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Posted: 12 years ago
Continued form last post 😉 I have so much to talk... 😆
Oh see here I go again. 😆

The scene by the neem tree was the best one for me. A mixed bag of emotions. Oh that was so numbing & painful. They both were soaking wet but then there was still warmth in their relation with no loathing. There was warmth from seeing those emotions in each other, the affectation by the others presence.
"Pehle maloom na tha, aaj yeh maine samjha. Pyaar kehte hai jisse, voh hai dilon ka sauda" Oh my that was so painful. Dilon ka suada hi toh tha yeh. Suda ki jab tak khushi ho tab tak sab thik lekinek hawan ka jhoken ne sab bikher diya. It was a deal for them each wanting just goodness, and happiness but none ready to work & take efforts to build it on stronger foundations, Not even working on their communication gaps.
I loved the words you associated with him... ' She trying to pry off but no chance against his earnest pull..." Yes he is earnest which she is trying to taint just for revenge which isn't even justified.

And then came the most awaited moment. "I love you. Loved you ever since I have known you." At this moment I had to pause & close my eyes as I knew after this everything is going to shatter. I couldn't even keep that flicker of hope in me as I knew damage was already done. You combined the confession with lightening. It struck her but the darkness within was so much that she couldn't see his true self even when light was provided. He has loved her since knowing her, but does he really know her ... he doesn't know her as somewhere all this happen is even because of him. If he knew her he would clear her doubts. he would come clean. That's why I could neither hate her nor him. His whisper brought her out of her dead state the daze she was in at the neem tree but then her mindless few words uttered in blind revenge will be the death nail to his career, character & all that he has build.

The whole scene where the accusation was revealed to him was splendid. 👏 His silence did the talking... it held more power than her words of accusations. that numbing pain could slice anyone. The tension and beating hearts you showed there where in synchronous to the tick tock.

The song... sach keh raha hai... 👏 Loved it is one of my favourites. Lekin ab kaun sach keh raha hai... uska silence ya phir her insecurity. Their states are debatable but yet not correct to judge any of them.

He asked her did she do it after the confession ... nice reply. Oh that hit me hard. How pained he must be. I guess beyond his pain threshold. When he bared it all to her he gets such a not fitting shelter to his raw emotions and unworthy protection.

loved it... all. And sorry for such long comments.
Nawab Awasthy Is a query for me.???

Finally done with one and now one more to go. 😊



Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 20
awesome...
am very much relieved...
Man is safe and his career too...
what is that old man planning now?
now that Geet has told everyone this?
at last her guilt made her open her mouth...
seriously was she a fool when she alleging him like that?
knowing very well what the consequences will be coz they already have an example in their college...
and Dia i just wanna hug her...
no wonder Geet sees her as arch nemesis...
the girl has guts and the determination but in the good right way unlike Geet...
Sunanada and Zaria seriously disappointed everyone...
the way Maan was treated by the students was so shocking...
but this is the right punishment for her, let her face it with full force...
and Vikas now he problem with Dev too?
wow Dia is a sweetheart she has told about the true colors of Vikas to the girls...
now what will Zaria madam do?
OMG his mother got affected by this old man?
how cruel...
i just Maan never forgives Geet and he has to tell her about his life and her so called life too to her and lets see what she does that old man...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 19
awesome update
geet in anger and Jealous didn't think once what would be the consequences after that.
arjun he just accepted everything did not defend himself
she believed vikas
Part 20
Dia was shocked to know about the whole thing
she tried to speak to arjun but he refused.
loved the way Dia had made geet know her mistake.
geet still trying to defend herself but dia answered all her questions
arjun didn't speak anything about the ring and she is blaming him for that.
but that does not give her right to complaint against him
finally she came to know what grave mistake she made.
only because of her the people who respected arjun are able to blame him
will geet be able to face the college?
will arjun forgive geet ?
eragely waiitng for next part
Please PM me
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
can nt stop myself 4rm asking u,reet aaj updtt milega kya??😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

can nt stop myself 4rm asking u,reet aaj updtt milega kya??😊


thaxxx for asking
me too want to know
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


thaxxx for asking
me too want to know

Me three😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
what can i say another awesome update👏 u have described everything in so acute detail!!
now i am waiting to see how Geet will cope with the situation and how Maan will get back his reputation!!
I am very happy tha way you make Maan react in that situation😳
So waiting eagerly for the next part😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter - 19

Yes, there are situations when your own mind plays many games with you and of course there are people who like to add to your misery.
Sometimes we fall prey to them but in this situation I don't understand that how can a girl simply mock her own respect, her own izzat?

Geet's dilemma is on one side but, making fun of your and someone else's character, respect, is too much to take in. For a girl to do this is simply not going down my throat. If the question arises that her friends tempted her to the wrong side. .. Come on it's not drugs we are talking about but your self-esteem, character, respect, your family's respect all that. ..which takes years to build. How could she simply trash all that in just one moment.

Women do succumb badly to such situations but killing a part of you to gain someone's love is simply worse … are you really able to gain love of such a person??

Here, Maan already loves Geet but all this is unknown to her. The kind of step she has taken is unforgivable. Though our hero may forgive her but in real life men never forgive such situations.
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Posted: 12 years ago
reet you told tomorrow another surprise.was it the chapter 20??please reet can you give one more update please..i know i am demanding too much as you being a doctor.what can we do also??we are readers who keeps waiting for your update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Emotional update. But beautifully written. You have beautifully portrayed the emotions of all the characters.

More than this story I am impressed by your personality, a doctor, an amazing writer. Please keep on writing.

This story and its character is your baby and you got your freedom to write according to your imagination.

But you are one hell amazing writer. I am afraid what I will do once you finish this story…… So much addicted to your ff

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