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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Chapter 19


Maan and geet both are really excited for their engagement. He want everything to be best and all his geet's favorite. He took shower and got ready to go to dance school, but before he decided to give this news to his best friends so he called everyone and told them to meet him in school.

He locked the house and he droke to school. He went in and saw his students are already there. He smiled at them and told u guys practice I will back in 10 min.

They all nodded and he went to his cabin and called rano maa.

"Hello maan beta.."

"Hello maa.. I need to talk to you" told maan.

"Ha maan bolo, I think geet told you about the engagement date?" Asked maa.

"Yes maa, geet told me today morning and maa you don't stress, u tell me the details and I will arrange everything" told maan.

"No no maan, its our duty to do all the things" told maa.

"No maa, you don't stress and I will make arrangements according to you only" convinced maan.

Rano with no other option told ok. But she is happy seeing maan and thought I know beta you will keep my daughter happy. A lone tear escaped from her eyes and she immediately wiped that thinking its not time to think all these. It is a very happy moment.

Here maan went down and teached new steps for his students, they all practiced for some time and soon they completed a song. All the students in couples reharsed infront of him. Maan told few mistakes and made them practice once again. It became noon and all his friends reached there adi, yash, dev and raj.

Maan looked at them and smiled. He gestured them to go to his cabin and he will be back soon. They nodded and went in. here maan and his students reharsed for last time and all of them left. Its only 2 hours left and again noon batch students will come.

Maan sighed and went to his cabin and saw his friends are having fun time.

"Hey guys, whats up?" Wished maan smilingly.

"Dude you called us here and you are asking whats up?" Asked yash. All other laughed at his comment.

"Ok ok guys there is a news for you all" told maan.

"Go on" told adi.

"Hmm next Friday is my engagement" told maan.

All of them looked and him and shouted in unison "congratulations dude."

"Thanku.." told maan.

"Ok dude lets party" told yash.

"Abe yash tumko party ke alawa kuch nahi soojta hain kya?" Asked dev.

All of them smiled and maan told "hey hello enough of your jokes now I need your help in arranging things."

"Sure dude you just come on that day we will arrange everything" told raj and all others nodded.

"Ok ok but we have to take all the information from rano maa and arrange things" told maan and sat on the couch finally feelin relief after sharing it.

"Hey maan, listen I am from geet's side" told adi.

"Yaar yeh tho cheating hain" complained maan making angry face.

"No nothing, geet already invited me and I am her brother now" told adi.

"Hmm thik hain as u r her brother and the reason is justified" told maan and laughed.

"So boliye jijaji, kya chahiye aapko. Main kuch kar sakta hu aapke liye?" Asked adi with over respect. All of them laughed at his antics. Later they all had lunch together and bid good bye and left from there except adi.

Adi hugged maan and congratulated him. Even though all are best friends but adi and maan share a special bond. Maan always discuss with adi in any serious matter. Next goes to yash eventhough he is a flirt but trustworthy. Dev is little bit calm and reserved. And about raj they know that he is little evil but as a friend he is good, but no one believes him.

"So how r u feeling now? Happy?" Asked adi.

"Ha adi I am happy, infact these are best moments in my life, my family adi. I am going to have a family, my wife, maa, my sister" told maan and a layer of tears formed in his eyes.

"Hey maan don't be emotional dude, agar pinky ne dekh liya tho meri shamat nahi" joked adi and maan smiled at that.

"Waise where is pinky? Does she know about the news?" Asked maan.

"Yaar how cum pinky don't know, geet called both of us and informed" told adi.

"Adi when you are getting married?" Asked maan.

"Maan you know, recently I got job and I want to settle completely which will take a year more. If we get married now itself pinky may face problem which I wont like and she told that she don't like doing job and I wont force her too. So its better to settle before getting married" told adi.

Maan nodded at his decision and patted his shoulder.

Later adi left from there and headed to his office. Maan is back to his work. In the evening he met up with geet and pari and accompanied them for shopping. He never thought that girls shop this much. He was really bored walking behind them and carrying the bags.

"Yaar geet and pari how much you shop? Enough for today I am hungry and its already late" complained maan like a small child.

"Ohh jiju you are looking like a small child" told pari and geet pulled his cheeks smiling.

"Yaar plz lets have dinner somewhere and go home" asked maan almost making baby face. Eventhough their shopping is not completed but seeing his face they have melted and said ok.

Soon they reached near by restaurant and had their dinner and ice cream. maan dropped geet and pari to home and he went to mall as he saw a beautiful baby pink saree and he bought it for geet and thought to gift her. He smiled and now he became a teenage boy who is buying gift for his girl friend for the first time. He is so excited to see geet's reaction after seeing this saree because he is buying for the first time.

Later he too went to home and rested for some time. And his mobile rang and it was geet, he smiled and picked the call.

"Hii'." Wished maan.

"Hii maan.."

"Missing u yaar" told maan.

"Me too maan, aaj shopping ki wajah aapse baat nahi kar payi thik se" told geet sadly.

"Hmm me too, tum log kitna shopping karte ho yaar" teased maan.

"Karna hi padega after all I am MSK's dulhan" told geet and blushed.

"Ahaan' I am eager to see you in that bridal attire and ofcourse you look beautiful for me in any attire" told maan.

Geet smiled and told "maan, I have selected a sherwani for u."

"Oh wow, then why you didn't show me today" asked maan.

"Maan I never shopped much its pari who always shop for so I thought you don't like it" told geet.

"Hey geet I love your selection and I know that it would be great" told maan.

"Hmm.. I will show you tomorrow then" told geet excitedly.

"Ok jaan, love u" told maan.

"Love you too maan, acha I am feeling sleepy" told geet.

"Jaan don't cut the call, I want to hear you and sleep" told maan.

Geet smiled and told "ok" and kept her mobile near her heart.

Listening to each other heart beats they slept peacefully with a smile on their face.

A week passed very fastly, maan is busy with dance school and the preparations. All his friends helped him in arranging everything. Raj didn't care much but adi, yash and dev are doing everything. Now pari and yash became friends just in the span of one week ofcourse their fighting session never stopped. All are going peacefully. There is only 1 day left for engagement and geet want to be just a family function not so many people and maan is happy with it. pinky made sure that all the shopping work and the invitation is completed. Rano and pinky arranged everthing. And no media is allowed as geet don't like it. rano even invited her brother and geet didn't like it. she went to maan's school that evening. She directly went to his cabin and saw him thinking something and maan too didn't notice her.

Geet poked maan and maan turned to and looked at her in surprise.

"Geet tum yaha iss waqt?" Asked maan.

Geet without speaking anything made him stand and they both settled on the couch. Geet rested her head on his shoulder and held his arm tight. Maan understood that something is bothering her. He caressed her hair and asked "what happened geet?"

"Maan, mom invited mamaji for engagement and I don't want him to come" told geet sadly.

Maan too understood how difficult for her to face him. Maan cupped her face and told "geet don't you think maa has right to know the truth. We should tell her."

Geet's eyes widened in shock and shouted "no."

"Geet listen maa should know the truth, she has every right. If she knows the truth your mamaji cant play any games now" tried maan to convince her.

Geet looked at him and placed her head on his chest and told "mujhe darr lag raha hain. Mom cant tolerate all this."

"Geet I know maa is very strong, she should know how her husband's death happened" told maan making her feel better.

"I think you are right" told geet and closed her eyes feelong better.

Maan just kept caressing her hair and didn't talk anything. He know she need some time for all this and he also knows her mom is important for her and she cant tolerate if anything happens to her.

After some time geet got up. Maan looked at her and asked "feeling better?"

Geet nodded with a smile.

"Maan I need to go mom will be waiting for me" told geet.

Maan kissed her forehead and told "ok take care. Wait wait I will drop you."

"No maan its ok you look tired, I will go" told geet.

"Nothing is important than you geet. Chalo" told maan and both of them headed towards the car.

They both settled and headed towards geet's house. They kept on talking about everything and fighting in the middle and teasing each other. Soon they reached and geet got down of the car. She bid good bye and was about to go, she then suddenly turned back and told "maan I need you when I tell truth to mom."

"I am always there for you jaan" assured maan with a smile. Geet sighed and went in. maan droke back to his house and slept off feeling tired. Next day is important for both maan and geet. They are going to be bound in a sacred bond. And their marriage is in less than a month. Both are excited for starting a new life. Both of them slept dreaming.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Chapter 20



"I am always there for you jaan" assured maan with a smile. Geet sighed and went in. maan droke back to his house and slept off feeling tired. Next day is important for both maan and geet. They are going to be bound in a sacred bond. And their marriage is in less than a month. Both are excited for starting a new life. Both of them slept dreaming.

Next day is full of dreams and excitement. Their relation is going to new level. They are going to be engaged. Both are very excited. Maan never thought that he will get a family but today his dream is coming true. And geet is not less excited, she thought she will never be happy again after her dad's death. But no maan has changed everything. She felt comfortable with him and she again learned how to smile.

Geet took shower and came out wearing a bathrobe. She saw her engagement dress on her bed and caressed it. Her maan selected this dress for her. She wore it and sat infront of a mirror. Rano brought jewels for her and asked geet, which one you want to wear?

Geet looked at some of the jewels and selected the matching one. Rano smiled and kissed her forehead.

