DANCE WITH ME-MG SS-UPDATED PT 09 PG 56 ON 27-04-14 - Page 20

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Geet nodded as she was distracted while Maan messaged Sameera,"Meet me after the practise at xyz place at 1800hrs!"Sameera was caught red handed now by Maan & she was shivering with fear.Here Maan dragged Geet & immediately pinned her to the rehearsal room door & asked with concern,"Are u ok?"His heart was beating frantically while Geet said keeping her palm on his cheek,"Am ok Maan!"Maan asked seeing her tip to toe,"U did get any scratch or sprain or wounded,tell me jaan!"Geet was amazed to see the dominant Maan & said,"Am ok Maan..dont worry!"Maan lifted her right knuckle & kissed it with concern & love & he kissed her forehead & said,"U r not gonna walk alone further.do u understand?"Geet protested,"But Maan..!"But her blabber was muted by his passionate lip lock where she melted & surrendered.

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PART 06




It was so blissful for both when their lips met to that scorching kiss which had ignited the fire inside them'but Geet dint like the fact that she kissed Maan two times'.during the practise session & now & was shocked seeing her audacity to Maan.Maan had gone cold when he saw the chandelier falling on Geet's head & in nano second all his instincts had given him strength to save her.It was a torture to Maan seeing his life getting hurt but seeing her well his heart beated frantically giving the indication that he's in love with her very much.Maan left Geet to her home & went to meet Sameera in xyz place.Sam was waiting for him scheming the plan to mislead him.When Maan entered then Sam ran to him & hugged him tightly & asked,"Are u ok?I was so worried!Maan,i dint do that..u know ur friend..ur best friend!"Maan who had become stiff due to Sam's arms snaked around his neck whispered in her ear coldly,"U r right..u r my best friend'but i dint saw this side of ur face Sam!"Sam loosened her arms & pulled back staring at her giving questioning eyes.But he shouted angrily which made Sam to shiver down spine,"Dont even act with me!"Sam stood far away from him while the place was totally deserted leaving them alone.
















Sam saw his glaring eyes..he was always spoke to woman softly suppressing his ego but today everything had vanished into thin air & asked a single question which made her to shiver with fear.He walked towards her dangerously while she walked backwards.He had become fire ball which would burst any minute.Sam gathered all the courage in the world & asked,"Maan trust me i dint harm Geet..it was Geet's plan to get attention from u!I know these types of girls who only be after u just for mere fame,money!Maan i dint tried to kill her..it was she who tried to kill herself!"Maan stopped halfway & widened his eyes.Sam saw this & she tried to frame her story & continued it,"Maan she was my classmate'she wont like my presence around u..she always stole my glory..she studied in **** place right?"(Too lazy to frame the name 😛 )"I was also her classmate..she always stole my steps..in fact the Zouk which she taught was framed by me only!Maan she's not a good choreographer..trust me she's only copier..who knows only to copy & accuse others without any mistake!"Maan folded his hands across his chest & listened to her lies with blank expression.
















Sam's confidence started getting stronger & she explained,"Maan,now also she's copying my steps!"Maan whispered,"Really,so can u mention what she had taught me in this practise session?We are preparing for the debut dancing on the songs of Rajesh Khannaji's!"Sam smiled & she showed the steps which made him to laugh maniacally.Sam was shocked while she said,"I'll show another one!"And she showed it for which he gave an dangerous stare.Sam thought that she has been saved but his next words made her ground slip under her feet.Maan said with full of emotions,"I love her Sameera!"Sam saw him with utmost anger.She thought that her charm & lies were working but today she failed in that too.He was loving Geet.Maan continued,"And if we're talking abt the dance steps then let me clear u that she teaches me according to the theme & song not of the prescribed dance steps from the competition where he needs to dance like this only!Sameera u r nothing but a selfish girl & am so disappointed to have u as my best friend who not thinks of the happiness & peace of the friend & very eager to snatch it just to make themselves respectable.U want my glory Sameera..want my money.so that u lay ur root so deep to eat for generations..u r tired of the job u have & u want rest from it..but after that ur question is who's gonna feed u & for that u r using ur brain tirelessly to impress me..if i am nt impressed then in the cunning way u r trying to hold me just becoz of the money!"















