THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 73

Nishaji is this really you... 😲

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Originally posted by: -jaanleva-

Swamped with exams for the past few months but now I am finally free!

How about yourself? I missed you a lot too 😳

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Now for my comment:

Today's chapter was a wonderful insight into Tara and her past, how the parallel's between Chandan and Tara are slowly starting to show... a lot more lies beneath each of these 4 characters, and I love how you slowly explore them all with every update

Generally, on the FF as a whole - I love it! 😃 I actually really enjoy the parallel stories of MG and DT, it's refreshing to switch from couple to couple and see how their stories contrast, I've enjoyed Dev and his i-Star as much as Maan and his sweetheart Geet.

Speaking of which, I have to give a special mention to Maan - the way you've portrayed how he falls in love with Geet melts my heart! I get little butterflies whenever I read about how he admires her and is so engrossed in everything she does, the romantic side to Maan is adorable! Can I bottle him up for myself 😆

The Locket is fast becoming one of my all time favourites, update soon because now that I'm free I'll be stalking all day everyday until you do!

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Originally posted by: Susegad

Thanks Avi.

I am psyched.😃

Laptop has some virus called FBI Moneypack Virus. Cousin's kids were playing games on it when it happened. I tried all kinds of things to get rid of it, but nothing's working.

Have to take it in for repair when I have some time.

Are your "guests" there yet?😛

I forgot when exactly they were supposed to come.

Originally posted by: dqno1

Glad that you are finally free...

and enjoying the story... am in the midst of PM'ing so the delayed response...

I like the name jaan leva

There was a Maan VM with that I believe... with the fire tai-chi...

aah... so much filled in my head about this Maaneet...

Foz, if you have not started do start my teacher by Reet. I love that FF and her writing..

Catch up with you soon..

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so her mother is alive
and did tara sister really die
well guess we shall know soon
wait what was that
so painful what her mother went through
and whats he went through
wow revelations sure were scary right
so i see dev has stopped irritating her
well that does not surprise me
hmm i guess tara ran away because she knew her step father was there
but dont she wanna see her mother
and did they really beat her so much
oh god this one was full of so much anguish right
cheers for pm

Originally posted by: chavvi16

so her mother is alive
and did tara sister really die
well guess we shall know soon
wait what was that
so painful what her mother went through
and whats he went through
wow revelations sure were scary right
so i see dev has stopped irritating her
well that does not surprise me
hmm i guess tara ran away because she knew her step father was there
but dont she wanna see her mother
and did they really beat her so much
oh god this one was full of so much anguish right
cheers for pm

Very painful and sad part... Ponam and Tara went through worst. Thakurs are so cruel.
beautifuly written part

Originally posted by: Onir

Nishaji is this really you... 😲

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Originally posted by: Susegad

Wait let me check if it's really me.

The reflected image barely fits in the huge mirror in front of me. So, it must be me😆

Hi Doc.😃