MG (OS) : Immortalize my Victory - Page 4

Originally posted by: gudmeet

Tum haar ke dil apna meri jeet amar kar do

beautiful lines of the gazal

sung very beautifully by jagjeet singh

and u have woven a beautiful story around these lines

very well written

This forum is overflowing with so many talented writers

and u have joined them😊

loved the story

loved ur writing style

a very dear friend of mine palindrome had suggested ur work love from across

I have read few chapters and it is amazing

have to complete it and then comment on it

liked ur style of including ghsp dialogue in ur story

ghar chale geet?

and u changed it into

let's go home maan

very nice

keep up ur wonderful writing

Originally posted by: Aashika_virman

Nice OS😊

Originally posted by: honeygrape

hey you wrote a happy wala os as promised...thanku 😊

the part where he went to his house expecting his mom and he rememberd her death was sooo painful...you have portrayed it soo besutifully...never read it anymore painful than this anywhere i guess...

very well written...now waiting eagerly for the next part...hope it ll have some lovey dovey maaneet scenes in it

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

😆Hahahaaa!

Glad to have you here...

😳

See!

I can write happy endings..but this isn't the end baby!

There's little more of happiness I've been planning😉

The flashback was a bit melancholic I agree; maybe because that comes to me naturally😛

Heheee

Will update the next OS soon..

For now, planning to put up another chapter for Back to You!

In a while...

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

Thank you dear!

Palindrome is a darling🤗

Had it not been for her, I wouldn't even have had the small list of readers I have..

Hope you aren't let down by Palindrome's recommendation and my writing!

Glad you liked this story!😃

Originally posted by: honeygrape

yeah i must say that the way you write sad ones, they just tear my heart apart...i seriously feel like someone has kept a heavy somthng on my chest😆😆 hope u got wat i meant...cant help if u dint...i am not at all good with words n so i dont know how to explain it... just understand that iam praising ur writing skills😳

I'm flaterred...

Originally posted by: gudmeet

yeah dear palindrome is really a darling

and all thanks to her that I got to read such a nice story

u r really a wonderful writer dear

keep it up😊