Sameera was shocked & said,"Maan!Mind ur tongue!Am not that type of g''.!"Maan said angrily,"What u r i have got to know one hour ago when u were instructing ur man to loosened the nuts of chandelier!"Sameera said angrily,"U cant prove'!"But she stopped abruptly to see a person which made her speechless.Her eyes widened with shocked when she saw the person there for whom she was instructing to loosened the nuts of chandelier.Maan immediately dragged him to the light & made her see the man who was hurted badly.Maan had kicked him & punched him so badly that he had blurted out the truth.Sameera tried to say,"Maan u cant accuse me without any proofs'i dint tell him to loosened the nuts trust me!"But Maan glared at her & said angrily,"Do u know i would tolerate u in future too if u would tell truth to me..but not anymore'i hate lies & lie speaking person.Am sure u wont show ur face ever to me Sameera & dont get any positive response when u follow my to convince.I hate ur shadow Sameera,get lost from my life!"














Maan walked in fast pace while Sameera followed him shouting,"Maan listen to me once..u r mistaking me..i dint hurt Geet..in fact who's she to me..!"But Maan cut across her & said spitting fire from his eyes,"Yeah who's she to u but still u hv courage to accuse for the mistake she never done..she's copying u..i dont think that's true becoz in my course of experience,i have ability to recognise what is talent from others'what is original & copy'..U r jealous Sameera..becoz i love her & i dint love u..u know the truth is that love happened to me when i was denying it!Am in love with her Sameera..& please let me go!I dont press any charges on u..becoz i can understand ur mind state too but i cant love u..love happens only once..this heart has the place to fill for only one person & Geet had taken that place..but i want u out of my life from this moment.No one has right to torment or mess with MSK's life & love life too!If u try to enter my life once again then u r gonna pay for that Sameera..good bye!"Sameera dint liked the fact that Maan was speaking to her so harshly.She followed him shouting,"Maan listen to me first..!"But he was far from her in nano second & he was gone.














Sameera stood with shock seeing the retreating car which was going from her in top speed.She remembered his slap & she felt on that time immediately & her anger towered on Geet more.This break up made her more rigid ruin Geet's life.Sameera shouted angrily,"Geet'am not gonna leave u!"


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Here Geet got up sweating badly as she had seen some nightmare for which she's scared of..she turned & glanced at the clock which showed 200hrs then she glanced to drink some water when she saw the glass was empty.Geet got up wiping her seat & walked towards the kitchen & poured the water.Rain was lashing as the downpour was so heavy.She poured some water to her glass & drank it slowly.When she was drinking on that time her eyes fell on someone who was standing in front of her.She ran & peeked from the kitchen window & blinked.It was none other than MSK who was drenched in rain.Geet was worried seeing him like that..his face was blank'he was wet from tip to toe & he dint even bother.Geet immediately ran to her room & brought the umbrella.She sneaked the house stealthily & reached Maan.Maan was surprised to see Geet there.Maan astonished,"Geet what r u doing here?"Geet said,"This is my Nani's house!Remember i had mentioned abt her!"Maan nodded & was shocked that Savitri Devi was Geet's nani'now his tension started that how come Geet is here.Numerous questions started to pop up in his mind when they heard a commotion & saw SD walking towards them.














