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megha

@totinee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow!!!!!!loved it sooo... much!!!Ye Maanto bohot advnce hey!atehi kiss?aur Geet...kitna cute character!!!!itne achche kayse likh letiho yaar? sabse cute thi Geetki datna-"nxt time mujhe ayse kiss maat karna" 😆

bt aysa situationto barbar hona chahiye.😃 heyna Richi???😉

gonna read it again...

Edited by totinee - 12 years ago

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

nice update

maan to bada hee advance nikla sidha kiss

aage pata nahi kya karega😉

really love maaneet conversation

waiting for more

continue soon

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awesome update
wow yeh meeting mein maan ney geet ko kiss bhi kar diya 😉
maza agaya
yeh geet should understand now ki maan hi usa sab kuch hai with the way she felt when he kissed😳

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MANISHA GOEL

@MANISHAGOEL

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

haila yeh kya kiya maan ne pehle he din geet ko kis kar diya nd
yeh stupid geet abhe bhe dev ke peche pade hai
dev aur bhe bada duffer hai
cntinue soon dr
lfr ka epiloge bhe do na

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nadira

@Shugluvszahid

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

maan ne kiss b kia aur geet ne gusa nahi kia
wow richu
very smart
amazing update
loved it
muahhh sweety

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Awesome
maan kissed geet and trying to help geet in her plan

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Zariya

@zariya123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

i think maan is son of the owner of company

awww first day first kiss

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PujaShree

@PujaShree

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Yipee dkho devrji i chnged my colour frm lyt blue to yellow...:D:D
NW UPDATE WAS SUPERBbb..omg i just luv this geet..she is bindaas..:):) maaneet first kiss..aww it was magical...n latr maan ne kya mast reason diya kiss ka haha...nw waiting fr next..