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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 10

pari got ready for the college n left. The whole day was so peaceful for both geet, pari, maa n maan. Here maan is thinking about geet n geet is thinking about maan.

Here maan is sipping his coffee in his cabin n thinking about geet. His phone rang. He picked the excitedly thinking it might be geet.

Hello told maan excitedly.

Hello maan told adi. (hehehe maan its not geet but ur friend adi 😆).

Adi tum bolo told maan.

Ha main. Kyun?? r u waiting for any other call teased adi.

Main other call, what rubbish told maan.

Dont lie maan, geet ne kal tumko call kiya tha na.

Tumko kaise pata?? r u trapping my phone. 😡

Yeh tho hadh hua maan. Main bas aise hi pooch raha tha.

Acha?? but how u know that its geet u can guess any other name na.

Hmm geet took ur number from pinky, so ofcourse pinky told me.

Acha.. thik hain.

Waise I tried calling u yesterday, but ur phone is continously busy.

Busy?? nahi tho main tho bas 10 min baat ki geet se. thats it. Shayad tumara phone kuch problem hain.

Mera phone problem. Wah ji wah, yeh tho acha hain. Saale batao kya chakkar hain.

Kya chakkar? Kuch bhi tho nahi. Acha mujhe kuch kaam hain, I will call u later. K bye told maan n cut the call immediately.

Arey arey maan suno told adi but its too late maan cut the call.

Pinky who listened their convo burst out into laughter.

Wow wow wow, I cant believe this. First time bhai is lieing. Really kuch tho baat hain.

Ha pinky mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lag raha hain. Dekhte hain kya hoga.

Hmmm I want both maan bhai n geet happy.

Ha pinky, even maan will have family. I know how he suffered in his childhood, no one was there with him, he was alone but he is happy. Really he knows how to face all the struggles in the life. But ab aur nahi, he should be happy.

Dont worry adi, he will be happy. Ab yeh senti baatein karna band karo pouted pinky.

Ok ok chalo lunch karte hain.

Here maan is teaching steps to his students. He is teaching salsa today.

Guys I wanna see the steps which I taught u now. So ready?

Yes sir.

One by one. Not in group I mean pair.

Fine sir..

one boy n girl came on to the dias n started dancing.. their moves to the music are prefect. When the boy lifted that girl in the air n then her waist moves were awesome. Maan is very much impressed by their dance. He is imagining that boy as himself n that girl as geet.

Maan's imagination: 😆

maan is in one corner of the dias n geet in other corner. Once the music started they both came to the middle of the dias, maan held her waist n they both r moving to the rhythm, maan lifted her by her waist n moving his waist as per the music. He made her stand on her feet, her back is facing his chest. Their hands r entwined n geet rested her body weight on one leg n bent on the other side. Maan too did the same leaning on her totally. They r in the same position for some time forgetting the whole world. Their eyes met n both are lost in each other, maan held geet tight by her waist n geet cluched his shirt tight.

Suddenly maan came out of his imagination when he heard loud sound. Then he realized that they completed their dance n waiting for maan's comment.

Maan smiled n told great work guys. Superb continue with the same spirit.

Thanku very much sir.

Maan: man u have lost it completely. U r day dreaming about geet. What will she think about me. No maan concentrate on work. He mentally decided to concentrate on work n entered his cabin.

But today maan is not maan he completely lost in geet. Yesterday's phone convo changed him completely. Before they fought with each other n maan use to think how to say sorry. But now they became friends. Suddenly someone called him

maan.

He turned n saw geet. He is surprised to see her here.

Hey geet, tum yaha??

geet? Who is geet. Sir I am rosy.

oh.. ummm sorry rosy.

Rosy smiled n told its ok sir.

Tell me whats the matter.

Sir for next 10 days I cant come to class sir.

Any problem rosy??

umm nothing sir, my dad is ot well. So have to take care of him.

Ok rosy, if u need any help or any money problem u can ask me. Dont worry he will be fine.

Sur sir, thanku sir.

Ok rosy. Anything do u want to say??

umm.. who is geet sir?

Maan is surprised by her question but smiled n told she is my friend.

Ohhh' all the best sir. Bye smiled rosy n left from there.

Maan just smiled thinking about his behaviour.

Maan: we just met 2 days back n I am not able to forget her. Geet she is just magic. Kya jadoo kar diya geet tumne maan ko. If I close my eyes then I can see your smiling face, your gussa. Pata hain geet tum gussa karti ho na bohot cute lagti ho. Woo lal lal naak, just want to pull your cheeks.

Awww maan u want to pull my cheeks came a voice.

Geet tum sach mein yaha ho?? asked maan without turning back.

Ha maan I am here only in your heart told geet.

Ha geet no one effected me in such a short span. Tum hamesha meri dil main rahogi told maan n turned to face her.

He saw her angelic face smiling at him. Maan was completely lost in her n moved forward to touch her. When he was about to touch her geet gayab ho gayi.

Maan closed his eyes n smiled n thought u r driving me crazy geet. I am hallucinating. Muje yaha acha nahi lag raha hain. Main ghar chala jaata hu.

Maan left from there n headed to his house.

On the other side pari came out of her college feeling expremely tired. Her face is so dull n pale.

Pari: oh god this head ache is killing me. Di ko phone karu. No no she might be busy. I have to wait for cab now.

She is waiting for cab just then maan is going on the other side in his car. When he saw pari waiting for cab on the other side of the road. He turned his car n went near her n got out of the car.

Hii pari.

Hii maan bhai. How r u?? asked pari but he can easily sense the dullness on her face.

I am fine pari. But r u fine? Tumari tabiyat tho thik hain na?? asked maan.

Nothing bhai.. thoda sa head ache told pari.

R u waiting for ur di?? asked maan.

No bhai cab ke liye wait kar rahi hu told pari.

ok.. come I will drop u.

no bhai its ok. Aapko parshan kyun?? I will go.

Kyun pari muje tum apna bhai nahi maanti told maan making sad face.

Nahi bhai aisa nahi hain.. main bus aise hi.

Thik hain I will drop u. u tell me the route.

With no other option pari told ok bhai.

They both settled in the car n maan started driving..

pari give me the address n u rest.

Nahi bhai its ok.. aapse baat karne ka itna acha mauka mila told pari n smiled.

Maan too smiled n asked acha?? kya baat karna chati ho?

Aapko pata hain bhai I didnt even miss even a single show of yours. I too love dance very much bhai.

Wow u too love dance. Did u learn anywhere??

Ha bhai when I was in school I use to go to dance class. Par ab chod di told pari making sad face.

Aisa kyun??

dad ke death ke baad'

oh ok I am sorry.

Nahi bhai its ok.

U can learn now na??

ha bhai par financial problems. We all r dependent on di. She have to pay my college fees. Ghar ka karcha aur yeh sab tho mushkil hota hain.

Maan was surprised to hear this when he met pari in mall he thought she is a careless girl who dont care anything. But hearing what she is told is absolutely shocking for him.

Kya hua bhai??

Ek baat bolu? Tum gussa nahi karna tumari di ki tarah.

Ohh bhai main aur gussa no way. U tell.

I didnt expect that u care about your family so much.

Pari just smiled at him knowing what he is telling.

Nahi bhai.. main pehle aise hi thi but ab nahi. Pata nahi dad ke death ke baad di ko kya hua? She became so silent n she forgot how to smile. Dad n di r like best friends, she misses him a lot. Aapko ek aur baat batao?

Bolo pari.

Yesterday she met u n came na she was very dull n locked herself in the room.

WHAT?? but why?? I didnt hurt her na.

Nahi bhai aisa nahi hain. Actually u asked her na that u will get gussa very easily.

Haa main tho bas to cheer her up I told.

Hmm dad use to tell her the same. Aapne bhi kaha tha na so she became very dull. Di ne kaha ki u will talk like dad smiled pari.

Maan too smiled at her. After that they both became silent. After 10 min they reached pari's house.

Ok pari, take care if u have any problem call me. This is my number told maan.

Bhai come in na.

No pari its ok.

No bhai u have to come. Plz plz told pari n made a puppy face.

Maan smied n told ok.

Thanku bhai. Come.

Maan parked his car n both of them went into the apartment.

Pari rang the bell. Rano came n opened the door.

Pari beta itni jaldi aagaye?

Ha maa mujhe thoda sa sar dard ho raha hain isiliye.

Sar dard?? come in I will give u medicine.

Arey maa yeh sab chodo dont u invite our guest inside told pari.

Guest??

ha maa, he is maan singh khurana.

Namaste aunty.

Namaste beta. Aap andar ayiye na.

Ji aunty.

Maan n pari entered the house. He sat on the couch n admiring the house. The room is decorated with flower vases n different decorative items. Different pics pf geet-pari, geet-rano, geet-her dad and whole family photo.

Beta pani told rano n gave him water.

Thanku aunty.

Bhai what u drink coffee, tea ya juice.

Nahi pari I dont want anything.

Aise kaise bhai, first time u came here. U have to take something.

Ok ok.. coffee??

ok bhai sure.

Maan smiled n when pari was about to go she heard someone.

Mujhe bhi ek coffee.

She turned back n saw her mamaji.

Mamaji aap?? when u came asked pari excitedly.

Bhai when u came asked rano.

I am having some work in delhi so I came here. Aur aap logon ke milne ka mann kar raha tha told rano's bro.

Acha kiya aap yaha aake told rano.

U sit mamaji, I will bring coffee told pari.

Bhai, he is maan told rano.

Hello uncle wished maan.

Hello beta wished mamaji.

They had chit chat for some time. Pari \prepared coffee for all and served them.

They all had coffee.

Pari, aunty I will leave now.

Ok beta. Next time lunch ke liye zaroor aana told rano.

Ok aunty sure.

Sorry bhai di abi tak nahi ayi told pari.

Arey koi baat nahi. I will meet her next time.

Mamaji who is listening to them suddenly got alerted when he heard geet's name which didnt get unnoticed by maan.

Maan bid good bye and left from there.

Maan got into his car, just then geet entered her apartment.


Edited by jyooo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Chapter 11



Maan bid good bye and left from there.

Maan got into his car, just then geet entered her apartment.

