THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 77

Hi avi,
You know what i feel about ur brainchild... it is like i'm breathing in the fresh air after rain which is mixed with the fragrance of wild flower and mother earth .it soothes my soul.
In this story i love the most is the simplicity of the characters.they r not complicated not even naintara. My favourite couple is naina and dev. I know this is a maaneet story. But i can't help it. Maan-geet story is reminded me of my teenage life.their shyness...new found love...
longingness for one sight..one touch...one smile...one word...they r so real. But then also i love dev and naina a little bit more.dev is harmless but player. And i'm in love with the transformation going on of dev from a carefree player to a dependable and respectable person.that is the power of ur writing.i love dev's childish nature.naintara's longing for love.after facing such problems in life she still possesses a golden heart which can love her housemate as her own sister.otherwise she never considered her bambi's advise at the firsrt place.

i so loved maan's mob screensaver.u proved a mere shadow of loved one has the power to satiate a longing heart.
Ur every character has a charm as it is picked up from real life. While reading ur story i always have a feeling that someone is narrating her life story and i'm listening.they r so real.
I'm sorry i didn't comment before.
Being a student of other medium i don't have a good grip in english.so there may be some flaws.
Sorry for that.
Sayantani

First of all thanks for a long part. I know how much effort goes in wriitng and thank you sweety for all the effort.

Originally posted by: dumas

heart breaking update poor tara and her mom so sad nt mom went through so much poor woman has been through hell and back loved the update very emotional thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: love2_soma

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updaten fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

Originally posted by: palindrome

I am so glad that finally I got to read this part avi...I was very eager to know about Dev's condition after posting those gifts[ eno salt and digene tablets😆] for him..When I read last cutie cutie part with Maaneet and baby,I thought I have missed something because it did not go with the "teaser" you have given...!!! Anyways finally I got to read what I wanted to read..Sadly my gifts were of no use for Dev as he did not eat double...!!! I am really loving these subtle changes in Dev that Naina has brought ofcourse..Thank you for creating a guy who counts twists in his love's bun..!!!This was something really new for me,avi..!!! and It shows how much he is affected by Naina...!!! you were asking one day,what is this "Avinism"??? This novelty is Avinism my dear...!!!

Dev is growing up. Daadi and NT have a big hand in it. In business Daadi gets credit but for a man to want to become a better person, NT did it. One of the perks about being married is that you get to know some of what they actually notice and think of us...😳

When Naina ran out of the Hotel,I was very sure that Its time for us to go into her past...and My god..It was really painful..!!!

and it was more painful for Naina's mother..Lady had endured beyond her capacity..I hope,Naina does not hate her mother but I find the chances of this are very bleak..!!!!

She does not hate her mother. It will come out later. I, of all people can never write that. They both have their crosses to bear but she can't come in front of her. More as it unfurls.

Avi,This story has taken a different turn..There is a lot to explore from Adi pinky,sujal and his wife to Chandan and Naina's mother..Please Never think of wrapping it up in hurry...I want to read about each and every character and their problems in detail..

Thanks for understanding me Palin. Sometimes I think I am going overboard but it is like playing chess. You need to know how each piece works or falls otherwise you can't play.

I understand,reader's pressure that you feel for giving more and more maaneet...May be that was the reason for sudden arrival of Maaneet's chapter despite the different teaser...!!!All I would say,write what your heart tells you to write..Sometimes we have to become oblivious to reader's expectations and do it the way we want...!!! Readers on GF are sweetest one and they would be with you till the end...!!!

I finally feel free to do this. When I see someone as talented as Reet going through the same nervousness as I go through, in a weird way it finally hit me that this is normal. I was going to cut it to please the masses but then that would not make me true to myself. You have always been here for me. I thank you for that.

Wishing you loads of love and luck dear...!!!

Originally posted by: honeygrape

yaay,,...dev-star is bk 😃

i could see the iron lady melting a bit...😳 and finally he agreed to work with her...and i am glad that he stopped his taunting sessions...

for the first tym ever , i am getting to see NT in a very diffrnt way n iam loving her character too...glad that she is not a negative character here...

love the way he is noticing her😊

Dev on his way to fall for her deeply...

Poonam thakur, aha a new entry !! ohh taras mom...wow, dint expect that...

the song lyrics is soo beautiful n painful too...

Yes I cry a lot with this song. It reminds me of my Mom who is no more..

ohh that is a horrible past tara has got... more than tara , i would say her mother...dint chandan have any feelings towards tara...and why is tara running away from her mom??

so many questions to be answered...eager to know them all...so update the next part very sooon my dear...

awesome part it was...thanku for updating 😊

Originally posted by: divya22

ohh it was a painful part...
her mother went through sooo much...
n still she has to live this lie... n top of dat she is hving no info abt her daughter...
i dont no wat naintara thinks abt her mother... hoping dat she doesnt hate her mother...
m sure she saw her in washroom dats y she ran away...

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

amazing emotional and painful update ...for few minutes its Dev-I star chapter i always had smile after reading them ..but todday specially i quite emotional after reading about NT childhood and her mother poonam past ...

Ooops what happened to dude dev i really missed him specially his prank.goood they back to working terms ..loved the lunch part ..

why Nt rushed out from hotel is something related to past or as usual ..

waiting for next upddate

Originally posted by: alfik

first of all am very sorry I was so engrossed reading your story that I forgot to hit the like button on previous chapter...😔

am very grateful to you Avi that without me asking you actually took the pain of pming me your updates...thank you very much...🤗

now coming to your story I cannot describe in words how I feel about it...am just speechless...and yes I LOVE Dev-Tara as much as I LOVE Maan-Geet...am actually in love with Tara in this story...to be honest I didn't like her playing negative role in the serial...you showing positive role of hers in your story is something I really adore...just love the way how their love stories are progressing...Maan-Geet's silent love and Dev-Tara's fiery love...am in love with the characters and their love story...

I am so glad that you are liking both leads. Sometimes when I don't get likes for Dev-NT parts I am tempted to cut the story short because I assume that people are not liking my story.

after reading Poonam Tara's mother's story I understood what that burnt mark was on Tara, first when it was mentioned in their last update I didn't get it...but now I get how she got those marks...

after seeing Brij's name why do I feel that Geet is actually Tara's half sister as in Poonam and Chandan's daughter...I might be wrong too...😳but really I really wish it is true it would be fun...and yes would really love to see the two brother's bond...

Your guesses, I can't say much about. There is more of the story to come, this is but a corner. Two more characters to enter. 😃

thank you so much for giving us this story...and yes Palin is right You, Maggie, Reet, Palin, Muskan, Jaz, etc etc etc are the great writers which IF has got...thank you very much for giving us such great stories...🤗

and don't worry even if I forget to hit the like button or if don't comment i'll be reading your story religiously...🤗

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

I think the last two chapters must be my all time favourites in the entire story so far. There is a silence in the story that is so loud that one cannot help but hear every thought, mood and feeling of the characters. It's intoxicating and intriguing watching it all unfold as each main character evolves, learns and expresses. The details that describe Tara and Poonam's lives, and the ensuing lifestyles have such a taste of poignancy that I felt so lost in every morsel of story development I devoured. I don't comment normally, but I just want you to know that I do find pleasure in reading your work, and the manner in which you tell the story makes it all the more worth the while. The innocence of first love in Maan and Geet, the maturity of unconsciously developing tempered respect and eventual love between "I-star" and DK, are among the delightful treats that make me smile when I open up my PMs and trek over to "The Locket".