Always be happy geet told rano with tears in her eyes. Just then pari entered the room and saw her mom and sister.

Ladies, what is this emotional drama ha? Today its just engagement. So chill and get ready fast told pari to lighten the situation.

They both looked at her and smiled and rano twisted her ears and told when you will get married na, you will come to know.

Oh come on mom, leave it I will help di now told pari. Rano smiled at her nautanki and left the room. Pari helped geet in getting ready. She wore the matching bangles, maang tika, ear rings and finally maan's fav payal. She applied pink lip gloss matching her dress. Just a little touch up. She lifted her eye lids and looked herself in the mirror.

Hayeee di, today maan jiju will be flat. He cant even blink his eyes, u are looking beautiful told pari.

Geet blushed hearing her and told shut up pari.

Oyy oyyy.. your cheeks are getting redder teased pari. Geet blushed further more.

Here in maan's house:

Adi, pinky, dev and yash are making arrangements. Here maan came out of his shower with a towel tied around his waist. He looked at his sherwani which is placed on the bed. Maan smiled looking as his dress. How geet was so nervous to show it to him, as she never shopped before. But how can maan not like his jaan's choice. He loved his sherwani. He wore his sherwani and applied gel to his hair, he looked himself in the mirror. Hayeee all girls are dead seeing this handsome and hot hunk.

He got ready and came down, saw his friends doing some work. He felt so blessed having them as his friends. They are like family to him. Finally all of them got ready and headed towards the engagement venue.

Here geet and others too got ready and they too headed towards the engagement venue. Geet's family reached there first and they went inside. The hall is decorated so beautifully, the hall is filled with red roses, orchids and different colors of balloons. It is simple yet out standing. Geet so much loved the decors and she is now waiting for maan. She went to the room and sat there. Others are busy in arranging last minute things. Soon maan and his friends and some of his students reached the venue. Even maan too loved the dcor, his friends did the way he told and he is very thankuful to them. Pinky went to geet's room and hugged her.

Aww geet, you are looking beautiful chirped pinky. Geet smiled at her friends excitement. Maan went near the mandap and waiting for geet. Suddenly all the lights were turned off. There his angel, his life is climbing down the stairs, with pari and pinky on either side. He is so lost in her beauty, her innocence. He want to take her away from this world only their love exists. She is blushing like hell and her eyes found maan. He is looking handsome, they eyes locked and both are lost in each other, forgetting about the whol world. Their world stopped there. Geet is looked like an angel, who brought happiness his life. And maan is a savior, who saved her from all the bad and gave a great encouragement.

Geet reached the mandap and they both are standing side by side and the lights turned on. Rano came there and kissed his forehead and blessed him. Maan smiled at her. Soon she gave the engagement rings to maan and geet. Maan slided the ring and geet too. Finally they are engaged. Maan held gee than and kissed back of her hand.

Their friends brought a cake and put infront of them. Maneet cut the cake and fed each other, while all others clapped and whistled for the happy occasion.

Suddenly the whole hall became silent. In the middle of the hall pari and pinky stood with a smile on their faces.

Pinky and pari: Wah – Wah Ramji, Jodi Kya Banai

Bhaiya Aur Bhabhi Ko, Badhai Ho Badhai

Sab Rasmon Se Badi Hai Jag Mein

Dil Se Dil Ki Sagai..!

Aapki Kripa Se Yeh, Shubh Ghadi Aai

Jiji Aur Jija Ko, Badhai Ho Badhai

Sab Rasmon Se Badi Hai Jag Mein

Dil Se Dil Ki Sagai..!

Geet had tears in her eyes and so as maan. Pinky and pari are sisters to him. Pari is first sister to him. They 3 share a great bond mainly maan and pinky. Pinky always there for maan when he needed some one the most. He shared his happiness to her. And he always wants pinky to be happy.

Pari, she is such a sweet girl. She always wants maan and geet to be happy.. within very less time, maan became close to this family. He is very thankful to god.

Maan hugged both pinky and pari and thanked them. Now all the girls made a group and looked at geet and sang.

Girls: Kab se aaye hain tere dulhe raja
Ab der na kar, jaldi aaja
Kab se aaye hain tere dulhe raja
Ab der na kar, jaldi aaja

Maan looked at geet and sang while dancing: Ho… ooo… ooo…
Tere, ghar aaya, main aaya tujhko lene
Dil ke, badle mein, dil ka nazrana dene
Tere, ghar aaya, main aaya tujhko lene
Dil ke, badle mein, dil ka nazrana dene
Meri har dhadkan kya bole hai
Sun sun sun sun…
Saajan ji ghar aaye, hay
Saajan ji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye, hay
Saajan ji ghar aaye

Omg.. geet is furiously blushing listening to him and hid behind her mom. rano smiled at her and sang.

Rano:

Mehandi laake… gehane paake
Mehandi laake… gehane paake
Hay roke tu sabko rula ke
Sabere chali jaayegi, tu bada yaad aayegi
Too bada yaad aayegi, yaad aayegi
Mehandi laake… gehane paake
Mehandi laake… gehane paake
Hay roke tu sabko rula ke
Sabere chali jaayegi, tu bada yaad aayegi
Too bada yaad aayegi, yaad aayegi

Rano and geet had tears in their eyes, so as pari. They 3 had a group hug. Maan is looking at them lovingly. The most serious and stubborn girl geet when he met her first, but now she is crying like a small kid. How much pain she bolted up inside. To lighten the situation maan went near rano and sang.

Maan:

Tere, ghar aaya, main aaya tujhko lene
Dil ke, badle mein, dil ka nazrana dene
Tere, ghar aaya, main aaya tujhko lene
Dil ke, badle mein, dil ka nazrana dene
Meri har dhadkan kya bole hai
Sun sun sun sun…

Hearing this rano smiled at him and kissed his forehead. She is so lucky to have such a caring and loving son-in-law. Only for name sake he is son-in-law. But he is actually a son to her. Maan hugged rano and told don't worry maa, hum aapko chodke kahi nahi jayenge.

Geet is looking at them in awe, how lucky she is to have him in his life.

Now all the pairs are on the dance floor and a romantic slow song is played. Maan and geet are dancing and they both are lost in each other.

(this is a telugu song from the movie CHAKRAM and one of the wonderful song. Plz listen this song and read the English translation. You will surely enjoy this. Its maan's POV, from the day he met geet.. )

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A3H4XfMXgvM

Maan:

Oke oka maata
Madilona daagundi mounamgaa
Oke oka maata
Pedavopalenanta teeyangaa
Naa peru nee premani
Naa daari nee valapani
Naa choopu nee navvani
Naa oopire nuvvani
Neeku cheppaalani

(one an only one word is hiding silently in my heart
One and only one word so sweet that the lips can not bear
my name is your love
my path is your affection
my sight is your smile
and your are my breath
this I want to tell you)

Oke oka maata
Madilona daagundi mounamgaa
Oke oka maata
Pedavopalenanta teeyangaa

(one an only one word is hiding silently in my heart
One and only one word so sweet that the lips can not bear
what would you do if Isay that I do not exist
with a smile and unbelief, you would gently tell me to go)
Nenu ani lenu ani
Chebite em chestaavu
Nammanani navvukoni
Chaalle pommantaavu
Nee manasuloni aasagaa
Nilichedi nenani
Nee tanuvuloni sparsagaa
Tagiledi nenani
Nee kanti maimarupuloo
Nanu polchukontaanani
Tala aanchi nee gundepai
Naa peru vintaanani
Neeku cheppaalani

Oke oka maata
Madilona daagundi mounamgaa
Oke oka maata
Pedavopalenanta teeyangaa
Naa peru nee premani
Naa daari nee valapani
Naa choopu nee navvani
Naa oopire nuvvani
Neeku cheppaalani

(I am the hope that stays in your heart
I am the touch that your body feels
I will recognize myself in the glitter of your eyes
I will hear my name when I rest head on your bosom
this I want to tell you
one an only one word is hiding silently in my heart
One and only one word so sweet that the lips can not bear
to walk as a step of you is journey says my feet
to live with out you is death says my life
do not even remember the life before you came into my life
the moment I met you will never leave me
I spend every moment as a life time
do you even know that this is all your influence?
this I want to tell you
one an only one word is hiding silently in my heart
One and only one word so sweet that the lips can not bear
my name is your love
my path is your affection
my sight is your smile
and your are my breath
this I want to tell you
one an only one word is hiding silently in my heart
One and only one word so sweet that the lips can not bear)

geet hugged him tight with tears in her eyes listening to him. She fell in love him all over again. Maan too kissed her forehead and hugged her tight.

Soon all the guests left from there and geet's family, maan and his friends were there teasing maan and geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Chapter 21



Geet hugged him tight with tears in her eyes listening to him. She fell in love him all over again. Maan too kissed her forehead and hugged her tight.

Soon all the guests congratulated them and left one by one. Maneet, rano, pari, yash, adi, pinky and dev were left. Rano kissed maneet forehead and blessed them. She is so happy for her daughter, finally she got her happiness.

Chalo, we will have dinner its already late told rano. They all nodded and gone to dining hall. They made maneet sit side by side. Soon the food is served and maneet were about to eat but their friends stopped them. They both looked at them confusingly.