When geet entered her house she is shocked to see her mamaji there. After her dad's death he never came to meet them then why today. The words which her father told on his deathbed are ringing in her ears. Her blood is boling inside seeing him that person who killed her father. Fear in her eyes seeing him n anger in her eyes n helplessness that she cant do anything.

Just then mamaji saw her n asked how r u geet beta?

She glared at him angrily n was about to leave from there rano came.

Arey geet, when u came?

Just now maa.

See ur mamaji came after many years dont u talk with him. I know u r very angry on him for coming after a long time.

Nahi maa I am not angry on anyone.

Thank god geet u r not angry said mamaji smirking.

Ok u both talk I will prepare coffee for u geet told rano n left from there.

Arey geet baito na tum kadi kyun ho? Asked mamaji sarcastically.

Just then maan came there as he forgot his mobile there. But he stopped at the entrance when he listened to geet.

Y u came here? Ab kya chahiye aapko?

Arey geet shant ho jao. I just came to meet u dear. How u r n ur mother n sister.

Hum bohot khush hain. Aap jayiye yaha se. chale jayiye.mujhe aapke shakal bhi na dekhna told geet angrily..

Itna gussa geet, main 2-3 din yaha rehna chata hu.

Jab tak aap iss ghar mein ho tab tak main nahi aongi told geet angrily.

Just then rano came there with coffee.

Geet beta coffee.

Maa muje office ka kaam hain, main aur meri friend milkar karna hain. So I ill go to her place.

Lekin geet…

plzzz maa. Let me go.

Thik hain tumari marzi. Aur ha thik se khana ok??

ofho maa sirf ek din ke liye jaa rahi hu saying so geet took her bag n left from there without glaring at mamaji.she just dont want to see his face again so she left from there.

Maan hid aside so that geet not see him. When geet left from there maan called rano.

Aunty..

she is surprised to see him.

Maan beta aap?

Sorry aunty wo main mobile bhool gaya.

Its ok beta. Come.

Maan entered n took his mobile n left from there. Now he is worried about geet where she went without informing anyone.

Maan came down n saw geet nowhere.

Maan (st): kaha chali gayi. Aur wo apne mamaji se aisa kyun baat kar rahi thi. Mujhe geet se baat karna hain. Par wo kaha chali gayi. Ha I will call her.

Maan tried her mobile its ringing her she is not picking her phone. But maan's heard her mobile ringing.

Geet ka mobile yahi kahi baj raha hain. I will search her.

He went inside the parking lot still tryng her mobile. He was moving forward and her cell ring is getting clearer.

Maan spotted her, he was shocked to see her in that condition. She sat in the corner n hugged her knees tight n was crying bitterly.

Maan was hell shocked n worried seeing geet like that. He sat on his knees in front of her n kept his hand on her shoulder.

Geet called maan.

Geet looked at him, her face is covered with tears. She is just looking at him blankly without any emotions.

Geet, geet kya hua?? tum ro kyun rahi ho??

maan said geet n hugged him tight.

Maan wo.. aagaya phir se. he came back.

Who geet?? nothing will happen to u geet. I am there for u.

plzz maan I dont want to stay here. Plz take me somewhere. Plz maan requested geet still hugging him.

Shh geet main hu na. Chalo we will go from here.

Sachi?? u will take me from here na?

Ha geet. Chalo.

Maan stood n made her stand. He placed his hands on her shoulders protectively n made her sit in the car. He put the seat belt on n started the car. The drive was so silent only the sobs of geet are heard. But maan didnt say anything.

Maan (st): let her cry I dont want to say anything now. I dont know whats the matter but she is holding back her pain in her from long time. But today it is coming out. Let her feel light, if I console her now she can never come out of her grief.

After some time geet stopped crying but it is raining heavily outside. Suddenly he car stopped. Geet looked at him n asked what happened maan?

Dont know geet I will see to it. U wait in the car.

But maan its raining heavily told geet.

Dont worry geet, I will just check n come.

Ok fine.

Maan got off the car n opened the bonnet of the car to check whats wrong. Maan dont know whats wrong with the car.

Geet is watching out of the window enjoying the rain with a smile on her face. She is remembering all those moments which she spent in rain with her father.

~~flashback~~

geet is 10 years old. It is raining heavily. Just then geet came from school, kept her school bag aside n she started playing in the rain n dancing streching her arms.

Suddenly her dad shouted from inside.

Geet beta come inside. U will catch cold if u play in rain.

10 years sweet geet didnt listen to him n continued playing. Seeing her not getting into the house. He bought umbrella n came outside.

But he smiled seeing his daughter dancing in the rain. He throwed the umbrella aside n took her n his arms.

Dad u too play with me. Its so nice here told geet in her sweet voice.

Dad n geet started playing, dancing n getting fully drenched in the rain.

Rano came there n was shocked to see them.

Yeh aap dono kya kar rahe ho? Chaliye andar chaliye.

Maa u too come na told geet.

Ha ranoji aap bhi ayiye told dad.

First u two come in. hayee rabba yeh kya kiya aap dono ne. agar sardi hua tho.

Kuch nahi hoga maa.

Mohinder n geet dragged her in the rain. she too started enjoying with them. after sometime she dragged them inside. N dried their hair. Geet n dad r just smiling at her while she is giving angry glare for making her get wet in the rain.

~~flashback end~~

geet had tears in her eyes, she came out of the car n stretched her arms n told miss u dad.

Maan saw her n told geet u go inside u will catch cold.

Geet saw him n smiled with teary eyes. Seeing her tears maan got worried n went to her n asked

geet, r u fine?

Yes maan I am fine. Maan aapko pata hain I wont do friendship so easily with anyone. But aap kitne ache hain. Jab main aapse baat karti hu tho mujhe bohot acha lagta hain. After many I smiled because of u, I talked with u whole night, that was very unusual told geet getting emotional.

Maan is just staring at her seeing her innocence.

Maan u will never leave me na? Asked geet with HOPE in her eyes.

Maan was just lost in her face n was shocked to the hope in her eyes.

Never geet, I will never leave u n go. Its my promise geet.

Thanku so much maan told geet n hugged him tight.

Maan too hugged her tight, because now she need him, his support. From many years she is suffering from loneliness, ofcourse her mom n sister are there but she never expressed her emotions to anyone. But when time comes somewhere, somehow, to somwone they have to express. Today the day has come, unknowingly she started believing him. He came to her life like a small ray of hope.

They broke the hug n maan told geet we need a machanic, now no one will be there I think. We will see for nearby shelter.

Geet just nodded feeling embrassed for hugging him but she didnt felt wrong. She felt safe in his arms as if she belong there.

Maan took some packet from the car n they started walking. After like 30 min walk they found a small hut. They reached there n maan asked andar koi hain

they didnt any response. He slighly opened the door n found no one.

Come geet lets go in.

maan we dont know whose house is this?

Geet its raining heavily n we cant stay outside right??

ok maan told geet uncomfortably.

Geet dont get tensed just for few hours.

ok..

they both went in n saw there is one small bed n a chair there.

They both r fully wet n geet is shivering due to cold. Maan saw that n he gave the packet to her.

Geet these r my clothes change into this.

But maan for u??

no problem geet. I have 2 shirts I will keep them for emergency.

there is a small partition in the room. Geet went there to change.

Here maan too changed into pants n vests.

After some time geet came out wearing his shirt which cae upto her knees. She is pulling dowm to cover but its no use. She is feeling so awkward standing in front of a guy in his shirt.

Maan saw her n was lost in her beauty. Her slender legs, her milky skin, shivering lips n her wet hair, few strands of her hair r falling on her face tickling her senses.

She sat on one corner of the bed trying to cover herself. Maan saw her condition n took the blanket which is there on the bed n covered her.

Geet was surprised with his sudden action n smiled at him.

Now her respect on him increased thousand folds.

Both are feeling so akward so maan decided to lighten the mood.

So geet how is your job going on?

Geet sighed in relief n told good maan. But its so hectic.

Oh.. where did u complete ur studies geet?

5 years back we came here n I completed my studies here only. After that job. I dont want pari to suffer like me.

Thats good geet.

Geet smiled n asked waise why did u choose dance when there r many other options?

Why geet dance karna koi paap hain kya?

Ofcourse not maan. See now a days we see many engineers, architects n many others.

Yes geet even I completed my architecture n worked for a company for 6 months. But I felt bored like morning 9 se leke 7 tak. Routine life I want to try something different n I love dance from childhood, its my dream to become dancer. N now I am here.

Thats really great maan. How did ur family react when u said about ur decision?

I have no family geet. I am an orphan n spent my childhood in orphanage.

I am so sorry maan.

Dont be geet I am happy in my life. I treat people around me as mine.

Being such a great dancer also u r so down to earth.

I am like this only geet. Waise can I ask u something?

Geet smiled n told ha maan. Wow its really miracle the great maan singh khurana is taking permission before talking.

Very funny geet.

Poocho maan..

wo.. wo.. sorry geet actually I heard ur talk with your mamaji.

Geet is shocked to hear this.

Aap? How??

actually I came there to drop pari n forgot my mobile.

oh..

kya hua geet?? why u talked with him like that??

tears formed in her eyes n dont know what to tell. Kya geet apne dard ke baareme bol payegi. The hard truth of her life.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Chapter 12



kya hua geet?? why u talked with him like that??

tears formed in her eyes n dont know what to tell. Kya geet apne dard ke baareme bol payegi. The hard truth of her life. How much she is trying to forget that bitter past n live happily. When she is finding her happiness again he came and spoiled all. How can she tell her mother that her brother did all this. He snatched all their property from her dad n killed him. Even if her mother knows will she be able to tolerate this ??

I am sorry geet , I didnt mean to hurt u told maan.

No maan y u r sorry. But I am sorry maan I cant tell anything now. I need some time.

Its ok geet. Thats not at all a problem.

Thanku maan.

Geet I dont know what is ur problem, but as a friend I wanna say something.

Bolo maan.

See geet we face a lot in our life. Life is full of up's and down's but never we should loose our hope. Be strong geet, u have to fight but not become weak by facing them.

Yes what u told is right. We should not be weak. But what to do maan, the condition which I am facing is not making me strong. How much I try I am able to forget the past.

Geet dont forget them if u want to fight. But at the same time we have to face the fact. I know geet u r not the same geet which u r now, but geet dont change yourself for the sake of others. They will try to take advantage of the situation.

