New SS: A Destiny Of Love, Part 20/Page 54 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

sahi mein dev aur pinky kya kar rahe hai...unhe pata hai k geet sirf aur sirf maan se hi pyar karti hai...phirbhi...

awesome n lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Hyyeee..Maaneet moments r so sweet..
Koi iss jerk Dev ko 2-4 lago...bloody...
Pinky ke sath itna sab kerke bhi Geet per nazar hai...
And that dumbo Pinky...grrr.akal ki dusman...
Waiting...


Loved ur every sweet sweet comment wid pics...
do comment...really enjoy it...😃
update is coming...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



hate this Pinky...

dev loves Geet and that is why he is telling Pinky to help him but don't Pinky have some sense...if she can't put some sense into Dev's thick head then at least she should not take Dev's side...

very interesting part...

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thanx for ur lovely comments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
update on its way dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 17

Maan slowly slide his foot up to geet's leg. She chocked momentarily on her spoonful of dessert..Maan smirked as she blushed a deep crimson when he went up even further..

Geet phone beeped and a massage flash on her mobile screen.

"I want my Sweet Dessert MISTY"

Geet turened to Maan ..there was a mischivious smile playing at his lips..

Geet stamp on his feet and he hissed with pain..

"What happened dude?"Rahul asked..

"No.. Nothing." Maan said readily and glared at Geet..

Geet shook her head and Smiled at her victory..

They finished their lunch and leave the place to attend their classes..

Geet marched towards Geet & poked Maan's shoulder with her finger When they passing through the corridor..He didn't turned to look at her..

"Naraj ho?"

He didn't answer and continue to walk..

Geet hold her shoulder and turned him around..

He rest his arms on his hips & watched her closely.

"Why are you angry for?"

Maan again give his silent treatment..

"Okay be angry..me going to my class."

she turned around But Maan pinned her to the wall...

"maan...What are u doing?please Koi ajayega..."
before she could speak she felt him caressing her bare arm...
"
maan what are you upto now...".her voice shivered with cold touch of his fingers...
his fingers went a bit downwards towards her waist...
maan just kissed her cheek ..
he removed her hair from her Face which fall on her face and disturbing his view..

"maan please..."she requested...
"
shhh..."that all he spoke huskily she closed her eyes...

Maan closed her mouth & with his. her lips parted for him. his tongue softly played on her lips & then locked with hers. Her hand slipped around his waist & he squeezed her slim waist & pulled her closer. They finally broke out when they heard some foot step approaching them. He pushed her curls behind.

He teased her earlobes whispering in a different voice yet again,

"I like this sweet dessert." She blushed more because of the shiver that rippled through with his soft whisper.☺️

He really couldn't resist him self kissing her all over again.

Here Dev was furious to see them romancing openly at their lunch time..😡

Dev puched the wall in frustration..Pinky was panicked to see him in this way..

"Why..Why see did not even look at me.."

"I think you should forget her..i talk to geet..she really loves maan"

"What?? How could you say that to forget geet"

"When you love someone ,You will understand, How it slits your heart to see your love loved someone else…. "

Pinky knew exactly what he felt. thats what she feels for him. How much ever she wants to stay away from him but she is helpless to her stubborn heart who loves him crazily, her feelings just get back to take care of him, worry for him... her heart felt filled with emotions she turned away & wiped her eyes,. 😭

She was holding back herself, Pinky could understand his craziness.

OK Guys so dis is it. hope u all will like dis part. nd hit d like button if all like it⭐️. nd Do Leave ur Comment. it really motivates me a lot.😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update

maan is just superb

geet is shy shy

i gadhe ko samjhe nahi aata ki geet maan se pyaar kart hai
Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
lovely maaneet moments..
dev grrr pinky ko rula diya
poor pinky...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful maaneet moments
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update

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