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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Desigirls12


 happy birthday dear..

wow lovely birthday treat,,.. te way geet ki entry and and bechare my maan started to bear his geet ki weight at first sight itself.. te way geet making my maan as her friends in front of dev was lovely.. geet only u can make te owner of kc to work under u.. i love te update so much dear...

kya yaar phool jaisi halki to hai meri Angel...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

hi js saw u updated Part..did u send pms? I did nt get one! Lovely update! Maan confronts her n kisses her! Maan agrees to b the accountant! Dev sees kiss n j! MAan convonces her! Wants something in return! Well written! update soon..do pm! Thanks

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

wow

richa it is good

maan kabhii ghee geet ka kaam karke ghisegaa nahii

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

MSK ko uski khud ki company mein job.lol.
Superb.

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

aahhaaa so nyc story i loved it

maan helping geet to make dev jelous

lolzzz khud hi pyar ho jaega 😛

n thier 1st kiss 😳

waiting for next

n very very sorry for being sooo late dii

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.OneDirection.

@.OneDirection.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

wow ...lovely dovely update...
moi love j scenes...😆
and the first kiss...😳😳😳
awesome...👏
loved it..
update sn...😛

Edited by .bloom. - 12 years ago

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Maaneet.Gurti

@Francisco.Angel

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

hahaha richu bbht he sweet n awesome isshhtory challeing me loving it hehehe naughty maan LOl kissed her hehehe <3 <3 .. update next soon .. :)

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

omg he kissed her

beautiful update

cont soon dear

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

are geet buddhu...woh maan singh khurana hai...tere boss hai...dekhte hai age kya hota hai...sameera n dev...thik hai...koi prblm nehi...maan n geet mein haddi nehi banna chahiye...

awesome n mast update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

just read d ff superb one differnt concept me loving this pataka fatank geet n ahaan smarty witty maan,lovable combo,hahhahaah kiss karne ka tareka bada kante tha i m loving this ff