THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1 - Page 99

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Ahem Ahem 😳😆

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Chal is Khushi me New Thread khol abhi 😃

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

My 9000 r completed😉

Originally posted by: dqno1

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next time main aise hi scene mein gala saaf karavoongi...😆

Originally posted by: Onir

Congo hai Ji aapko... 👏

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Originally posted by: dqno1

Jhalak mein doll lag rahi thi...😃

Naureen ko batana ki uski shaiyari sab ne bohut pasand ki hai...

Mera bye hai...

off to take a nice nap...

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Originally posted by: Onir

I know this time I'm super duper late... Sorry for that. I was the first to reserve and I guess I'm the last to unreserve. Anyways let me comment on the part. 😊

No sorries...🤗

As always I love the title used... 😳 "Of Dreams & Nightmares..." Loved this title a lot. I love dreams, all things related to Dreams. This one here was a package of everything. If it was someone's dream turning into reality of spending time with her prince charming, then somewhere else it was dreams of a seductress clad in pink nightdress with ties coming and causing restlessness in the otherwise calm Dev leading him to shut himself in the similar way as she shut the door on his face. And then there's another extreme ... the nightmares, someone living them each day seeing the bruises & wounds inflicted on self reminding of deeper soul scarring wounds that causes her to build walls around her. Beautiful summation of it all in a Title. 👏

I was think sometimes the title gets me to be more inclusive of what I want to say in the update.

Dev babu has his tastes changed. One glimpse of the womanly side of his Shrew and all goes haywire in his life. Such a transformation form Delhi's priced bachelor to a dissatisfied soul seeking the spice of his life. 😉 Bechara Nakul had to bear his anger for the missing spice in his life. Who will tell Nakul that even Daadi wasn't spared from Dev's pre-occupied mind.

I have told you earlier too and again I tell you that I love the characterization of Daadi. She is intelligent, experienced and has an unique style of her own. She isn't the one to take things if she's ignored. She knows her way around & also knows how to tame everyone around her. Her revenge plan was bang on! Superb Daadi... 👏 Afterall because of her my Favourite second leads could be face-face and spend some moments together... ❤️

Daadi knows that Dev has an urge to compete against her, plus NT is more capable than him right now so she brought her in to see the difference of how it is to work with her versus without. Working in a team where everyone contributes now will be a winning team. Daadi is very wise and as usual she will be there for more exciting parts too.

Also liked how you showed the discrimination Dev makes between his overdose of sweetness and him missing the shrewd spiciness of his life now. Showing all of his imbalance. Him missing his saucy & spicy I-star and also trying hard to hide his displeasure in all the sweet gesture and also the otherwise friendly manner of working with his friend Shasha.

Even I hate the sound of running nails on a blackboard... eww... it irritates me...

The scene where you described Dev getting hold of Naina in his arms after she was hit by the ball reminded me of an incident from my UG days where we friends had gone for a lunch and were seated in the open section of the restaurant facing Ruia college ground where few of then were playing cricket. While eating suddenly a ball came form nowhere and hit one of my friend on her head. It hurt her bad but she didn't faint like Naina... but after icing her head we all group of 15 were treated to special dessert by the restaurant for free as a gesture for what happened with my friend. 😉😆 (Sorry to go tangent...)

Poor thing! I hate those cricket balls, the real ones. They hurt if you accidentally get hit.

Also I loved the regret, concern & worry that Dev experienced while tending to Naina. What I'm curious about is how did Niana get those bruises and wound on her shoulder...

As a non-medical doctor thoda locha ho sakta hai but will work on it to make it as accurate as possible, the bruises and the burn part.😆

Initially before reading I was waiting for the music selection for this update but then after reading I agree there was blankness at the end as well justified by Dev. 😊

Waiting for more... 😊