The Seven Year 'Hitch' [2] - Chp 11/ Pg 53 - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago

brilliant update

maan is now realizing what all of them meant to him his wife, his kids, his daadi n dad

without them nothing is valuable in his life

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

There is nothing like coming home to an empty home that makes you feel empty inside.

No amount of lavish foods, when eaten alone, ever tastes good...
Love is like a silent strong thread which binds us and makes us whole.
Yes we are social beings... and however much introvert one is companionship and relations are needed to feel at home. And home is where the heart is... and his heart isn't with him at present.
@Bold: I agree to it completely. 😊
Maan is finding this thread is snapped.
Nothing is the same now. The same place he used to call home is a desolate mansion now.
He is floundering as most guys do when they have to do anything out of the norm.
Its past the stage of let's talk. He realizes what he is about to lose. I am glad he is seeking someone who can show him the way out now.
Yes he is so wound up with his own inner conflicts that he's not finding a way out but yes here onwards he will find his way with guidance coming from someone he trusts a lot.
I love the symbolism in the beginning with the curtain protecting him from the harshness which was what Geet did.
You can sense his need and want of her in him sleeping on her side as if to inhale her scent to make him rest.
He has gifts for Diwali...
Diwali here signifying the erasing of the dark and bringing bursts of light...👏
Loved it Onir.
Glad you noticed it all. 😃 It makes the effort worth it when you really notice it and I feel that what I'm trying to convey does come out and that I'm not going tangent. 😊
Thanks Avi for loving it it means a lot. 🤗
I am incapable of further words to describe it but the fundamental change you have brought to his character with this update makes me want to hope for him..
Gadha hai but I want this gadha to find his way home..
Gadha's character still has a lot to go through and yet a lot of building of characters are in the line as till now I have only concentrated on the leads, Him specially ... Now a lot of characters need to be gelled in together and in sync. Hopefully I can justify it all, so that in the end Gadha does find his way home and it all looks gradual progression. Pretty nervous for it all. 😊
Thanks for updating..🤗

Thanks for being there always. If it wasn't for you I wouldn't have been writing at all.. 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

update aa gaya..😃😃😃



nice.. poor maan making efforts but in vain.. no success..

but then he deserve this...


it was really a very lonely lonely type update..
just like maan i was also feeling very lonely...


Thanks Mannu 😃

I'm so sorry to make you feel lonely but then Maan needs to understand the problem and act on it 😊 But be rest assured he will make it all good, trust me and thanks for holding onto this story
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

He is still finding it difficult to bring even a lil change in his ways...


Glad that she went away from him and that made him realise how she felt always...the loniliness which he couldnt bear for a week was somthng which she was enduring since a loong tym along with his indifference too...
She didn't do it on purpose to make him feel how she endured but then she too needed her space. And the time spent apart has made him realise his own follies. 😊

loved the determination he showed at the initial part of the update but guess that dint give him enough strength to let go of his egos or may be something else...
she should have done this before...eager to see the family tym n geets reaction...
Has she expected him there?? if not then would lovve to see her reaction to his arrival...
He is determined but then sometimes one needs the way out when you yourself are so entangled in the problem that you can't see the obvious path of solution and so he is going to do just that going to his family who will soothe him and give him that freedom from loneliness and restlessness and also to seek some advice.
loved loved loved the part a looot...continue sooon pweez...cant wait for the next part,...aage se nahi booloongi continue sooon...this laaast tym...😃😃

PS: take your tym...that was just out of excitement...dont bother😆

Thanks so much Purvi 🤗 You've always been a great support and encouragement. And your comments mean a lot to me. Thanks for being there and giving me that push always along with Avi to update here or else I would always be within my self doubts contemplating to update or no. Will try updating sooner and not be so irregular. 😳


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

still the same

actually cant get wats troubling geet more

him being busy or he forgetting the anniversary

Yes I know that there's not much progress but trust me that was needed.
And about what is troubling Geet more than I would say there's a lot more that has been triggered by one forgotten anniversary... I can tell you to please still continue holding onto this story for a few more updates for it all shape out well. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
as always beautifully penned down

I do get how maan is unable to voice his thoughts or feelings some people are like that only even if they try they really can't speak what they feel its like something holds them back . even with all the love and care in their heart they just can't voice it out and that really gets them in trouble. their inability to speak freely about their feelings turns into the reason for their loneliness

geet is also right at her place she did everything she could yet she couldn't get this relationship anywhere

will be waiting for next part

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

your writing has something in it that makes my heart ache...loved it..hope maan is successful in his attempt... sometimes i our busy world we take granted the things we really need...

Oh thanks! 😳
Maan has to be successful for her and for him 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sudha_gc

nice one. Maan's still finding it difficult to change himself!! Good Geet left him & gave him some space n time.

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

nice update

thanx for the pm
cont soon dear


Thanks! 😳
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh! Thanks for being here 😊

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