THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 79

emotional update...

awesome update

so NT is Poonam n Jeet's daughter or say Thakur's daughter

poonam's life is not less than a hell

d way thakur family behaved with poonam & Tara is d reason tara's current state

i think Nt had seen her family member in that hotel thats y she ran off from there so quickly

to be honest m loving Dev-Tara track more than Maan-Geet (i know it must be shocking but m loving devtara track a lot)

This comment is for chapter 20.

First of all, let me tell you that I absolutely love the song you chose for this one. It perfectly added that feel to the chapter. ❤️

The dream left me shocked and pretty much like this ☺️ Haaye! Geet ko kabhi pata chala how Maan dreams about her then she is going to have a shock of a lifetime! 😆

Dadi's seekh was something very valuable. It's true that we sometimes need to hold back to get what we want. Sometimes, we have to stop trying so hard to reach out so whatever comes back to us is what is truly ours...

I laughed at the point when Geet was struggling with the baby and the shehri baby had her choti as well as her apple-like cheek in his qabza. And Maan's comment was sone pe suhaaga after that! 😆

Maan has become smarter, hasn't he? I liked him ignoring her like that, no matter how much laddoos were phhooting in his mann. 😳

I couldn't quite pronounce 'Giiit' even when I tried. How does it sound?

And he is a businessman true to his form. Ek haath do ek haath lo. I likes it! 😆

It was so cute when Maan played with the baby, making him an aeroplane and all. And it is indeed something off the beat that a teenage boy adores babies and babies love him. It isn't very often that we see this scene...

So Geet is trying to reason out her own reactions to him, eh? It won't take long before she figures it all out and she'll have to accept it.

The picture that the three of them made with Geet holding the baby and Maan makin chu chu sounds while feeding him was absolutely heartwarming for me. Abhi hi pata chal gaya ke aagey jaa ke babies ko khana kaun khilaaye ga aur usse pakdega kaun. 😳

I actually noticed quite a weird thing and I don't know if you intended it to be that way or not but I can't stop myself from telling you. Up until now, Maan was a boy in Geet's eyes, a city boy. But when she sees him sleeping with the baby in his arms, she thinks of him as a man. For her, after this one adventure of babysitting the baby with him, his transformation from a boy to a man has happened...

Congratulations to Sona ma'am and Yash sir for their good news. And congratulations to Maan for finding the confidence within himself that he'll now be able to talk to Geet, even if she doesn't talk. 😳

The hazels that were watching him with a question have me curious. I'll wait to know what exactly the question is.

Thanks for updating Avi! And the comment for the next one will come soon, I hope. 🤗

Originally posted by: dqno1

This is only my second story here so I would not compare myself to anyone listed at all. They are giants and I am learning my ABCs. Thanks for being here. Should I call you alfik?

my name is ALFIYA...my friends call me ALFI (hehehe sounding too filmy right???)...you too can call me alfi...😃

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Originally posted by: Onir

Avi... this one was such a mixed bag. I was grinning sometimes, sometimes just feeling a feel good feeling, while sometimes saddened by harsh realities of life.

Savitri Devi and Her CID cap... 🤣 I love her & all her antics. 😊

One line in the start that set in the pace & which I really loved was ..."No matter the problem, no matter the issues, mothers always solve it with food & petting..." There's no doubt in this statement. This was so contrast to what Naina as a child has undergone due to the baggage her mother carried... and also living through the torture & having a depressed mom trying to cope up yet living just for her child. 👏

I love Daadi. She brings so much strength to both boys. Whereas NT had to be the stronger person.

Dev is changing but I'm liking the gradual changes in him. Its not like some love struck person but someone whose feelings are developing & going deep with each introspection & pondering. But natural that wound on her shoulder & knowing that something drastic his I-star has endured has caused the desired stirring in Dev. I liked the softening you showed & his observances... he actually is aware of the no. Of times Naina swings her hair while tying a bun... 😳 That's so sweet & I don't know but I liked it.

He can't help his thoughts but he is not one to flow on impulse. He has had many women who have crushes on him so he knows how to handle himself. Unfortunately, he cannot control his dreams and awareness😆. I love torturing poor Dev..😉

They proved to be a perfect synchronized team with proper tuning.

Naina too has a lot of baggage as I had felt before in few parts.

Bambi's idea & coaxing did help these two a lot.

Also I liked how now Dev knows his worth & capability as Dev and not just a Khurana. The pride one gets on knowing you could do it on own footing means so much & boosts so much confidence, I guess all thanks to Naina he can now appreciate & live all of it well.

Naina's past was painful. She must've been Dad's little princess when Jeet was alive. Poonam's story was so harsh reality and saddening. So much to endure & living like a dead corpse. Her feeling of being dead when her Jeet dies was so hurting. The torture she endured of being drugged to get hitched to someone else by her so called own people, then being physically forced and tainted in her house which was filled with her love & his memories must be so tearing & shattering for her to endure that too in front of his picture, Then tortured by people for their own insecurity & cruelty dying each day & then loosing a child... no matter what the child symbolizes it will always remain a child - a part of the mother whom she nourishes & then finding her still born anyone would go into depression. Avi that whole scene was such beautifully worded ... and you introduced me to a different style of your own self.

I did not get the last phrase.😕 It was harsh to put it all there but I could not drag it for more than one chapter so although it was a lot, at least it is out.

Chandan-Poonam- Naina this whole equation & their life seems to be quite complicated.

Brij ... seems to be holding onto a lot of grudge... but I feel he will pay his dues soon.

What I really feel sad & upsetting is that a mother couldn't reach out for her daughter due to her own weakness in health. & Then she just couldn't reach her.

Naina is running away... I so want to know what transpired, what did Brij do. Also Chandan raises a lot of questions?

Naina can't wear now sleeveless dresses. and her Mom missed recognizing her.

Oh I so loved this part. loved it is actually an understatement. Its a gem... and please continue writing Avi... you express it all so well... the web of their lives (each character ) is so tangled & I want you to entangle them all in your own unique & beautiful style of writing.

Love you ❤️ Thanks for writing this part 🤗

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

first of all..

NISHA DI WAPAS AA GAYI.. YE YE YE..

sorry avi. got excited...

now update..

Dev learning from Tara.

these two make perfect team be it business or life-- Dadi getting this thing now.. one cupid is here other will come after knowing..

If he was the magnet for clients, she was the wheels that could keep churning out project after project.

Geet a shy jovial nature girl whose innocence is beyond normal level.

Naintara- a girl whom u have shown that she has seen the real world which is unknown to us.

pari- who has everything served at her platter and has not grown up.

savitri devi: a strong woman who made her two grandsons what they are now.

then came another one

poonam kapoor/thakur (she is naina's mother, right??)--- she endured so much. lost her love, then forced to marry some one else, to be someone else. and she has even lost her reason tolive her daughter..

painful update avi. we always can't get coochicoo stuffs everytime. we shud not expect that always..

btw is the baby girl alive or dead?? me confused