my teacher-(I) chap-22 pg 135 LINK fr 23 c index - Page 70

sach mein dost you made us addictive to yuor writing to your word. wat hv done to us yaar. am thinking ol de tim over nd over wt wl hapen next nd hope for ol posible ways. bt honestly eventho cnt hold from reding updat bt cnt read emotional sad ones also.
plsss... dost jaldi jaldi update de do na...plsss...

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

@ palin : you rocked dear

Originally posted by: palindrome

He he eh...

you reminded me of "Mr.Sharma.."😆

anyways,one who rocks is "Reet",dear...!!!😃

wow

Idk what to write. This is all flow, and my mind doesnt work while reading your stories, i dont question why it is like this, it is all the feeling, I remember how I read your ILWE without a break, how I used to cry, that time I didnt know about IF, through a FB link I came into this and saw your ff in popular topics, that is how my IF-addiction started. One story I desperately wanted/want to continue is ILWE. I have read your Bin Tere too, I remember Maan kissing Geet's forhead to absorb all her pain while not knowing the reason Geet was in pain because they could not be together. Poori story was emotional and I cried buckets!

And this one, I have done that 3 times already :D :D. Your dialogues are awesome and their placement makes it a thriller. They still ring in my mind, be it ILWE or my teacher. My fav. dialogue from ILWE is you know what the tragedy is to whom I lost it calls me heartless and it hurts a lot! Wow wow wow. My heart was thumping at the moment.

Eager to know what happens next, I am already imagining things :D.
Geet maybe at fault, but her love is pure, way too deep.

Rambled enough, you are super duper hit writer!!! Applause!!!

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Idk what to write. This is all flow, and my mind doesnt work while reading your stories, i dont question why it is like this, it is all the feeling, I remember how I read your ILWE without a break, how I used to cry, that time I didnt know about IF, through a FB link I came into this and saw your ff in popular topics, that is how my IF-addiction started. One story I desperately wanted/want to continue is ILWE. I have read your Bin Tere too, I remember Maan kissing Geet's forhead to absorb all her pain while not knowing the reason Geet was in pain because they could not be together. Poori story was emotional and I cried buckets!

And this one, I have done that 3 times already :D :D. Your dialogues are awesome and their placement makes it a thriller. They still ring in my mind, be it ILWE or my teacher. My fav. dialogue from ILWE is you know what the tragedy is to whom I lost it calls me heartless and it hurts a lot! Wow wow wow. My heart was thumping at the moment.

Eager to know what happens next, I am already imagining things :D.
Geet maybe at fault, but her love is pure, way too deep.

Rambled enough, you are super duper hit writer!!! Applause!!!

ur right dost. say in another way around its geet's deep pure love nd trust on arjun nd hence arosed insecurities made her to cross ol limits. nd nw she got de biggest punishment to face him daily nd see de immense hatred for her in his eyes.

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

@ sarita - going to youtube breathe .. i know u didnt like geet , but u will .i promise . oh ..this is the best ? i thought u loved ilwe better . you loved arjun ? ok lemme check that again .

i m quoting u later . aise nahi likh sakti

Breathe is a song which doesnt make much sense to me except the mentioned four lines😊
I dont know if I can like geet. I definitely am sympathetic to her. like u said u cant explain everything in words..so what I feel for her cant be classified merely as adulation or hatred. Sympathy and anguish may be. I wud nt even try. If we think of it, she is practically an orphan. And not even for a second I blame her for her past. She was a kid. even if she didnt love Maan/was just extremely fond of him/ did not feel the same way about him,/accepted her grand fathers words just like that..she is not the one to be blamed. She was A kid of 13, thats all. But then her love for Arjun, somewhere it failed to impress me. Many a times I had to wonder, if it was a just a strong infatuation. Because believe it or not but we all come across such a relationship in life, which makes us believe THATS IT(happens most of the times with people having abandonment issues). Thats the person u will spend ur life with and the next moment its all gone. May be because she is not written to be a larger than life character. She is the one battling with insecurities, deceit and what not since a tender age. All she wanted was one assurance from the guy she believed with her life. He failed to provide that. So if I once for a fleeting moment not see MAANEET as divine, epic heroes...She is JUSTIFIED!!! But then came up the sexual Harrasment track...

A sexual harassment ?

Are you really this immature geet ?

That wass the only thing pounding my head since second last update. This no way is EXPLAINABLE! It is not even remotely HUMANE. She was the girl who kept her calm in most taxing situations, I agree she went through a LOT..lost her SANITY at the gruesome moment!! But EVEN THEN? Where were her values? Are you trying to tell me that the daughter of UDAY RAICHANDA lacked so much in values and insight that she succumbed to VIKAS's level. That was heinous . As MaAN aptly said prove it that you are Uday Raichanda's daughter .because till now in no way it seemed . prove your are worthy of his name . prove it you are worthy of the honorable scholarship that you claim to be your right ! prove that I hadn't faced 24 hours of utter humiliation out of nothing . prove that I had been wrong that you don't deserve the scholarship!

That's what I wanted to shriek out to her all this while. So the damage has been done.