Thanku very much, your words bought a new energy in me.

Geet I am there with u always. Feel free to tell me told maan n smiled.

Thanku so much maan. I am indeed very lucky to have a friend like u n hugged maan.

Maan was taken aback with her sudden action but understood that she need a shoulder now. Maan too hugged her n rubbing her back to calm down. Geet is feeling solace in his arms.

They broke the hug n geet is feeling embrassed by her act. Maan noticed that n told

Geet go to sleep now. Its already late. U sleep here I will sleep on the chair.

Maan its ok u sleep here I will go there.

No problem geet. U sleep good night.

Good night maan.

Geet slept on the bed n maan slept on the chair in sitting position. Maan is thinking about geet, how much she care about her family n she is not showing her pain to her family. But the one question is that why is she talking with her mamaji like that? But pari was so excited seeing him but why not geet? So there is something even pari also doesnt know. Thinking about geet he dossed off.

Here geet is thinking about maan's words. We should not be weak, we have to fight for justice n have to face them.

Geet: yes what maan told is true, I should not run away from him. I didnt do anything wrong, so I shouldnot be afraid. That mamaji should be punished n I will make sure he is behind bars. Thanku maan for giving me strength.

Geet too dossed off.

Next morning:

geet slowly opened her eyes feeling the sun rays, she is feeling so peace n light. Then she saw maan who is standing near the window n talking on phone with some one.

We r near ****** . come soon adi.

Thik hain baba aaraha hu. Chillao mat told adi n cut the call.

Geet sat on the bed still covered with blanket. She wrapped it around and got up. Maan saw her n smiled.

Good morning geet. Hope u slept well.

Geet too smiled n wished good morning maan.

Geet get ready adi will be coming.

Ok maan.

Geet took her salwar suit n went to the partition to change. After sometime she came back ready. She was so nervous what will adi think of them.

Maan wo.. wo.. I will go home.

Geet sorry I think u r getting late. Just 5 min. adi will be coming by now.

But maan wo.. wo.. told geet hesitantly.

Kya hua geet?? koi problem asked maan with concern.

Actually wo adi.. what he..

Geet dont worry I told adi that we are stuck here. He wont think anything. I am there na.

Geet just looked at him n smiled ok maan.

Somewhere deep in her heart she started believing him. The small small gestures made by him made her happy n relieved.

After sometime adi came there in a cab. He got down n saw maan n geet are waiting for him.

Good morning guys wished adi.

They smiled n wished him back.

Guys u go in the cab, I will go with machanic n drive car to home. Ok?? asked adi.

Ok adi, we will go. Tum bhi jaldi aajana.

Ok bye. Bye geet.

Bye adi.

Maan n geet got into the cab n drove from there.

Geet u r going home right??

yes maan, I will go home said geet with confidence.

Maan smiled n told darna mat geet.

Sure maan.

They talked about general things for sometime n reached geet's home.

Geet got down n told come inside maan.

No geet its ok. I am getting late.

Ok maan. But next time pakka u should come asked geet making baby face.

Ok geet pakka. Waise geet main ek baat bolu?

Maaan…

ok ok I will tell. Actually main kal pari se baat ki thi she told that she is interested in dance.

Yes maan she loves dance but she discontinued.

But she didnt loose interest geet, if u dont mind she can join in my dance school.

Thanku maan, I will talk to her n let u know.

Ok geet. Bye, see u soon.

See u soon in ur dance school. Bye.

Maan smiled n left from there.

Geet went to her apartment n rang the bell. Pari opened the door n smiled at her.

Hii dii.. kaha thi aap?

Kuch kaam tha isiliye friend ke ghar gayi thi.

Acha come, coffee??

sure told geet and smiled.

Maa di came shouted pari.

Rano came there with coffee n gave to her.

Hogaya kaam?? asked rano.

Ha maa hogaya. Main fresh hokar ati hu. I am running late.

Geet thoda aaram karo, u look tired told rano.

Nahi maa aaj presentation hain office main told geet n left from there.

Hamesha kaam kaam, kuch nahi sochti apne baare mein sighed rano n went to kitchen.

Geet got ready n came down n saw her mamaji reading news paper. He saw geet n surprised,

arey geet yesterday u told u wont enter into this house until I am here??

y should I go out of my house. Its u who have to leave, agar aap kuch bhi kijiye I dont care told geet confidently.

Acha?? great ek hi raat mein itna change? Asked mamaji sarcastically.

Aap apna kaam kijiye. Dont interfere in my life, main jo karti hu aapko usse kuch nahi lena dena. Mind your own work said geet n left to kitchen.

Here mamaji fumed seeing he has no effect on her.

Geet went to kitchen n saw her mom packing her lunch.

Maa I will do it. U have breakfast told geet.

Rano smiled n told thik hain we will have breakfast.

Call pari too maa.

Ok beta..

maa called pari n mamaji too. They all sat in dining area n having their breakfast.

Pari how r ur studies going on?? asked geet.

Fine di, last week 1st term exams completed.

Ok that fine. Pari do u want to continue your dance school?

Pari is shocked to listen this n told no di nothing like that.

But yesterday u told to maan that u r still interested?? asked geet rising her eyebrows.

wo.. di main tho bas…

dont lie pari I know my sister. U can join I dont have any problem.

Its ok di, u r doing a lot now n I dont want to burden u more..

Just shut up ok, dekho maa kaisi badi badi batein kar rahi hain. Burden?? kyun main tumari di nahi hu kya? Asked geet faking anger.

Arey di nothing like that ok baba I will join again.

Thats like a good girl told geet n smiled.

Rano had tears in her eyes seeing them like that.

Geet n pari saw rano n told not again maa.

Badmash.. chup karo tum dono.

Mamaji didnt utter a word. He thought geet wont face him after that incident but she seem to be changed n her confidence is very danger. So he thought of leaving today only.

Rano, mera kaam hogaya. Main aaj chalta hu told mamaji.

Bhai itni jaldi asked rano.

Ha rano mujhe waha kuch kaam hain.

Phir zaroor ana mamaji told geet sarcastically n smirked.

Mamaji smiled nervously.

Ok maa, main chalti hu. Pari evening be ready ok??

kyun?? asked pari.

Ofho.. u forgot dance school??

ya ya di but where??

surprise.. told geet n smiled.

Di di plz batao na asked pari making baby face.

Bye pari told geet n smiled.

Pari pouted but then laughed.

The whole day went well for maan, geet n pari. Geet gave her presentation well n they got the project.

Evening adi went to maan's dance school n gave him his car keys.

Ye le tumara car keys told adi.

Thanks dude.

Hmm kya chal raha hain.

Kuch nahi.. next program ke baare mein soch raha hu.

Adi rolled his eyes n asked maan uske baare mein nahi ??

maan looked at him confusingly n asked then what??

geet ke baare mein asked pinky entering into his cabin.

Hey pinly how r u??

bhai yeh sab chodiye, I am asking u seriously bhai, do u love geet?

Maan looked at her n told confidently yes.

Adi n pinky are very happy but maan continued but pinky I dont know anything about geet. And I dont want to take any step so fast, first let us understand each other. If she too feels the same then I will be very happy. If she dont loves me then also it is ok. I want her to be happy nothing more than that.

Pinky has tears in her eyes bhai what u r saying is true, pinky held his hand n told bhai she suffered a lot, I am sure that she will be happy with u. dont ever be angry on her, she just cant loose anyone more in her life. She deserves to be happy bhai. I am seeing her from few days she seems to be happy n chirpy like before. U can only bring her back bhai.

Pinky holded her hands n told dont ever hurt her bhai.

Maan immediately held her hand n told pinky yeh tum kya kar rahi ho. Maan hugged her n told nahi pinky I will never hurt her in my life. I love her very much, I promise u pinky.

Pinky broke the hug n smiled with tears in her eyes. Maan wiped the tears n told dont cry yaar nahi tho tumara adi mujhe kacha ka jayega.

Pinky giggled n adi gave him a angry glare.

They 3 chit chatted for sometime, cracking jokes n pulling each others leg mainly maan's.

Geet after office went home n saw pari full ready n looking excited.

Arey wah pari, u r ready?? asked geet amused.

Ha di I am ready, tum bhi jao aur jaldi jaldi ready hojao.

Oyy let me rest for sometime.

What?? rest?? no way u go n get ready.

Atleast let me have tea asked geet.

Di u can have afterwards first go n get ready plz.

Acha baba I am going. Just 15 min.

nahi di only 5 min…

pariii

ok ok but come fast.

Geet smiled n went to her room. Here pari is so so so excited to join dance school again. Geet came to hall after some time.

Chale pari..

yes di told pari n literally dragged her from there.

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Precap: geet n pari in dance school.

Small leap n **** news. Any guesses guys what will be?


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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Chapter 13

Geet smiled n went to her room. Here pari is so so so excited to join dance school again. Geet came to hall after some time.

Chale pari..

yes di told pari n literally dragged her from there.

Geet n pari took the cab n headed to dance school. Pari was silent for 5 min but after that she started asking geet that where they are going.

Di plz atleast now tell me where we r going?

Dance school told geet casually.

Yeh joke, then it is a very bad joke told pari angrily.

Aww meri pyaari si behen ko gussa aya ppch told geet smiling.

Di di di plz requested pari.

Driver bhaiya side mein ruko na told geet.

Ji madam told driver n stopped the car.

Pari get down told geet.

Nahi first u tell me where we r going asked pari without realising that they reached maan's dance school.

Ok I am going inside. U sit in the car only told geet.

Wow di we reached?? asked pari excitedly.

Ji madam told geet.

Pari got down n was shocked to see that they in front of maan's dance school.

Di hum yaha?? asked pari confusingly.

Arey chalo tho andar told geet smiling at her sister.

Di I am gonna join here asked pari with excitement.

Ha par, tum khush hona asked geet.

Thanku so much di, I am very happy, u r the best di told pari n hugged geet.

Geet too hugged her back n told I want u to be happy pari, tum hamari princess ho. How can I see my princess sad bolo??

pari broke the hug n told di thanku so much, I am very happy today di.

Geet carassed her hair n told andar chale.

Ha di chalo told pari.

They both went inside n saw many students are practicing n maan is teaching few students. Pari is just staring at their dancing, she was so lost. Maan saw them n smiled.

