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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Aanu..its incomplete..i'll update the rest update in a half an hour..:)

Phew I was going to ask u the same 😆
Ok I will wait u write 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84


Phew I was going to ask u the same😆
Ok I will wait u write😆

done..
Or should i say..
Done done londone..;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yes truly done done London
Awesome update as. Usual with full fledged package of revelations and retrospection
Loved Maans soliloquy
When I read pal pal I somewhat had weird disliking towards Maan as he was hurting geet but now knowing his turmoil I threw away that disliking out of the window .poor guy didn't know how to express himself on one hand he is drowning in this intense love feeling and on the other hand scared to lose this blissful friendship with Geet. Haash ! So all that ignoring acts of and * I don't know u gaze *of Maan Was just a shield to hide his feelings from geet.
Back to the present
Hmmm so he was holding the phone till now poor guy victim of a disease called love,
OMG did he just kissed the page which had geet's handwriting hmmm now the disease is ready to rule his mind and soul,
Waiting for love sick majnus next move and also want to know the * haal* of laila
Thank u for updating
Love aanya😃



P.s - opps forgot about the song 😆
The song choice was superb it very well depicts the mindset of Maan in this update😃
Edited by aanya84 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oww that was shooo cute..kissing her handwriting to feel her 😳
Lovely update as usual 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...lovd it...ohho tho maan ka geet ko hurt krna n ignore krna sb iss liye bcoz maan khud apni feelings ko samjhne ki koshis kr rha tha...poor guy heart n mind k beech phas gaya tha...na hi apni feelings express kr pa rh th aur dusri tarf apni feelings k wajah se geet ki friendship khone se darr rh th...haaye majnu maan itni der tk phone ka receiver pakad k rkha tha...oye maan jb b geet ko miss karing tho geet se judi cheejo me usse mahsus karing 😉 oye hoye he kissed her handwriting...Eagerly waiting for nxt update n thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update

Maan kissed the page with Geet's handwriting. 😃 😛 . Waiting for what Maan does next.

Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Past n present well incorporated! Well written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84

Yes truly done done London

Awesome update as. Usual with full fledged package of revelations and retrospection
Loved Maans soliloquy
When I read pal pal I somewhat had weird disliking towards Maan as he was hurting geet but now knowing his turmoil I threw away that disliking out of the window .poor guy didn't know how to express himself on one hand he is drowning in this intense love feeling and on the other hand scared to lose this blissful friendship with Geet. Haash ! So all that ignoring acts of and * I don't know u gaze *of MaanWas just a shield to hide his feelings from geet.
Back to the present
Hmmm so he was holding the phone till now poor guy victim of a disease called love,
OMG did he just kissed the page which had geet's handwriting hmmm now the disease is ready to rule his mind and soul,
Waiting for love sick majnus next move and also want to know the * haal* of laila
Thank u for updating
Love aanya😃



P.s - opps forgot about the song😆
The song choice was superb it very well depicts the mindset of Maan in this update😃

u r not the only one dear..infact almost all reader of "pehle pyar" used to hate maan..they used to curse him with each update. There were so many questions regarding maan's behaviour & intentions..that if he is playing with geets emotions? Wether he is delebratly hurting her and all!!! And bcoz of that i used to feel pressuerised..that how am going to justify maan's actions..and his mood swings! It was difficult to express/explain maan's side.. But nw am glad that everyone's opinion about maan is changing..and u all can understand/relate to maan's behaviour..n his inner turmoil! And that means that i was able to convey his feelings n worries!
U'll very soon get to know our majnu's next move.. And about laila.. I guess uska haal jaan ne ke liye u will hai to wait for the 3rd & last part of this trilogy!
Am extreamly happy that u liked the song choice..thank u so much for such beautiful, lovely & longest comment that i hav ever got! 😊
thanks alot..
Luv u and a big tight hug for u aanu..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fatema_007

Oww that was shooo cute..kissing her handwriting to feel her 😳
Lovely update as usual 😃

thank u so much dear..:-)
glad that u liked maans gesture:-)

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