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Smily

@angel_smily

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi friends...mera naam smily hai,mein pehli baar kuch likhne ja rahi hu...mujhe nahi malum ki yeh aap sab ko pasand aayega ya nahi...par aap sab batana ki aap sab ko yeh story kaisi lagi

Thank you sdlife19,BULBUL.A for ur help

Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana : 25 yrs old MD of Khurana Constructions.he is big terror in business world.but he is a different personality at house.

Geet Malik : 24 yrs old MD of GM Constructions.

Ram Khurana : very kind at heart.father of Ridhima,Maan nd Vicky.

Priya Khurana : Wife of ram nd mother of Ridhima,Maan nd Vicky.

Ranjeet Malik : father of armaan nd geet.

Sudha Malik : motther of armaan nd geet.

Armaan Malik : 25 yrs old.He is a doctor by profession.Elder brother of geet.In love with Dr Ridhima

Ridhima Khurana : Elder sister of Maan.Both Maan and Ridhima are twins but Ridhima is 12 min elder than him but for Maan she is her di.She is also a doctor by profession.

Vicky Khurana :younger brother of maan nd ridhima.19 yrs old doing archictecture in prestigious college of delhi.

Pari Sinha : 19 yrs old.doing architecture in same college of vicky.Sister of Adi

Savitri Devi Singh Khurana : Dadi of Ridhima,Maan nd Vicky.very kind at heart.

Arnav Singh Raizada : A business tycoon the owner of AR ,one of the biggest fashion house in India.very sweet

and kind at heart for his family and friends.and for outside world he is very cold at heart.madly in love with

khushi his childhood friend.Best friend of geet.

Khushi Kumari Gupta : owner of a Friend's cafe in Delhi.madly in love with arnav her childhood friend.Best friend of geet.

Sunaina Singh Raizada : arnav's mom

Aditya Sinha : best friend of maan nd works in his company

Pinky Alhuwalia : best friend of maan nd works in his company

Sasha : secreatory of geet.

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Smily

@angel_smily

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Posted: 12 years ago

Index

part 1 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=2

part 2 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=6

part 3 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=10

part 4 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=14

part 5 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=19

teaser : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=21

part 6 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=25

part7 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=31

part 8 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=34

part 9 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=39

part 10 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=43

part 11 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct

part 12 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct

part 13 : -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct

part 14 : -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

very interesting start..pls cont soon..

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Supab awesome dear see u posted now reader make u write more I really like story line as this is going to be business and love I am seriously looking forward fot it made a index also sweety

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

the up is good

maaneet and arsh my favoruite so me going stick tot hem

plz cont soona nd pme

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice start buddy!

Continue soon and thanks for the PM.

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 12 years ago

congratulation for first SS

interesting start

nice title

update soon

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Smily

@angel_smily

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-1

Geet,Arnav and khushi are best friends.they meant everything to eachother.Unhone boarding school mein study ek saath ki hai aur baad mein college bhi.Geet k liye arnav nd khushi hi sab kuch hai.yeh teeno apni apni life mein settled hai,Arnav ka khud ka fashion house hai,khushi ka khud ka friend's cafe hai,nd geet ki khud ki construction company hai.yeh teeno apni life mein jitne bhi busy ho par sunday ka din yeh teeno ek saath spend karte hai.Khushi arnav nd geet se thodi si different hai ,kyuki arnav nd geet dono hi apne office mein hitler hai dono ke staff ne kabhi in dono ko smile karte hue bhi nahi dekha.

In Geet's office

Jab bhi geet apni company mein aati hai tab employees ke liye siren bajta hai jisse sab ko geet ke aane ke baare mein malum chal jata hai,aur sab employees apna apna kaam karne lag jate hai kyuki geet ko apni company mein discipline pasand hai,wo kisi ki galti ko ek baar se jayada maaf nahi karti,agar koi employee apni dusri galati karta hai to wo uska us company mein last day hota hai.

Geet apne cabin mein jati hai aur sasha aur mr patel ko apne cabin mein bulati hai.mr patel chief architect hai.

Sasha : May i come in mam?

Geet: yes.

sasha:good morning mam

mr patel:good morning mam

Geet: sasha meri black coffee lekar aao.

sasha : yes mam.

geet:mr patel mujhe sighania's k project ke blue print ki file chahiye,jaiye lekar aayie.

mr patel : wo ma...maam

geet : mr patel jaiye aur file layiye

mr patel : wo mam abhi blue prints tayiaar nahi hue.

geet : wht????abhi tak apne wo taiyaar nahi kiye???boliye ab chup kyu hai

mr patel : sorry mam...bas wo thora sa hi kaam rehta hai mein appko wo shaam tak de dunga

geet :mujhe wo blueprints agle do ghante mein apne desk par chahiye mujhe nahi pta ki aap kaise karte hai aur agar aap wo blue prints tayiaar nahi kar paye to apna resignation letter mere table par rakh dena ab jao

itne samay mein sasha geet ki black coffee lekar aati hai

geet:sasha aaj meri koi meeting fix mat karna or dhayaan rahe ki agle do ghante mujhe koi disturbance nahi chahiye

sasha : ok mam

Friend's cafe

khushi calls to arnav

khushi : hi arnav

arnav : hi khushi

khushi : arnav tumhe malum hai na aaj kya hai?

arnav : ha khushi mujhe malum hai ki aaj geet ka birthday hai or mujhe tumahre cafe aakar uske birthday ka surprise plan karna hai

ab khushi arnav se gusse mein bolti hai

khushi : to jab tumhe pta hai to tum abhi tak kyu nahi aaye???mein kab se tumhara wait kar rahi hu.

arnav: are sorry baba mein bas thodi der mein aa rha hu aur wo phone rakh deta hai

after 30 mins

Arnav in khushi's cafe

arnav :khushi yeh dekho mein decoration ka samaan lekar aaya hu

khushi:arnav hum geet ka b'day plan to kar rhe hai par kya geet is baar apna b'day celebrate karegi

arnav:khushi don't be sad yaar is baar geet apna b'day jarur celebrate karegi.

arnav aur khushi surprise ko taiyar karke geet ko phone karte hai or shaam ko use khushi k cafe bulate hai

precap: geet b'day

Part 2 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3548002/the-unsaid-promise-pt-14-pg-62-23oct?pn=6

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

Finally a new writer...awesome and great courage u have to write...First attempt itna shocking...Geet aur black coffee ...Yeh to Maan iske beech lagta hai......loving it dear...waiting for next part pm me too k and for any help welcome...🤗

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Me ur first commentator

Edited by Sonia.KN - 12 years ago