Tum haar ke dil apna meri jeet amar kar do
beautiful lines of the gazal
sung very beautifully by jagjeet singh
and u have woven a beautiful story around these lines
very well written
This forum is overflowing with so many talented writers
and u have joined them😊
loved the story
loved ur writing style
a very dear friend of mine palindrome had suggested ur work love from across
I have read few chapters and it is amazing
have to complete it and then comment on it
liked ur style of including ghsp dialogue in ur story
ghar chale geet?
and u changed it into
let's go home maan
very nice
keep up ur wonderful writing