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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
poem 34


its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife 19



khud se maangi ,jo dua
woh har dua ,
tere naam ki hai !

agar tu saath hai mere ,
toh yeh duniya kaam ki hai !
warna kya fark hai ,
phool aur pathar main !

agar tere saath juda hai
naam mera ,
toh kuch baat bhi hui !
warna har khushi ,jo mere naam ki hai
woh mere liye benaam hui !

bas ek tu muhe apna saath dede ,
saari duniya ki chod du main !
ek tera saath ho saath mein mere ,
us khuda se bhi muh mod du main !
tere pal to ek pal jeena soch kar bhi ,
yeh jeena chod du main !

bas tere pyaar ki chah ,
muhe saans lene se jyaada pyaari hai
ek tu sadaa saath dena mera
bas yahi tujh se
aur uss khuda se
meri GUJAARISH hai


hope you like it

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

ok me ready to paste my new poem


yay!!!!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
poem 35

its for EB FF by ...tanya.k...


woh gayi
saath apne
mere har khushi le gayi

par apna kuch
mee paas chod gayi
takki main jee saku
us ki rah tak saku

woh aayi
par
kuch is tarah
ke dil tham gaya
har gum bhul gaya

gam to kya ,main khud ko bhul gaya
bas yahi yaki nahi hua
ke mere khud ne dua qubool ki
maaf meri,
kar ki ,nahi ki
bhul ki
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: mrs.msk



yeah she is!
i think she is evil hahhaa
or maybe just hung up in the current events that is happening between her and Maan😕


she can't be so sidhi sadhi type
not even in worsty dreams

and muski ff are too gud😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem 34



its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife 19



khud se maangi ,jo dua
woh har dua ,
tere naam ki hai !

agar tu saath hai mere ,
toh yeh duniya kaam ki hai !
warna kya fark hai ,
phool aur pathar main !

agar tere saath juda hai
naam mera ,
toh kuch baat bhi hui !
warna har khushi ,jo mere naam ki hai
woh mere liye benaam hui !

bas ek tu muhe apna saath dede ,
saari duniya ki chod du main !
ek tera saath ho saath mein mere ,
us khuda se bhi muh mod du main !
tere pal to ek pal jeena soch kar bhi ,
yeh jeena chod du main !

bas tere pyaar ki chah ,
muhe saans lene se jyaada pyaari hai
ek tu sadaa saath dena mera
bas yahi tujh se
aur uss khuda se
meri GUJAARISH hai


hope you like it


awww loved it!
especiallly the highlighted blue lines
you could tell how much Geet loves Maan and how she can't live without him
her life is incomplete witout him
and although, I haven't read that fan fic...I could already know what its about
great job nishu😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
yaar
aap itne touchy words ko ek saath jude ke kaise likhte ho
the words i read for guzaarish really touched me
nd poem for EB it really expressed what maan felt
head off to u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
poem 34 kya likhi its lovely agar tu saath hai mere ,
toh yeh duniya kaam ki hai !
warna kya fark hai ,
phool aur pathar main !
bas tere pyaar ki chah ,
muhe saans lene se jyaada pyaari hai
ek tu sadaa saath dena mera
bas yahi tujh se
aur uss khuda se
meri GUJAARISH hai
i just loved these two stanzas very much
poem 35 no words to say the way u wrote maans feeling its really fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78









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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
ok guys
no one wants m back
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
POEM NNO 36


ITS FOR : LOV FOR YOU BY TICH.MG


from geet :

jisse chaha tha
apno se bhi bad kar maine !
ussne ,
tha tod diya mujhe ,
begaano ki tarah
na jud saki , phir khud se kabhi ,
kyoki ,
woh le gaya mera ab kuch ,
mujhe bin sang liye bhi !


uss maanga tha
apni duao main khud se bhi jyaada
uss puja tha ,
us khud bhi jyaada
phir kyu meri har dua ,
bikhar gayi !

chod diya tha ,
usse rab se maangna hamne
par phir kyu ,
jab aaj phir
dua maangi maine ,
to phir dil ne
usko haasi ho haasil
yahi awaaz qabool hui
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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