MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 17 and 18
Were perfect
So finally Maan is taking dadi and Annie to Hp 😉
Yes now geet will soon meet her future sasural😉
Loved dadi's and Maan convo😆
Woohoo geet missing Maan already .( not bad geet )😆
Hope she too confesses her love 😳
Geet's dad responded am so happy hope he recovers fast I think geet's prayers finally paid off
Geet called Maan when will she stop calling him sir 😆
I loved the immense trust geet and Maan have on each other hope this trust never breaks 😳
Maans letter was awesome 👏
His emotions are divine hope no evil ( especially Sam 😡) lay its eye on them ( fingers crossed)😳😳
Maan lost his parents in childhood it's so diffi to live without ur parents I can't think about a day without😭 my parents u explained his emotion brilliantly .👏
Loved the last part of his letter
Thank u for the must awaited confession but thus was from Maans side I am waiting for geet
To confess ...yaar😳
Plzzz update sooonnn
Waiting waiting waiting
Thank u so much for the pm and yes the double update too😃
Hope u r not cross with me for commenting so late
Love aanya 😃

P.s nelu my exams are starting from 19 July. That's why I was unable to comment yaar u know the exam pressure right
But I kept my promise

Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 17 & 18 simply amazing yaar..such a pure love...precap interesting..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84

Part 17 and 18

Were perfect
So finally Maan is taking dadi and Annie to Hp 😉
Yes now geet will soon meet her future sasural😉
Loved dadi's and Maan convo😆
Woohoo geet missing Maan already .( not bad geet )😆
Hope she too confesses her love 😳
Geet's dad responded am so happy hope he recovers fast I think geet's prayers finally paid off
Geet called Maan when will she stop calling him sir 😆
I loved the immense trust geet and Maan have on each other hope this trust never breaks 😳
Maans letter was awesome 👏
His emotions are divine hope no evil ( especially Sam 😡) lay its eye on them ( fingers crossed)😳😳
Maan lost his parents in childhood it's so diffi to live without ur parents I can't think about a day without😭 my parents u explained his emotion brilliantly .👏
Loved the last part of his letter
Thank u for the must awaited confession but thus was from Maans side I am waiting for geet
To confess ...yaar😳
Plzzz update sooonnn
Waiting waiting waiting
Thank u so much for the pm and yes the double update too😃
Hope u r not cross with me for commenting so late
Love aanya 😃

P.s nelu my exams are starting from 19 July. That's why I was unable to comment yaar u know the exam pressure right
But I kept my promise


LOVED ur comments a lot dear... no problem dear study comes first... plzz read properly... but will waiting for u r comments after ur exam...😊😊😊.
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love nelu..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnks a lot guys... for ur comments & likes...😊
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here is part 17 & 18 link:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=23.
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nd HERE IS PART 19
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...MG SS ~DILRUBA~...
...PART --19...
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AFTER complete reading maan's diary... {geet in her room}
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GEET : MAAN mujhse bohot pyar karte hain...😊 i also love him..
but kya main unko deserve kart hu?? kya main unko utna pyar de paunge jitna woh mujhe se karte hain...?? kya main unke family usse tarah apna paunge jese unho ne dad ko apna ya hain... kya main dad ko chorke ek naya zindagi suruwat kar paunga???
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par unhone toh mujhe dad ko chorne konahi kaha?? main kya karu babAji??? main unhe NA bolna nahi chahte aur HA bolne se mujhe daar laag raha hain... agar main unko jo woh deserve karte hain nahi de payi toh kya hoga????? kuch jawab dijiye babAji... mujhe kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha... kya main DAD se puchu???
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haa DAD he mujhe sahi rah dikha sakte hain...
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she went to her dad's room...
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dad was wake up...
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geet: dad mujhe aap se kuch puch na hain...

he eyes was asking: what??

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Geet: Dad u knw MAAN love me a lot... nd i also trust his love... but main apne pe confident nahi hu... mujhe nahi lagta main unko utna pyar de sakunge jitna woh mujhse karte hain... Main unhe na bhi nahi bolna chahte DAD... cuz i want to live with him... Aap plz mere help karo dad ... main kya karu????

