THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Haaye, Avi Dev Fell for ur Dev , yew r succeeded 😉 😆
Avi, chapter's name is wat held my curiosity , I-Star, seriously 😆 Mari said that too when I sent to her to proof-read. I told her read and then see. She agreed.
I so love this lovely nick to not so lovely employee for Dev 😆
The love story here wud b of wierd match, The girl who's strong-headed, utterly professional, Principled, high at self-respect n morals 😃 whereas the guy... 😆 Such carefree natured, easy-going n fun-loving 😆 Agree!
Avi, I can certainly imagine how much papad Dev must have made in order to propose his I-Star 😆 n then he must have expected a slap also, as an answer 😆
The character of Naina, lovingly as I-Star, is an idol 😊 , I wish I cud attempt some high-headed qualities she has, such as Confidence , so strong in views n actions 😊
Loved her thinking, she knew wat she did was right, the need of having a job didnt falter her in her views 👏
Thank yew behna for building such strong character, n love yew more if the same qualities r owned by yew too 😳
I sincerely wish I cud get myself to b lyk her 😊 Me too... I find writing negative characters hard because there is nothing in them that appeals to me. Strong characters loving characters I think I like to put so that it makes me stronger.
Dev is such a sweetheart, not the one to hold grudges, never taking the slap serious, in fact, trying n finding ways to tease his I-Star 😆
He was all the way so much adorable ❤️ N when came the word professional, he was perfect to b listed under the list of professionals 😃
Tu tu tu tu Tara 😆
I so loved the chapter Avi 😃 I am loving the music addition in this story. I get to add my favs.
Have heard Taare hain baraati, its melodious 😊
N bear it if em being repetative, but em waiting for Dev n his I-Star's love story as much as Maaneet's, in fact in love wid the chatpata couple already, individually too 😉 😳
Shayad, they've met before, but surely the first meeting wasn't interesting enough to remember, as the slap was 😆
All this electricity depart here , conspired against us, not letting me post my views on the chapter, at right tym 😭
Em seriously honored n speechless Avi, wid such affection yew have showered n I cant offer anything but the same 😳 When I joined IF, I never knew I wud b hanging out here wid the gang who's being a part of chotu sa heart I have 🤗
Main shayad xyada emotional hogai but kya karun, em way too emo than this 😳 Huggzzz for being there 🤗
Em seriously missing Aashu these dayz 😭
Khair ! above's ur comment n my bak-bak 😆
Ye xyada pakaau tha toh abhi se maafi 😆

Never. I think I am the most emotional person so don't think it is pakau. Your comments and support is all there is in writing these stories and posting them. I always wrote but never posted. Only because of Aashu I ended up posting.
Me too missing Aashu but I go to MB and catch her every once in a while.
Thanks dear! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hugging Sweety zor se...
Tu aa gayi
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Haiyeee!!!

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Itna badhiya comment
upar se shair...
too bad Mari ka shayar nahi hai...😆
Jal jal ke dhuan ho raha hoga...
😭
Shukriya Naureen!!!!
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😆 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Main chalti hoo...
I got up super early to do the update
upar se office all day...
back is throbbing... thoda rest leti hoo..
Mari and Sweety bhi shayad nahi aayegi
Doc was on call too
Madhu bhi work pe hai...
Kal milte hain...
Nisha is also usually busy on weekends
🤗GN Naureen🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sweety 😃
Tera torture end hua ? 😆

Avi, trust me, ur fav list resembles to mine 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Sweety 😃
Tera torture end hua ? 😆

Avi, trust me, ur fav list resembles to mine 😉

Woh sone chali gayi Nauri GN PM kiya tha...
uska torture 18th ko khatam hoga...
Mera bhi Sweet dreams hai...
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Main chalti hoo...
I got up super early to do the update
upar se office all day...
back is throbbing... thoda rest leti hoo..
Mari and Sweety bhi shayad nahi aayegi
Doc was on call too
Madhu bhi work pe hai...
Kal milte hain...
Nisha is also usually busy on weekends
🤗GN Naureen🤗


Yew took so much stress just to update for me Avi 😲 🤗
Take ample rest now 😃
Gunnight 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile


Yew took so much stress just to update for me Avi 😲 🤗
Take ample rest now 😃
Gunnight 🤗

Arrey nahi, re...yehi toh pyaar dikhane ke tareeke hote hai doston mein...
Sheen ko bolna uska comment pending hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Arrey nahi, re...yehi toh pyaar dikhane ke tareeke hote hai doston mein...
Sheen ko bolna uska comment pending hai...



🤗 Tere lye katto pic hai upar
Bol dungi usey 😊

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