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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, nice , lovely part

loved it


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update. maan in love with geet but is thinking to confess or not to geet. who is going to doubt on maan other than ram.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sridevi_n

nice update. maan in love with geet but is thinking to confess or not to geet. who is going to doubt on maan other than ram.


thanks nd maan is feared from geet rejection that's why he is thinking whether to confess or not...there is someone which u 'll knw in next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a wonderful fiction lovely update and u r awesome dear
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Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

such a wonderful fiction lovely update and u r awesome dear


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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...maan realised his love...

now waiting for geet...

do cont soon...

thanks for the pm...

sry for late commenting...
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Originally posted by: kingofme

wow...maan realised his love...


now waiting for geet...

do cont soon...

thanks for the pm...

sry for late commenting...


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Originally posted by: punnaanchal

Wow

Awsome part
Maan jealousy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Priya :maan kya yeh wohi miss malik jiske bare mein tum us din baat kar rahe the??

Maan :han maa yeh wohi miss malik hai

Dadi :maan kahin tumhe usse pyaar to nahi hua jo tum uski taraf dekhte dekhte itne kho gye ki apne papa ko bhi dekha hi nahi

Maan :are nahi dadi mein to sach mein presentation ke bare mein soch rha tha pyaar vyaar mujse nahi hoga

Dadi : accha ji pyaar aapse nahi hoga to theek hai tumhe jo pyaar karne ka ultimateum diya tha ek saal ka wo cancel kar dete hai aur tumhare liye hum koi ladki dhund lete hai jisse tumhari shaadi karwa denge...

prev :part9

Edited by angel_smily - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-10

Karan ke jaane ke baad geet nd uski team bhi wahan se chali jati hai'

In evening

Khurana Mansion

When ram nd maan go to their house they see that vicky nd dadi is talking something in a very slow tone that is not audile to others nd then ram nd maan greet dadi

Ram : maa aap aur Vicky kya baat kar rahe ho???

Dadi :kuch nahi ram hum to bas aise hi yahan wahan ki baatein kar rahe the

Ram :accha maa yahan wahan ki baatein aur wo bhi itni slow si awaaj mein jo kisi aur ko sunai bhi na de

Daadi :ram hum keh rhe hai na ki hum koi spl baat nhi kar rhe the tum batao ki tumhare din kaisa rha aur tumhari presentation kaisi thi

Ab presentation ki baat sun kar ram ko yaad aaya ki usne maan ko kaise dekha tha to wo apni maa ko kehne lga ki tabhi priy unke liye coffee aur kuch snacks lekar aayi aur kha

Priya :ab aap baatein baad mein kar lena pehle coffe le lijiye

Ram : nahi priya jo mene baat batani hai wo to is coffe se bahut jayada important hai

Priya :aisi kya baat hai ram???

Ram :tumhe malum nahi priya ki aaj mene conference room mein kya dekha

Priya :kya dekha aapne???

Then ram tells everything to them that how maan is staring at geet nd get lost in her after hearing this everyone couldn't hold their laughter nd thy laughed at maan'''nd then priya ask maan

Priya :maan kya yeh wohi miss malik jiske bare mein tum us din baat kar rahe the??

Maan :han maa yeh wohi miss malik hai

Dadi :maan kahin tumhe usse pyaar to nahi hua jo tum uski taraf dekhte dekhte itne kho gye ki apne papa ko bhi dekha hi nahi

Maan :are nahi dadi mein to sach mein presentation ke bare mein soch rha tha pyaar vyaar mujse nahi hoga

Dadi : accha ji pyaar aapse nahi hoga to heek hai tumhe jo pyaar karne ka ultimateum diya tha ek saal ka wo cancel kar dete hai aur tumhare liye hum koi ladki dhund lete hai jisse tumhari shaadi karwa denge

Maan :nahiii dadi aap aisa kuch nahi karengi mujhe koi shaadi nahi karni abhi abhi mere pass 11 months ka time hai aur mujhe koi ladki jarur milegi''

Dadi,ram nd Vicky three of them thought that maan is hiding something from them nd their evil mind started that how can they know that what is maan hiding????ram thought that ki maan like geet nd to check his doubt he decide something nd he made a plan on this nd he will execute it tomorrow'''after sometime they all retire to their respective rooms

Today arnav nd khushi make a plan that there of them do their dinner in some dhabha as they all like dhabha food

In some dhabha

Geet nd khushi order their food nd for arnav also'.after ordering their food they wait for their food nd in the meantime they r doing chatting

Arnav :geet tera project kaisa chal rha hai???

Geet :project ka kaam accha chal rha''tu bta tera wo new summer collection ready hua ke nahi????

Arnav : bas wo collection final stage men hai mein bas jaldi hi use launch karunga

Arnav aur geet ki business related baatein sun kar khushi irritate hokar kehti hai ki mein ja rahi hu

Arnav :are khushi tum kha jar hi ho???

Khushi :mein tum dono se dur jar hi ho

Geet are humne aisa kya kiya jot u humse dur jar hi hai

Khushi :kya kiya??tum dono kabse apne business ki baatein hi kar rahe ho aur yeh time friends time hai to isme koi business ki baatein nahi hogi

Geet nd arnav said in union are sorry khushi ab se no business talk only friends talk okkk happy

Khushi : han happy

Nd then their food comes nd they start eating their food nd geet ask them something

Geet :so arnav kab kar rahe ho engagement tum dono'' koi date fix ki nani ma ne???

Arnav :han geet naani maa ne kha ki next month ki 21 ko humari enagegment hogi

Geet : aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi'aur agar mein nahi puchti to tum mujhe batate bhi nahi

Arnav :aree isi baat ke liye to hum aaj yahan par aaye hai mujhe bhi to naani maa ne shaam ko hi bataya tha

Khushi :geet meri ek baat sunle ki meri engagement mein tu Indian dress hi pehnegi apne yeh western kapde nahi pehnegi

Geet :khushi tujhe malum hai na ki mene kabhi Indian dresses nahi pehne to ab kaise pehnugi

Khushi :nahi geet teri ek nahi chalne wali'

Geet :ok mein try karungi but no promise

Khushi : ok

Precap ram's plan


prev :part9


next : part11

Edited by angel_smily - 12 years ago

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