~MG SS~ ADHOORI ZINDAGI~ PT12/PG150 /Thread 2 added pg 157 3sep

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

awesome update

loved it

who is that unknown man who was talking with sheela...??

sheela arreanged birthday party for geet...geet very well knew that some motive behind her talking about surprise after retuning from london

maanse was not leaving maan and she slept on maan's lap...

maan,amy and dean talks are intersting...

dean adviced maan to look after business in india...

after hearing deans words maan told him that his family happiness comes firs to him...

here annie was busy in arranging part for maan's birthday...

geet was feeling some unkonwn strength she is feeling some thing gonna change her life...

loved the poem...u were very well described his pain through the poem...

waiting for next part

continue soon

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Rami

@Rami92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

reservd

unresd😆 😆 😆 😆

achaaa babes now on no shoriezzz😉 😉 😉 😉

Aww cherrie😳 😳 😳

just loved this amy and maan friendly nature👏 👏👏

Amy is so crazyyy😆 😆 😆

What s this sheela upto😡 😡 😡

dadi 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

she lies so csu ally😆😆😆

now who s tht guy😕 talking wd shela😕 😕

hope maanu n geetu njyz the party😉

of course they will bcz i hv a feel my sweetie cherrie gonna make them meet soon😳 😳 😳

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satana

@satana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

omggg thzzz s suchh a big big big wala update just loved it..bt u kno wat..evn in thz update thr s no flashbacks..:-/:-/:-/:-/:-/...waiting fr tht intersting update dear...nd u r becuming a very gud writer...th flow in ur story is just awesum...feeling very bad fr geet ..nd manasa she shld recover frm thz disese very soon..nd maan he s already dam close to manasa...nd maans birthday party is in full swing..wat is gona appen...ll it be celebratd r nt...waitinggg

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

awesome 👏update

sheela again up to something n that to with some man ? who?

maan amy n dean convo was fab

maan n mansee bonding is amazing (thank for answer ... will wait)

waiting for maaneet meeting

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

well i believe you should be lauded for the way you introduce in twists in your story
somehow it just keeps adding icing to the already tempting platter and makes it yummilicious and irresistible!
wow superb part!
great!
am hungry and craving for more
so please jaldi se update de do nextwala

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

Maansee is suffering from a disease which incurable

but Q will that disease reduce the life span of the child or will that be as normal as others...

Maan resting in the Dean's chamber...

still b'day is away...

waiting for next part...

continue soon...

not to forget ...lovely poem...expecting more than this...

ps: brush up ur English grammar more...

& try proof reading it before you post it

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

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4 pming me dear...😃

u done a really dear...👏👏

4 ur hard work...⭐️

...

sach a update...😳

tons of ..🤗🤗

the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

dear...😳

lov,❤️

Tama

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P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕

Note:

guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

I feel really bad for Geet !!! She is suffocating to death with her pain & helplessness !! And i think Maan is also suffering but not as bad as Geet !! I feel like crying for her !! Please save her sooon !!!! Maansee - Maan... Cute !!! Continue soon !!

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tammana

@tammana.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

#689

nice part

very emotional

feeling bad 4 both maan n geet

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aditimaan

@aditimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#690

so painful yet amazing.its pain to see mansi nd geet lyk that.hate sheela.idiot.maan nd his friend bonding.love it so much.reveal the truth early.my confusd mind

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