You both will not eat on your own told pari.

Yes, maan bhai will feed geet and vice-versa told pinky.

Geet blushed hearing this and maan smiled shyly at them.

Oyy hoyee dekho dekho, love birds are blushing teased adi.

All of them laughed at them. Geet looked at maan and blushed.

Why you are teasing my children hmmm?? Rano faked anger.

Maa' atleast today support me told pari making sad face.

Achaji'

Ha ji replied pari and both smiled at each other.

Thik hain, jo karna hain karo but come soon, I will talk with bhai and come told rano and left from there.

Hearing the BHAI word from rano, geet hands turned into fists and anger in her eyes. Maan saw that and placed his hand on hers and blinked his eyes assuring that I am here for you.

Geet looked at him and smiled. All others are busy in their own talk.

Come on guys, be fast told yash.

With no other option maan took a piece of roti and dip it in the curd and took it near geet's lips. She slowly opened her mouth and maan fed her. All the friends whistled and teasing them.

Geet too did the same, at the same time she is also blushing furiously. She is not so dreamy dreamy types, this is all new to her. Before she was always serious and rude to others. But now maan came like a angel in her life and changed everything which she didn't expect. Even in their first meet she shouted on maan, but maan being a gentleman apologized geet. Then their second meet, pari joining dance school, their friendship then love and today finally their engagement. It was such a wonderful journey for both of them. Both are equally happy because maan never had a family and now his wish is gonna fulfill and geet thought she can never be happy in her life againm but today she is the most happiest girl in the whole world.

Soon they completed their dinner feeding each other, others too had their dinner. Seeing maneet a lone tear escaped from pinky's eyes, her friend geet finally moving on in her life forgetting her past. And her brother maan is happy with geet in his life. She knows maan will keep geet happy forever. She immediately wiped her tears which noticed by maneet and other are busy in their world.

Geet is tired with all these and she is feeling sleepy. They bid good bye to each other. Adi went to drop pinky, maan, geet and pari are in one car, yash and dev went on their own vehicles. Maan is driving the car and geet sat beside him and pari in back seat. Geet placed her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes. Maan smiled at her and caressed her hair and again concentrated on driving.

Maan reached geet's house. Pari got down of the car and saw geet is sleeping.

Pari, you go in I will wake up geet, I need to talk to her told maan.

Ok jiju, good night wished pari.

Good night wished maan and she left from there.

Maan looked at geet and called her geet'

But she is in deep sleep. Maan called her again, geeet'

Geet slightly opened her eyes and looked at maan with dropy eyes.

Geet we reached home told maan.

Geet opened her eyes fully and looked outside. When she was about to opened the door, maan caught her wrist. Geet turned to maan and looked at him. But maan hugged her tight and asked geet, you are happy na?

Geet broke the hug and cupped his face and told how can you understand each and everything maan.

I can see the sadness in your eyes when we are coming back told maan.

Geet looked at him lovingly and told ha maan, mujhe papa ka yaad aarahi thi. Kaash papa aaj hamare saath hota, he would have been really happy to see you. I am missing him maan told geet and hugged him.

Maan too hugged her back and comforted her with his soothing words.

You don't be sad geet, I told you before also if your papa sees you in this condition then he too cant be happy. And yes now he will scold me for making you sad told maan.

Geet smiled at this and broke the hug and told you are very special to me maan. Never leave me and go.

Not even in my dreams jaan told maan and pecked her lips.

Geet too pecked on his lips and wished good night. Maan smiled at her and she for down from the car and bid good bye to him and entered into the house. Maan waited till she enters into the house and drove to his house. Soon maan reached home and went to washroom to freshen up. Geet too changed into her night dress and slept peacefully. Maan too slept feeling happy and contended.

Its almost mid-night rano is not able to sleep. She is tossing on her bed. She is sensing something is going to happen. She got up from there and went to geet's room and found geet sleeping with a smile on her face. Rano went upto her and kissed her forehead and sat there seeing her daughter's smiling face. Soon she too dozed half.

Next day morning:

Geet got up lazily as it is Saturday and no office. She saw rano sleeping in sitting position, geet smiled at her and made her sleep on the bed and covered her with blanket.

Geet went to washroom brushed and took shower. She came out wearing jeans and t-shirt and went to kitchen to prepare herself a coffee. After some time rano too got up and saw geet is not there. She went to hall and saw geet is drinking coffee watching tv. Geet looked at rano and asked maa are you fine? Any problem?

Rano smiled at her and nothing beta.

Then how cum u r in my room yesterday, when you feel low you will come na? asked geet.

Nothing geet, I felt like seeing you so I came to your room, acha I will freshen up and come told rano and left from there.

Geet sighed and continued sipping her coffee.

Rano came there after having shower and went to kitchen to prepare breakfast. Geet, ek baar mamaji ko phone lagao. Don't know how is he now? He couldn't come to your engagement too told rano.

Maa, mujhe mood nahi hain, you only call him told geet un-interestedly.

Geet yeh kya baat hui, atleast you should talk with him scolded rano.

I don't want to talk told geet angrily.

Geet, stop behaving like a kid. Give respect to elders told rano.

Nahi dena mujhe, mujhe nafrat hain uss insaan se shouted geet.

Geet, whats wrong with you? Asked rano.

Ha I hate your so called brother, I don't want to see his face also shouted geet with tears in her eyes.

Rano got alarmed seeing her tears, but she don't want to hear a word against her brother.

Geet.. shouted rano.

Pari got up hearing the shouting.

Aaj tak main chup hu maa ab aur nahi. I cant tolerate that person anymore. Listen maa, your brother is responsible for papa's death told geet.

Just stop it geet. Do you know what you are talking shouted rano.

I am telling truth maa, you have to believe me. Mamaji is responsible for papa's death. He cheated us and took all the property due to that depression and when papa came to know that mamaji cheated him papa couldn't tolerate all and he died due to depression. Papa ka first time heart attack bohot severe hua tha he didn't survive told geet and collapsed on the couch.

Here rano is not able to believe what geet told, how her brother can do this, no this is not true. But why my geet will lie to me. Yes I many times observed that she don't want to stay at home when bhai comes. Is that the reason? Then why she didn't tell me about this till now. Bhai cheated on us and mohinder ji couldn't tolerate this and left us. Hey babaji yeh kya ho raha hain. Bhai aapne aisa kyun kiya, aapne mere pati ko maar diya. And my geet knows all this and she bottled up her pain for my sake, for the sake of the family. How much she must have suffered seeing him infront of her eyes and she died each and every second. How she tolerated all this. Why god why you did this to us?

Pari is listening all this don't know what to do. She too had tears in her eyes how can her mamaji can do this. Here geet collapsed on the couch and sobbing continuously and here rano stood there rooted not able to think anything. Various questions are going in her mind. Without wasting a second pari immediately called maan and asked him to come here immediately. Maan drove to geet's house as he knows what is the reason pari called him.

With in 15 minutes maan reached there and rushed inside to see crying geet and shocked rano, first maan rushed to rano and took her to her room. He made her sit on the bed. He kneeled down before her and called her.

Maa'

Rano who is in shock till now, looked at him and the tears rolled down her cheeks.

Maan beta, dekho what geet is saying told rano.

Maan cupped her face and told maa don't you believe your daughter?

She is my life maan, how can I not trust her but bhai ne aisa kiya sobbed rano.

Maa mujhe pata hain aap bohot dukh mein hain par maa ek baar geet ke baare mein sochiye, 7 saal maa. From 7 years she hided the truth from you, you should understand her. How she survived all these years seeing him in ths house, how she might felt. Aapko pata nahi maa, last time when he came here she broke down completely. She is in so much pain maa, she misses papa each and every second. But she promised papa that she will keep you and pari always happy. Maa ek baar geet ke baare mein bhi sochiye and I know you are having very tough time to believe it. but geet needs you maa, be with her give her support told maan.

Rano looked at maan and how supporting he is to this family. We are very lucky to have him. Rano kissed his forehead. Rano and maan went to hall and saw pari hugging geet. Rano placed her hand on geet's shoulder, geet turned back and saw rano who is in tears. Geet hugged her by her waist. Rano caressed her hair lovingly.

Geet how you tolerated all this beta, I am sorry beta I never tried to understand you told rano.

Nahi maa don't say like that, I was afraid maa. What if any thing happens when you come to know all this told geet looking at her.

Kuch nahi hua beta mujhe, nothing will happen to me when my geet is with me told rano and kissed her forehead, but its true that a volcano is erupting in rano, she want to meet her brother and ask him why he did so? How can he do with his own sister? Don't he love her? If he wants property he would have asked them, why he cheated his own brother-in-law?


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#24
Chapter 22



Rano is totally shattered listening the truth, she want to confront her brother. But how these many days her daughter is in so much pain seeing him around but she don't know. What a mother she is? Thought rano. How he can do this to his own sister. Its disgusting, because of that shock he died and geet knows it from the start. But she didn't tell anyone. But on the other hand rano is happy seeing maan, he is indeed a gem. Because of him today they are happy again mainly her geet, her daughter is happy.

