MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

maan is my dream guy for sure😉😉wonderful update..will wait for next update..

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

awesome update

enjoy ur bros marriage

tc dear

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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Awesome part
maan back and met geets dad too
maan talking to geets dad
geet watching eveything from outside
cont soon

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Priya21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Superb update.
Enjoy kr dear. Update ka intzaar kr lenge.

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

awesome update

loved it

like is not working

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

read all the parts

it is really a cute love story

love how maaneet fell in love

maan taking care of geet's dad

geet helping maan in designing school

n maan's confession n his talk with geet's dad was awesome

waiting for next part n geet's confession

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prachi sinha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

awesome update nelu maan came n geet was in his arm

haye n then she made bfast for him

n then maan talk with dad was nyc

waiting for nrxt

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

firstly very very sorry guys for late update...
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nd thnks or ur support😊😊😊

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Here is part 21
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MG SS ~DILRUBA~
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dadi & ANNIE came to meet geet in hANDA HAVELI...
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geet welcome them...
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GEET: namaste dadi { she also take her blessing}
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dadi: kuch rahiya bete... kese ho aap?
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geet: main thik hu dadi.. aap andar aaye betheye...
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annie: bhabi aap apne nanad ko to bhul he gaye...
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GEET blush to hear bhabi: nahi annie assa nahi hain tum bhi aao...
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annie: oh my sweet bhabi main mazak kar rahe hu...main bhai ki tarah serious nahi hu...
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geet: woh itne bhi serious nahi hain...
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annie: wah bhabi abhi se pati ki taraf dare...
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geet:assa nahi hain.,... woh sach main itne serious nahi hain..
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dadi: bete aap annie ki bata ko serious maat lijiye... woh sirf apko tease kar rahe hain...
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geet smiles....
annie: kya dadi thora mazak bhi nahi karne doo ge aap toh...
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dadi: humare bahu ko koi kuch nahi keh sakta...
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annie: wah wah dadi abhi se team change karle aapne... main apse khabhi baat nahi karunge..
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geet: annie gussa maat karo... aab se main tumare team main hu. ok??
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annie give her big smile: dekha dadi my bhabi is with me😊...
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geet: aab aap log betho main kuch khane ke liye late hu...
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dadi: hum abhi khana kha ke aaye hain bete aap plzz abhi kuch maat lana...
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annie: ha bhabi...
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geet: ok....
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dadi: wese geet maan kaha hain?? .
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geet: woh dad ke pass hain... main abhi unhe bulate hu...
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dadi: nahi bete hume bhi toh aapke dad se milna hain... hum he chalte hain...
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geet: ok dadi... chaliye...
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then they went to mohindar's room...
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maan: aap log aa gaye dadi...
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dadi: hum toh kabse aa gaye hain... aur apne bahu se baat bhi karle.
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geet blushes...
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maan smiles...😊
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annie: bhabi apke gaal toh saram se laal to gaye hain...
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maan: annie geet ko satana band karo...
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annie: kya jodi hain apko kuch bolo to bhabi daat te hain... aur bhabi ko kuch bolo to aap...😊
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dadi: aap aab log larna baad karo... MR.HANDA ko problem hoge...
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dadi to mahindar: bete aap bilkul tesion maat lijiye geet ka khayal rakhne ke leye hum sab hain... aap bass jaldi se thik ho jaiye...
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mohindar smiles...
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THEY all were talking to each other... Annie was teasing maneet...
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AT NIGHT dadi & annie went back... SO MAAeet were alone...
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MAAN: geet tum kuch kehne wale the
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geet: haa MAAN... bohot kuch kehna hain apse... par labz nahi hain...
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maan: jo bhi apne mann main hain bol do geet ...😊 aab aur der maat karo...
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geet: intezar mujhse se bhi nahi hota par ...
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maan hold her hand: bolo...

geet: par aap bich main kuch maat kehna...
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maan: okk...
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geet: MAAN main apke jitna pyar kar paunge yah nahi yeh nahi pata mujhe... par I PROMISE main apne zindagi se jiyada aap ko chahunge... aap ke har dard ko aapna banaunge... har khushi batunge jate woh aur bar jaye... apke har aansu ko apne ankho main saza lunge... ... aap ke family ko apne family ki tarah respect karunge... aur har roz babaji se ek he dua karunge
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Let All My Smile Be Yours &
All Your Tears Be mine.
Let All My Happiness Be Yours
& All Your Sadness Be
Mine.
Let The Whole World
Be Yours But Only YoU Be Mine...😊
MAAN I LOVE YOU & I WANT TO BE URS... WILL U MAKE ME YOURS????
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MAAN: GEET tumhare baate sunke lagta hain mere pyar bohot kaam hain tumare liye
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geet: assa kabhi maat kehna maan... mera labz apke pyar ke samne bohot chote hain maan...
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maan: nahi geet...
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geet: maan agar hum asse he larte rahe to zindagi aage kse bare ge???
.humara pyar ek duje ke le kahi hain...hain na??

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maan: i love you geet... ur pure words make me more crazy or you... will you marry me??
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GEET: i will maan but ...
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maan: dad ke thik hone ke baad... ri8??
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geet tightly hug him:
aap humesha asse he rehna...
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maan: TUM BHI... bilkul mere mishti ...
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geet: mishti kon maan???
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maan: idhar aao abhi dikha ta hu...
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he take geet infort of mirror... & took her dupptta over her head
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maan: yeh hain mere mishti... aur mujhe apne mishti humesa asse he chahiye... raho ge na??
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geet: humesha sirf aap ke liye...😊
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both hug each other...😊😊
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precap: one month leap 😊

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago