THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED

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alfik

@alfik

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

first of all am very sorry I was so engrossed reading your story that I forgot to hit the like button on previous chapter...😔

am very grateful to you Avi that without me asking you actually took the pain of pming me your updates...thank you very much...🤗

now coming to your story I cannot describe in words how I feel about it...am just speechless...and yes I LOVE Dev-Tara as much as I LOVE Maan-Geet...am actually in love with Tara in this story...to be honest I didn't like her playing negative role in the serial...you showing positive role of hers in your story is something I really adore...just love the way how their love stories are progressing...Maan-Geet's silent love and Dev-Tara's fiery love...am in love with the characters and their love story...

after reading Poonam Tara's mother's story I understood what that burnt mark was on Tara, first when it was mentioned in their last update I didn't get it...but now I get how she got those marks...

after seeing Brij's name why do I feel that Geet is actually Tara's half sister as in Poonam and Chandan's daughter...I might be wrong too...😳but really I really wish it is true it would be fun...and yes would really love to see the two brother's bond...

thank you so much for giving us this story...and yes Palin is right You, Maggie, Reet, Palin, Muskan, Jaz, etc etc etc are the great writers which IF has got...thank you very much for giving us such great stories...🤗

and don't worry even if I forget to hit the like button or if don't comment i'll be reading your story religiously...🤗

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

I think the last two chapters must be my all time favourites in the entire story so far. There is a silence in the story that is so loud that one cannot help but hear every thought, mood and feeling of the characters. It's intoxicating and intriguing watching it all unfold as each main character evolves, learns and expresses. The details that describe Tara and Poonam's lives, and the ensuing lifestyles have such a taste of poignancy that I felt so lost in every morsel of story development I devoured. I don't comment normally, but I just want you to know that I do find pleasure in reading your work, and the manner in which you tell the story makes it all the more worth the while. The innocence of first love in Maan and Geet, the maturity of unconsciously developing tempered respect and eventual love between "I-star" and DK, are among the delightful treats that make me smile when I open up my PMs and trek over to "The Locket".

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valli30

@valli30

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

emotional and painful update

loved it

continue sonn

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shruti

@gshruti

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

nice update dear

i luv ur ff and both luv story

continue soon

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Rukh

@RukhluvMaan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

lovely one..feeling sad for tara and poonam...dev pyaar me phans gya like maan...

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

awww Lovely update Avi

socho mujhay Bina Maaneet update read kernay main maza aya

yeh Din bhi ana tha...HAAD HOGAYAI

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sheen🤗
Brij ki band bajayege, fikar not...
Glad you liked it...😃

🤗
I lub YOUR Writing 😉
Dev bajyega brij ki 😆

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

painful part ! why did chandan get married when he couldnot protect either his wife or his child...children... how was naintara's relation with him... and how come brij beat her up when they were living seperately...more to reveal...? on lighter part dadi is sweet...though pulling his legs...she didnot make him suffer...that was really cute...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

part 20 - so sweet...his dream comes true...and he could check the effect of dadima's nuske...the baby was so cute...again city boy...geet is irritate with city boys...lol...maan handled baby very well than geet...

loved her calling him 'suniye' and 'maan'...he calleing her 'giit'

lovley part

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

part 21 - so it was tara's past...that why she is like this...she and her mother poonam gone so much...hate this brij...feeling abd for chandan, poor chap...is he having any good relation with tara...or he is aloof from both...

loved how dev accepted tara's thank you by eating her tiffine...loved dadi getting inf from dev

cont soon