On the other hand geet is feeling lite at her heart, now she don't have any burdens on her shoulder, she told everything to her mom. even though first she is worried about her reaction but maan made it all set. She is very thankful to him. Seems that god is also with them now. Mamaji came there with sweets in his hand, as he couldn't come for their engagement yesterday.

He entered into the house and smiled at them. When geet saw him first she got angry but then she smirked at him. Mamaji looked at her questioningly but shrugged his shoulders.

Arey rano I bought these sweets told mamaji and handed the sweets to her. Rano smiled at him extra sweetly but soon her smile turned into angry. She throwed the sweets on his face and slapped him hard across his cheek. Mamaji is shocked seeing rano and his eyes turned red with anger.

Rano… roared mamaji.

Shut up just shut up, chi you are my brother ha? Koi apni behen se aisa karta hain kya? Nafrat hain mujhe tumse(do any brother can do to her sister? I have you) shouted rano holding his collar.

Mamaji looked at geet and now he understood the story behind her smirk. He is angry on geet, he never expected geet will tell rano the truth but today everything changed. He knows now rano will hate him and never in her life talks with him. Firstly he got angry on maan because of him geet got courage to tell the truth.

Chi, uske kya kiya(what he did), if u asked for money then he could have give you but tumne kya kiya(what you did). You cheated him and throwed us on the roads to live our life. Tum jaise ghatiya insaan main aaj tak nahi dekhi (I have never seen a disgusting person like you) cried rano remembering mohinder.

Rano, don't forget that I am your brother told mamaji angrily.

Brother? Do you know the meaning of brother. Aaj se hamara koi rishta nahi, mujhe tumara chehra bhi nahi dekhna told rano and looked at him with disgust. Mamaji was about to raise his hand but maan caught ut and twisted his hand.

(Brother? Do you know the meaning of brother. From today we are strangers, I don't want to see your face told rano and looked at mamaji with disgust).

Kabardar tumne mere parivaar ko chot pahunchne ki koshish kit ho. Chale jao yaha se aur kabhi galti se bhi yaha mat aana, nahi tho main bhi nahi sakta main kya karunga told maan sternly.

(dare you hurt my family again, just go from here even by mistake also don't come here. I don't know what I do told maan sternly)

Mamaji looked at him angrily and told today because of you rano insulted me, I wont leave you. Do remember you will suffer for what you did told mamaji and left from there angrily once glaring at geet.

Geet is really happy from now this so called mamaji wont be in their life. They can live happily. Rano hugged maan and cried.

Why maan, what we did that god has played with us. How can he leave us. Why maan?? cried rano. Maan is just caressing her hair to calm down. Its really hard for him to tolerate, he cant see his maa crying. But today she learned about past and she has to let out her pain. So maan didn't stop her, geet seeing her mother in that condition she too had tears in her eyes.

Later rano composed herself and stopped crying. She came out of the hug and looked at geet who is in tears. Rano went near her and told no geet don't cry, today you have to be happy. Now you don't have to face him. You suffered more than me beta enough of all this now. lets be happy told rano and hugged geet.

Maan smiled at them and he is also happy. Pari who is watching all this hated that mamaji to the core and happy for her mother and sister. She thanked stars for sending maan in their life. Even thought rano is sad knowing about her brother, but happy too for geet. That day all of them spent the day together talking with each other and enjoying themselves. Its evening rano looked tired maan asked her to rest for some time. She went to her room, here geet is in her room standing near the window looking outside and in a deep thought.

Maan came to her room and saw her thinking something. He hugged her from back and placed his chin on her shoulder. Geet first got startled but smiled knowing who it is.

What are you thinking? About me? Asked maan and smiled.

Hmm don't I have any other work other than thinking about you ? asked geet smiling inwardly.

Maan frowned listening to her, he left her and sat on the bed pouting like a small kid. Geet saw this and laughed whole heatedly seeing his cute antics. Though maan melted seeing her laugh but maintained the pouting. Geet sat next to him and teased awww mera maan ko bura laga and pulled his cheeks.

Maan didn't help but smile at her and hugged her. Geet too hugged him back.

Maan today I am so happy and I am feeling lite. I was scared for mom, but she understood everything and confronted mamaji. But he wont harm mom na maan? I am scared told a worried geet.

Geet nothing will happen, I am there na nothing will happen, I wont let him enter into our lives again told maan and kissed her hair.

Geet smiled and tightened the hug. They both stayed in the same position for some time feeling each other. They came out of hug and maan kissed her forehead and looking at her lovingly.

I just cant wait for more to make you mine told maan and slammed his lips on hers. Geet is though shocked by his sudden action but loved it and she too responded him with equal passion. Maan brought her close to him holding her waist. Geet snacked her hands round his neck digging her nails in his hair. Maan is nibbling her lower lip making her moan his name. he bite her upper lip and it started bleeding. Maan licked her blood making geet blush furiously. Geet opened her mouth allowing maan to enter and maan entered her mouth both are kissing each other as if there is no tomorrow. Their tongues are playing with each others and tasting the secrets. They both are in their own world and lost in each other. After like ages they broke the kiss due to lack of breath. Geet's face is crimson red and maan bend down to her neck and kissed her neck. Geet moaned in pleasure.

His hands went to her back and opened her dori, geet gasped and hugged him tight. Maan kissed her shoulder and opened the zip. Maan slip her kurti off her shoulder exposing her milky white skin. He made her lie on the bed and came on top of her. Geet's heart beat became uneven due to his proximity and closed her eyes. Maan smiled at her flushed face and captured her lips, they both kissed for some time and maan got up. Geet frowned not feeling him and she opened her eyes to see a smirking maan. geet blushed and hid her face in her palms. Maan smiled at her and kissed her forehead and told I will leave now geet. take care of maa and yourself.

Geet looked at him and nodded. Maan bid her good bye and left from there. Later the whole day went well and maneet talked at night and slept peacefully.

Its just only 15 days left for their marriage. All got busy with the preparations. They booked the hall, decorations, caterers and many more. All the ladies are busy in shopping and gents are looking out marriage preparations. All are busy and no one has time even to breath. Everything is going very well. but here maan and geet are craving for each other to get a single glimpse. Seems like god listened to them and they both went for shopping to select geet's lehenga and maan's sherwani. Hayeee both are so excited to meet each other.

They decided to meet an hour before in McD. So that they can talk with each other and spend some time. Geet wore red color suit and maan came in casuals anyways he is looking hot. They both met in McD and first they hugged each other. Awww how they missed each other its almost 10 days they didn't meet and craving to get a glimpse. Finally today they met and its just only 3 days left for sangeet and mehendi.

Maan and geet went in and talked about all the things going on, about preparations and all. Maan is just listening to her and smiling seeing her excitement. Geet looked him who is smiling at her. Geet pouted and asked why you are smiling?

Maan nodded in a no and asked to continue. Later they both went to mall for shopping. Sales women welcomed them and asked them to sit. Showed the lehenga's geet is liking all and don't know which one to select. She looked at maan making baby face. Maan nodded his head at her antics. He saw a red color with dark green color border lehenga which is beautiful work on it. Geet who saw hat instantly loved that one. She took that one and went to trail room for trying it out. Maan waited and waited but geet still didn't come out. Maan went there and knocked the door.

Geet what happened, why its taking so much time? Asked maan.

Geet slightly opened the door and peeked out. Maan raised her eyebrows asking what?

Maan once come in na? asked geet.

Ummm ok.. told maan and went in. But the sight in front of him made him root at the spot. His geet is looking angelic in the lehenga. She is not less than a angel who came for him. He is staring at her without blinking. But here geet is struggling with the dori. She turned back facing her back to him. Oops her bare back is making him loose his senses.

Maan pls tie the strings na asked geet. Maan rised his hand and touched her bare skin at back, geet jolted with his touch and held her dupatta near her chest to control her erratic heartbeats. Maan is moving his fingers on her skin and finally finally with great difficulty tied the strings. He hugged her from back and bit her ear lobe and whispered you are looking breath taking geet.

Geet blushed and turned back and hid her face in his chest.

Geet you are making difficult for me to control told maan huskily.

Geet broke the hug and pushed him out. Its cheating geet pouted maan but geet closed the door blushing. Later she changed and came out. She asked sales women to pack this lehenga. Maan and geet went to select maan's sherwani. Geet found a green color sherwani matching to her lehenga and maan too liked that one. Their shopping completed, they had lunch in a restaurant and went back to their respective homes.

2 days passed and it's the day of mehendi and sangeet. All is set for that and it is held in geet's house.


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#25
Chapter 23


2 days passed and it's the day of mehendi and sangeet. All is set for that and it is held in geet's house. Geet is in her room getting ready and same with maan. He is getting ready in his room and is thinking about geet.

Geet wore baby pink color suit with a matcing jewellary. And a blush crept on her cheeks listening to the teasings from their friends.

Geet you are looking gorgeous, jiju couldn't take of his eyes fom you teased one of her friend.

Arey di, what you are saying. Jiju tho always lost in di teased pari which made geet shy and blushed hard.

Oyy hoyee without makeup only your face become red told one of her friend.

Hey will you all shut up or should I send you all out of the room warned geet.

But how can they miss the chance they continued their teasings. And finally geet got very and she is looking like an angel who is made for maan. she looked herself in the mirror and smiled. This is all for you maan thought geet and blushed. Later geet's friends took her down for mehendi and made her sit on the center of the stage.