He excused himself n came to them.

Hii geet, hi pari.

Geet smiled n told hii maan, how r u?? (me wondering, r they meeting for first time no na, then yeh formality kyun?? yeh geet bhi na… babaji… )

I am fine geet told maan then noticed pari who is lost.

Hello pari told maan n waved his hand.

Pari came out of his trance n told hello bhai, sorry.

Maan n geet smiled at her n maan asked so what bought u here??

Pari smiled n told I am gonna resume my dance classes. Can I join here??

maan too smiled n told ofcourse, welcome to our dance school.

Thanku bhai told pari.

Geet u sit in my cabin, I will just come now told maan.

Ok maan.

Pari u come with me.

Ok bhai told pari n followed maan.

Meanwhile geet entered maan's cabin n settled on the couch. She looked around the cabin it is simple yet beautiful. By seeing the colours in the cabin she can imagine that maan is a full of life person.

Here maan introduced pari to all.

Hello friends, just a small announcement, she is pari our new student. Plz welcome her told maan.

Hii pari wished all with a smile.

Hii guys pari too wished all.

So pari once again welcome to our dance school. The class timings are from 6 pm to 8 pm, u can come at any time n practice. Ok??

ok bhai, oops sir.

Hey no formalities we all are friends here. Haina guys??

yes sir replied all.

Ok come to my cabin have to fill application n then we can practice.

Ok bhai.

Maan n pari entered n saw geet reading some magazine. Geet saw them n smiled.

She didnt miss the glow in pari's eyes.

Baito pari told maan.

Pari settled beside geet n maan gave her the form to fill it up.

Pari filled the form.

Pari u can join from tomorrow told maan.

Sure bhai.

Just then pari's mobile rang.

Excuse me, I will be back.

Ok told geet.

So geet r u fine now?? asked maan.

Yes maan I am absolutely fine now told geet n smiled.

U look good when u smile geet, so practice smiling told maan n laughed.

Very funny maan told geet with fake anger n she too laughed.

Waise geet I didnt expect u today here told maan.

Ha maan when u told about pari I felt so bad because of me she is sacrificing her passion, I didnt like that. I want her to be happy told geet n a lone tear escaped from her eyes.

Sorry geet I didnt mean to hurt u told maan.

Arey maan kitne sorry bolte ho aap.. uff told geet to lighten the situation.

Geet tum bhi na told maan n smiled.

They both talked for some time n pari came into the cabin.

Sorry guys friend ka call tha told pari.

Its ok told geet.

Hey I forgot coffee, tea or any soft drink?? asked maan.

No maan its ok thanks told geet.

Arey aise kaise u have to take something told maan stubbornly.

Hmm ok tea told geet.

Maan ordered 2 cups tea n coffee for him.

A boy bought tea n maan served them. They all enjoyed their drinks talking with each other.

After some time geet n pari left from there bidding good bye to maan.

Next day onwards pari joined the dance class, she is really enjoying again. Her passion for dance making her learn more n more. Geet is very happy seeing her little sister happy.

Some times geet too accompany her to the class.

Maan n geet became good friends rather say best friends.

6 months passed. Geet n maan almost met daily, maan use to visit geet's house n geet too.

They share each n every thing happening in their life. Their bonding became strong.

Rano n pari are very happy seeing geet. They liked maan too.

Rano liked maan n want maan n geet to get married. Because she knows that maan is responsible for geet's happiness. Rano treated him like her own son n maan too called her as maa. They shared a strong bond. He got mother's love in the form of rano.

One day all are in maan's house for dinner. Pari n geet are watching tv in the hall where as maan n rano are preparing dinner.

Maa aap aaram kijiye I will prepare dinner na told maan.

Arey beta no problem I will help u told rano.

Maa I told na, once u eat the food made by me, it will be really tasty told maan n raised his collar.

Rano laughted at his antics, just then geet came there for water n heard their conversation.

Ahaaa we should decide whether the food is tasty or not told geet.

Geet, tum na thoda sa sharam karo u even dont know how to prepare tea scolded rano.

Geet rolled her eyed n told thik hain today I will prepare parathas. Dekhiye aap sab.

Geet we want live our life happily yaar joked maan.

Rano too laughed at his comment.

Ha ha hasiye hasiye, jab main prepare karti hu na tab aapko pata chalega told geet with determination to prepare parathas.

Babaji kaha phas gaye hum thought rano.

U both go I will call u when the food is ready told geet n literally pushed them out.

Maan n rano left from there.

Here geet tho challenge kiya but she dont know how to make parathas atleast which flour to use.

She is searching here n there for ingredients but no use she dont know anything.

Geet made a baby face n looked up n complained to her babaji,

babaji ab main kya karu mujhe tho kuch bhi nahi pata, aue challenge kiya ki I will prepare food today.

Just then maan came there to see what she is doing but when he heard her complaint to her babaji he laughed out loud.

Geet saw him n frowned.

Why u r laughing?? asked geet making sad face.

Maan came near her n told so madam abhi tak kuch bhi start nahi ki.

Geet made a baby face n told I dont know what to use.

Maan smiled n told dont worry yaar, u sit here I will prepare.

Geet smiled n asked sachi??

hmmm replied maan while taking out the flour.

He took the bowl n started mixing the flour, geet is lost watching him.

In these 6 months they became very close but maan didnt propose geet still. But geet too started feeling something for maan. But she is just fighting with herself that he is just a friend. But his care, love made her fall for him more n more. Somewhere she too came to know that maan loves her.

But both of them didnt dare to utter a word about that matter.

Geet thought what if he is just taking care as a friend, what if he dont love her, she dont want to spoil their friendship.

Here maan's love for her increaed 100 folds. He is falling for her again n again. Somewhere he is also thinking that geet too loves him. But didnt dare to utter a word. They both enjoyed each n every moment with each other. They both attended different shows performed by maan. Now a days they meet daily in the dance school. Its like they both cannot live without each other. The endless phone calls at nights, they talk every thing to nothing.

Geet came out of her trance when maan called her,

geet..

umm… maan I am sorry, I was thinking something.

Hmm dinner is ready told maan.

Wow really?? itni jaldi. U r great maan told geet excitedly n hugged maan unknowingly.

Maan was shocked by her sudden action.

Geet broke the hug n told sorry in embrassement.

Chalo geet dinner karte hain told maan.

Geet just nodded n followed maan silently.

So geet dinner prepare ki tumne asked rano.

Geet made a baby face n looked at maan.

Ha maa geet prepared dinner today told maan.

Ahh dont lie bhai, geet di dont know how prepare even tea. We know that u only prepared dinner told pari.

Ha thik hain I didnt prepare, ab khush told geet angrily.

They all laughed at her n had their dinner talking with each other n enjoying.

After some time they completed n rano told maan ab hum chalte hain.

Maa its already late, stay here for today u can go tomorrow told maan.

Par maan, we… rano was about to say something.

Maan made a sad face n told kyun maa, main aapke beta nahi hu na.

Arey nahi nahi aisa nahi hain told rano.

Then u r staying na told maan excitedly.

Rano sighed n told ok baba. We will stay here only.

Thanku maa told maan n hugged rano.

Rano smiled n hugged him back.

Geet n pari smiled.

Geet made a sad face n told maa aapne humse itne pyaar kabhi nahi baat ki.

Ha main tho beta hu na told maan n rested his head on her lap.

Rano lovingly carassed his hair n smiled.

Geet made a fake angry face n all of them laughed at her antics n geet too joined them.

After some time maan told maa aap aaram kijiye.

Rano nodded n maan showed her the guest room.

Rano lied on the bed n closed her eyes n thought about todays incidents n smiled.

She dossed off feeling peace after long time.

Here pari too left to the guest room n dossed off.

Geet sat on the couch, just then maan came there n asked neend nahi aarahi hain kya??

nahi maan, tumko bhi?? asked geet.

Hmmm replied maan.

Waise u cook very well maan told geet.

Thanku madam told maan n bowed.

Geet laughed at his antics n hugged her knees feeling cold.

Thand lag rahi hain?? asked maan.

Ha told geet.

Wait I will get u a shawl told maan.

When maan was about to go geet stopped him by holding his wrist.

Kya hua geet?? asked maan.

Dont go maan told geet.

Maan sat beside geet n held her hand tightly.

Geet rested her head on maan's shoulder n closed her eyes. Maan too side hugged her n closed his eyes feeling his love near to him.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Chapter 14


Maan sat beside geet n held her hand tightly.

Geet rested her head on maan's shoulder n closed her eyes. Maan too side hugged her n closed his eyes feeling his love near to him.

They both slept peacefully in each others arms. This is the best night ever for both of them. Geet cuddled more to maan n rested her head on his chest n slept listening to his heartbeat. There is a smile on their faces.

In the mid night geet stirred a little n opened her eyes slowly. When she opened her eyes she saw maan sleeping peacefully with a smile on his face. She is lost in him admiring him openly. A smile curved her lips n carassed his lovingly.

Feeling smooth skin aganist his skin maan stirred a little, when geet saw that she immediately closed her eyes n pretended to sleep.

But who told that our maan is sleeping being her so close to him how can he sleep.

Maan smiled when she carassed his face. Again seeing her pretending to sleep he smiled inwardly.

When he saw the time its 10 min to 12. He moved a little n called geet.

Geet…

Geet who is pretending to be fast asleep is confused. But she didnt get up.

Maan smiled seeing her action.

Geet called maan this time little loudly.

Geet slowly opened her eyes n looked at him with confusion.

Yes maan asked geet.

Sorry for disturbing geet but I want u to come with me told maan.

Geet looked at him questioningly n asked where maan??

plz come with me asked maan.

Geet smiled seeing his sad face n told ok maan lets go.

Wow thanku, come fast then told maan n literally dragged her to terrace.

Meanwhile maan blindfolded geet.

Maan what r u doing?? asked geet.

Just wait geet told maan.

Once they reached the terrace maan told geet just stand here I will come.

Maan whats happening ?? asked geet.

Geet cant u be quite for 5 min asked maan doing his work.

Ok ok sorry told geet n twisted her lips.

Maan smiled at her antics n removed the blindfold. Geet slowly opened her eyes n saw the whole terrace is lighted with candles n in the middle there is a table fully decorated with orchids n red roses and a cake on it.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY GEET told maan.

