THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 62

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Had I told I am falling for Dev? I take my words back.😳
I already fell for him.
In this world where male ego is filled up to one's head, he isn't least bit thinking of the slap he received and was going easy on her. Where do we find such men where there are people who marry to take revenge for a slap these days (I am sick of that show I tell you)
So anyway I am liking this I star and Dev babu. You left one more clue to us haven't you? I was wondering how can she dream of him when she met him for the first time later that day BUT that doubt is fulfilled now. You are brilliant Avi. One must be conscious while reading your stuff that's all🤗
Lub you and lub the VM.

Thank you! Ab sab ke samne aise mat bolo... nazar lagegi humme...
Aap ne yeh sab kahaa.. Avi running thru' white curtains in slow motion in a beautiful white salwar suit and gold jhumkas...
thud...
more work just landed on my desk...😊
Koi nahi... dil mein chupa ke pyaar ka ehsaas hum chalein...
Lub u Shika...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Avi
loved it a lot dear,muahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊

Originally posted by: sona-rai

Avi

loved it a lot dear,muahhh

Thank you Sona 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

I was waiting to post a comment on this part... 😳

I was waiting for it too...Hyper Avi

I love this I-star ki kichayi here.😆 I love I-star. All this cause she is such a strong character, her personality is such that it appeals to me so very much. She is all that I want to be, I would like if somewhat of her persona rubs on me.😊 She is like female version of head strong & principled Maan. She stands for her self- respect & dignity. She knew what she did was right & she didn't regret it, but felt awkward that she will have to face him as in the relation of Boss-employee. I so like her stand. A lot of the credit goes to you for building her character so well. 👏

Her circumstances ditched her, caused her to cave in & swallow her pride for the sake of survival. So realistic in her approach ... it's so true that sometimes whatever you do your circumstances causes you to bow down & compromise to certain things that revolt your whole being but still you go ahead because then you are helpless at the hands of fate. 😡 I really felt for her. I would not use the word sympathy for her ... as that would demean her spirit & self-pride. But I so wanted to jump in & do something for her, when she was feeling so helpless & cracks were being visible in her strong being after having to fight it out at each step of life, struggling it out all alone & yet all her adversities just pulling her down all the more... finally causing her to do something that she detests the most.
NT is someone I wish everyone could be. You comment about the second leads stole my heart and made me proudest of this chapter than I ever have been. It is so easy to fall for Maan and Geet because it is something we are used to but to cause the same love for Dev-NT is something I really appreciate. Devi did it in L&D and I had always nominated that Dev in the award threads as well as her Tara. The same for Rishabh-Naini and our beloved Hasini's NYT writing. Then there are Tweesha and Vicky in WOL and Shika's way of causing us to fall for them. There is no comparison in my mind with their writing as they are an ideal and a legend and if I could be 0.01% that talented I would feel blessed. I am nervous as well as hoping that I can continue in this vein...

You know I started liking Dev more here for he did what a loved one should have done for her, to just sooth her & remove her worries & prevent her from breaking down ... Though he did it in his own style, but yet he just climbed the ladder of adoration for me.❤️ Sometimes we just view people through the lens we ourselves place in front of us. Same happened with Tara, she judged Dev's behaviour in the lift in accordance to what she experienced during the earlier incident at the bus... she was blinded by her prejudices & anger at the whole situation... not even trying to sort it out through what must've actually led to it. So many times we judge people so... So it's rightly said that always don't go by ... first impression being the last impression. (I guess I out it right...not sure...😕)

I so liked him describing her in his mind... softness mixed with hard professionalism, then when he was telling Daadi about the pinkness on his cheek... I so wanted to say that the softness got transferred to him in a very hard hitting form. 😆

I so liked how he dealt with the whole situation...he somewhere did understand her, though not completely. But kuch toh zarror hua hai... He feels connected to her as he doesn't want to see her in distress or hurt.

I-star 😆...only Avi could come up with such stuff. I told you already that there are some things in your writing that are your trademark... Very much associated only with you. I love it all.

Thank you. I confess to loving Dev too.
The whole discussion on the theme song... & I-star's expressions & retorts were like icing on the cake. Her remembering of all the rules & their exact numbers, lines & page nos. had me in splits. 🤣 It so reminded me of one of my professors in undergrads who used to remember them all, she used to tell us which pg, para, line... along with the punctuations if we ever went to her for corrections... we had heard that she had read all the books in our medical library 8-10 times even the newer editions...🤣 So Tara here is something believable for me. See here I go all tangent. 😆

Tu tu tu tara... Omg...great one.😆 Even in my wildest imagination I could have not come up with this. In my childhood we had watched this Movie & used to keep singing it while playing antakshri if the other team couldn't come up with any song to keep distracting them & irritate them...🤣 Same was when we played dumb charades...I recollected all those moments. The other one Taare hai baraati... I guess he will recollect it when their story will come to a deserving culmination of marriage, or he can always remind her of it. Also does he know her from before???

I am loving the music part that I am using here. Dev will take a while to get there but there are signs for him all along.
Precap... I guess it's going to be on MG... Eagerly waiting for it.

P.S. : I'm again in love with second leads... ❤️

Thank you Onir!!!
Your comments keep adding fuel to my efforts... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
luved it
thanks fr the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dev...wht an imagination...thoroughly enjoyed it...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Ab kya kahoon Madhu

Iss Pyaar ka kya naam doon...
Aaj kal singing...
Tera jadu chal gaya...😳 Meri masala queen!
J mat ho...humme aashirwad de de...😊

*mooh pherring*

inhi logon ne tush tush (music effect) inhi logon ne...
inhi logon le leena noodles mera... 😒
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi

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Yay me first
awesome part
loved it
Dev is so lively and funny
Poor I-star LOL
This is really funny part
Continue soon
And nice music selection

Yup you were 1st
Glad you liked it.
Thanks for commenting about the music too.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heading out the door, I wonder why "Taare hain baarati" had entered my mind. There was no Tara in it, there were taare and it did not suit her at all. My brow crinkles as I wonder why I remember seeing her with her hair curly and loose wearing the sweetest smile on her face. I just met her today and I am pretty sure I have not met her before.

WHY DOES DEV REMEMBER SEEING HER WITH A SMILE
SHE WAS ALSO HAPPY ONCE UPON A TIME
NAINTARA = I STAR
WHAT A NAME
DEV WANTED TO DISPEL THAT SCARED LOOK FROM HER FACE - HE IS SMITTEN BY HER FROM THE FIRST SLAP😉

AND MORE THAN THE UPDATE I LOVED THE SONG
IT IS ONE OF MY FAV TOO
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres my comment on Pg 84
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