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Posted: 12 years ago
awesommm one my dear...very very painful...
she committed a grave mistake , though she undid it, now she ll have to pay for it...the same crowd who hurled abuses at him, how wil they treat her?? ohh am worried for her...

he left her to face the consequences...what better punishment she cud have got??

loved the challenge he threw her way...

love the way story is moving...

cant stand this cold maan...😭

once again thanku sooo much writing this...waiting eagerly for the mext part😊😊 enjoyin the story very very much
Edited by honeygrape - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update as always and as expected👍🏼
So acc to Geet ...its over ...the end😭

But for Arjun...its embeded in his heart...SHE is his lil wifey ..she is HIS Geet
So its interesting to c how long he hold himself away from his Geet...waiting 4 new begining in your lovely style
Thanks a lot 4 update...want to c more n more of ur work.
P.s waiting 4 nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved loved the update...for me you are the best story teller👏👏...nobody can write a story like you do...I know I am not commenting on each update of yours...but trust me everytime you write something...I become speechless...I feel that I can't write something worthy in front of you beautiful stories...you are really the best...I don't know how can you write so beautifully...each of your story touches the heart of you readers...your way of portraying the characters,their pain and happiness is so beautiful and touching...
Now coming to the update...Thank God, Geet realized her mistake...All the three friends are repenting...except Vikas...I
really want that Vikas to suffer...all problems are created by him at the first place...feeling bad for Geet too...the girl is alone since her childhood but so is Maan...in her anger Geet forgot that by giving pain to Arjun only she is going to suffer...her guilt is eating her up..Geet looked like somebody punched straight on her face.

Her arjun sir , the most respectable one .. he is being called names ? had geet brought him down here ?

I really loved Dia today... Dia is definitely an important link between Maan and Geet..If Dia was not there Geet would have probably not taken the step of taking all the blame on her...Dia did what Geet's friends should have done...sometimes even outsiders can show the right path..Geet's turmoil after knowing the truth is clearly felt..sleep is not there in her eyes after hurting her love...

geet felt her knees buckling beneath her . she couldn't see anything .the whole world blurred infront of her

The truth she didn't want to see , yet had been ahead her the whole time stared at her .

The girl she hated most made her realize she was not capable of love .

Geet raichanda didnt know the first thing of love .

.

Geet slumped on the ground . the earth swaying in front of her eyes . she couldn't keep her head steady on her shoulders . she let it touch the ground . shattered .

He had got a ring for me ?

She knew at that moment .. every word came out of dia's mouth was true .she was not lying even about the part where dia said , she didn't deserve him .

I don't deserve his love.

I don't ..

How could I do that to him .

Geet knew at that moment she had been played by vikas , not arjun .

She knew arjun was pure , purer than Caesar's wife .

His frantic cry after her ..


Geet '

Geett..

Geeettt..!dont go ..!

I love you geet ..!

Did you do it after I confessed ?

I love you geet ..

He has got a ring for you ? a ruby on the crown .

Geet listen to me baby ..!

I love you geet '

Dia was right , she had everything served in front of her ..yet she refused to see ..

Her abandonment issues got the best of her .

She let herself being played by the jerk vikas .

Moments of blinding anger taken everything away from her .

Regret wouldn't be the word she would describe what she was feeling .

It was way more than it . a mere word wasn't suffice to describe the repentance she was drowning in .

She lost it .

She was lost by her own demons .

A sheer panic washed her over as arjun's eyes of this morning flashed infront of her ..

The warmth gone , forever .

She had this feeling .

It's the end ..

She has ended it herself .

Now all she was left with self loathing and neck deep fear of loneliness .

She has got no reasons to live anymore .

Arjun is so broken but still he can't think bad of her...the innocent man didn't utter a word against her...didn't try to defend himself...the man is so hurt and diappointed from his Geet that he doesn't bother to defend himself and is ready to see himself get ruined...so his mother also died coz of Anant...Maan has kept his word and is still fulfilling his promise of not leaving Geet... His words ''Geet...you'll be the death of me someday'' is turning out to be true...

Arjun's decision of punishing Geet show his maturity ...

suspension means she gets to run from the situation she has created . but if she is forced to stay here and face the situation , that would be the worst punishment ever . because I feel the consequences of her actions won't be easy , at all. If she gets suspended she gets to flee from the mess she is in , trust me sir , the mess is not pretty !


prove it that you are Uday Raichanda's daughter .

because till now in no way it seemed . prove your are worthy of his name . prove it you are worthy of the honorable scholarship that you claim to be your right ! prove that I hadn't faced 24 hours of utter humiliation out of nothing . prove that I had been wrong that you don't deserve the scholarship !


Geet is going to suffer more now...staying close to him and yet so far...bearing his hatred after all his love is not gonna easy for her...''Staying here and face the college will be difficult , but staying here and face a changed arjun ?

She didn't know if she can do it ''

now waiting to see how she is gonna clear this mess and how she'll win Arjun's love back...


The silent interaction between Arjun and Geet and the little conversation they had explained their current thoughts...


With that he had left a mortified geet and an unfathomable teacher alone in his office to face each other.