Pari came from behind n hugged her n wished HAPPY BIRTHDAT DI.

Geet had tears in her eyes n hugged pari tight n told thanku gudiya.

Geet broke the hug n told thanku so much maan.

Come geet told maan n they all went near table.

Geet took the knife n cut the cake.

First she fed it to pari, n pari too fed geet.

Geet took another piece n fed it to maan, n maan too did the same.

How did u like the arrangements geet?? asked maan.

Beautiful maan, I just loved it told geet n smiled at him.

Pari took out a small box n gave it to geet.

Di this is for u.

pari iss sab ki kya zaroorat. Hmm ??

Ahh di its my first gift for u, so plz..

geet smiled n took the box from her.

She opened the box n found payal in it. Geet looked at her surprised n pari smiled.

I know di u love wearing payal. So this is for u told pari n hugged geet.

Geet too hugged her back.

Pari broke the hug n told di we r celebrating ur birthday after so many years hain na??

ha pari.

I am very happy by seeing u happy. Thanku maan bhai for arranging all this.

Maan smiled at both the sisters. He is very happy seeing them happy mainly geet.

They all chit chatted for some time n pari told di I am feeling sleepy. Good night di, good night bhai.

Good night pari told maneet.

Pari left from there n both maan n geet sat in silence for some time.

So geet decided to break the silence n told thanku maan for the surprise.

Maan smiled at her n told I cant do this small thing for my friend.

No nothing like that, today I am feeling very happy maan, after so many years I am celebrating my birthday actually I forgot that today is my birthday.

I know geet, u think more about ur family more than urself. So their happiness is important for u more than ur self.

Geet smiled at him thinking how well he understood her in these days.

Geet I wanna say u something told maan nervously.

Yes maan.

But u should not get angry n no need to answer me now. Ok??

U r scaring me maan.

Nothing like that geet, actually wo.. wo..

Geet cupped his face n told maan tell me what ever u want to tell. Dont hesitate.

Even geet's heart is also beating fast she never saw maan so hesitant.

Maan sat on his knees in front of geet n told,

I dont know from where to start geet, may after u listen to this u may be shocked or even hate me but I want to express my feelings with u today geet, today is very special day for u, even since our first meeting I am in love with u geet. I met many girls in my life but u r so different from all of them geet, I dont know how n when u became a part of my life. But I cant imagine my life without. My heart beats only for u, because of u today I have mom n sister, from childhood I was craving for mother's love, today I got it in the form of your mom.

In these months I came to know much about u n I fell in love with u again n again, u came into my life like a ray of hope. After meeting u I too had a dream of having family n which u, me, maa, pari n our family. I never expected that a girl change my life, but u did it u changed my life completely. I never felt alone when no one is there at home, because u r always there with me, in each n every though, u r there in my dance which is my life, u r there in each n every dream of mine.

When the first time we talked on the phone, I came to know that u r something different, the different nature of u made me fall for u. I LOVE U GEET, I love u more than my life. Will u be part of my life geet, no no actually my life geet.

Atlast maan looked at her eyes, he was shocked to see tears in her eyes. He thought she felt bad n she dont love him.

Geet I am so sorry I didnt mean to hurt u.

Geet placed her finger on his lips n nodded in a no.

She got up n was in deep thoughts.

Maan came from back n asked geet r u alright??

U know maan this my best birthday gift ever told geet n turned to maan n smiled through tears.

Here maan who is digesting the fact what geet told, but geet ran to him n hugged him tight n crying her heart out.

Maan is on cloud 9 n he too hugged her back.

He let her cry because its necessary, after that he never let her cry. Today will be the last day for all her grief, from tomorrow she will have only happiness in her life.

Geet felt so peace in his arms, slowly slowly she calmed n broke the hug n looked at him lovingly.

Maan smiled at her n wiped her tears. He cupped her cheeks n told dont cry geet, I want u to be happy n I can do anything for that, I am ready to give my life…

No maan dont say like that.

Geet looked into his eyes n told I LOVE U maan, I cant imagine my life without u. because of u today I am smiling n happy. After u came into my life I came out of my shell of past. I cant live without u maan. U became my life unknowingly. I dont know when I fell for u, but being with u made me happy n safe which I never felt in these years. Your words effected me a lot maan, if u r not there with me that night then I dont know what I would have done with myself. U became my strength that day, when u were there with me as a friend when ever I need a friend,

I will be there with u in every part of ur life geet, I will never ever leave u n go told maan n kissed her forehead n cheeks.

Geet blushed feeling his lips on her skin. It was like so soothing for her. She saw that maan on his knees.

Maan what are u doing?

Maan took out a box from his pocket n took out a beautiful ring.

Maan held geet's hand n looked into her eyes deeply n asked will u marry me geet??

Geet is out of world today. Her happiness have no bounds, its like dream for her. She is just staring at him with utmost love n nodded in a yes.

Maan happily slid the ring into her finger n kissed it.

Maan got up n hugged her tight.

Thanku for coming into my life geet told maan.

Thanku for making me this day special maan told geet.

Maan broke the hug n both are lost in each others eyes. Geet tiptoed n kissed his forehead.

Maan smiled at her n kissed her forehead n her eyes one by one.

He then kissed her cheeks which are turned into red by now. He then kissed her chin. He brought his lips close to her but didnt kiss. He kept staring at her seeking for permission. Geet closed her eyes in return. Thats all needed for maan. He closed the distance between their lips. He was so gentle they r just enjoying their closeness n kiss too.

Geet parted her lips allowing him to enter. Maan entered her mouth n parted his lips for geet.

Both are exploring each other. Maan bought her more close to himself by her waist.

Geet's hands went around his neck n kissed him. Both their tongues are playing with each others. The gentle one became a passionate kiss. They kissed for a long time n broke due to lack of air.

Geet's face is flushed n maan side hugged her.

I love u geet.

Geet too held him tight n told I love u maan.

Maan n geet both settled on the couch n maan rested his head on her lap.

Geet carassing his hair lovingly. Their eyes lock n mahiii mahiii moment.

Geet I wanna talk about our marriage with maa immediately.

Geet blushed hearing that. She placed her hand on his heart.

Wow geet, u look so cute when u blush. I just love that color.

Maan aap bhi na told geet n hid her face in her palms.

Maan made her look at him n told I just cant live without u geet.

Main bhi maan told geet.

They both started at each other n maan told suddenly geet I want 3 kids.

3 kids?? asked geet confusingly.

Ha geet, our kids.

Now geet is blushing furiously n lowered her head in shy.

Maan… she is just able to utter his name.

Ha geet, 3 girls who should look same like u. our family u, me, our kids, maa n pari.

Geet is overwhelmed with his love n care. He even included maa n pari in the family.

Geet kissed maan's forehead. Maan is surprised by her sudden kiss n smiled.

But immediately geet pouted,

what happened geet??

Maan 3 girls no no, one girl n 2 boys who look same like MY maan.

Maan smiled n felt completed when she told him as MY maan. He is overwhelmed with her confession.

No no geet, hmm maan thought for sometime n told ok 2 girls n one boy.

Geet smiled n told ok.

They both talked for some time n both dossed off in each others arms. Maan hid his face on her stomach n slept peacefully.

Precap: pari caught red handed maneet (ahem ahem) 😆
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#16
Chapter 15



They both talked for some time n both dossed off in each others arms. Maan hid his face on her stomach n slept peacefully.

Next day morning:

Geet opened her eyes with sunrays on her beautiful face. A smile playing on her lips, she is feeling so special today, no no actually from yesterday night. She lazily opened her eyes n saw her life is sleeping hugging her stomach. She lovingly carassed his face n kissed his forehead n staring at him lovingly. After some time maan too opened his eyes n saw geet staring at him, he smiled n wished her.

Good morning mishty.

Geet smiled n wished good morning maan.

He got up n kissed her forehead n wished happy birthday mishty.

Mishty ?? asked geet questioningly.

What u call sweet heart in hindi asked maan.

Geet blushed n hid her face in his chest.

Maan hugged her holding her waist. Suddenly geet saw the surroundings n reality stuck her that they are on terrace.

Geet broke the hug with horror on her face. Maan is confused by seeing her face n asked,

what happened??

Omg… we r in the terrace what if someone see us here? Asked geet.

So what??

Geet hit maan's arm n told chalo chalo we have to go, maa will be waiting.

Mishty, thodi der ruk jao na asked maan making a baby face.

Geet smiled at him n pulled his cheeks n told awww maan u r looking so cute.

Maan smiled n told really??

yes my dear cutie told geet.

Wow.. cutie what a nice name told maan n smiled.

Waise geet, give me my morning kiss na asked maan.

Geet blushed remembering yesterday's kiss.

Arey geet, y u r blushing I just asked my morning kiss not that kiss told maan teasingly.

Geet slapped his arms n hid her face in his chest.

Maan aap bhi na told geet.

Main bhi kya geet.

U r shameless.. chi chi chi babaji kaise kaise baate kar rahe ho aap told geet blushing furiously.

Maan laughed out loud n hugged her tight.

I love u geet told maan n kissed her hair.

Geet broke the hug n stood up I will go now told geet.

Immediately geet pecked maan's lips n ran from there giggling n a shocked maan behind.

Geet ruko wait I am coming told maan n started chasing her.

Geet turned back n stick her tongue out n ran from there.

Maan too started chasing her. Geet ran down still pari n rano didnt woke up.

They r chasing each other giggling n laughing.

Geet entered into the kitchen, atlast maan caught her n pinned her to the wall.

Maan leave me told geet.

No way what was that ?? asked maan about the kiss.

wh.. what ? Asked geet.

Acha u dont know asked maan teasingly.

Geet nodded in a no.

ok then let me show told maan n bought his face closer to her.

His breath is falling on her face. She closed her eyes feeling tickled.

Maan inched closer n kissed her both eyes. Geet cluched his shirt tight.

He then kissed her cheeks which now turned into crimson red.

He then kissed her chin n corner of her lips.

Geet breath stuck in her throat. She knows what is coming next.