Here maan got ready in a cream color sherwani and looked handsome. Adi and pinky entered into his room at the same time and smiled at him.

Bhai, geet will be flat seeing you teased pinky. Maan shied hearing her.

Maan you are blushing dude teased adi. Shut up adi and lets go, its getting late told maan.

Ohh someone is waiting so eagerly to see his bride told adi and winked.

Maan is embrassed, adi hugged maan and told I am very happy maan. And yes keep my sister happy.

Maan smiled and told I promise.

Adi and pinky smiled and prayed to god to keep them happy always and they all left from there to geet's house. Geet's house is filled with relatives and friends, ful of masti, teasings and laughter.

Soon maan, adi, pinky and their friends arrived and maan's students too. Rano welcomed them with open arms. Maan took blessings from her and she kissed his forehead. His eyes are searching for geet. But he couldn't find as all ladies has surrounded her. But they ladies got the news that dulha has arrived so they all turned back to see maan and maan got the glimpse of his mishty, his life. He is mesmerized by her beauty and stood there rooted. All the girls teased geet seeing maan so hot and handsome. Geet saw maan and is lost in him. Same is the case with maan.

Mehendi girl started applying mehendi on geet's hand and maan is just admiring her, he is falling in love with her all over again. Here some ladies are singing and dancing. All are enjoying in their own way.

Girls formed one group and boys one group. All are in teasing mode. Girls and boys sang in unison.

Ye Kudiyaan Nashe Di Pudiyaan
ye Munde Gali De Gunde
ye Kudiyaan Nashe Di Pudiyaan
ye Munde Gali De Gunde
nashe Di Pudiyaan
gali De Gunde

Maan took the chance and sang seeing geet.

Maan: o Mehndi Laga Rakhna
doli Saja Ke Rakhna
mehndi Laga Rakhna
doli Saja Ke Rakhna
lene Tujhe O Gori
aayenge Tere Sajna (maan rised his collar and winked at geet)
mehndi Laga Rakhna
doli Saja Ke Rakhna

Now how geet back off. She sat there and a girl is applying mehendi and geet sang.

Geet: o Sahra Sajake Rakhna
chehra Chhupake Rakhna
sahra Sajake Rakhna
chehra Chhupake Rakhna
ye Dil Ki Baat Apne
dil Mein Dabake Rakhna
sahra Sajake Rakhna
chehra Chhupake Rakhna

The mehendi girl asked geet the name of her would be. Geet looked at maan and whispered maan.

Maan looked at her and asked what?

Geet nodded in a no and smiled sweetly at him. And the others are singing songs. Finally geet's mehendi is finally completed. Rano came to geet and saw her mehendi and kissed her forehead. Geet smiled with tears in her eyes. Rano nodded in a no and wiped her tears.

Aaj khushiyon ka din hain geet, aansu ki koi jagah nahi told rano. Even rano too got emotional and hugged geet. Maan saw that and thought of changing the atmosphere. He came in the middle of the dance stage and all of them whistled and clapped. Listening to the sudden noise, rano and geet turned to dance floor and saw maan there with a smile on his face. As maan got geet's and rano's attention he started.

Maahi ve maahi ve, that's the way maahi ve

Maan: Tere maathe jhumar damke
Tere kaanon baali chamke hai re

Maahi ve

Tere haathon kangna khanke
Tere pairon paayal chhanke hai re

Maahi ve

Nainon se bole rabba rabba
Mann mein dole rabba rabba
Amrit ghole rabba rabba tu soniye

Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja maahi ve
Everybody say soni soni aaja maahi ve – 2

Geet smiled at him and pari and pinky pulled geet on to the dance floor. Maan pulled geet towards him without disturbing her mehendi. Maan sang seeing geet.

Maan: O teri aankhen kaali kaali
Tera gora gora mukhda hai re

Maahi ve

Teri rangat jaise sona
Tu chaand ka jaise tukda hai re

Maahi ve

Tere gaal gulaabi rabba rabba
Chaal sharaabi rabba rabba
Dil ki kharaabi rabba rabba tu soniye

Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja maahi ve
Everybody say soni soni aaja maahi ve- 2

Geet hugged maan listening to him. She remember all the moments spent with maan, their first meet. Their fight, maan saying sorry. Pari in his dance school and their friendship. Maan celebrating geet's birthday and the his confession. Geet looked at him and maan kissed her forehead promising he will be there always no matter what.

Suddenly all of them stopped singing when they heard a sweet voice. All turned towards geet who is singing for maan.

Geet: Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke-3
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna…

Haayee….
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke.
Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke.

Ankhon mein tum base ho, sapne hazaar ban ke-2
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna…
Haayee….
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke
Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke.

Maan looked at geet lovingly and geet is lost in him and in his love. Geet never expected that she will be happy in her life again. But one day maan came accidentally and changed everything. Now geet's life is with maan. if maan is not there then there is no geet. her every dream is with maan. Her every second in her life from now on is with maan. she cant imagine her life without maan now. Tears formed in rano's and pari's eyes and they know the each and every meaning of those words.

Mere saathi mere sajan, mere saath yun hi chalna-2,
Badalega rang zamana, par tum nahi badalna.
Meri mang yun hi bharna, taare hazaar ban ke-2
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna…
Haaye
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke
Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke

Listening to geet maan promised himself that he will never make geet sad. She has suffered enough in her life now its time for happiness. I will never change geet, I will be the same maan which you loved. I will fill your maang with sindoor of my name. Not only today geet, but each and every morning. Its my promise geet.

Agar main jo rooth jaoon, to tum mujhe manana-2,
Thama hai haath mera, phir umr bhar nibhana.
Mujhe chod ke na jana, wade hazaar kar ke
hmm….
Mujhe chod ke na jana, wade hazaar kar ke
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna….
Haaye…
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke
Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke

Kabhi nahi chodunga geet main tumko. Tum meri zindagi ka anmol hissa ho aur tum hi meri zindagi ho. Main meri jaan ko kaise chod sakta hu geet. kabhi nahi, I will be there with till my last breath. If you are tired then I will be your strength. Agar tumko gussa aya tho main tumko manaonga. tumari khushi meri khushi hain, main tumko kabhi bhi takleef mein nahi dekh sakta hu geet. aaj tumari wajah se mujhko ek parivaar mil raha hain geet. Main tumare saath har waqt, har such, har dukh tumara saath deta hu geet. Yeh tumare maan, GEET KI MAAN ka waada hain geet thought maan and placed his hand on her head as he is promising her.

Geet saw the glow in his eyes and the determination in his eyes and smiled. They both hugged and the hall which silent after geet's song is now filled with claps. All the people who came there blessed maan and geet for their marriage life. Rano is very proud of maan. she knows if maan is there in geet's life then she need not to worry for anything.

The mehendi and sangeet function is completed and all of them enjoyed a lot. And all the guests had dinner and left one by one. Later rano, pari, geet, maan and their friends are left. They all headed to dining hall to have dinner. They all are talking and cracking jokes while eating. Maan looked at geet and winked. Geet looked at him and shied and thinking what is that for?

And after that all of them retired to their rooms as all are tired and tomorrow is haldi and they have to get up early. But maan and geet are thinking about each other and are not able to sleep. Suddenly geet's phone buzzed. She took her mobile and saw that the msg is from maan. she smiled and opened the msg.

Msg: Mishty, tomorrow be ready at 5'o clock I will be coming in your room.

Geet's eyes popped out thinking what he is going to do and that too tomorrow morning. Haldi is at 7 then why at 5 thought geet but she understood nothing.

Thinking about that geet dozed off and maan is dreaming about his mishty. The time moved very slow for maan and geet. But for others it moved very fast. Its just 15 more for 5 am. Maan got up and got ready.

Geet heard a knock on her door. She got up lazily and opened the door. She totally forgot about maan's msg. when she opened the door she found pinky there.

Pinky tu inti subah kyun ayi ho? Asked geet lazily.

Arey tum chup hojao, someone will come whispered pinky. Bhai you go in I will come in 15 min told pinky turning to maan and left from there.

Its then geet remembered maan's msg. Maan happily came in and sat on the bed. Geet immediately closed the door and looked here and there.

Maan aap iss waqt yaha? Pls jayiye yaha se? told geet worriedly.

Relax geet no one will come told maan cooly.

Maan plz jayiye yaha se told geet again.

Maan pulled geet towards him and made her sit on the bed. Geet looked at him with wide eyes very innocently.

Geet main chata hu ki main tumko sabse pehle haldi lagaon told maan.

Geet is overwhelmed and smiled cutely at him. Maan is fida seeing her smile and kissed her red cheeks.

Par haldi kaha hain? Asked geet.

Maan thought for a while and took haldi from the cover without getting to know geet and applied on her cheek. Geet is surprised and touched her cheek. Oh this man already prepared everything thought geet.

Geet took some haldi from that cover and applied to maan. Maan smiled at her and they both shared an eye lock. Maan kissed her forehead and told just few hours geet then you will be mine forever.

Geet blushed and hid her face in his chest. After some pinky rushed in a asked maan to go from there as rano aunty is coming to take geet for haldi. Maan nodded and left form there giving geet a flying kiss in return he blushed.