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You knw dad he also thought that I'M A PRINCESS WHO SENT TO HIM BY HIS MOTHER... woh bhot ache insaan hain dad.. apko pata hain apke liye doctors se bhi unho ne baat ki the... Main kya karu dad... mere liye abhi aap sabse jiyada important ho... par phir bhi main MAAN ko NA kyun nahi bolna chahte dad?? Mujhe kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha... dad u tell me whwt should i do??? plzz dad help me...😭

.kya main unhe HA bool du???

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AFter much effort her dad place his hand on geet's head... nd just nodded his head : {this means YES}

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GEET give him a tight hug... i love you DAD... U r the best... u always understand me😊😊 i'm glad that i'm u r daughter ...😊...

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{Yes MR. Mohindar handa can see the love in geet's eyes for MAAN ... HE knws that she is in love... nd HAPPY to see that... }

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... AT NIGHT IN HH...

GEET give her dad dinner ...{HE IS SLEEPING NOW}

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GEET'S ROOM:

GEET: MAAN aab kab wapas aayenge... i'm missing you badly... plzz come back... i want to tell you what u want to hear frm me... plzz come back soon...

...main msg karte hu unhe...

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ON OTHER SIDE MAAN ... DADI & ANNIE GET READY TO LEAVE ND NOW IN CAR...

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MAAN Phone RING...

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PRINCESS KA MSG...

AAB KAB WAPAS AAO GE??? I MISSING YOU PLZ COME BACK SOON...

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GEET GET REPLY:

Main kal aa jaunga tumhare pass... thora sa intezar kar lo...

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maan get reply:

nahi ho raha kya karu?? kal kab aayenge??

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geet get reply:

itna betabi hain tumhe mujhse milne ki???😲 interesting... wese pata nahi kab tak aaunga... par aate he pehle tumse milunga PROMISE...

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maan GET REPLY:

betabi nahi nahi hain... sirf kuch batana hain...


geet get reply:

toh abhi bol do ... .

maan get reply

jab aao ge tab bata dunge... abhi nahi .. jaldi aaye main intezar kar rahe hu...

.geet get reply:

apne aanke band karo aur soo jao... i wish subah tum jab utho mujhe apne samne paoo...😊

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maan get reply:

i wish the same ... par aap dhiyanse drive karna...

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geet get reply:

chinta maat karo wese bhi dadi mujhe high speed main drive nahi karne denge...

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maan get reply: dadi??? woh bhi aa rahe hain apke sath??

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geet get reply: ha... dadi aur annie dono aa rahe hain... MERE PRINCESS KO DEKHNE KE LIYE...😊😊

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After reading this geet directly call MAAN

MAAN: BOLO PRINCESS KYA BAAT HAIN??

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GEET: MAAN DADI apke sath kyun aa rahe hain??? main kese unke samne jaunge??? aap ne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bata ya??? aap ne dadi ko kya bata ya humare bare main??? hain babaji woh aab kya soch rahe honge mere bare main... aap bhi na MAAN ase achanak koi bata ta hain?? aab kuch toh bolo...

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MAAN was like O...{ SHOCKED} : GEET DID U CALL ME BY MY NAME...

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GEET FELT EMBARRASED😳 : WOH main..

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maan: I never name so beautiful... it feel heaven to hear my name by you... I LOVE YOU JAAN...😊 Ur every single word can made me MAD

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GEET felt ver happy 😊😃😉

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MAAN: mujhse aur intezar nahi ho raha...


geet: dadi aur apne sis kyun aa rahe hain???

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maan: tumse milne ke liye...

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geet: par..

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maan: .tension ke baat nahi hain dear... dadi & annie free minded hain... they understand me... i knw they will also like you...

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geet: par mujhe dar lag raha hain.....

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maan: MAIN HU NA tumhare sath humesha... phir kyun??

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geet: par abhi toh nahi ho... main abhi rakhte hu aap bass jaldi aaye ...

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maan: okk dear... take care ... see you soon ... I LOVE YOU...

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GEET: gd night...😊

... THEN GEET went to sleep & maan dadi nd annie r coming...

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PRECAP: SAME AS BEFORE...😊 ND A MONTH LEAP😊


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MY MG CREATIONS : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3633654/mg-creations-by-nelufar

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update at last geet
ready to say him yes
n there chat n phone covo was nyc
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part
finally geet come to know abiut her feelings
maaneet conversation was superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Whole maaneet convo is superb.
Nyc update
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Posted: 12 years ago


Daadi and Annie abhi aayi nahin...

