The Seven Year 'Hitch' [2] - Chp 11/ Pg 53 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




wonderful update...

maan is repenting very badly...an Geet ko usse maaf kar dena chahiye...

yes he ignored her and family but still he never did anything out of marriage...he was loyal to her but his only wrong deed is that he forget that his family is longing for his love when he was all engrossed in making money for them...

thanx for pm...


Thanks for liking this part 😊

Hmm Geet's POV too has to be explored yet. I agree Maan has not been disloyal and loves her but then there are issues to be tackled for their relation. Thanks for putting forward this thought towards this story. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bansi-

Awesome update..!!

He realized what he had been missing all the while when Geet decided to leave for two weeks.

Hope he gets his way back home with his Mishty..kids and his Dadi.!!

Cont soon please..!!

Thanks! 😳
He will surely find his way back home
Will try continuing soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

so true naa without family nothing matters
all seems to be pointless and yet what else does he have
geet seemed to want some alone time
for her t get over the whole thing
this hitch isnt gonna go away so easily
after all only when he changes himself or is like the maan he was it wont be easy to overcome the distance between them
but i guess he and even she will have to work together right

Yes family matters the most to us and Maan has finally understood it the hard way.

Its a hitch that is causing a lot of trouble but surely he will tide over it to make it an everlasting bond of love to be hitched together 😉😳

A relation always needs to be worked upon and shared by two people who make the relation and M-G together will make it a success. 😊

Thanks for being here and for your comments! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply amazing.loved it...keep writing

Thanks Reva 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: flowers4u

fantastic update hope all the family reunites soon

Thanks! Don't loose hope hold onto for sometime 😊

Thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: preeti.1

Amezing part ...finally maan understood how much family impotant for him

maan is in action now
waiting for next

Thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

brilliant update

maan is now realizing what all of them meant to him his wife, his kids, his daadi n dad

without them nothing is valuable in his life

Thanks! 😳
He has realised it... and its better late than never 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 111priyan

as always beautifully penned down

I do get how maan is unable to voice his thoughts or feelings some people are like that only even if they try they really can't speak what they feel its like something holds them back . even with all the love and care in their heart they just can't voice it out and that really gets them in trouble. their inability to speak freely about their feelings turns into the reason for their loneliness

geet is also right at her place she did everything she could yet she couldn't get this relationship anywhere

will be waiting for next part

Thanks Priyan! 😳 I like your observations and comments each time on the updates 😊

I am glad you are understanding Maan's nature too and his incapacities to be away from his basic nature. It makes me feel good that what ever I'm trying to convey is coming across to the readers 😳

Thanks for waiting and I will try updating as soon as I can 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks! 😳

I really love your animated comments 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I bookmarked this FF long back but could not got the time to read...this sat-sun I finished this story (1-9 parts...10th part yet to read)
very beautifully written...you have that style of writing in you...I read your (long) comments in other FFs.
beautiful story...geet is right ...she missed that love, gruaduly in this seven years which she realised but maan being busy in business flowed on with his routine
wamted ot know what he planned surprise for her since 8 months
loved dad-in-love, their 'our corner' and kodak moment of their pic
want to know how maan is going to fix this
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10
awesome...
poor them...
now Maan is realizing every mistake and loneliness...
cont soon dear...

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