Rano came to geet's room to take her for haldi function, but she noticed some haldi on her cheek and guessed what might have happened and smiled. She caressed geet's hair and took her out. The haldi function started, first all of them applied haldi to maan and then to geet. Maan thoroughly enjoyed each and every ritual. He is so happy seeing many people around. Maan took rano's blessings. Here geet is blushing like never before. All are hell bent in teasing her. Maan smiled seeing her cute antics. Some times she made baby face, some times she looked at her friends angrily, some times she looked up and cribbed to her babaji. Maan want to kiss her but controlled and enjoyed the rituals with his geet.

Precap: Shaadi and no need to tell I guess.


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#26
Chapter 24



Haldi function is completed, maan and geet went to their respective rooms to take shower. Smile didn't leave their face, they both are so excited and happy to start their new life. Maan had shower and came out, changed into vests and pants. Just then pinky there with breakfast for maan. Maan smiled at her and pinky arranged breakfast for him.

Thanku pinky told maan.

Bhai I know that you are getting married and from tomorrow your wife will do all these things, but doesn't mean that you should be this formal complained pinky listening thanku from maan.

Maan smiled at her complaint and told acha baba I am sorry. And one more thing are you expecting geet will do all these things? Pinky looked at him confused.

Kyun nahi? (why not?) asked pinky.

My dear pinky, does your friend know how to cook? Asked maan rising his eyebrow.

Pinky laughed at him and told poor you bhai, enjoy cooking. And my friend is not that bad too she can make maggie for you and laughed out loud. Maan too joined her laughter.

Hawww you are teasing my sister told pari entering into his room to give his sherwani.

Saaliji, you are also same right? I pity maa, how she is tolerating you both teased maan and pari made a baby face.

Yeh lijiye, your sherwani. I am placing it on the table told pari still pouting.

Arey saaliji tho bura maan gaye teased maan further but stopped seeing her tears. Pinky placed hand on her shoulder and asked what happened pari?

Pari nodded in a no.

Arey pari, I was just kidding. Sorry yaar told maan getting up.

Jiju take care of my di told pari while tears rolled down her cheeks. I was never away from geet di, but today she is going to start a new life. I am very happy for that but from today she wont be with us na told pari looking down.

Maan looked at pinky and then pari. Maan side hugged pari and told pari, you will never miss geet. You are my family now. You are like my sister, we all will stay together, I promise. Now don't cry. If geet see na, she thinks I made you cry.

Pari smiled at maan and thanked him.

Thanku so much jiju. You are the best.

Chalo chalo, we will have breakfast I am hungry told maan touching his stomach.

Jiju, so much work is left you have breakfast and get ready. I will take care of your MISHTY teased pari and ran from there leaving a shocked maan behind.

Ha ha humko pata hain ki geet aapki MISHTY hain pinky too teased further. Now all the boys entered into maan's room and made pinky go out.

Oyy why you all are staring at me? Asked maan making a weird face.

Saale, bachelor party kaha hain? Asked dev.

NO shouted maan.

What no? asked raj.

Bachelor party warty, no way told maan stubbornly.

You don't come, we will enjoy told yash.

Maan is thinking while having breakfast. Hmm ok, you guys enjoy. Don't drink much ok? Asked maan.

Ok dude, thanku thanked yash and went to his dreamy land dancing with girls.

Geet sat on the bed with girls around. She is thinking of something when pari nudged her.

Di, come out of jiju's dreams for some time teased pari.

Geet blushed and slapped on her head warning her. Rano brought breakfast for geet and fed with her own hands. Rano kissed her forehead and blessed her.

Be happy geet, geet hugged rano. Both are having tears in their eyes. Rano broke the hug and told

Chalo, aaj khushiyon ka din hain. Aansu nahi and wiped her tears. Get ready geet, its almost 11 am. You should be ready in 2 hours.

Geet nodded and pinky told don't worry aunty. We are there na.

Rano nodded and left from there.

Pari took out geet's lehenga from cupboard and gave it to her. Geet touched it and smiled. Soon she changed and came out. Her hair is open and she is looking cute in that lehenga. Her friends attacked her with makeup kits and jewelary. Geet sat in front of dressing table and allowed her friends to do what ever they want. Few are making her wear bangles, maang tika and all other ornaments. While few are doing her hair.

Finally seems like ages geet got ready and it took almost 3 hours. Geet looked herself in the mirror. Pari and pinky hugged her from back and told you are looking breath taking.

Geet blushed and lowered her eye lashes.

I will be back told pinky and rushed to maan's room.

Here maan too got ready in his sherwani and applied gel to his hair and looking hot and handsome exposing his chest with first 3 buttons open. Pinky knocked the door. Adi opened and asked what?

Is bhai ready? Asked pinky.

Yes told adi.

Ok I have to tie sehra to bhai told pinky.

Ok ya I forgot come told adi and allowed her to come in. Maan smiled at pinky and she tied sehra to maan. Maan got ready and they all are ready to go to marriage venue. Geet and some of her friends are there in house while rano and other elders went to marriage venue before maan reach there. Maan and his friends with pinky got into the car and started their drive to venue.

Within 1 hour they reached the venue and they all got down. Here rano is already waiting for maan. She saw him and smiled and maan too smiled at her. Rano did aarti and put tilak. She then took sweet and fed maan a spoon. Maan took blessing of rano and entered into the marriage hall. It is beautifully decorated with red roses and orchids favorite of both maan and geet. Soon maan is escorted to mandap.

Here geet too got ready and they too got into the other car and drove to venue. Geet is all nervous and excited. She clutched her dupatta tight and closed her eyes. All other friends are busy in their own world.

Babaji, thanku so much. Today is the most auspicious day in my life. Today I will be Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana. Papaji, aaj main bohot khush hu, aap bhi khush ho na? kaash aaj aap yaha hote. Where ever you are you will be happy. I got my happiness in the form of maan. I need your blessings papaji thought geet to herself and closed her seeking her papaji's blessings.

They reached the venue and all of them got down. Rano came to her and took her inside the hall. Maan felt geet's presence and turned towards the entrance.They looked at each other .

Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

That's it, his breath stuck in his throat seeing his mishty looking not less than angel. Her milky while skin is reflecting more and her pink cheeks and lips and a smile playing on her lips shows how happy she is. She too looked up and saw maan, who is staring at her without blinking. They both are lost in their own world. Geet couldn't tolerate his continous gaze on her and lowered her eye lashes.

Maan smiled at her and rano took geet to the mandap. Due to heavy lehenga, geet is not able to climd the step, maan offered his hand and geet happily took it and climbed the single stair near the mandap and they both stood side by side.

Soon panditji arrived and started chanting mantras. After few minutes, panditji asked them to exchange vanamala. Pari handed one to maan and one to geet.

Soon they both exchanged the vanamala and smiled at each other. Panditji asked them to sit. They both sat side by side and panditji chanting mantras once again. The havan was lit, maan and geet folded their hands infront of havan praying for their future.

Panditji asked maan to fill geet's maang. Maan took a pinch of sindoor and filled geet maang. Geet closed her eyes living the moment.

Maan looked at her lovingly. Then he took mangalsutra and tied around her neck. Geet had tears in her eyes, seeing that maan nodded in a no.

Saat Pheron Se Bandha, Janmon Ka Ye Bandhan

Pyaar Se Joda Hai Rab Ne, Preet Ka Daaman

Hain Nayee Rasmein, Nayee Kasmein, Nayee Uljhan

Hont Hain Khamosh, Lekin Keh Rahi Dhadkan

Dhadkan Dhadkan Dhadkan Dhadkan

Mushkil Ashkon Ko Chukana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte

Abh To Har Apna, Begaana Lagta Hai

Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

They both stood up for pheras. They did seven pheras around the fire, promising each other to be there for each other in every ups and downs of the life. They completed the pheras and took elders blessings. Rano kissed their forehead and blessed for their happy life.

Next ritual was bidaai, it was very emotional, geet hugged both rano and pari and cried. Maan felt bad seeing his geet missing her happy. But he promised himself, soon she will be with her full family.

Main Teri Baahon Ke Jhule Mein Pali Babul

Jaa Rahi Hoon Chod Ke Teri Gali Babul

Khoobsurat Ye Zamaane Yaad Aayenge

Chah Ke Bhi Hum Tume Na Bhool Payengey

Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Dulhe Ka, Sehra, Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Even pinky got emotional seeing geet, she suffered a lot in her life. Finally she is settled and she have full confidence on her maan bhai, he will keep geet always happy, no matter what.

Rano wiped geet's tears and told Khush raho beti, aaj se tum apna naya zindagi shuru karne jaa rahi ho. Sambhalke, mera aashirwad tumare paas sada rahega.

Geet hugged her maa once again. Rano went over maan and told maan beta, meri beti ka khyal rakhna. Thoda gussa bohot ata hain par dil ki achi hain.

Maan smiled and told aap chinta mat kijiye maa, main geet ki aankhon mein ek bhi ansu nahi aane dunga. Yeh mera waada hain maa.

Rano smiled with tears and blessed them. Maan and geet got into the car and started their new journey of their life.


