MG (OS) : Immortalize my Victory - Page 2

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

beautiful !

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

" Jag Ne Chhinaa Mujhase
Mujhe Jo Bhi Lagaa Pyaaraa
Sab Jitaa Kiye Mujhase
Main Har Dam Hi Haaraa
Tum Haar Ke Dil Apanaa
Meri Jeet Amar Kar Do

Hothon se chhoolo tum
mera GEET amar kardo"


These lines convey the feelings of my heart after reading the OS.

It touched my heart specially the flashback part.

Loved it.

Originally posted by: dqno1

Wondering what you'll will say about this one...!

Hope I've made up for a hatrick of tragedies...

Avi shaking her head at Frosty...

Was I not supposed to cry for the boy whose mother died and he did even remember...😲

You have a long way to go to make up...😲

This does not count as happy wala...yet

*****

Now that my roothna is done, I have to say again how floored I am by your descriptiveness of nature. It was worded beautifully. Wonderful descriptions and the proposal by the cottage were superb. Totally loved it.

Thanks for the OS part 1.. waiting for part 2.

Originally posted by: its_me

absolutely amazing...👏

Originally posted by: sdlife19

beautiful story

simple words and just a mere togetherness can change a life and tats wat happened with maan here

Originally posted by: maanland

superb story

and superb writing

Originally posted by: Shefali16

Finaly a HAPPY OS!
ND IT HAS ONE MRE PART!
WT MORE CN I ASK U FROSTY...you wer extremely grateful on us tdy...ur poor 'sad' readers... ;p
Ekdum jhakaas os!
luvd it