DANCE WITH ME-MG SS-UPDATED PT 09 PG 56 ON 27-04-14 - Page 24

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Geet slowly walked inside holding the tray while SD said,"Geet,come & sit with Maan for a while while am gonna bring oil to massage his feet.He always neglects his health!"Geet asked shocked,"Dadimaa!"Dadimaa assured her from her eye & exited when Geet sat beside Maan.Maan's body moved from her & sat.Geet was hurt seeing his reluctance.She saw him intently when his hair was still wet.Geet took the towel & came towards him.He showed reluctance but she stood & started drying his hairs.Maan's both hands fisted & after few seconds or so he cudnt tolerate & he threw the towel & said angrily,"Stop caring abt me!"Geet saw angry eyes which made her eyes welled up & tears poured down from her almond eyes.Geet stood far away from him & said,"Maan'am sorry!"And she ran from there while he saw her retreating back with tortured expression!


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PART 07



Geet came to her room & collapsed on the bed & said crying,"Am sorry Maan'i hurted u so badly..but i dint had any choice..that Sameera had threatened me that if i continue dancing with u..choreograph ur dance then she's gonna kill u!I dont wanted trouble becoz of me.Please..please go from here'go to Sameera..its better way to keep urself safe!"Maan who stood with tortured expression saw tears in Geet's eyes & was shocked.His expression had changed from torture to shock.He was thinking abt something when SD entered & said smiling,"Sit down son..am gonna massage ur feet!"Maan turned & immediately said,"Aachchooo!"SD glared at him & said,"See u have caught cold..now sleep on the bed so that i can massage ur feet!U dont have any concern to ur health,Stubborn boy!"Maan's lips widened when he heard the word "Stubborn Boy" & pouted.SD smiled seeing his cute pout but made Maan to lie down & she massaged the feet.


















First Maan felt awkward as she was touching his feet & showed his reluctance when dadimaa assured him from her eyes & massaged his feet.He felt so calm & he slept just like that on the bed.She saw him sleeping & tucked him inside the blanket & kissed his forehead.Today he felt calm after having his dadi's warmth.He snuggled & slept calmly.But Geet was crying seeing Maan's state.She remembered how he had proposed her & how she had refused her.



Day before yesterday'''>



Maan came to the studio with a broad grin on his face.Geet saw him & asked,"Waah..u looking happy today Maan..what's the matter?"He said grinning broadly,"Will tell u after our practise!"She raised her eyebrows impressively & taught the steps.Today Maan was happy so he dint listen to Geet's scoldings as he was enjoying himself.At lunch time Maan went to his car to collect lunch & came back & said to Geet who was halfway opening her lunch,"Geet'today i have prepared ur favourite dish!"She was shocked & took the lunch from him & tasted it.She relished it as it was simply perfect when she got an hard object.She pulled the piece of paratha & saw that it was the ring.She was shocked & said,"Maan..this contains ring..how..how did this came in paratha?"She glanced him & saw him grinning broadly & he sat on his knee taking her right hand & asked,"Will u marry me?"She was shocked & stood there completely blank.Maan saw her eagerly holding the ring while she stood blankly.For a moment her heart said to say yes to him but she remembered Sameera's call which had come when he had gone to fetch his lunch.Sameera had said that she's gonna destroy her career & her existence if Geet accepts Maan's proposal & today her heart squeezed with pain.She felt that someone cutting her heart into million pieces & she had half-heartedly with utmost difficulty said to Maan,"Maan..stop this nonsense..we cant become like that..we're only friends that's all!"















Maan's smile faded immediately & he got up while she turned that side to wipe her tears.He thought,"Was i in hurry to propose her?"He called her meekly,"Geet'i dont know what u feel abt me but i love u!These few days i came alive with ur presence'.since i left my home..since i left my dadi to pursue my dream'i was alone..always alone in this cruel world'but these days..spending time with u..precious time i have to say..my heart cudnt stop feeling for u!I tried to convince myself that u r a friend but my heart always said to love u..take care of u'spend time with u forever'make u mine forever'am in love with u Geet..i love u sooo much..will u marry me?Will u lead ur life with me till death?Will u be with me forever?"Geet's heart had danced in joy hearing the confession but she said suppressing all her feelings,"Maan..i never thought abt u like this?I dont even know u.I dont know ur happiness..ur sadness'ur complaints..ur frustrations..ur mistakes..ur success..nothing i dont know & do u know abt me?"