Geet was shocked to see her there & bent her head with turmoil.SD was shocked to see Maan standing like that lifeless & her heart lurched seeing him like that.Maan's lips moved softly which spoke,"Dadimaa!"SD & Geet sensed the pain in his voice.SD dint spoke further & called the servant,"Nakul!"Nakul came running towards SD when he saw Maan.He was happy & asked with a warm smile,"Maan baba..how r u?"SD said,"Nakul bring the strong ginger coffee to him & ginger tea to us both..Maan come inside son..u r cold!"Geet was only silent spectator while Maan dint move when SD came forward & held his hand in her palm,"Come on son!"Maan saw her eyes which had only love & warmth & he walked silently with her while Geet followed him holding umbrella to him.SD saw Geet's eyes which had concern & she smiled to herself.SD took him to his room which he had left to pursue his dream.Maan saw around his room when SD took the fresh towel from wardrobe & said,"SOn take off ur clothes!"Maan was apprehensive & stared at her when SD said playfully,"Son..am ur grandma..no need to feel awkward'i have changed ur nappies when u were baby!"













He glared at SD for she chuckled & said,"Change in washroom!"Maan went & changed his dress & came to see SD had sat holding the towel.Maan came to her & immediately sat on the floor when she rubbed the wetness from his silky hairs.SD asked hurted,"Now u got time to meet me?"Maan lifted his head from the towel & said,"Am sorry dadimaa i cant stay away from u!"SD asked,"What happened son?Why r u sounding so low?"Maan held her feet & said,"Am sorry dadimaa for breaking ur heart & behaving with u harshly on that day.I know i left home without ur blessings & am paying for that very dearly..i pursued everything i wanted..but gained lots of enemies who's ready to crush my career just becoz am a talented guy.Dadimaa this world stands only on the money..benefit & after having benefit people will throw them from their life'!"Dadimaa was shocked to hear the depressing Maan.She had seen the Maan who never felt defeat..but today he was sounding so low'so depressed that he forgot all his deeds & the grudges & came to seek his dadimaa's warmth.Geet who stood near the door holding ginger coffee felt that she was the reason for his loneliness.















Geet slowly walked inside holding the tray while SD said,"Geet,come & sit with Maan for a while while am gonna bring oil to massage his feet.He always neglects his health!"Geet asked shocked,"Dadimaa!"Dadimaa assured her from her eye & exited when Geet sat beside Maan.Maan's body moved from her & sat.Geet was hurt seeing his reluctance.She saw him intently when his hair was still wet.Geet took the towel & came towards him.He showed reluctance but she stood & started drying his hairs.Maan's both hands fisted & after few seconds or so he cudnt tolerate & he threw the towel & said angrily,"Stop caring abt me!"Geet saw angry eyes which made her eyes welled up & tears poured down from her almond eyes.Geet stood far away from him & said,"Maan'am sorry!"And she ran from there while he saw her retreating back with tortured expression!




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Maan followed Geet & entered her room slamming the door which was seen by Dadimaa.Dadimaa silently went upto her room & stood in doorway listening to their convo when she heard Maan saying,"I love U Geet!"Dadimaa was shocked with the confession but also happy from inside hoping that Maan is gonna come to her back.





Note-This is a small twist..what went on in between them..their reluctance'Maan's anger on Geet'he coming back to his dadimaa..how he figured that Geet was in his dadimaa's home..everything will be revealed in further updates..till then enjoy reading! 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
yesss...
eagerly waiting...
r u going to update today???
Edited by flowing_river - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous part
man gave sam a piece of his mind and now maan showing reluctance to geet
waiting to know the truth
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Posted: 11 years ago
update sameera lies maan finally warned her and geet in km awsem



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Posted: 11 years ago
fab ud dr
maan scolded sam nd sam is so cheap after doing this much hw cn she beahave so inobently
bt maan gave hr a piece of mind nd told hr that he loves geet
maan in km nd nw knws abt geet bieng living in km bt y maan is angry on geet
ud nxt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan came back to his Dadima... Dadima would be happiest person after she get to know that both loves each other... May be Maan is angry.. becoz today he got to know true colors of sam..
Nice part.

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Posted: 11 years ago
dhamaka update sam ka kaam tamam maan knowing about geet and coming back to dadima.waiting for why is maan angry on geet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice dear😊
maan broke every relation with sam😃
maan comes to dadimaa👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
this sam jhut ka pahad bana diya...
maan ne achha jawab diya sam ko
loved it

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