And thats where the power a writer holds comes into the picture.. you can turn the tables and make us fall in love with even Vikas😆 (JOkes apart). The characters are your puppet, so I believe u can make me like geet again. As u said abt how ILWE was my favt. YES it still is( you may not even understand how valuable it is to me, the nostalgia attached,the endless wait, that still lingering hope. see i am actually telling this to one whose BABY is ILWE😆). And the reason is YOU, u kind of made me feel like a part of ILWE, keeping me involved since day 1! That story is a benchmark u set for urself and there is no point comparing these two. They are different genres. By best update I meant beast in this particular FF so far.

Change is the only constant in the world. So I dont deny changing my favorite characters with every other update. e.g. I have immense respect for DIA from this on(UNFORTUNATELY😭) I was secretly hoping ki SATYA salvages the situation..but never mind, DIA was more realistic option. She was part of all crucial MU junctions).I am sure SATYA and his father too will play a part soon. The way DIA advocated herself and Maan😊.. I think may be she deserves that scholarship a bit more. CONFUSED..btwn EMOTIONS and NEED😕

About why I am all of sudden in Maan's favor..as i said unlike Geet, he has been developed on the lines of HERO, larger than life caricature. Not completely but to a major sense.From the point He was introduced, he has always made an impact, as a student, as a lover, as a son,as a husband, as a teacher.He did nt have a father, his mother was ailing, had no resources, his love ditched him time and again, his mother passed away, he TOO was all ALONE!! But still he kept a calm demeanor taking life as it comes. Keeping that hope alive that may be he would be loved once by his wife1 He has been an epitome of perfect Man. His only mistake he did nt voice his feelings at apt time. But to think of it, He had reasons. Real reasons. The only time his naked emotions were on display was rage. So naturally I bow in respect for him. Its another thing that geet is yet unknown of his painful past, but once it comes to light, she has more guilt to undergo. The same is valid for maan as well. He too needs to come face to face with her insecurities, her sheilded raw wounds. But for now he clearly wins if there is a competition of character😃.

smug arrogant headstrong stubborn geet raichanda ,who loved her reputation more than any thing in this world had to face a lot after getting out from this room. Must say you/he chose best possible punishment. And even when Maan would try to act indifferent, her redemption, her efforts may make him mellow down over a time. Thats the guy he has been till now. A total goner at hands of his love. So bring on the next part and let me see how much my debate with you on the characters u designed😆 is valid.

Last but not the least the attitude of spineless, filthy rich students of this college. you disgust me people. Where is your own understanding?How it is for people to jump on conclusions? Accused is not guilty until proven😕. Even if just one student thought otherwise, trusted the teacher they used to adore just yesterday. The horde of animals with no thinking ability of their own. Thats is why the college is sinking down in terms of quality. Now their warth would be all directed to geet just in the same way. Weird.

Dev seems to be a good guy here. He and Su make a good pair.(random)😃

awesome part (Needless to say)😊

Waiting.

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Idk what to write. This is all flow, and my mind doesnt work while reading your stories, i dont question why it is like this, it is all the feeling, I remember how I read your ILWE without a break, how I used to cry, that time I didnt know about IF, through a FB link I came into this and saw your ff in popular topics, that is how my IF-addiction started. One story I desperately wanted/want to continue is ILWE. I have read your Bin Tere too, I remember Maan kissing Geet's forhead to absorb all her pain while not knowing the reason Geet was in pain because they could not be together. Poori story was emotional and I cried buckets!

And this one, I have done that 3 times already :D :D. Your dialogues are awesome and their placement makes it a thriller. They still ring in my mind, be it ILWE or my teacher. My fav. dialogue from ILWE is you know what the tragedy is to whom I lost it calls me heartless and it hurts a lot! Wow wow wow. My heart was thumping at the moment.

Eager to know what happens next, I am already imagining things :D.
Geet maybe at fault, but her love is pure, way too deep.

Rambled enough, you are super duper hit writer!!! Applause!!!

Her fire and ice analogy in ILWE!! the lines..love is the irresistible feeling of being irresistibly desired. The last update! everything abt ILWE is awsm😳

Originally posted by: palindrome

He he eh...

you reminded me of "Mr.Sharma.."😆

anyways,one who rock is "Reet",dear...!!!😃

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

Pls tell me how geet has suffered more den maan?

1. She didn't have mother n he didn't have father

2. She lost her father and maan, he lost his mom n geet

3. She is financially stable where he was dependent. He didn't have dat support too...

4. She was young so she didn't understand d relation but maan lived vd it, was in pain all d time...

5. Her dad died bt she couldn't witness his miserable state n maan has d guilt coz of his stubbornness his mom died...he saw her suffer n she witnessed her son's longingness n heart break till she left d world

6. She out of rage jealously told him dat dev is her fianc...maan didn't do dat

7. For d above mentioned reason she humiliated him and wht he did? She is his wife no matter wht, he is gng to forgive her bt how will she look at her self in mirror...

She didn't do any favor or mercy on maan...to make her conscience clear she did it...

Reet u have written last few updts in mindblowing way...u surpassed ur own record of best writing n ESP vd dia's dialogues...jitni tarif karu kum hai...

I have loads to say bt den u guys will b bored...I didn't feel anything for her...she isn't worth my any emotion right now...I want her to suffer n b humiliated everyday...

Better punishment dat Arjun doesn't look at her once...zakhmon ka pata ghaav dekh kar nahi lagta...Kai ghaav aise hai Jo Nazar nahi aate...