Maan was speechless..yes he dont know anything abt her..he just listened to his heart'or he's not ready to recognise her wants & refuses.He asked slowly,"I will get to know Geet..abt ur wants..abt ur complaints'what is right to u..what is wrong to u..what u dont like..what u love..everything Geet..just give me a chance!"Geet said with utmost difficulty clutching her chest,"Maan..am engaged!"He was shocked rooted to the spot with shock.Geet continued & showed,"This is my ring!"Maan saw the ring on her left hand ring finger but the truth is that she never was engaged she always wore the ring on that finger becoz it looked more adorable to her.His eyes welled up seeing the ring finger which had adored a diamond ring.His finger loosened the grip of the ring which he was holding & it fell on the ground rolling to the corner.He turned that side & controlled his emotions & said,"Sorry..it was my mistake that i got high hopes from u..i should have asked u abt ur personal life..am sorry for embarassing u!I need break Geet so am going to home!"













But Maan had got to know that it was lies which Geet had told him & he got angry due to that & had confronted her yesterday.Maan said angrily,"Geet..u have played with my emotions..u said that u r engaged..why is that..u said that u dont know abt myself anything then how come u prepared pasta today just becoz u like it.As far as i know u only like Indian cuisine & that too the punjabi cuisine..then how come u r eating pasta today?"Geet was speechless & was abt to speak when Sameera had entered on that time & said,"Yes Geet answer him!"Maan said angrily,"U..what r u doing here?"Sameera had said,"Maan am ur new choreographer..Geet had thought of resigning the job!"Maan got the shock of his life & had blurted out angrily,"Then am gonna resign this competition..i want Geet as my choreographer or else am gonna get out of this competition!"Sameera & Geet had seen Maan with shock.This made the big confrontation between Maaneet & Maan had left the studio with bottled anger & so much hurted.



Day before yesterday ends''''>



Geet had cried whole night seeing Maan's state & cursing herself as she was the reason for his state.Next morning she got up & went to office to work leaving him alone.Maan got up late & had searched whole mansion for Geet when Nakul had answered him that she had gone to office.His anger towered 7 thought,"Leaving me in this state she went to office to enjoy herself!"But that wasnt the truth as Geet was in grief mode & she dont want to show her face to Maan once again.Maan had drove madly to KC & had entered inside the office with so much attitude.Everyone stood immediately seeing him where he felt awkward.He nodded to everyone & walked towards SD's cabin when he saw Geet's cabin.Geet was working on something & was frowning when he saw her swollen eyes.Someone said from behind,"She's so pretty right?"Maan turned to see a handsome guy standing in front of him.He was none other than Rishab Kundra who was admiring her.




Maan glared at him & said possessively,"She's mine so stay away from her!"He went from there with attitude not asking RK that what he was doing in that office.Maan entered Geet office while Geet looked up to get the shock of her life.She asked,"What r u doing here Maan?"He said glaring at her holding her elbow tighter,"I have come here to talk to u!"He immediately closed the blinds so that no one interrupts them.Geet was scared & tries to call SD when he disconnects the phone.Geet said,"Maan u cant do that..am working..please let me work for my living!"Maan said,"If u got fired then am gonna take care of u..becoz i have enough money to take care of u!"Geet stood numb & before he would say anything she burst,"Just shut up'.just shut up..i dont want ur damn money..u get it'i want'..!"She stopped mid-way with widened eyes when he completed her sentence,"''..U..i want u right..that what u wanted to say?"She was abt to speak when he kept his index finger on her supple pink lips & said,"Listen to me once!"But on that time she got a phone & she ran to attend it.He balled up his fist & stood feeling sadly when she immediately ran to the record room.















Maan followed Geet & entered the record room slamming the door which was seen by Dadimaa.Dadimaa silently went upto the room & stood in doorway listening to their convo when she heard Maan saying,"I love U Geet!"Dadimaa was shocked with the confession but also happy from inside hoping that Maan is gonna come to her back.Geet turned & said,"I dont love u Maan..why cant u understand the simple matter!"Maan glared at her once again & immediately took her right palm & kept it on his left chest where heart lies & asked,"U r gonna say that to my heart.Tell this heart that dont love u..tell this heart to forget u'cut this heart into million pieces Geet..then only i can stop loving u..or else i will always love u no matter u deny it or accept it!"Geet stood speechless still holding his chest but Maan had took his hand from her right hand & she was pressing his left chest gently.His heart started beating frantically feeling her hand while she saw his expressive eyes which stared back with full of love.















She gulped her saliva & slowly took her hand from his chest when she felt his heart beat frantically.Maan bent his head sadly & turned & exited the room while SD hid herself behind the door.SD peeped to see Geet's expression & was shocked.She too heard Geet confess,"I too love u a lots Maan..but am helpless'am helpless in front of Sameera!"Next morning was the next performance which was dedicated to Rajesh Khannaji & Maan had forcibly made Geet to stay showing the contract which said she have to pay compensation if she want to quit the competition.


