THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi
Awesome Part Avi 👏
Defo U shud continue it
Its So Emotional Update jani 😭
Poor Poonam n Her daughter
I hate that Brij 😡
Continue Soon 😳

Sheen🤗

Brij ki band bajayege, fikar not...

Glad you liked it...😃

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palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#742

I am so glad that finally I got to read this part avi...I was very eager to know about Dev's condition after posting those gifts[ eno salt and digene tablets😆] for him..When I read last cutie cutie part with Maaneet and baby,I thought I have missed something because it did not go with the "teaser" you have given...!!! Anyways finally I got to read what I wanted to read..Sadly my gifts were of no use for Dev as he did not eat double...!!! I am really loving these subtle changes in Dev that Naina has brought ofcourse..Thank you for creating a guy who counts twists in his love's bun..!!!This was something really new for me,avi..!!! and It shows how much he is affected by Naina...!!! you were asking one day,what is this "Avinism"??? This novelty is Avinism my dear...!!!

When Naina ran out of the Hotel,I was very sure that Its time for us to go into her past...and My god..It was really painful..!!!

and it was more painful for Naina's mother..Lady had endured beyond her capacity..I hope,Naina does not hate her mother but I find the chances of this are very bleak..!!!!

Avi,This story has taken a different turn..There is alot to explore from Adi pinky,sujal and his wife to Chandan and Naina's mother..Please Never think of wrapping it up in hurry...I want to read about each and every character and their problems in detail..

I understand,reader's pressure that you feel for giving more and more maaneet...May be that was the reason for sudden arrival of Maaneet's chapter despite the different teaser...!!!All I would say,write what your heart tells you to write..Sometimes we have to become oblivious to reader's expectations and do it the way we want...!!! Readers on GF are sweetest one and they would be with you till the end...!!!

Wishing you loads of love and luck dear...!!!

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Very painful and sad part...

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

nice update...thanks for the pm...

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#745

ohhh God
awesome update dear
u write so well
seriously i'm speechless
waiting 4 next part
update soon

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

yaay,,...dev-star is bk 😃

i could see the iron lady melting a bit...😳 and finally he agreed to work with her...and i am glad that he stopped his taunting sessions...

for the first tym ever , i am getting to see NT in a very diffrnt way n iam loving her character too...glad that she is not a negative character here...

love the way he is noticing her😊

Poonam thakur, aha a new entry !! ohh taras mom...wow, dint expect that...

the song lyrics is soo beautiful n painful too...

ohh that is a horrible past tara has got... more than tara , i would say her mother...dint chandan have any feelings towards tara...and why is tara running away from her mom??

so many questions to be answered...eager to know them all...so update the next part very sooon my dear...

awesome part it was...thanku for updating 😊

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divya22

@divya22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#747

ohh it was a painful part...
her mother went through sooo much...
n still she has to live this lie... n top of dat she is hving no info abt her daughter...
i dont no wat naintara thinks abt her mother... hoping dat she doesnt hate her mother...
m sure she saw her in washroom dats y she ran away...

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Jaggy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#748

amazing emotional and painful update ...for few minutes its Dev-I star chapter i always had smile after reading them ..but todday specially i quite emotional after reading about NT childhood and her mother poonam past ...

Ooops what happened to dude dev i really missed him specially his prank.goood they back to working terms ..loved the lunch part ..

why Nt rushed out from hotel is something related to past or as usual ..

waiting for next upddate