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Chapter 25



Maan and geet got into the car and started their new journey of their life. The driver started the car and his friends are coming on the other car. Maan and geet settled on the back seat. Rano and pari are watching them, geet saw them from the car window and waved to them till they are out of sight. Geet stopped waving and looked at maan with teary eyes. Maan side hugged rubbing her arms. Geet snuggled close to him and relaxed. After some time geet became normal.

Do you need some water? Asked maan. Geet nodded in a no. Maan kissed her head and smiled at her. They both are silent, feeling each other and dreaming about their new life. Just then geet opened her eyes and looked outside and then looked at maan confusingly.

Where are we going? Asked geet.

Just close your eyes and relax, you are tired. When we reach our destination you will come to know told maan.

Geet pouted and asked maan plz tell na. Maan nodded in a no. Geet looked up and told see babaji, its just few hours our marriage happened and he started irritating me and made a cute baby face.

Maan leaned close to her and whispered in her ears. Geet don't make those faces. I cant control myself. His voice is husky and full of desires. Geet looked at him wide eyes gulping her saliva. She lowered her eye lashes and blushed hard. Maan hugged her feeling contended seeing her to normal self and smiling. Soon they reached their destination. Maan blindfolded geet an scooped up in his arms.

Maan what are you doing? Asked geet looking here and there. But not able to see anything due to blindfold.

Chup bilkul chup, how much you ask? Chided maan.

Geet made a baby face, maan took her near the door of their new house and made her stand on her feet. Pinky and others who already came there opened the door and smiled at maan. Maan opened her blindfold and it took few seconds for geet to adjust her sight. She then looked around, Her new house which is so beautiful from outside. The garden on the either sides of entrance, different types of flowers. She is looked at maan in awe, who gave his smile in return.

Andar chale, HUMARA ghar told maan. Geet nodded while tears are threatening to fall down her cheeks. Maan nodded in a no.

Pinky does aarti and puts tilak on geet's and maan's forehead and asks them to enter in to the house.

One minute geet stopped maan. Geet looked at him confused. Just then adi brought the cement plate and kept on the floor.

Our first step in our house should be memorable geet told maan.

Geet smiled happily at him and they both placed their first step on the cement plate and imprinted their feet and entered into the house.


Geet looked around and she is in absolute awe seeing the house simple yet beautiful. It is a 3 bedroom flat, the interior dcor was superb according to the taste of both maan and geet. Geet really loved their new house.


Pinky asked them to go and rest for a while as the other rituals are gonna start in a while. Maan took geet to the other room. They both sat on the couch. Geet placed her head on his chest and closed her eyes. Maan hugged her and closed his eyes. Both are tired so they fell asleep soon.

Here maan's friends are decorating their bed room. After some time they finished decorating and maneet too got up. Pinky knocked the door. Maan opened and allowed her in.

Geet come with me told pinky and took geet with her. Here maan freshened and changed into cream color sherwani. Here geet too changed into her red color saree selected by maan for their wedding night. She looked herself in the mirror and blushed.


Pinky came and hugged her.

I am so happy for you geet told pinky and kissed her cheek.

Geet smiled at her. Pinky took geet to the bedroom and made her sit on the bed. Geet hugged her knees tight feeling happy, scared and excited too.


Here maan came out of the room and was going to his room. But pinky stopped her.

Bhai entry fees tho dena hi chahiye told pinky.

Maan smiled at her and gave her a packet. Pinky looked at him confused. Open told maan.

Pinky opened the packet and found a beautiful necklace. Bhai yeh sab'

No you asked for fees and I gave it. And you are my sister na, and its my right to give a special gift to my sister on my marriage told maan.

Pinky hugged him and thanked him. She broke the hug and told your geet is waiting for you. Maan shied and opened the door. Pinky left from there. Maan slowly entered into the room. Hearing the click of the door geet became alert. Her heart is thudding hard. She hugged her knees more close. Maan slowly closed the door and bolted it.



He walked towards geet and is mesmerized by her beauty. She wore the saree which he selected for their wedding night. Maan smiled at that. He went close to her and sat infront of her. Geet closed her eyes clutching her pallu close to her chest. Maan placed his fingers on her chin and made her look at him. Feeling his fingers on her skin she felt butterflies in her stomach. She didn't dare to open her eyes.

But maan is lost in her beauty, her innocence, her cheeks which are red due to blushing, her lips which are shivering due to his touch.

Aankhein kolo geet (open your eyes geet) whispered maan huskily. How can she deny maan, she opened her eyes. She looked direct into maan's eyes which are ful of love, care and desire. She soon lost in those eyes. Maan inched close to her and kissed her forehead.

Thanku for coming into my life geet.

He kissed her both the eyes.

Thanku for making my life colorful geet.

He kissed her one cheek.

Thanku for making my life worth living.

He kissed her other cheek.

Thanku for being a part of my life geet.

Geet looked at him in awe. Is that she is one who should thank him for making her life worth living again. Geet hugged maan tight. Maan too reciprocated the hug.

Are you ready for our new journey geet? Asked maan.


Geet tightened the hug feeling shy. Maan smiled at her and made her lie on the bed. Maan is looking at her lovingly coming on top of her. Maan pecked on corner of the lips, geet closed her eyes in anticipation. He kissed her lips with full love. Geet's heart is beating fast. She too responded to him with same passion. They both are lost in their own world. Maan's hands pallu and removed it while kissing. A moan escaped from geet and maan entered her fully tasting her every secret in the kiss. Maan removed her pallu. His hands went to her back untying the strings. After some time they broke the kiss due to lack of breath. Maan kissed her shoulders, collar bone leaving a love bite. When geet winced in pain, he soothed it with his love.

Maan untied all the strings and slowly removed her blouse. Geet is now blushing furiously hugged maan tight. Maan placed geet's hands on the sherwani saying her to do whatever she want. Soon their clothes are lying on the ground and they both are lost in their love. The room is filled with their love and moans. Now they became one. They continued their love making late night.

Almost early morning they both are tired and lied on the bed. Geet rested her head on maan's chest. And maan hugged her holding her waist. Both are sleeping peacefully in each other embrace with a smile on their face.

Next morning:

Geet slightly opened her eyes and saw herself in maan's embrace. She blushing thinking of last night. She looked at maan with a smile and caressed his hair and kissed his cheek. When she was about to get up maan held her wrist and pulled her to him. She landed on his chest.

You were awake? Asked geet.

Maan smiled and opened his eyes and kissed her cheek.

Hmmm.. replied maan.

Good morning wished geet.

Good morning wished maan and kissed her lips. Geet too responded to the kiss. After some time they broke the hug and geet is all shy, hide her face in his chest. They both slept for some more time. Geet got up and went to washroom without waking maan. She took shower and came out with a bathrobe. She went near cupboard and opened it. She found all her wardrobe there. Awww how much he arranged everything thought geet and smiled to herself.

She felt a hand on her waist. Geet leaned back and whispered thanku. But maan is in a mood to tease her.

Why you went to shower without me? Asked maan.

Geet looked at him shocked and faced him. She saw a naughty glint in his eyes and slapped on is arm.

Chaliye go and get ready told geet.

No.. told maan like a stubborn child and took her in his arms throwing her bathrobe. They both stood under the shower. Maan opened the shower, feeling the cold water on her skin geet shivered. Maan is drinking her beauty. He saw the love bites here and there and kissed them to sooth her pain.

They had a long shower, making love. Finally they came out of the bathroom and maan selected a dress for her. Geet took it and changed. Geet selected a casuals for him. Geet wore her bangles and was about to apply sindoor. Maan stopped her and he took the pinch on the sindoor and filled her maang.

Geet smiled at him and hugged him tight.

What should I prepare for breakfast? Asked geet.

What ever you like replied maan.

Hmmm.. I will make parathas and kheer told geet. They both went down. First they went to temple in the house and geet lit the light and then aarti. They both prayed to god and then geet left for kitchen. Some how geet successfully prepared parathas and kheer.

Maan, come for breakfast told geet.

Maan who is reading news paper is shocked that geet prepared breakfast so fast. He thought she might call him for help. Maan went near dining table and saw everything is arranged.

Geet, you prepared everything? Asked maan.

Geet nodded yes and asked him to sit. Maan settled down and geet served him parathas, palak paneer and kheer in a bowl. Maan tasted the food and its really delicious.

Geet, when did you learn cooking? Asked maan.

After my birthday party remember you and maa teased me like hell that day. So I learned cooking from the next day told geet.

You never told me asked maan.

I want to surprise you told geet and smiled widely. But immediately frowned you didn't tell me how is food? Asked geet making sad face.

Maan smiled and pulled her, she landed on his lap. He kissed her lips and told very delicious. I loved the food.

Geet smiled broadly and kissed his cheek. They both fed each other, but maan's hands became naughty. After a long time they finished their breakfast. Their first day of their marriage went well. Maan and geet are enjoying their life with eachother.

Maan told rano to come to their house but rano told no. maan and geet tried to convince her but she is adamant. They gave in. But they meet at weekends and go out for a movie or shopping. Everything is going good. All are happy.


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Chapter 26


Everything is going well in maneet's life. Its been 6 years of their marriage. Geet delivered a baby girl who is now 5 years old. She is MUSKAAN MAAN SINGH KHURANA. Princess of her papa. Maan and muskaan are partners in crime, when it comes to geet, they both don't leave no stone unturned to tease her. Yash proposed pari and she happily accepted. Maan knows about their relation and is happy. Maan insisted pari to tell geet, but she is scared of her anger. And pari took promise from maan that she will only tell geet. Maan's tongue tied and he is helpless.

