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sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

pehla post na sahi.. pehla like hi sahi.

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

esa lag raha hai.!!! kisi ne tera cheer haran kar liya ho.!! AAshu. xD😆

Edited by sweetkj - 12 years ago

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

mujhe kisi nahi bataya tu update karring

mooh ferring

😒🥺

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Where Maaneet moments bring a smile on my face

Maan's torment and pain saddens me

His loss, missing his parents, his responsibilities and now him missing Geet😒

The war continues between ego and love

but why do I feel his ego was more of a defensive mechanism which lover adopted to put his fears and insecurities and pain at bay😕

Her indifference or to say act of it hurt him deep

Him walking up to her hostel and she standing by the closed window both fighting their urges, feelings and their internal wars

He just wants a glance of her and she wants him to leave

He wants to be with her and she knows she has to leave

He craves for love and she torn by responsibility

He overhears the Prof shouting at her for her absence

Anger courses through him probably showing a glimpse of his unconditional love

She feels lost seeing his anger filled eyes

But finally truth surfaces out and

he realizes her loss is much bigger

her pain is also deep just like his

and

Loves overpowers the ego

He silently vows to be by her side

giving her the notes

walking back to the hostel

and I'm sure he will ease her worries in HP too

😳

Fantastic update

very well penned down yaara

👏 👏 👏

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

heytal.. 🤗

arey yaar.!!

hum bhi udate udate pahuch gae.!!

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: heytal
mujhe kisi nahi bataya tu update karring
mooh ferring
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Heytu! Aaj bohut zyaada kam ke beech update karne ka dil kiya... kaan pakding..

Am only here for few mins. Have to work till 11pm

Maafi?

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: sweetkj
esa lag raha hai.!!! kisi ne tera cheer haran kar liya ho.!! AAshu. xD😆

😆😆

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

I truly don't have words to say anything after reading the chapter..Whole Love v/s Ego portion portrayed the depth of your thoughts and you have described it perfectly in your words..I could feel maan's anguish,his pain because of her indifference and ignorance,his decision of ignoring her and then his helplessness of not being able to stop himself from looking at her face and standing infront of her hostel room..!!! Throughout the chapter was sad and "your choice of music"was aiding the sadness perfectly...Kudos to your music selection dear..

End brought sweet relief for me..Finally he got to know some of her personal problem by chance and His will to help her overpowered him...😃

One day he would walk with her, for now he would just walk her path and help her reach her destination.

End of the chapter can't be more beautiful than this...!!!!

Love you avi for giving us such wonderful piece of writing...🤗

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

awe...loved it...thanks for the pm...

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

pata nehi doo k zindagi dono ko kahan tak leke jayega...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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