MG SS- STILL WAITING part 13 pg115(25-6-13) - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
eagerly wating to know the cuties of geet
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Part 8


Past

Geet was sitting on her seat n enjoying the view outside the while caressing her tummy, she was smiling, started seeing dreams from open eyes for her kid, she just wanted a reason now to live, it can be a son or daughter, she is happy that now no need to ask permission for playing, talking wid her own kid, it will be her child, she will give her love, her live t it, fulfil each wish of her child which is unfulfilled of her, but just a tint of sadness was there will maan accept it, will he allow to carry her, there was fear inside the small heart to carry her own child, to smile n enjoy with it, but the fear was big, maan's family never showed any type of love n care to her, will they will love her child but then the thought came it is not only her kid but maan's child too, shayad they start loving her caring her for the sake of their heir, the small heart again started expecting, but to her expectation there was ques will they? Will maan show any emotion for her, in 3 months of marriage she is dying for his one look, one loveable words, she gave herself to him whenever he demanded after that horrible nite of her nite any girl will say no but geet's love for him was that big that she can't deny him he used her body to satisfy his hunger, but never given her love that any girl expect from marriage to cocoon herself in his warmth, to talk endlessly with him, to share his pain, happiness, he never gave her chance, she was alone in big room to drool his photos, talk with it, share her pain, love everything but he was not there.

Geet thought broke by aniee's voice "we reached geet let's come down" geet was fearing just consoled herself n came down n with heavy steps walk inside only to get glares from every one sitting there, she was shivering with the anger of other's

"Why u both took her out" sneha maan's mother said in anger with aniee

"Mom calm down 1st y u r over- reacting" aniee said

"U r soo innocent aniee, u don't know these type of girl dear, they use people for their benefits" tara said while glaring at geet

Geet eye started pouring hearing their talks, they didn't like her she knows, but they think soo cheap of her, she never thought in her dreams.

"See this girl started showing her crocodile tears," sneha said in disgust n anger

Geet was looking at maan, who was hearing everything but didn't bother to say a single word for her, what mistake she had done that her happiness always last for few tymes.

"Tell us y u went out, what u want to do with aniee n her child" tara said in anger while holding geet's arm tightly

"Leave her bhaibhi, it's me n arjun who took her out can't u see she is week n suffering from fever" saying soo aniee loosened the girp of tara from geet arm.

Geet was still looking at maan, aniee can see the hope in her eyes but she can't do anything for her.

"Beta what doc. said how is my small aniee ya arjun is, everything is alri8 na beta" asked sneha while caressing her hair lovingly, geet was looking at everyone who was showering their love on aniee, she is missing her papa, mumma who used to shower their love before on her, a scratch on her body, n her papa used to shout on everyone, used to cocoon her, pamper her, n now her father has forgot her too, not a single call they have done to know about her daughter, new fresh tears started flowing from her eyes, she touched her tummy promised to her baby, that her baby will got father's love, she don't want to make her baby starve for father like her.

Her thoughts were broken when at last maan's anger burst on her, she was soo lost in her thoughts that didn't hear anybody what they are saying, sneha n tara were saying her to leave from here n go in her room but she was lost so didn't heard n at last maan's anger burst on her, she started shivering again with his anger n grip as he was holding her arm firmly n its paining to her but she can't say anything to him

"Can't u hear what my mom is saying to u, now u started disrespecting my mom too, u r impossible gal, my biggest mistake was to marry u, fit for nothing gal" maan was saying very rudely while tightening the grip on her arm, n without hearing her any voice dragged her harshly toward their room even not realizing in dragging her, her body was touching to the things kept n giving her pain.

Arjun was watching all thing from long tym now its not the matter of geet only but the baby too that is inside her n more over her week body which need rest love n care, n here maan is manhandling her harshly, she was about to fall from stairs when arjun hold her securely n geet cluthed her tummy in fear of losing her baby.

Arjun lost his every bit of patience which he was holding, n shouted on maan "can't u see u r harming her, have u gone mad maan n u all too, from the tym she has entered inside mansion u all are shouting at her without reason, can't u all see her state, she is looking pale n weak n mummy ji u r accusing her without reasons, what she will do to our baby haan, tell me na, u say tara bhabhi did she ever tried to harm ur son, did she ever tried to touch or talk, let it be about aadil, she never tried to disturb any member of this family from last 3 months, as u all wanted never steeped out from room, never said a word to anyone n u saying to her she is disrespecting ur mom wow gr8 maan, I never thought u will behave like this with ur wife, disgusting u all always know to ruin her happiness, just before entering her she was happy n smiling n now see she is crying, scared."

"Arjun bte u don't understand this type of gal they need only way to escape from home, must have done some drama, n after steeping out she was happy n here showing her fake tears" said sneha

"Enough is enough mom, u all wanted to know y she was happy y she was smiling, u know what bhai every gal wanted to share this news 1st with her husband but how unlucky she is when she wanted to talk to u, u accused her, shouted on her make her cry" aniie roared in anger

"What she have done big that u r taking her side" sneha said

"She has given her life to u bhai, her everything, in return if u can't give love, then plz don't disrespect her, n u know what mom she is gng to give heir to this house, she is carrying ur son's baby, ur grandchildren, at least for the sake of ur heir don't harm her don't make her cry always"

Geet went silently in room n sat on chair near the wall were maan pics was present n was rubbing her arm where all had clutched tightly n harshly without any mercy, but her real sadness reason was maan his harsh n bad behaviour with her, she touched her tummy n said "I started expecting soo much baby again, I forgot that it's my life where no love n no respect is there for me but mumma promise baby u will get everything.

She left her all pain beside n started talking wid her baby like herself kid, showing maan pics n her mumma n nani maa pics to her, saying every gud things to her baby, smiling n giggling alone but there was sadness in her eye for being alone.

Present

"I still remb. That day geet when we have given u soo much pain but u never said a word, u silently went from there n was happily talking wid babies showing my pic I m their father, oohh I forgot that tym we don't know na that they are twins so with baby, I saw u 1st tym smiling n giggling lyk child with sadness in ur eyes but u never showed, I was ignore ur longiness n starvings it was aniee n arjun who was there for u n still n now ur kids, they will make u smiling once again, they will make ur life happy its my promise geet, the pain I give never will be replaced but I will try to heal it with happiness just come back geet, just respond to medicines for ur babies for their happiness."

The two babies talk broke maan's thought n looked at them lovingly ...

maan slowly went near them n cocoon them in his embrace n caress their back lovingly

(1547 words)


IMPORTANT NOTE- from now updates will not be reagullar as i said before i will try but have to comp. all the formalities of my admission then shopping as tym jada nahi h mere pass soo jaldi jaldi lyk karo aap log n comment mai jaldi jaldi update likh ke dugi choote choote, nahi toh yeh ss reh jaega beech me hi

2nd - not gng to update my new OS VIVAH tym nahi h mere pass but itna promise jarur karti hu in holiday n free tym will doo



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ambeern

me first
on first time


congo songo ambreen 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update...grrr i sooo much hate maan n his family...if they can't give her love then dey don't have any right to insult her...pathetic people...i m sure u have decided to make us cry...loved it...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
it is too sady sady type update
waiting for next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
Feeling sad for geet
All behaved badly with her...except arjun n annie
Maan met the kids
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb updates yar...i lovd it nd njyd it...waitng 4r nxt part...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
gurr i m going to kill u😡

hamesha sahi time par rok deti hai😡

i hate maan n hs family😡

they r accusing geet fr no reason⭐️

armaan n gunj entry👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Still wondering why their marriage happened ?
wat was reason behind it
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...feeling bad for geet

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