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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

poem 34

its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife 19

khud se maangi ,jo dua

woh har dua ,

tere naam ki hai !

agar tu saath hai mere ,

toh yeh duniya kaam ki hai !

warna kya fark hai ,

phool aur pathar main !

agar tere saath juda hai

naam mera ,

toh kuch baat bhi hui !

warna har khushi ,jo mere naam ki hai

woh mere liye benaam hui !

bas ek tu muhe apna saath dede ,

saari duniya ki chod du main !

ek tera saath ho saath mein mere ,

us khuda se bhi muh mod du main !

tere pal to ek pal jeena soch kar bhi ,

yeh jeena chod du main !

bas tere pyaar ki chah ,

muhe saans lene se jyaada pyaari hai

ek tu sadaa saath dena mera

bas yahi tujh se

aur uss khuda se

meri GUJAARISH hai

hope you like it

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
ok me ready to paste my new poem

yay!!!!!😳😳😳

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

poem 35

its for EB FF by ...tanya.k...

woh gayi

saath apne

mere har khushi le gayi

par apna kuch

mee paas chod gayi

takki main jee saku

us ki rah tak saku

woh aayi

par

kuch is tarah

ke dil tham gaya

har gum bhul gaya

gam to kya ,main khud ko bhul gaya

bas yahi yaki nahi hua

ke mere khud ne dua qubool ki

maaf meri,

kar ki ,nahi ki

bhul ki

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

yeah she is!
i think she is evil hahhaa
or maybe just hung up in the current events that is happening between her and Maan😕

she can't be so sidhi sadhi type

not even in worsty dreams

and muski ff are too gud😆😆😆

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
poem 34

its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife 19

khud se maangi ,jo dua
woh har dua ,
tere naam ki hai !

agar tu saath hai mere ,
toh yeh duniya kaam ki hai !
warna kya fark hai ,
phool aur pathar main !

agar tere saath juda hai
naam mera ,
toh kuch baat bhi hui !
warna har khushi ,jo mere naam ki hai
woh mere liye benaam hui !

bas ek tu muhe apna saath dede ,
saari duniya ki chod du main !
ek tera saath ho saath mein mere ,
us khuda se bhi muh mod du main !
tere pal to ek pal jeena soch kar bhi ,
yeh jeena chod du main !

bas tere pyaar ki chah ,
muhe saans lene se jyaada pyaari hai
ek tu sadaa saath dena mera
bas yahi tujh se
aur uss khuda se
meri GUJAARISH hai

hope you like it

awww loved it!

especiallly the highlighted blue lines

you could tell how much Geet loves Maan and how she can't live without him

her life is incomplete witout him

and although, I haven't read that fan fic...I could already know what its about

great job nishu😳😳😳

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Sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

yaar

aap itne touchy words ko ek saath jude ke kaise likhte ho

the words i read for guzaarish really touched me

nd poem for EB it really expressed what maan felt

head off to u

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priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

poem 34 kya likhi its lovely agar tu saath hai mere ,

toh yeh duniya kaam ki hai !

warna kya fark hai ,

phool aur pathar main !

bas tere pyaar ki chah ,

muhe saans lene se jyaada pyaari hai

ek tu sadaa saath dena mera

bas yahi tujh se

aur uss khuda se

meri GUJAARISH hai

i just loved these two stanzas very much
poem 35 no words to say the way u wrote maans feeling its really fantastic

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

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