FF: Slow Poison [Thread 1] - Page 16

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

ooye simi kaha hai ti

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

yipeee

me first on first part of this ff

so its call for party

and i m too gud

so here goes my gift for you

few lines for these two sadde hue creatures

kitna negitive hai yaar

hope dono milkar solid positive ban jaaye😆

sukhe patte(leaves)

daal se tut kar

kahi kissi ka toh ghar banaate hai !

aur mar kar bhi ,

kissi ke sapno ke ghar main zinda rah jaate hai !

kami toh ,un patto main hai

jo shaakh(stem) par rah kar bhi,

sukh(dry) jaate hai !

pata nahi ,

unhe kyu zindagi raas nahi aayi !

par unhone maut bhi toh ,

gale nahi lagaayi !

woh jaane kyu ,

is tarah se khud se hi tut rahe hai ,

na haasil hoga unhe kuch ,

na haail kar sake unhe koi ,

woh to ,uss mod se apna daaman tod rahe hai!

maana ke ,

zinadgi sab ke liye aasaan nahi hoti !

par mar jaayo khud ke liye aacha hai ,

usse ke ,

aap jiyoo kissi ko barbaad karne ke liye !

kyoki kissi ko barbaad karke toh ,

zindagi apni bhi aabaad nahi hoti !

koi khoj raha tha ,usse ek dushman ko !

toh koi kar raha tha ,uske aane ka intezaar !

yeh bhram tha ,un dono ka

ki milke ek baar ,

ho jaayega sab gum ka udaar bekaar ,

par woh naadan ,

yeh na jaante the ,

ke badla woh ek rog hai

jo hai be ilaaj ,

is rog ke ghaav bhar jaate ,

par ,

nishaan umar bhar ke liye chod jaate hai

aur hum sahlaate rahe isse ,umar bhar ke liye

yeh aadat hum se jod jaate hai

aur

badla woh rog hai ,

jo naasor (deadly)ban kar hum me palta hai

na thik ho sake ga yeh zakham ,

hame waqt nikal jaane par ,pata chalta hai!

me waiting for your reply

gud aur bad😕

Originally posted by: sona-rai

Simiii

jhappisss...

meray ko fever hai yar...

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

ooye darling

mere first aane ki party main aaye

and entry par click bhi nahi kiya

ghost entry

waise meri treat kaisi thi

and most imortant baat

poem tere first part ke standerd ko match hui ya nahi

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Loved ur treat!!!

thanks so much!!!

YES! Actually the poem talks about the main theme of this fan fic! Pain and revenge! both are living yet not fully allive...burried in their own past and griev! especilaly Geet.

So yeah! Loved iT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