All this time arjun had his eyes fixed on geet observing the change of expressions , finally settling on sheer mortification .

Then without saying anything to her he was walking out when her voice stopped him on his track.

are you going to leave ?

Arjun didn't turn back . he just stood still for few seconds which seemed pretty long for geet who waited with bated breaths for his answer .then he turned and faced her .

Looking straight in the doe eyes he uttered.

I will stay .

Geet released the breath she didn't know she was holding .

Arjun looked her in the eye and said .


I will stay because had promised certain someone that wouldn't leave .

But that's it .

Don't ever expect anything else from me .


With that he walked out on geet .

Geet stood there staring at the corner he had vanished ,letting the words slowly soak in . she knew he wouldn't forgive her . but hearing it from his mouth loud and clear stabbed her in chest .

Eagerly waiting for the next part...plz try to update ILWE...


PS. I have written such a long comment for the first time...I am not too good in expressing my thoughts but have tried...plz forgive me if you find it silly.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Pls tell me how geet has suffered more den maan?
1. She didn't have mother n he didn't have father
2. She lost her father and maan, he lost his mom n geet
3. She is financially stable where he was dependent. He didn't have dat support too...
4. She was young so she didn't understand d relation but maan lived vd it, was in pain all d time...
5. Her dad died bt she couldn't witness his miserable state n maan has d guilt coz of his stubbornness his mom died...he saw her suffer n she witnessed her son's longingness n heart break till she left d world
6. She out of rage jealously told him dat dev is her fianc...maan didn't do dat
7. For d above mentioned reason she humiliated him and wht he did? She is his wife no matter wht, he is gng to forgive her bt how will she look at her self in mirror...

She didn't do any favor or mercy on maan...to make her conscience clear she did it...

Reet u have written last few updts in mindblowing way...u surpassed ur own record of best writing n ESP vd dia's dialogues...jitni tarif karu kum hai...

I have loads to say bt den u guys will b bored...I didn't feel anything for her...she isn't worth my any emotion right now...I want her to suffer n b humiliated everyday...

Better punishment dat Arjun doesn't look at her once...zakhmon ka pata ghaav dekh kar nahi lagta...Kai ghaav aise hai Jo Nazar nahi aate...
Edited by maanmeet1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
did really time and situation play game.
no , it us who blame it
in search of easy way out from our mess.


becose its us deep down true us
who hide behind social face
and one chance
just one chance it need to play its card.
and that one chance decide true nature of person.

i m not here in favour or opposition for any character .but me here to say how much good you are as writer. Their is not one person in this ff who don't have this second person in him /her ,which want to come out and shout loud. But being the player of their game ,some of them played it really well but other's played on the cost of their life .

dia : i knew ,she is not the person for whom all this game is on . But still for me ,she is the game changer. she in this one update show us all ,how good and brave she is as a person. i knew ,she is the one who stop arjun to tell geet about her tution as some where she knew that geet can beat her but still she is brave enough to stand and show the mirror to geet at right time ,even if it meant to show her inner fear and deep secret. but still she did what is right acc. to her







Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am speechless...how beautifully written Reet...
Bravo dia...sha really loved arjun from her heart that she could not see him so much accused...achche se sunaya geet ki...she opened geet's eyes...not just that, scolding to her friends is also required...she is right, geet doesnt deserve arjun...
Glad that it had expected effect and geet told the truth and was ready for any punishment by arjun...and now geet is in remorse...
And arjun's punishment is just perfect...facing the humilation for her entrire collage life where she has ultimate power, ruled the collage with her attitude, intelligence, bravery and rebelling nature...
She had to face him all the time is worse punishment for her...
But will he able to see her in pain, see her get humilate every now & then...hope they will find a way to unite once again...
Poor arjun...anat was the reason behind his mother's death also..still His sufferings not finished...he has to face geet getting humilated every moment
Hope everything will get fine soon
Loved the last line...

Staying here and face the college will be difficult , but staying here and face a changed arjun ?

She didn't know if she can do it .

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

Pls tell me how geet has suffered more den maan?

1. She didn't have mother n he didn't have father
2. She lost her father and maan, he lost his mom n geet
3. She is financially stable where he was dependent. He didn't have dat support too...
4. She was young so she didn't understand d relation but maan lived vd it, was in pain all d time...
5. Her dad died bt she couldn't witness his miserable state n maan has d guilt coz of his stubbornness his mom died...he saw her suffer n she witnessed her son's longingness n heart break till she left d world
6. She out of rage jealously told him dat dev is her fianc...maan didn't do dat
7. For d above mentioned reason she humiliated him and wht he did? She is his wife no matter wht, he is gng to forgive her bt how will she look at her self in mirror...

She didn't do any favor or mercy on maan...to make her conscience clear she did it...

Reet u have written last few updts in mindblowing way...u surpassed ur own record of best writing n ESP vd dia's dialogues...jitni tarif karu kum hai...

I have loads to say bt den u guys will b bored...I didn't feel anything for her...she isn't worth my any emotion right now...I want her to suffer n b humiliated everyday...

Better punishment dat Arjun doesn't look at her once...zakhmon ka pata ghaav dekh kar nahi lagta...Kai ghaav aise hai Jo Nazar nahi aate...

