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Posted: 12 years ago
^ Sweety padha toh hai na? Ya phir ainveyi bol rahi hai ke exactly your feelings?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

^ Sweety padha toh hai na? Ya phir ainveyi bol rahi hai ke exactly your feelings?😆


toh what do you think ese hi type kar diya mene. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj



toh what do you think ese hi type kar diya mene.😳


Meri tarhan ke log aksar type karne ke baad recheck nahin karte. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

It's true that change is the only thing constant in life, and this constancy is very important for every single person. But if we see the changes through a negative lense, it will do us no good. Instead it will just drag us down in a pit deeper than we can imagine. The same is the case with Maan. Even though he did think of it positively, the ever-present pessimism took over and now he's wallowing. Walking the same path to her hostel, he can't help but feel the chill of the air and how it's affecting him negatively. Had he been walking beside Geet in this very weather, his opinion and the weather's effects would have been totally opposite. It's strange how much important someone becomes for us to carry on in contentment.

The battle between ego and love is something which rages on and on, never seemingly ending. Just like the only danger to ego is love, the thing that is mostly affected due to ego is love. When words 'I', 'me', 'myself' and questions like 'why always me' or 'why should I', come more often, this is the first step to the destruction of love in any relationship, even if it is a silent, nameless bond. The way you explored both the sides of love and ego was wonderful. I could actually feel myself pulled between the two, as if I'm the one experiencing it all. And the song just added to the feel of Maan's hurt, his pain and his distress. If I only look at it all from Maan's perspective, I'll be a little angry with Geet for putting him through this. But no, I won't do that. Because I know the war Geet is fighting with herself, the fight between her own wishes and what she feels indebted to do. She isn't at fault and I can only sympathise with her own dilemma.

Poor Geet! Innocent students with genuine reasons for not showing up get yelled at because of those who make up excuses for their absence. Maan getting angry on hearing her getting shouted at was the victory of love over ego. Love conquers ego! That walk was all that was needed to calm my anxiety over their individual internal battles. It gave me relief, even though Geet will be going back to her village in some time, that they will have some sort of a connection. Glad that Maan took the opportunity to be in link with her through any means.

Thanks for updating Avi! You already know what I really loved in this chapter. 🤗



exactly my feelings!! 😳 🤗

and mene kitna jaldi comment kiya na.

Wah kya comment di hai Sweety!!!
Mind blowing!
I always knew you understood my updates but never realised how much you did...😆
I am blown away by the way you express yourself...👏
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome... I want to comment more than just awesome but I cant type long comments from fone... Totally loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

lovely lovely part...glad that maan came to know about her darjis illness n her having no one other than darji...when he felt like hugging her then y cant he do that then kuch boltha bhi nahi hain...these scenes reminded me of tthhe movie mausam😳

btw does he know that she s leaving forever?? no i suppose...atleast then he will gather his courage n speak to her...
loved the scene where he waited for her outside her hostel while she was busy hiding from him...
also last part where he left notes for her...
eager to see them talking to each other...
nice song selection Avi ...thanku for the PM

He is still very much a stranger to her. No matter what he thinks of her, she won't even look at him yet so how to hug her...😆 I have not seen the movie Mausam.
Also, she is not leaving forever. She has to come back for the exams and is away only till Darji gets better.
Thanks for the comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

^ Sweety padha toh hai na? Ya phir ainveyi bol rahi hai ke exactly your feelings?😆



🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update👏
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely one...

thnks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

ahh that was so lovely to see man
wow man he has been following her for so long
and he did see her
but she is not to know that right
wow he thought he hurt her with his anger
but she doesnt know that the anger wasnt for her
shame she has to leave like that
but at least she has him
though she know nothing of it yet
well this love story just gets more and more interesting
cheers for pm

I am glad you are liking it.
I always look forward to your comments. Thanks Chavvi

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