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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

me totally😳
chalo
tujhe pasand to aayi

i waiting for your response
and prayed you come before my net goes dead

I love all ur poems!!!!!!😳

i responded back to ur poem comment in the previous page as well!😳😳😳

how was ur day today? am stuck at work today! 😭 usually i don't have to come in at all on fridays 😆😆

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

I love all ur poems!!!!!!😳
i responded back to ur poem comment in the previous page as well!😳😳😳
how was ur day today? am stuck at work today! 😭 usually i don't have to come in at all on fridays 😆😆

thank god you ome

wais e

you know

me confuse with my choice of word for your poem this time

but what to do

can't change them

as than it will lost it feel

so very nervous

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

thank god you ome

wais e
you know
me confuse with my choice of word for your poem this time
but what to do
can't change them
as than it will lost it feel

so very nervous

haha yeah am logged in

if i dont reply then that means I am super busy at work haha

umm so far ur poem is good

but i guess as the story progresses u will get the clear idea of what this all about...

i still have to figure out how to take this story forward😕😆😆

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: mrs.msk2

Take ur time RU!!!😳😳😳

updated moment Pg 24
Di answer my question ..hahahhah

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geetmerly

@geetmerly

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

great start go ahead

waiting for next chp

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

part 1
awesome...
what happened in their past?
and Maan is after Geet?
why?
cont soon dear...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

interesting...update soon..😊

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

hmmm.. Maan wants to take revenge from Geet's dad...😕

Geet too knew about this ...and waiting for this man ie.

Maan.. ..

She too hates her dad...why..??😕

Geet is a mom...😲

very complicated start...😉 😆

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

fantastic update
really very interesting
waiting fr nxt updt

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Maan tking revenge frm geet due to sum accident done by geet's dad...

So geet has to pay.
Bt she too hates her dad...

Kora is a sensitive doggie here.Even i had my Tweetie who usd to sit looking at me n listen to me as if consuming evrything i say.Nw hav my Scotchie who even reacts as if soothing me if m ever sad.

So its a sad story.
I'll read it coz its a maaneet ff writtn by YOU.
Jus hoping n requesting u give it a Happy Ending coz hate sad endings. Lets atleast hav happy endings in fictional world coz in Real world most of times it doesn't happens

waitng fr nxt