.He could'nt take his eyes off her.She smiled.

GEET:Maan Sinh Khurana..now also do you feel that i am not stylish?
MAAN:Now also i don't agree that you look stylish.
She got irritated:What?
She threw pillows at him.He kept laughing.She was beating him with pillows.
Suddenly he held her hand.Slowly he cupped her face in his hand.
MAAN:As usual you look very pretty Geet.In my eyes you are always the most beautiful woman.
She blushed.They got lost in each other.

They went to the beach and played a lot in the sea water.Waves covered them making them wet.They found each other attractive and carassed each other.

The next morning...
Geet woke up from the bed.She could'nt find Maan near her.
GEET:Where did Maan go leaving me alone in the hotel?
Suddenly some ladies and men opened the door and came inside:Happy birthday Geet.
They were Maan's friends in Goa.
She was surprised:Thank you.But how did you all know that today is my birthday?
One lady:Maan told us.
She was surprised:Maan?
Suddenly she thought:But where is Maan?
Slowly Maan entered the room with a cake.
Geet was surprised.
MAAN:Happy birthday Geet.Your favourite cake.
She became emotional:Thank you so much Maan.
She blew out the candle on the cake.

Everybody sang the birthday song.
She looked at Maan.He held her hand.She smiled.They both cut the cake together.
He fed her the cake.

She also fed him back.

GEET:This was the most beautiful birthday in my life without you which would not have been possible.
He smiled.
MAAN:But Geet..you are talking as if it was your first birthday with me.We both have celebrated your birthday together even before marriage.
GEET:But that time i invited you for my birthday party.But this time you arranged a surprise birthday party for me.
They both smiled at each other.

Maan Geet went to the lovers' spot in the evening.They were lots of lovers romancing there.They smiled seeing them.
The song
'Rab ki qawali
Hai ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali
Hai ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali
Hai ishq koi
Subah ki laali
Hai ishq..

Girta sa jharna
Hai ishq koi
Uthta sa kalmaa
Hai ishq koi
Saanson mein liptaa
Hai ishq koi
Aankhon mein dikhta
Hai ishq..

Mere dil ko…
Tu jaan se juda kar de
Yoon bas tu..
Mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu
Meri chaal tu
Bas kar de aashiqana

Tere waaste..
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana..'{Dirty Picture}.
Rose petals were falling on them.
Maan and Geet smiled.They swayed to the romantic song.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
kya sach jaanne k baad geet chali gayi...humein lagta hai maan ne hi kuch ulta seedha kiya hoga...

beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
maanu teasing geet aww shoo cute😆😆😆
lv their pillow fight😆😉
maanu's cute surprise 4 geet's bday n their cute moments just lvd it
bt then wt went wrong
in present where is she
waitign 4 next

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