maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1

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priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Write from maans point about his redemption hey yeh tho mera500t h post hai

Edited by sam111111 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: sam111111
Write from maans point about his redemption hey yeh tho mera500t h post hai

thanx for idea dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

here i m dear

with more poem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

poem ; 38

its for ff : MY TEACHER

BY AMOUR _REET

IT FROM GEET SIDE

rishto main chupa hua kuch ,

kai baar ,

chupa deta hai ,

mitta deta hai,

sab kuch !

ahsaas pyaar ka ,

ek ajib sa khel hai yaar ka ,

saath uska sabse pyaara lage ,

ek uski hasi ke liye ,

sab kuch gayaana bhi ,

haar na lage !

par phir ,

kai baar ,yahi pyaar

dekar kuch alag si hi duhai !

karvaa deta hai ,

yaar se hi bewafaai !

uska ,ek pal mere saath na hona ,

maaf karde ga ek pal ko yeh dil

par phir ,

usi ek pal main ,

kissi aur ke hone ne ,

mujh main hai aag lagaai

yeh aag hai uss junoon ki

jo bah raha hai mujhe tera pyaar ban kar !

par ab kya kare ,

jab issi aag ne

basne se pahle hi ,

hamaai duniya hai jalaai

haaye yeh ishq

aur ishq ki ruswaai

kyu yeh ada yaar ki

kabhi bhi mujhe na raas aayi

hope you like it dear

its my fist ty for you

please reply with pm aur post

me waiting

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

POEM : 39

AGAIN FOR MY TEACHER]

BUT IT'S FROM

MAAN SIDE

logo ki badua main , kaha woh dum tha

jo hame maar de !

yeh to aah thi mere yaar ki ,

jo hum ek pal main haar gaye !

kiya hai pyaar , to nibhaana bhi padegaa

yeh woh dard hai ,

jo duniya se kya ,

khud se bhi chupaana padgaaa !

tu jaan maang leti ,

to accha tha !

tune to meri wafaaye maang li !

naam dekar ,

mujhe bewafa ka !

mujh se mei khudai maang li !

nafrat tujhse to kar sakte nahi

par ab ,

mohabAT khud se bhi hum karege nahi !

yeh sazaa hai tujhe pyaar kane ki

ke zinda hai bas naam ke ,

kyoki ab markar bhi hum mare nahi !

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

poem no : 40

it for SATI my muskanp

it fom maan side

and mind you

no devdaas feeling

me loving it

back in my original fom(funnuy)

woh nasha hai mere pyaar main ,

ke tumhe aana padega !

maana ke galat kiya hai main,

par phir bhi ,

tumhe mujhe apnana padega !

gaya woh zamaana ,

jab bin galti kiye bhi ,

rota tha deewana!

hum to woh aashiq hai tere ,

ke bin tere hue ,

sang tere jeena bhi mujhe sazza hai lage !

tujhe apna banaana hai

teri ruh main bas janaa hai

janta hu ,

kuch der lagagi !

par tab tak

sirf tujhe chu kar hi kaam chalaana hai!😉😆

zaalim tu kya jaane😡

yeh sazza hai

ke amrit paas hai ,phir bas paani se kaam chalana hai

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

For My Teacher-

Geet's POV.

It so perfectly explains Geet's feeling of betrayal by Arjun,when she felt that he ditched he for dia.When she felt that she even confessed her love to him and how cud he jst decieve her.

" haaye yeh ishq
aur ishq ki ruswaai
kyu yeh ada yaar ki
kabhi bhi mujhe na raas aayi"[These line dedicated to both Maan and Arjun]

Maan's POV.

It's more painful and I dont have words to explain how sad I felt.The words are perfect.
My favourite lines-

" yeh sazaa hai tujhe
pyaar kane ki
ke zinda hai bas
naam ke ,
kyoki ab markar
bhi hum mare nahi !"

Awesome

For SATI

Oh that is a sweet and beautiful relief from the painful atmosphere of previous fic.And I just love this side of Maan.Its impossible to rectify what he has done to Geet.But the way he is trying to bring her back fm the world is appreciable.

you have so aptly conveyed his heart.I hope Muskan uses this in the fic.

Love all the three poetries.

THANX FOR D LINK.

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
For My Teacher-

Geet's POV.

It so perfectly explains Geet's feeling of betrayal by Arjun,when she felt that he ditched he for dia.When she felt that she even confessed her love to him and how cud he jst decieve her.

" haaye yeh ishq
aur ishq ki ruswaai
kyu yeh ada yaar ki
kabhi bhi mujhe na raas aayi"[These line dedicated to both Maan and Arjun]

Maan's POV.

It's more painful and I dont have words to explain how sad I felt.The words are perfect.
My favourite lines-

" yeh sazaa hai tujhe
pyaar kane ki
ke zinda hai bas
naam ke ,
kyoki ab markar
bhi hum mare nahi !"

Awesome

For SATI

Oh that is a sweet and beautiful relief from the painful atmosphere of previous fic.And I just love this side of Maan.Its impossible to rectify what he has done to Geet.But the way he is trying to bring her back fm the world is appreciable.

you have so aptly conveyed his heart.I hope Muskan uses this in the fic.

Love all the three poetries.

THANX FOR D LINK.

thaxxx alot deaer

read

th one i write for khumaari

its ggood

and all

they ae also gud😉😆😆

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Khumaari wala kiis page par hai???

I m curious to read it.

I feel the fic is creepily beautiful.So poetry bhi kuch hatke hogi.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
Khumaari wala kiis page par hai???

I m curious to read it.

I feel the fic is creepily beautiful.So poetry bhi kuch hatke hogi.

index is on firstn page.go their.it will help you about link and other thinfgs