Maan slowly placed his lips on hers. Geet pulled him more close. They both r kissing each other as if there is no tomorrow. Geet opened his mouth allowing maan to enter. Their tongues are playing with each other. They are exploring each other n lost in their own world. They kissed for long time n broke the kiss due to lack of air. Geet is blushing furiously n maan is lost in her innocence.

Geet composed herself n told maan, just move from here. I am hungry, I will prepare coffee.

Hmmm ok told maan still lost in her but didnt move.

Geet saw him staring at her n told maan hatiye na.

Maan bought her close n told mujhe nahi chodna hain tume.

Plzz maan koi ayega told geet.

I dont care told maan.

Geet made a baby face n looked at him.

Awww she looked so cute thought maan n smiled.

Maan left geet n went to his room to freshen up n went to kitchen to prepare coffee.

Mean while geet too went to guest room n freshend. Rano maa n pari too got up. They r in the hall.

Good morning maa, good morning pari wished maan.

Good morning beta.

Good morning bhai.

I think u slpet well maa, kuch problem tho nahi hua na asked maan.

Nahi maan told rano n smiled.

I will bring coffee maa told maan.

Nahi beta I will prepare told rano.

No problem maa told maan n smiled.

He went to kitchen to see his mishty preparing coffee.

She put the coffee powder in the glass n put some water n milk into it.

Oops coffee powder kuch zyada hogaya cribbed geet.

Hmm dont worry geet thoda milk add karti hu thought geet n tapped her shoulders in her success.

She added some more milk. Some how she prepared coffee.

Hey babaji coffee prepare karna itna mushkil kaam hain thought geet loudly n made a baby face.

Maan is smiling at her antics.

Uff pata nahi maan kya sochega mere baare mein thought geet n made a sad face.

Maan came n hugged her from back n placed his chin on her shoulders.

Geet got scared by the sudden touch but smiled.

Aww meri mishty kyun sad hain asked maan.

Geet turned to him n made a sad face n told wo.. kya hain na mujhe khana banana nahi ata.

Maan cupped her face n told geet, isme pareshan hone ki kya baat hain, main hu na tumare paas. I will prepare everyday n u can learn no problem. geet itni choti choti baat par pareshan hone ki koi zaroorat nahi hain. samjhi??

Geet's face lit up hearing him.

Sachi?

Maan smiled n told muchi n kissed her tip of the nose.

Geet hugged him n maan too.

Just then pari came there as its been long maan came to kitchen.

But she is shocked to see the sight in front of her. They both are hugging n both are lost in each other.

Bhai, di called pari.

But there is no response.

Bhai, di called pari a bit loud.

Still no response.

She got frustated n tapped geet's shoulder. Suddenly geet came to this world n broke the hug. Geet is embrassed seeing pari's smirk.

Maan too is not less, he is also so embrassed.

Di n bhai what r u doing here? Asked pari innocently.

wo.. wo.. pari, umm wo.. fumbled geet.

I am listening di told pari.

Ha I am here to prepare coffee told geet.

Oh good, bhai what r u doing here ? Asked pari.

wo.. nothing told maan.

Really?? u r doing nothing asked pari teasingly.

Ya I came to help ur sister told maan.

Acha in this way also u will help bhai asked pari.

Geet lowered her head n blushing furiously.

Omg.. di u r blushing asked pari shockingly.

Pariii shouted geet.

Pari burst out in to laughter seeing their both faces. As if a small kid is caught by eating chocolate without knowing her mom.

Hahaha u just both see ur faces, as if u saw some ghost in front of u told pari.

Pari, tum tum wait I am coming told geet n started chasing her.

Oh di I am afraid fakes pari n started running.

Maan laughted seeing both of them.

Ruko tum shouted geet.

No di no told pari n started running fast.

Rano saw them running n asked arey what happened?

Maa tell pari to stop, kuch bhi bol deti hain told geet.

Aww di maine kya kaha, maa baat yeh hain ki… started pari.

Oh shut up pari shouted geet.

Meanwhile maan bought coffee for maa n he too took it.

They both are just seeing the fight between the sisters.

Ahh di I am very tired told pari panting heavily.

Hmm me too told geet.

They both sat on the couch n sipped their coffee.

Wow bhai coffee is too good told pari.

Really?? asked am excited geet.

Ha told pari confusingly.

Hahaha I prepared coffee my dear sister told geet.

Pari is shocked but told kya baat hain di, for whom this coffee is asked pari teasingly.

Geet n maan blushed.

Chup kar told geet.

Hogaya tum dono ki bateein asked maa.

Geet n pari made a baby face.

Geet beta.

Ji maa.

Rano got up as well as geet. Rano hugged geet n wished her.

Happy birthday beta.

Geet smiled n took blessings from her.

Thanku maa.

Maa.. called maan.

Ha beta.

Maa mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hain told maan.

Bolo maan beta.

Maan made her sit on the couch. He then looked at geet n smiled.

Geet understood what he gonna talk to her n blushed.

She thought maan tho sach mein maa se baat kar raha hain, I thought he was joking.

Maan bent on his knees n sat in front of her.

Beta what are u doing?

Nothing maa told maan n smiled.

Rano carassed his hair n asked kya hua maan?

Maa darasal baat yeh hain ki main aur geet…

precap: I think u guys know…😆 😉


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Chapter 16



Maan bent on his knees n sat in front of her.

Beta what are u doing?

Nothing maa told maan n smiled.

Rano carassed his hair n asked kya hua maan?

Maa darasal baat yeh hain ki main aur geet ek dusre se pyaar karte hain.

Rano widened her eyes in shock.

Wh.. what?? Is it true?? Asked rano shockingl. its her dream that is coming true.

Ha maa, I know that I don't have any family n an orp'

But he was cut by rano.

Maan beta never think like that, u r not alone. Why u r talking like that, am I not your maa? Asked rano with fake anger.

Maan is overwhelmed with her love n had tears in his eyes.

Maan beta mujhe aapki aur geet ki rishta se koi problem nahi hain. But ek condition told rano.

Maan looked at her curiously, rano smiled and told u should never feel alone maan, we all r there for u. u r my son. N i am always there for u.

Maan rested his head on her lap n told maa, u don't know how happy I am today.

Rano caressed his hair, where as pari n geet are overjoyed seeing their bond.

Here is very happy for their relation, because she know that maan is a nice guy n can keep her daughter happy always. For a mother what else she need other than her daughtre's happiness. She can she the glow in her eyes now a days, this is all because of maan. N she too liked maan, a very caring n loving person.

Here maan is very happy that his rano maa has no problem with their relation. She gave all the mother love which he missed from childhood. He is very luckiest person in the world, he is going to get married with his love, his life, his jaan. From past 6 months his life changed a lot. His maa, his sister cun saaliji pari n his life geet. They all became his life now. He too gonna have a family, which he can call as HIS.

Maan got up n rano too.

Rano cupped his face n told maan beta, u don't know how happy I am today, meri geet ki zindagi mein khushiyan aane wali hain. Always keep her happy beta. She suffered a lot in her life. Because of me n pari.

Maa' called geet.

Nahi geet, let me tell told rano.

Geet sighed n kept quiet.

Uski papa ki death ke baad geet akeli ho chuki thi. Humko pata bhi nahi hamari bubbly geet kaise change ho gayi hain, we asked her many times what is the matter but she never told us. But now again she is happy with u. I know that u will keep her happy but as a mother I want to tell beta. She is our life, we cant see her in pain. Gussa tho thoda zyada aata hain par dil se achi hain told rano with tears in her eyes.

Maan hugged rano n told maa, geet is my life. I cant even imagine in my dremas that my geet is hurt. Its my promise maa, mere hote hue geet ko kuch nahi hoga.

Rano is very happy to listen this n she called geet.

Geet beta called rano.

geet went to maa but maa told maan beta, i am happy for geet but sad for u beta?

maan n geet looked at her confusingly.

now this hitler ki saari tension tumari told rano and smiled.

geet made a gol-gappe face where as maa n maan hi-fied each other.

Rano smiled n hugged geet n told I am very happy beta. I want to see u always happy.

Geet too had tears in her eyes.

Geet (st): papa, aaj main bohot khush hu agar aap yaha hote tho kitna ache hote. I miss u papa.

They broke the hug n geet looked at maan shyly. Maan smiled at her.

di' called pari n hugged her.

I am so happy di, wow aapki shaadi jald hi hone wali hain exclaimed pari excitedly.

Pari broke the hug n turned to maan.

Bhai, oopss sorry jiju told pari.

Maan smiled at her. Pari held maan's hand n told I know bhai, u can keep my di always happy. From the day she met u, there is a change in her. Meri di ki khushi ke alawa mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.

Pari got emotional n maan hugged her n consoled her.

I want my family to be happy. I will do anything for that told maan.

Geet n rano smiled at them. They broke the hug.

Waise ab ek party tho banta hain told pari excitedly.

Ji saali ji jo aap kahe told maan teasingly.

Dekho di abi se jiju on my side told pari n maan winked at geet.

Geet shied n ran from there. All of them laughed at her.

Maan beta ab humko chalna chahiye. Main aaj hi panditji se baat karti hu told rano.

Thanku maa told maan n took blessings from her.

Hamesha khush raho beta blessed rano.

Rano, pari n geet left from there. Maan kissed geet's cheeks while going.

After some time they all reached home. Geet went to her room n closed the door.

Today her happiness have no bounds. She is feeling very lucky to have maan in her life. Suddenly her cell rang, she looked at the caller ID n blushed. Hmm its none other than maan.

Hello told geet.

Missing u already told maan.

Geet blushed n told just now came home n u r already missing me ?

Hmm kya kare meri mishty ki jaadu hi kuch aisa hain.

Acha ji..

Ha ji.. told maan.

Maan, thanku very much.

Geet, I have to thank u for coming into my life. For making my life happy.

Maan why u love me so much?

Don't know. When u r in front of me, I don't need any thing. Your smile, ypur pout, your anger they became a part of my life. Without u my life is incomplete.

I love u maan.

I love u too geet.

I am missing dad today told geet. Her voice chocked.

Maan know that she is in the verge of crying.

Geet, don't be sad think once ur dad will not be in peace if u broke down like this. How can a father see his child sad. Bolo??

U know maan, when I talk with u I forget all my worries.

From now on wards no need to worry geet, tumari zindagi ki har kadam par tumari maan hoga. Har dukh mein aur har such main iss maan hain tumare saath.