Yes...he has suffered a lot as against him...as he is more matured than her and he became more matured at a very young age...and now its geet's turn to understand the way of life, understand how much he has suffered...what will happen to her when she comes to know how much maan humilated by her dadaji...
Very well expressed your views...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
My eyes are burning..spinal chord is aching like hell due to continuous sitting on PC since last eight hours...{I am doing that for last two days},but this story did not let me move from my place... !!!
"Addictive" is the perfect word for your "writing" dear..Only your stories can hook me this way...It had happened before too,,I had read "In love with my enemy" in the same way...I was a silent reader back then and haven't joined IF...I had read the "last updated chapter" of that story first and then i read three or four chapters backwards...You can understand,i did not have inkling of story line ,still i managed to read three chapters in reverse order...Thats the effect your writing has on me,dear..!!!
After reading four chapters in backward direction,I jumped on chapter one and read the whole story...!! But sadly,you abandoned the story when i started reading it !!!
I am so happy that you are back with this extremely wonderful story and I really thank avi{dqno.1} for telling me about this...!!!
I don't know what magic you have in your words but you can make a reader so involve in the story that he or she becomes oblivious to their surroundings...!!!
You give minimal descriptions of the places,still you take us to their world..It always feel like,i am standing their witnessing everything with my own eyes...!!!
There is always decent intimacy between the leads,still chapters are so intense that I feel something churn in my stomach when they hug or even hold hands..!!!
The way you have incorporated those "Literature lessons" in the story and the way they connect to situations and circumstances and characters,is incredible...!!!! They are perfectly woven..!!
All the characters whether its dev aur sunanda are so real that you forget for a while ,its a fiction...!!! Even leads are not perfect..have their own flaws and it definitely contributes to the "realism" that this tale has..!!!
I had lots and lots of in my mind to say but now I have forgotten every thing after reading 20 chapters at once..Stil i remember few things and i would quote them..
There is a line.."Marriage is not noun,its a verb"..i have never heard such perfect definition of marriage before...👏.👏
That scene,when reporters ask geet whether she wants death sentence for him and she remembers his words...Oh i felt goose bumps all over my arms...!!!
Then in the union room,where vikas tries to poison geet's mind to make her complain against arjun..The way you have portrayed geet seeing her mother in her friend,asking her to do this,was just awesome..you know its easy to show this with camera and very hard to portray with words..Kudos to you girl...!!!👏.👏
Your presentation always makes me feel as if i am watching a movie on tv...!!!
I am sad too that my quota of chapters is over and i have to wait patiently for your next update..Its a big punishment i tell you...!!!!
Phew..
bahut bol liya maine i guess...
conclusion is that,"You are one of the most most talented writers on this forum.."!!!!
wishing you all the love and luck...
and thank you so much for giving all of us this wonderful story...!!!




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Posted: 12 years ago

hey very emotional update. geet eventho she understood her fault consequence of her lying bfor dias confrontation nw she s full on her guilt regreting her act. but as far as she was at fault the things which lead her to those eer also neglactable. bcos she never get mothers love only got one was fathers her papajis love nd he also left her at de tebdervage of 13 nd de one who wud hv been vt her according to her father was also abandoned her in her view. althouhg anant s der for her des years she s ol alone nd she never get desired love nd she tried to be move in to a shell in de mater of love despite of her activities in de college nd wen arjun came she forced to be out from dat shell. as de fact of arjun cheting bhind her occurd her mind by dat leech she bcom insecure bcos of her abandment issues in her past dat shaken her deeply in her tender age itself nd dat s haunting her in present also eventho she appeard to b matur nd brave. she doesnt wana to los arjun nd prayd nd promisd herself to trust on everyting dat comout of his mouth bt he didnt.
nw ol r seing geets fault only but nt her inerturmoil. arjun nw hating her byond imagination bcos he thinks dat she cheted him in past also nd hadnt knwn dat she s like dis only bcos of thier past itself. so hv to know him nd oders de past abot her iner pains nd wories of her. nd dia must knw the real geet she s nt lik a bitch as she say geet s still a 13yr child by insid wu lost her everyone she love nd money s not ol bt love dat she didnt hv in her life. eventho anant s der his love or concern for her r only for his benefits only.
nd huh we cnt say dat geet deosnt follow her papaji bcos her helping mentality dat came from her father only. one more thing she atracted to arjun nt only bcos of his personality somwher she can see her father in him nd somtimes remind her maan also.
geet also hv to know about maan he tries to meet her nd her dadaji was bhind ol conspircy seperating dem nd maan also knwn abot ol nd his geet was innocent. ol dat hapend to maan was nt silly nd iy lost him lot. bt in ol dat we cnt say geet s responsible for his misery bcos she also sufferd lot nd she even knw about ol dat hapend in her life she also kept in dark nd waited for her maan to seel silace in him. she got solac in his room in his absence.. bt she also hv to known about maan's suffering during ol des years nd his craving for her.
is she suffering from som diseas lik her father?!
luking forward for ur valuable updat plss...make it fast... hop to read soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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