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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

Hmm..so equation got balanced here..It started with him in her dreams and now she is ruling his dreamland,making him crave for chillies in his food...😆 I love it..

He won't acknowledge it though. Too smart for his own good..😆😆😆😆
Every time you update and I get confused which pair do I love more..Is it maaneet or Dev tara..???While Maaneet is like soothing music in your ears,Dev tara are like fireworks...Despite being loud to your ears,you love them for the visuals they give...😊
It makes me proud that this Dev and Tara can override the ones we hate in the serial. This was supposed to be an OS but considering that I may not write anymore I am trying to fill it up as much as possible.
You have portrayed his restlessness,his care when she got hit by ball{stupid boys😡},his vulnerable self on witnessing the burn on her shoulder and his sensitivity to walk out from the room ,very well..This was a new "Dev" to me...!!! This one deserves to be loved by her...😛
He is actually a loving guy. He is putting up with Pari in a way so that he can protect her. Of course with NT, the passionate side is going to sizzle later but for now he needs to grow up.
Pari's character is interesting..I am sure she would be a catalyst to Dev tara lovestory...!!!
Pari will always be between them. Let's see ..
Waiting eagerly for more...!!!

As he waited for Geet to come home, he realized that there was no music today. His mind was a complete blank.
Here comes the famous "Avinism.."..👏.👏.👏.👏.👏. What is this Avinism? 😆😆😆😆

PS-how tara got that burn on her shoulder???

That will be revealed later as the story progresses in a twist I have planned..
Thanks for your support🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good morning. Yawns. Koi hain?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

finally am here !!!!!!!!!


surprised to see Dev soo irritated...and glad that he is...atleast now he should realise how NT feels whenever he irritates her...😳

Dev affected by NT...now thats good...
i love Dev-tara scenes in your story Avi.. y is it so? 😕 guess the reason is u n the way u portray them...
So NT has a bitter past , but the burn? hadnt she left her past loong bk ? no i guess...

glad that he called up geet n left the place before she woke up...i was worried if he stays back n she mu him...anyways am glad that you have given Dev a reason to soften up to her...

loved the part...sorry for being late dearie...

It has not been that long since NT joined KC just a few weeks. As far as I know some burns take long to heal. Still I am not a doctor so don't know much about that so I covered it by the doctor saying that it had healed.
Thanks for reading.. no sorry needed.
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Good morning. Yawns. Koi hain?

GM😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ready ho gayi...😃 GM
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Ready ho gayi...😃 GM


Haan ji 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
jhalak dekh rahi thi
abhi finish hua
ab getting my stuff ready for tomorrow...
time for GN for me...🤗
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

jhalak dekh rahi thi
abhi finish hua
ab getting my stuff ready for tomorrow...
time for GN for me...🤗


DD ko kitne kum marks mile

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