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Dhundlae aks

Koi dhundla sa ek aks meri aankhon mein rehta hai,
Koi bechan khawabon mein rehti hai,

Ek manoos si awaz mujhe sone nahi deti,
Koi uljha sa ek sawal meri yaadon mein rehta hai,

Hai kiske shabnami anchal ki khushboo mujh mein,
Koi ehsaas mehka sa meri saanson ko mehkata hain

Mujhe khud par nahi kabu na main kuch bol sakta hu,
Asar yeh kiske lafzon ka meri baaton mein rehta hai,

Sometimes people meet the love of their life & they know right away that they are made for each other.. like soul mates.. sometimes people meet & become frds before they become loves.. And then there are othere
maan & geet
didn't fall in love @ first sight.. they didn't even become friends right away
they are too much alike to ever be attracted to one another ..or may be they are so alike that they are really perfect for one another & it will be an act of God or something just as strong to get them to realize it.
STORY SO FAR
hope u all support me in this journey.. thanks a lot to Nandu for the poster..
& VM to the uploader
lots of love to me friends
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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX

PART 213(see below)
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Dhundlae aks

Part 213
muskan cribbing.. I want cute & long comments !!!

He smiled cutely.. with naughtiness taking over as he got the desired approval from all
waisen prachi bhi aaj kal suti nahi phen thi.. he pouted ever so cutely for which Geet made a big O face & Rano cutely patted his cheek.. chal badmash now knowing how damad had been causal with his relations until now.

Maan made a sudden serious face mama aap jaldi se mujhe Geet dedo nahi tho main ussen kidnap karlonga.. before he could finish his sentence he felt a tug in his ears.. he squealed in pain & looked at his dad angrily glaring down at him. Maan straightened himself slowly sliding next to Geet who was all blushing & very emotional.
Yash crossed his hand & spoke in a threatening voice yah shaadi ek sharath pe hi ho sakti hain
Geet became nervous while Maan cribbed cutely into her ears.. mujh se jada tho nihen jaldi hain! Aur aisen baav khaa rahen hain... huh
His misty could just melt listening to his cute cute cribbing & antics today. OMG.. he is more than everything she ever dreamt off. How sweetly he confessed his feelings..she chuckled as he cutely continued his cribbing sliding behind her as Yash continued with his condition
Geet shaadi ke baad tumharen saat US nahi jayengi!
everyone gasped & looked at Yash
Maan made a bigger cribbing face.
Dev even tried to calm Yash, for which he got a stern look from his dad.
Maan only made a mumbling complain to his misty & didn't bother to reply to his dad.
Darji tried to divert the attention towards other wedding aspects than getting their damad scolded on his engagement.

He had already plans of being here with them & nun seem to know about his plans. Geet felt an overwhelming feel in her heart knowing him more closely than anyone else. Her lashes felt a burning sensation & invariably she leaned closer to him. He took a deep breath & rested his chin on her shoulders cutely. They looked so cute together, Daadi stepped forward to caress their cheeks lovingly endeavoring the moment.
Nt excitedly announced, "lets complete the chunri phenane ki rasam"
Maan & Geet were made to sit together while Nt gave the chuni to Daadi.
Daadi ' tum hi phena do
Nt smiled & put the duppata around her blushing frd. She excitedly hugged & kissed geet.
Next Daadi came to bless them. She brought a khandani har for Geet.. Nt adjusted geets dupatta & chains when daadi's eye went on Maan's fav chain of his mom, as if it belonged there. She looked at her grandson & shook her head.
Daadi ' shagun tho Maan phelen hi de chukain hain
thats when everyone noticed the chain in her neck as Daadi pulled it out.
Yash looked at her dearly & probably was convinced Maan could do something right too.
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While the elders were discussing the following ceremonies puchki sneaked into her room almost dragging her with him. Not that she would have refused but she was conscious. He plonked his head on her lap threading his fingers with hers, rocking her with the havoc he was creating turning in her lap.
She looked at him lovingly aap ne Yash sir ko nahi bataya ki aap KI join kar rahen hain
he nibbled the back of her palm, not caring to answer her.
She shied
aap humesha aisen karten ho, kabhi kuch nahi katen, sab ko paresan karten ho
he turned & hugged her around the waist
main aisen hi hoon
she placed a kiss on his head jaanthi hoon
pata nahi phir bhi aap se
she shied & kissed him again this time hiding herself in him confessing her consuming emotion.

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Everything was planned mehendi, haldi & wedding.
While every one was preparing for the day. Maan had to fly back to US to serve his notice period with his company. It was a mutual agreement to discontinue. They were not happy with him traveling to India without notice & Maan was not that worried abt joining KI now. May be he saw the scope or he felt his family business needed him or was it to be with his family or should I say the believe she had in him.

The love birds couldn't meet much especially when dhulha decides to come back only a week before the ceremonies. Actually can't blame him, Yash couldn't wait to have his little princess in KM. Yash actually suggested to have a quick wedding even before Maan traveled, but then that was really silly he himself realized, giving a breather of month & half.
No stone was unturned to grace the most talked abt event of the era. Handa's & Khurana's!!! that was the buzz.

Finally it was day for Maan to return. He didn't tell any one when exactly he was returning. He gave a tentative date the reason was simple he had to go to HP first meet up with his misty who was super angry with him for not accompanying her for any of the wedding shopping. When ever she called him either he was too sleepy or too naughty.

He took Rano's blessing as she opened the door & straight went to geets room. It took some time for Rano to realize she could actually stop him.

He straight away went & hugged her madly, she gave in to his passion before showing her anger.
Well it was too late he had already melted her heart coming straight into her arms aab misty gusa karen tho kaisen.
Rano hesitantly knocked geets room door
both straighten themselves.
Rano ' beta aisen shaadi se phelen milna teehk nahi hota
Maan made a complaining face & went near Rano mama
Maan ' mama main kya karta Geet mujhe se nazar ho gayen thi
rano looked at her daughter, who was now trembling with her words, knotting her duppata.., caught in his arms & now him openly talking to her mom, nahi mama aisen baat nahi hain
Maan ' nahi mama, isne mujhe kissy bhi nahi di
Geet unknowingly accepted ' mama yeh jhut bol rahen hain, main ne.. she bit her tongue & buried her head in her moms arms
rano felt so embarrassed at the situation. Thai ji came from behind & pulled maans cheek.. chalo KM main sab pershan ho rahen honge
Maan quickly placed a peck on Geets flushed cheek infront of everyone & walked away leaving sharam se pani pani Geet behind.
Precap
puchkimia wedding!!!
the next part will be a brush through of the elaborate wedding
kitne saren wedding parts hogyen hain kitne saren FF's main..
could get into the next step of their journey
thanks for the lovely comments & likes

love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for coming back
we are waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx for d new thread, di.

pls give update soon.

by d way,

me new to forum and your thread.

me name's trishala.

wud u be ma buddy?

thebians
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🥳

Puchkimiaaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread muskaan..

waiting for maaneet dhundle...kashmakash...😆
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Congrats di...nw eagrly waitin fr the update..:D
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Finally!!!!!! Congrats 4r new thread..
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congrats for the new thread muskan

Waiting for the update

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