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Next morning Geet reached the studio with Maan who had persuaded her to come with him giving the doubt that she's gonna run away & had made her uncomfortable drooling over her.


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=0QcspJdkuA8[/YOUTUBE]




See the song from 0:22 to 2:50 & ignore Shampa here & imagine Geet here!


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?list=SRRoop&v=videoseries&feature=player_embedded[/YOUTUBE]


The song was abt to start but Maan was amused seeing Geet.Everytime he saw Geet she would blush furiously.It was tiresome to her as she always suppressed her feelings & today it had burst in front of Maan completely.

Few hours ago''''>

Geet was dragged by a girl who was so livid & she was none other than Sameera who was so disappointed & angry & felt helpless not able to get victory in her plan.Geet freed her hand from Sameera's grip & slapped her strongly glaring at her.Sameera held her cheek & said,"U smacked me!"And before she smack her Geet held her hand powerfully & said spitting fire from her almond eyes,"Am not ur slave where u always turn me to ur own accord'now just listen to me carefully..am not gonna quit this competition..am gonna participate in this & am gonna make Maan win this & u know do that when i decide what i want to do..what i desire always be mine forever!Now get lost from here..i have given info to directors that am not quitting the competition & u better stop giving threats & this type of treatments!"Geet went from there when Sameera saw bewildered.When Geet entered on that time Maan stared at her which had a amusement & she cudnt stop herself blushing furiously.Maan knew that she's in love but he wanted her to confess.He gave a proud & lovely stare for she melted completely & hid her blush & face immediately.


















The song started the everything went once again mute & dark to them.Then they came to stage wearing costumes of Bharatanatyam where Mana had left his chest & torso bare.He had wore a kurta type which had jewels of the waist'..waist chain..then he had wore an artificial ear rings which was struck & was dangling along with his ear when he swings his face.The kurta also had frills which would spread whenever he widened his thighs.He had wore a big red tilak kumkum with a small design of the white color.His M shaped lips was painted with slight lip gloss & he had wore big bangles type which were shining due to the beads.Geet was looking beautiful as she had let her hairs into long plaits.Wore the plastic flowers of jasmine.She also wore the maang teeka the in the partition.Her almond eyes were shaped with kaajal & mascara & her nose had small nose ring which would shine whenever light reflects.She had wore slight pink lip gloss & she had wore the Bharatanatyam dress fully & traditionally.















Both Maaneet came & stood like a statue & immediately the song started & they climbed down the stairs to the main stage shaking their body in the dancing way.



Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera diwana
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera diwana

Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye



Maan showed the gesture towards Geet from his hand & expressed.His eyes were more expressive & there was a sense of humour which he had in his face.The way he explained to Geet made her blush furiously.Maan rotated his body when his muscles flexed & Geet's eyes started to drool for a minute or so leaving the song.It was blissful moment for her to see the greek god body.The dance floor was in fire heating Maan's already heated blood seeing Geet in that beautiful dress.Maan gestured that her beauty is like an elixir in his eyes & showed his hand gestures with a dark deisre & showed that he can do mistake drinking the elixir lifting her in his arms.Geet blushed feeling his half bare skin rubbing her waist in the process of lifting.The fire..that was she felt..a heated fire in which she thought of herself to burn!



Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye



Maan let her down still giving the amused look but inside he was looking so happy feeling the change in Geet when she saw him half bare & rubbing his skin to her.He was deliberately seducing her in the middle of the crowd & middle of the song.Then he held her left hand from his left hand & slowly snaked his right hand around her waist.She blushed furiously & she knew that she was melting in his touch but suppressed it.Then they did a small step & snaked their body holding each other & shaking their legs jumping slightly in the air.Then she turned holding her hand stiffly like a 9'o clock & lifted her legs one by one in the air showed her right ankle open.Maan did the very beautiful step holding his hands stiff & sat on the knee lifting his left leg to his left elbow & got up,like this in photo.





Please ignore the person in the pic & the rest of the pics too just glance the beautiful pose.


On that time the background effects were given & thundered which made Geet to be scared & she ran immediately inside Maan's arms for which he held her shoulder giving the assurance that nothing happened.