Geet is overwhelmed with his love n care. She had tears in her eyes.

Tum ro rahi ho?? Asked maan.

Geet immediately wiped her tears n told nahi tho.

Hmm meri mishty ko jhoot bolna ata hi nahi.

Geet made a baby face.

Ahh dear don't make those faces.

Geet is looking here n there.

Maan smiled n told no need for me to be there with u. I know what u will be doing right now. After all u r my mishty.

Geet blushed.

I love the color of ur cheeks told maan.

Maaan stop it now.

Ok ok.. going to office today?

Hmmm jaane ka mann nahi hain told geet n made a sad face.

Waise u r not going to dance school today? Asked geet.

Hmmm waise jyada kaam nahi hain.

Ohhh'

Ek kaam kyun nahi karti asked maan.

What??

I will complete my work n u come directly to our school. We will have lunch together n will go out. How is the idea?

Superb told geet excitedly.

Hmmm some one is so excited to meet me teased maan.

Aur nahi tho kya, only I have right to be with u told geet proudly.

Maan smiled n told sach.

Ok ok I have to get ready now, nahi tho mera boy friend ko gussa ayega.

Gussa?

Oh ya I forgot, wo kya hain na maanji mera boy friend ko gussa nahi ayega par I have one dream.

What is that would-be Mrs. Khuarana? Asked maan.

Geet blushed n told mujhe tho bohot gussa ata hain na but I want to see my boy friend angry once. How he look.

Acha??

Haaa, aur aapko pata bhi nahi mera maan kitna handsome n hot hain.

Maan is shocked to see her boldness.

Geet if u r in front of me then I would have"'..

Chi chi maan, chup rahiye.

Arey maine kya kaha ?? smirked maan.

Kuch nahi maa is calling me, I have to go now told geet blushing furiously.

Arey geet suno tho'. Before maan complete geet cut the call n hid her face in her palms.

Maan smiled n kissed her pic.

Later maan got ready n went to dance school. But he is continously thinking of geet. He is not able to concentrate on any work.

Here geet is also in same condition. She is thinking of maan n the party his proposal.

Geet kissed the ring which maan gifted her n blushed.

Rano maa went to temple to talk about the engagement of maneet. Pari went to college.

When maan is thinking about his lady love just then a person entered his cabin.

Hello sir, how r u??

Maan came out of his thoughts n saw that person n his smile widened.

Hey dude, how r u??

Hmm well, I think I am fine. But dude the life is routine these days no dating from past one week.

Maan rolled his eyes n told yash sudar jaa, warna acha nahi hoga.

Yash hugged maan n told chill dude.

They broke the hug n yash asked arey yaar where r girls in ur dance school.

Why??

So that I can flirt told yash.

Shup up yaar, do u need anything?

Yaa ek coffee banta hain boss told yash.

Just then pari entered maan's cabin all smiling.

Jijuuu shouted pari.

Maan turned to her n smiled.

Hey pari u here??

Yes jiju I wanna talk to u told pari.

Ok ok first u sit. Do u need water ?

Yes jiju.

When pari saw yash there her face became red with anger.

TUM?? Both shouted at a time.

Maan placed his finger in his ears n asked hey why u both are shouting?

Jiju, what this gadha doing here?

Gadha?? Asked maan.

Hey miss. Pagal retorted yash.

Pagal?? Now maan is confused.

Hey do u know each other ? asked maan.

NO n YES they both shouted.

Waise jiju what is he doing here? He don't have any manners how to talk to a girl.

N u don't have any manners how to talk with a guy retorted yash.

They both are shouting n fighting with each other.

Maan is staring at them as if they are some aliens.


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Chapter 17


Pari and yash are fighting with each other like tim and jerry. Maan is staring at them as if they are some aliens.

Maan is trying to stop them but they are nowhere to listen. He just sat there seeing their fight. Suddenly an idea popped in his mind. He stood up and shouted stop it.

They both looked at him and stopped their fight. Actually they both are shocked that maan got angry which he never gets.

Yash (st): omg.. whats happening maan ko gussa aya? Yeh kaisa ho sakta hain ?

Pari (st): sangat ka asar, di akhir aapne jiju ko bhi gussa wala bana diya.

Stop it you two, kab se dekh raha hu u r fighting like kids told maan with very difficulty, because he wants to smile seeing their scared faces.

Between why you both are fighting ? asked maan.

Wo.. wo.. jiju fumbled pari.

But they heard someone laugh from outside. They 3 turned back and saw geet.

Di you here? Asked pari.

Geet came inside and told maan I am impressed you are really trying very hard to act u r angry.

Maan smiled cheekily at her.

You are acting? Asked yash.

Ha, aur nahi tho kya agar main thodi der yaha rukh jaata tho main pakka pagal ho jaaonga told maan.

Jiju isme meri koi galti nahi hain, sab kuch iss kya naam hain iska ha yash ki wajah se hua hain told pari.

Oyyy.. when yash was about to tell something geet warned him.

Oyy kabardar meri behen ko kuch kaha tho.

Yash (st): yeh tho sherni ki behen badi sherni hain. Nah baba nah muhe inn logon se panga nahi lena.

Maan laughed seeing yash's condition.

Ma.. maine kya kiya, jo bolna hain aapki behen ko boliye told yash.

Geet looked at pari questioningly.

Pari made a baby face and told 2 days back, when I was crossing road hurriedly I was about to fall but yash saved me from falling. But in tension I shouted on him.

Geet looked at him angrily and turned to yash and told I am sorry Mr. yash.

Arey its ok. Aap?? Asked yash.

Maan placed his hands round her shoulder and told my fianc geet handa.

Yash became very happy listening this and hugged maan and told wow dude congrats, I am very happy for u.

Maan too hugged him back and thanked him.

He broke the hug and wished geet. Congrats bhabhi.

Geet shied and told thanku.

They all settled on the couch and chatted for some time.

Geet, u told u will come late asked maan.

Ha maan but meeting cancel hua uss company ke saath told geet.

Ohh' why?? Asked maan.

I don't know that MD didn't inform anyone and left from office, how can be someone so irresponsible told geet.

Which company geet? Asked maan.

******* softwares told geet.

Yash (st): yaar yash aaj tera din hi karab hain, this girl is scolding me infront of me.

Maan controlling his laugh asked geet tumne kabhi use mili nahi?

Nahi mujhe uska shakal dekhna bhi nahi, itne mehnat kiye humne presentation ke liye. Last min mein meeting cancel kar diya without any reason told geet.

Maan made a pity face looking at yash.

Maan main chalta hu yaar told yash and was about to get up.

Arey kya hua aapko? Asked geet.

Kuch nahi madam, aap usko daanth lijiye par mere saamne nahi plz told yash making a sad face.

Kyun?? Asked geet confusingly.

Geet, yeh hain yash singhania ******** softwares ka MD told maan.

Geet widened her eyes in shock and got up.

I am so sorry sir, I didn't mean to'.

Arey arey aap shant hojayiye told yash.

Really I don't know sir its u told geet.

First of all don't call me sir, aap mere bhabhi hain and second its not your fault I just without informing anyone maan se milne aagaya hu, so fault is mine told yash smiling.

Geet too smiled at him. They all had lunch together in the school.

Umm yash I am sorry for behaving rudely with you told pari.

Hey its ok no problem told yash.

Thanku told pari.

Waise tum sherni ke mode mein hi achi lagti ho told yash.

Yashhh

Acha ok ok just kidding told yash.

Maan ab mujhe jaana hain told yash

Ok dude told maan.

Di, jiju mujhe bhi jaana hain I have some work told pari.

Pari how will you go? Should I drop u? asked maan.

No jiju I will go by taxi you both enjoy told pari and winked at them.

Maan and geet both blushed.

Koi baat nahi maan, I will drop pari told yash.

Are u sure? Asked maan seriously as if warning him kuch gadbad mat karna.

Ha ha dude I am sure told yash.

Par yash its ok I will go told pari.

No problem pari told yash and smiled.

Ok bye jiju, bye di told pari and both of them left from there.

Once they both left from there maan hugged her from back and placed his chin on her shoulder.

Kaha jaana hain madam ji ko? Asked maan,

Whereever u want told geet.

I have a surprise for you told maan.

Geet turned back and asked excitedly what ??

Abi nahi first come to my cabin told maan.

Geet pouted and asked plz bolo na maan.

Darling if u make those faces I feel like eating u told maan huskily leaning closer to her.

Geet blushed and slapped his hand and asked chalo cabin mein chaltein hain.

They made their way towards his cabin once they entered maan made her sit on the couch and he brought a packet and gave it to her.

Happy birthday darling wished maan.

Thanku maan told geet and smiled sweetly.

She opened the packet and found a beautiful saree init.

Wow maan its so beautiful, I loved it told geet.

Change and come, should I help u asked maan and winked at her.

Maan aap bilkul besharam ho gaye ho told geet and ran to washroom.

Maan smiled and left from there switching off the lights.

Geet came out of washroom after changing but she saw the whole place is dark.

Maan maan where r u? shouted geet.

Come down geet, don't worry I am here only told maan.

Geet followed as maan told and she slowly went downstairs.

Stop geet told maan.

Geet rooted in her spot.

Maan came from back and whispered in her ears and whispered close ur eyes jaan.

Geet closed her eyes, maan went and switched on the lights. He again came back to her and whispered open ur eyes jaan.

Geet slowly opened her eyes and saw the whole hall is beautifully decorated with different flowers, her childhood pics and scented candles making the atmosphere most romantic and there is a cake in the middle.

Kaisa laga surprise? Asked maan.

Geet turned back and hugged him tight and told so beautiful maan.

Maan smiled and told chalo cake cut karte hain.

Geet nodded and she cut the cake.

She took a piece and fed to maan, maan too did the same.

But maan got some naughty idea, he took a piece of cake and put it on her face.

Maan yeh kya kiya aapne? Asked geet.

But who is lost in her didn't care to answer her and he went close to her and licked the cream with the tip of his tongue. A sudden shiver ran through her spine, she clutched maan's shirt tight.

Maan is licking all over her face making her moan his name with pleasure.

But maan didn't stop he took some more cream and applied on her neck and the exposed skin.