Geet become very scared that Daadi is coming and in all this worry she took his name...

he is ofcourse very happy...

waiting for next part...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
HERE IS PART 20
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...MG SS ~DILRUBA~...
...PART --20...
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IN MORNING IN HP...😊
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GEET wakes up nd prayed to babaji...
geet: babaji aaj plzz sab thik kar dena...
then she fresh up... & makes breakfast...
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then the nurse come to give MR.HANDA therapy...
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On the other side MAAN drop dadima & annie to KH nd he leave to meet geet...
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geet was cleaning the table & there was some water in the floor nd SHE WAS ABOUT TO HIT THE FLOOR
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BUT NO SHE WAS IN THE STRONG ARMS OF MAAN'S...
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MAHII VE MAHI MAHI VE... MAHIII
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MAAN: kaha tha na jab aaunga tum mere bahoo main hoge...😊
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geet : aap aa gaye... I MISSED YOU SO MUCH... THEN she give him a tight hug...
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MAAN: I MISSED YOU DEAR...😊😊
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GEET: APNE ITNE der karde main toh subah se apka wait kar rahe the...😊
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maan: sorry jaan woh traffic bohot tha main kya karta?
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geet: it's ok... aap ne nasta kiya??
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maan: noo... sidha tumhare pass aaya hu...
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geet: thik hain main aapke liye nasta banati hu... wese dadi aur annie kaha hain??
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maan: ghar pe... woh dono dupher ko aayenge DAD aur tumse milne ke liye...
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geet: oh.. aap yaha betho main abhi aate hu..
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maan: main dad se mil ke aata hu,ok??
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geet: abhi therapy chal rahe hain... aap baad main mill lena...
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maan: ok...
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...geet made breakfast for him & thn serve...
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maan: thnks dear for breakfast...
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geet: hmm... wese dadi ko aapne humare bare main kya bataya hain???
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maan: bola ke tum mere dream girl ho aur I LOVE YOU & WANT TO MARRY YOU...😊.
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GEET: aap ne yu sidhe sidhe bol diya??.
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maan: haaa.. kyun tum shadi nahi karoge mujhse??.
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geet: main assa thore kaha???
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maan: matlab karo ge???
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geet: haa.. nahi woh main...
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maan: diary paar le???
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geet: hmm... aab ka jawab aap ko raat ko milega😳
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maan: raat ko kyun?? abhi bol do... mujhse intezar nahi hoga...
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geet: itne der intezar karle toh abhi bhi karlo... plzzz mere liye...
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maan: anything for you...😊😊
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geet: thnks...😊😊
...THEN the nurse came to geet...
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nurse: maam aaj ke therapy ho gaye hain... main aab kal aaunge...
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eet: ok nurse...
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... nurse went out...
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geet to maan: aap chaliye... abhi dad se mile te hain...
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maan: ookk..
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...both went to meet mr.handa's room...
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maan went near him & touches his feet...
mr.handa smiles...
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geet: dad yeh hain MAAN SIR...
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MAAN: hello dad sorry uncle... kese ho aap?? i hpe maine aapko disturb nahi kiya...
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mr handa nodded for NO...
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MAAN: GEET mujhe piyas lage hain plzz thora pani le aao...
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geet: ok { thn she went out}
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maan to dad: DAD firstly i want to introduce myself.. I'M MAAN SINGH KHURANA... MD OF KHUARANA CONTRUCTIONS IN DEHLI... but now my identy has been changed... Today i;m just MAAN who loved ur daughter a lot... I knw uncle kise pain u aachank trust karna aasan nahi hain... but uncle believe me GEET is my life now... she is my breath... nd i don't knw how to live without my breath... I trully LOVE HER UNCLE... i want to marry her... BUT uncle i promise jab tak aab raaze nahi hote main asse wase koi harkat nahi karunga... main aapke thik hone ka intezar karunga...
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mr.handa had tears in his eyes to see the love of hin...
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he put his hand on maan's head...😊😊
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maan: i'm so happy uncle... i knw that u trust me... i'll never broke ur trust... i promise...😊😊😊
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geet was hearning everything for outside...😊 : I'm so glad that he loves me...😊 thnks babaji for eveything...😊😊
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precap: same😊😊
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~note: sorry guys will not give updates for 3 days... as i'm going out of town for brother's marriage... ~~
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...do like & comment...
Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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