Raat Nasheeli Mast Sama Hai
Aaj Nashe Mein Sara Jahan Hai (dono lines 2x)

Raat Nasheeli Mast Sama Hai
Aaj Nashe Mein Sara Jahan Hai



Then Maan showed his hand gestures saying that the moon has become so drunkard & showering his drunkardness to the world so let us be drunkard in the passion like the world.Then he gestured the very same meaning of the song with beautiful steps & lastly he gave another pose sitting & joining his hands like a namaskar upwards & sitting on his knees & balancing his head from his left ankle which was opening upwards.Like this in photo







Haan Ye Sharabi Mausam Behkaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana

Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye



Maan got up after that pose & gestured his hands with the song & explained when Geet too danced with him.Everyone had focused on Maan only who was doing so many beautiful poses.He showed the expressions in hand & eyes & explained how he's getting provoked due to that passionate environment.He gave another pose along with Geet just like the photo-





Ankhon Se Ankhen Milti Hai Aise
Bechain Hoke Toofan Mein Jaise (dono lines 2x)

Ankhon Se Ankhen Milti Hai Aise
Bechain Hoke Toofan Mein Jaise



Maan let his leg downwards & immediately gestured his hands & expressions.He showed his eyes from his hands & gestured that whenever her eyes meet with him'there's a storm of passion warring inside her eyes.Geet acted like that only & then they danced to it with another pose where Geet sat on the ground on her right knee & stretched her another leg.





Mauj Koi Saahil Se Takraaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana

Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye



Geet got up & Maan gestured it holding her hand.Geet blushed & he came to his small smile face which he was keeping throught out the song.Then last time both held each other & gave another pose.







Rok Raha Hai Ham Ko Zamana
Door Hi Rehena Paas Na Aana

Rok Raha Hai Ham Ko Zamana
Door Hi Rehena Paas Na Aana



After that Geet went back far away from him & gestured her hands & eyes showing him..explaining that they need to stop as this world is gonna stop them by being like that'reminding him that they're not married.



Kaise Magar Koi Dil Ko Samjhaaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana

Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye



But Maan cudnt stay away from Geet & he held her hand when Geet sat on her right knee opening her ankle upwards while her left leg supporting her which had bent half.Then Maan had bent on her holding his right leg in his elbow & showing the Ardhachandre(Half moon mudra)while holding Geet's shoulder from his left hand.They stood like that while the background turned the mute to volume & everyone applauded.Maan was seeing her almond eyes which had turned into dark desire.He saw the very same hunger which he had seen for himself whenever he saw her smiling or in pleasant mood.She was looking more beautiful & there was a cute natural blush lingering on her chubby cheeks.






This dance too earned them the perfect 30 but someone was there who's ready to spoil their series of 30.



PS-I wanted Shampa to add on these beautiful pose in her dance with Gurmeet in JDJ which would surely earn perfect thirty but still it gained thirty but i wanted his performances like this so am giving this type.Any complaints & suggestions do share it without any hesitation! 😃


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PART 08



Precap-[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=BqxXy227j04[/YOUTUBE]


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
@Goshi Gul @ Sonia Maaneet @ Sam Gurtiholic Sorry guys cant able to put the pics which u had edited for me as i was in dilemma how to give this update but now i got it..🤗 big hug to u all whoever edited the pic for this update love u all.Here is the pics








Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
hate sameera 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
bi... sam threatned geet and geet breaking maan heart rishab drooling on geet maneet dance pose fab
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Posted: 11 years ago
fab ud dr
geet to loves maan bt sam threat hr
i wana kil sam
nw maan knws d truth nd trying hs level best to make hr cnfs hr felings
dr ek request hai plz dnt take it other way its only my opinion
agar vd vilian ke liye chose kiya hai to plz koi aur chose karlo becoz i hate vd to d core nd cnt even see with dd in ff too
bt d choice is yur nd i wil read yur ff then also if u dnt change hm
i wil
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Posted: 11 years ago
I see ur updates of this story from two POVs.One fm dance POV and other as a Maaneet luv story.

And today I enjoyed both.Maaneet story going thru a ruf patch coz of Sameera but then coming back to track as the story progresses.

And dance was toh outstandin,fantabulous and superb.All the Mudras ard jst immensely beautiful.

In totatl,loved d part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
so maan confessed his love but geet thought sameera will hurt maan and she dropped as a choreographer but SD listened both confession and again geet came with a bang and nice answer given to that sameera. The song explanation and pic are superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome..
all confusion get cleared..
very nice update..
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Maaneet in pain! Hate Sam! Did Maan hear dat! Dadi happy wen Maan confessed! she hears wt Geet sed as well! Awesum dance! well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
me lv maanu's proposal ring in paratha n he made it for geret it was so awww
bt geet refused him😡
how much broken he have felt that time😭
n that all cause of sameera
bt me lv when she slapped her hard n gave a superb reply
buty me liottle confused from where she got that much confidence n blushing to see maanu
did daddi helped her or somehing
n what that rishab doing her
wtever hope u not planning to make them a pair i just dont like him

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