Geet gave more room to him, he bent down a little and started licking her neck. Her hardbeat became uneven and her chest is rising up and down. This made maan to loose his control. His eyes became dark with passion. He moved up and brought her more close to him holding her waist.

Geet looked into his eyes and lost in them. Maan hands roamed on her back feeling her soft milky skin arousing his desire more. Here geet too losing her control, her hands went to his shirt and unbuttoning his shirt.

Maan's hand went to her pallu and unclasped her pin making her saree pallu fall down. Half of her c******* is visible. Maan kissed her exposed skin while geet totally unbuttoned his shirt and her hands are roaming on his well built chest.

Maan took her one of the c***** into his hand and piched the bud which now became hard. He did the same with other c*****.

It became very hard to control himself he carried her in his arms and placed her on the couch, now maan is on top of geet. His hands went her back and untied her dori.

Just then maan's mobile rang, they both came to their senses and saw their compromising position. Immediately maan got up and geet too. She tied her dori and tied her saree.

Maan felt so guilty for loosing his control, he somehow picked his call.

Hello..

Sir I am raju from orphanage.

Ha raju bolo told maan.

Sir u told u will come today, all the children are waiting for u told raju.

Sorry raju we r coming in an hour told maan.

No sir its ok, sorry to disturb you sir told raju.

Arey its ok, we will meet there told maan and cut the call.

Wo.. wo.. geet fumbled maan.

Geet sensed that he is feeling guilty and she smiled and went to him.

Maan look at me told geet.

Maan looked at her with guilt in his eyes and told I am so sorry geet, I didn't mean'

But geet cut him and told no maan don't be, I am only yours you have all right on me. But I want our SR should be special.

Maan smiled and told yes geet, from next time I will be careful.

Geet smiled and asked kiska phone tha?

Ha geet you go and change we are going somewhere.

Maan what happened to u today? Surprise pe surprise.

Maan cupped her face and kissed her forehead and told u love that place.

Ok I am eager to go there told geet.

Geet went and changed in her suit and came down within minutes. Maan held geet's hand and they both headed towards orphanage in his car.


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Chapter 18



Geet smiled and asked kiska phone tha?

Ha geet you go and change we are going somewhere.

Maan what happened to u today? Surprise pe surprise.

Maan cupped her face and kissed her forehead and told u love that place.

Ok I am eager to go there told geet.

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Later maan and geet got into the car and drove to the orphanage. After 30 min drive they reached the destination. Maan stopped the car and geet looked out to see where they have come. She is surprised to see the place and looked at maan. Maan smiled at her and told

Chale?

Geet nodded excitedly.

Maan smiled seeing her excitement. They both got down of the car and went in hand in hand. The people in the orphanage welcomed them and all the children are happy seeing their maan bhaiyya there. All of them shouted in unison maan bhaiyya.

Maan too wished all and he bent on his knees and wished all the children. It is the place where maan spent his childhood. He never forget this place, he saw so muc in his life, many obstacles but finally today he is successful in all sense.

Maan introduced geet to the children.

Bacho, inse miliye, iska naam hain geet aur yeh aapki bhabhi told maan.

All children shouted bhabhi'

Geet smiled at all of them and she too sat on her knees and kissed the children there.

Later she cut the cake and all the children there sung the birthday song and wished her. Geet felt so happy celebrating her birthday here. She felt so much peace and relief. Her life totally changed from the day she met maan and filled with happiness.

She fed cake to the children there and gave them chocolates and talking with them.

Suddenly a girl came there and gave her a rose. Geet smiled at her and asked what is ur name?

My name is roshni, and what is ur name? asked that girl.

Geet caressed her hair and told my name is geet.

Aaj aapka birthday haina, maan uncle told me before only isiliye I bought this rose for u. aap yeh rose acha laga? Asked that girl in her babyish voice.

Geet smiled at the cute little girl and told mujhe bohot acha laga.

That girl smiled cutely and then pouted.

Geet saw that and asked what happened beta?

Main na maan uncle se katti told roshni.

Aww why? Asked geet.

Maan uncle didn't come to meet me from so many days told roshni stretching her arms indicating so many days.

Geet chuckled seeing her pouted face and told maan uncle is very bad na. wait we will give him punishment. What say?

Roshni kept her hand on her chin like she is thinking something deeply and told nahi nahi maan uncle is good na so no punishment.

Hmm so what should we do now? Asked geet.

Tell maan uncle that I am angry on him told roshni.

Geet smiled at her innocent talks and took roshni in her arms and went near maan.

Roshni tapped maan's shoulders and maan turned back and saw them and smiled.

Hey sweet heart, how r u? asked maan with a smile.

But roshni pouted cutely and turned to geet.

Dekhiye maan, roshni aapse angry hain. Haina? Asked geet.

Roshni nodded yes.

Aww why my darling is angry? Asked maan so ever cutely.

Roshni turned to maan and told u didn't come to meet me na.

Sorry darling told maan and held his ears.

Geet and roshni smiled at him.

Maan took her in his arms and kissed her cheeks. They both chatted for sometime and maneet left from there.

On the way to geet's house geet told to stop the car in the deserted area.

Both came out of the car and sat on the car bonnet. Geet placed her head on his shoulders and maan held her tight by her waist.

Thanku so much for the surprise maan told geet.

Maan smiled and told u r happy na, then I don't need anything.

Really maan, my life hs changed completely after meeting u. u too faced so many problems na maan but u over come all those but I am not able to come out of my past maan told geet.

Maan made her face him and cupped her face and asked what happened jaan?

Aaj dad ka bohot yaad aaraha hain maan told geet and hugged him.

Maan too hugged her back and was little hesitant to ask her or not.

Jaan can I ask u something, if u don't mind. I am not forcing u told maan.

Geet broke the hug and asked what maan?

Wo.. wo.. fumbled maan.

Maan ask me what ever u want? U have full right on me told geet and smiled.

Tum apni mamaji se kyun aisa baat karti ho? As I saw u that day u r totally got emotional seeing him and the fear in ur eyes I cant forget that day geet told maan.

Geet looked into maan's eyes and got the strength to tell him the truth which she killed within her years back.

Geet held maan's hand tight, maan smiled at her and blinked his eyes assuring her that I am there with u.

Geet sighed and told he is the reason for dad's death.

Maan is shocked to listen this. But didn't talk anything he want geet to come out of her past.

We had a textile company in Mumbai and it is running with heavy profit and we all are living a happy life. But mamaji wasted all his money in gambling and drinking and he use to ask money every now and then. Seeing mom dad couldn't deny and helped him. But one day dad came to know what he is doing and denied to give money to him. Mamaji got very angry but he tried to convince dad that from now onwards he will not do anything like this and he even told that he started a business so he want surety for bank loan. Dad got convinced and signed those papers. But that's the wrong thing dad did, he just believed him told geet and looked at maan with teary eyes.

Maan wiped her tears and nodded in a no.

But we don't know all this. But one day when dad was in shop some bank members came and told that they have to sell all our property because mamaji didn't pay the loan money from past 6 months. Dad tried to convince them to give some time he will pay but they didn't believe dad and ceased all out property within 2 days. At that time we didn't have any house to live and after that dad told me what all happened. But after that we came to know that all those bank papers are fake and actually its mamaji's trick to take our property. But dad didn't tell anything to mom as she cant tolerate that her own brother did this. Later I stopped my studies midway and started doing a part time job. Due to all this dad's health worstened and he was hospitalized. He told me to take care of mom and pari and he left all of us told geet and broke down completely and hugged maan.

That's why.. sob.. I hate.. sob.. him. Mujhe uska chehra.. sob.. bhi.. sob .. nahi dekhna told geet.

Maan too hugged her tight and rubbed her back to calm down.

Shh.. geet don't cry, I am here na nothing will happen to maa and pari now told maan.

Geet broke the hug and told that's the reason till today I didn't allow anyone to enter into my life. I don't want any one to again cheat us told geet with fury in her eyes.

Mujhe nafrat hain uss aadmi se, par main kuch bhi nahi kar sakti. I hate him maan I hate him. Uss aadmi ne ek baar apni behen ke baare mein bhi nahi socha. He is reason for dad's death and from that day onwards I took care of my family. I became a son to them and I became strong to face this evil society. Somehow I completed my studies. And I don't want pari to face any of this. I want pari to be happy so I didn't let them know about my so called mamaji told geet.

U know one thing geet I am very much proud of u. u took care of everything and never let them know the reason behind ur dad's death. U sacrificed ur life and ur career because of them. I promise geet that I never ever let your past come into our life again. Your dad will be so happy seeing u today told maan and kissed her forehead.

U know maan if I am with u then it will be like I can face the whole world, thanks for coming into my life maan told geet and kissed his cheeks.

Don't thank me geet, maan aur geet alag nahi hain. They are two bodies one soul told maan.

Sach' told geet and lost in his eyes.

Maan pecked on her lips and told chalo geet, maa with be waiting for u.

Geet nodded and they drove back home happily. Today geet is so happy. The birden on her shoulders are relieved now. She closed her eyes and saw the smiling face of maan. She too smiled and leaned closer to maan and kissed his cheeks and told I love u maan.

Maan smiled at her seeing her happy and also whispered I love u too mishty.

Maan dropped geet to her home and left to his house. They all slept peacefully that night.

Next day morning:

Maan got up with continous ringing of his mobile. He picked the call and told hello.. with a sleepy voice.

Maaan shouted geet from other side.

Maan kept the phone away from his ear listening to her shouting.

Kya hua jaan? Asked maan.

I am very happy maan told excited geet.

Maan smiled and asked mujhe bhi batao kya baat hain.

Geet shied and told wo.. wo..

Ab kya hua tumari bolti band hogayi teased maan.

Geet pouted and told u r teasing na I wont tell.

Acha baba sorry ab bolo told maan.

Hamari engagement ka date pakki hogayi told geet and shied.

Maan almost jumped in joy and his smile widened.

Wow geet subah subah kiyne ache news diya tumne, thanku so much mishty. Date kab hain asked maan.

1 week later told geet.

One week baad u will be officially mine told maan with so much love.

Geet shied listening to him and told I am always urs maan and cut the call.

Listening to his words her heart beat rised and she started dreaming about her life with maan.

Here maan is not less he is eagerly waiting for his mishty to come into his life forever.


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