Chapter 19: Lovely! There was so much out here... a few scenes covering and giving more depth to each character... be it Daadi, Dev, Miri, Geet or Maan. Loved how you showed the transition from despair, guilt, hopelessness to care, hope and dreams. 👏
As I mentioned in the earlier chapter's comment ... you did emphasize through Geet's understanding how she is getting acquainted with the layers he's trying to use to the best of his abilities to safeguard self and be there just for his family that is left.
Daadi is one sweet ❤️ The way she stands steadfast and strong for her grandsons but also a loyal confidante for Geet is quite admirable,, speaks a lot of her character and the depth she has. She also is distraught seeing her family the way they're and has lived through the grief of losing on her son and D-I-L. But still she stands as a Mother as well as guiding figure for her Grandsons, along with being one who can point out to missing links as well as be a strategist if she feels she needs to intervene for them all.
Dev is having a breakthrough, which I know isn't going to be all easy and miraculous but then there is a start. I loved the scene where he finally starts solving the puzzle pieces about Daadi's plans and MG being in close proximity... with the obvious being glaring at him... for him it was one info that took time to solve... 😆 I can so imagine hsi expressions 😆
MG 😆 What can I say I just loved them in that cozy loving embrace sort of situation 😳 One long treadmill walk it must be 🤣 I did miss reading your narratievs.. I loved the inspiration of the treadmill thought 😉 Wouldn't ever imagine such a thought... interesting.
Maan is one expert in self-preservation ... he just can't accept things that he's trying to resist, cause somewhere he feels if he allows someone or gives them the right to enter his family and they let down then he wouldn't be able to face his brother and Daadi cause for now he feels he's responsible for them and That is his prime function... also allowing someone in means making self vulnerable again to feel and chance for fear of loosing them which I guess he fears after losing so much so soon due to unpredictable nature of life.
Geet too is discovering and equally failing in her resistance towards him. Way to go 😆
Miri is just so lovable.. every action of hers is so heart warming. I love Maan-Miri moments .. this Sheru and his Imp are very adorable.
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