Adi and pinky are married a year back with the blessing of their families. Maan's friends dev and raj are settled in their life. Raj started his own business and is in full of profits. But he is not satisfied, he want to earn more and more money. Dev is married to meera and is happy in his life.

it's a typical Monday morning. Maan's princess muskaan is still sleeping and here geet is shouting on her.

Muskaan, be a good girl and get up. Its already 8am and you are still sleeping. Don't you want to go to school. Bus will arrive in 30 min. Muskaan get up shouted geet. But no response this is happening from past 30 min.

But baby muskaan covered her face with a blanket and closed her eyes.

Just then maan entered muskaan's room.

Geet why you are shouting at my princess asked maan.

I am shouting right? Didn't you see the time, its 8 am and she is still sleeping. You spoiled her maan. Now wake up your daughter told geet angrily.

Maan sat on the bed and leaned close to muskaan and whispered princess, mama is so angry dear. Plz get up. You are a good girl na tried maan.

But no response.

Ok.. daddy will buy teddy for you.

No response.

Chocolates..

No response.

Maan smiled at himself and shouted ICECREAM..

Hearing the word icecream. Muskaan uncovered her blanket and shouted Yayyy.. and smiled widely at maan.

You are the best daddy shouted an excited muskaan and hugged maan. Maan too hugged her. They both looked at geet and sticked their tongue out.

No one can change you both, chaddo.. told geet and left muskaan's room.

Maan and muskaan hi-fied and shook their hands saying both at a time DADDY PRINCESS BOTH ARE FRIENDS and smiled at each other. Later geet cooked breakfast, maan and muskaan came to dining hall all ready. Geet fed muskaan and gave lunch box to both maan and muskaan. Soon the school bus arrived. Muskaan bid good bye to maan and geet.

Maan you have spoilt muskaan a lot told geet.

Maan smiled and hugged her from back and told no geet nothing like that. She is a kid still, she will understand when she grow up.

Hmmm sighed geet.

Waise, next Sunday you and muskaan are coming to dance school right? Asked maan.

Yes we are coming, muskaan is giving dance performance in her school for cultural day, so have to come na told geet and smiled at him.

Yeah right told maan and kissed her cheek.

Maan main aao aaj dance school par asked geet.

Yeh koi poochne ki baat hain. Come lets go told maan smiling widely.

Geet got ready and they both went to dance school. They both reached in an hour. Maan got busy with his students and geet is watching them sitting on the steps.

Its almost lunch time, adi and raj came to dance school. Geet looked at them and smiled. She frowned seeing raj there. She never liked him but he is maan's friend.

Hiii geet..

Hii adi bhai. How are you and how is pinky? Asked geet.

She is fine and me too smiled adi.

Where is maan? Asked raj. Geet pointed towards dance floor.

Kuch kaam hain? Asked geet.

Yes I need to talk to maan told raj.

Geet just nodded and called maan. Maan looked at adi and raj and waved them. After 5 min he came to them.

Hey adi, hii raj wished maan.

Hii maan, I need to talk to you told raj.

Ya sure come,we will sit in office told maan.

Maan, adi and raj went to office and settled. Geet just looked at them from downstairs.

Bolo Raj what is the matter? Asked maan.

Wo.. maan.. wo stammered raj.

Maan looked at him and raj looked tensed.

Maan placed his hand on his shoulder and told tell raj kya hua?

Actually I got a very big project for my company told raj.

That's good then what is the problem asked maan.

The problem is that I don't have much money for that. The project is for 5 crores and I have very less money. When I approached a bank for loan they asked me for surety told raj.

Ohh that's the matter, you want me to sign on the surety papers? Asked maan.

Raj nodded in a yes.

And you are hesitating to ask me this. Come on raj we are friends yaar. Give me those papers I will sign them told maan.

Raj smiled at him widely and gave those papers. Maan read those papers and sighed them. The deal is that if Raj wont pay the loan in 3 months then maan have to pay. In case if maan is not able to pay that money then his whole property will be ceased and kept under auction.

Maan without thinking anything he signed those papers. Raj thanked him and left from there smiling. Adi looked at maan seriously.

Now what happened to you? Asked adi.

Maan, do you know what you are doing? Asked adi.

What happened ? asked maan.

How can you sign those papers maan? Asked adi.

Whats wrong in it? Helping a friend is crime or what? Asked maan surprisingly.

Maan, helping is not wrong. Without knowing anything about that project how can you sign? Asked adi.

Don't be stupid adi. He is our friend, how can I cant help him? Told maan.

Adi shook his head and went down. Geet who saw adi called him.

Adi bhai called geet.

Adi went towards geet. What happened bhai? You are looking sad? Asked geet.

Try to make your stubborn husband understand the things. All are not good in this world told adi angrily.

Geet looked at him confused. Adi sighed and told her what all happened just few minutes back.

I will talk to maan, bhai told geet.

Better replied adi and left from there. Geet sat there thinking. She is feeling some thing is not good. 5 crores is not a joke. They are not that rich to sign for a 5 crores surety. What if raj is not able to pay that money. Geet thoughts went to her mamaji, how he cheated her father.

No, the history should not repeat again thought geet. She was silent the next half day. Evening they picked up muskaan from school and went back home. As promised maan brought ice cream for muskaan.

Daddy my report card, I got first rank told muskaan.

Maan took her report card and looked at her proudly. He kissed muskaan's cheek and told my princess is the best. Maan saw geet is silent. He called her.

Geet called maan.

But she didn't respond anything.

Mama shouted muskaan loudly. Geet jerked with sudden noise and looked at them.

Why you are shouting? Asked geet.

Mama, daddy is calling you from long time told muskaan.

So what? You go to your room and complete your home work told geet sternly.

Muskaan looked at maan with sad face. Maan kissed her forehead and told her to go. Muskaan nodded and left from there.

Once she left maan came near geet and asked what's wrong geet?

Whats wrong? That you are asking me asked geet.

Geet' but geet rised her hand asking him to stop.

Maan, once you thought about muskaan and me when you are signing those surety papers? Didn't you once think of telling me asked geet looking hurt.

Geet, don't be ridiculous. He is my friend and asked me for help. There is no time to think and take decision. What if in the mean time, he looses his contract asked maan.

Maan, what if he is not able to pay that money in 3 months asked geet.

Geet he will pay told maan now really getting irritated with her continous questions.

Maan' but before she say anything, maan held geet's shoulders and told geet, its my personal matter and don't interfere in this. He is my friend and I helped him that's it. I don't want to discussion regarding this. He left her and went to garden frustrated. He is not able to understand why all are talking about this. Morning adi and now geet.

Geet stood there rooted. Its my personal matter and don't interfere in this.

Tears were flowing down her cheeks. Its his personal matter? Then who am i? thought geet to herself. But their fight didn't miss by our sherni Muskaan. She is angry on her daddy for shouting on her mama. She followed maan to garden. Maan who sat on the swing saw muskaan and smiled at her.

But muskaan gave angry glare to him. Ufff now what happened to my princess thought maan and tried to take her in his arms. But she jerked.

Why you shouted on mama? Asked muskaan.

Maan closed his eyes, gosh thought maan.

Till you say sorry to mama, I wont talk to you daddy told muskaan.

Ufff he is stuck between his mishty and his princess.


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#29
Chapter 27



Why you shouted on mama? Asked muskaan.

Maan closed his eyes, gosh thought maan.

Till you say sorry to mama, I wont talk to you daddy told muskaan.

Ufff he is stuck between his mishty and his princess.

I am sorry princess, it was just tried maan to say something.

No I don't want to listen anything daddy, you have to say sorry to mama told muskaan sternly and held maan's hand and dragged him towards their room.

I will stand here only, you go and say sorry told muskaan.

But.. princess..

I wont talk to you warned muskaan.

Maan cursed himself under his breath and smiled at muskaan. But muskaan didn't smile and glared at him.

Ok ok I am going told maan and went inside his room. He saw geet lying on the bed, maan is facing her back. He turned back to see muskaan is there or not. But muskaan is watching him placing her hands on her hips.

Ge.. geet called maan. Geet heard him but didn't turn back.

Geet.. maan called again. Geet got up still facing her back to him. She wiped her tears. Maan felt bad seeing her in tears and his heard.

Maan went towards geet and knelt on his knees in front of her and looked at her apologetically.

I am sorry geet, I didn't mean all those. Just in anger I talked all rubbish apologized maan. Geet knows what he all spoke is in anger and he rarely gets angry.

She asked how cum you apologized me this early.

Maan smiled and told wo.. muskaan told me if I wont say sorry to you she wont talk to me.

Geet glared at him and told uthiye.. I have work.

Here outside muskaan slapped her forehead and thought nothing can happen now. ufff daddy grow up.

Arey now what happened? Asked maan.

What happened ? you are not regretting what you told, just because of muskaan you apologized me? Asked geet angrily.

Muskaan giggled mutely seeing her daddy's plight.

Arey geet, its not like that told maan.

Then what?? You better sleep on couch today. And I have work I am going told geet. Muskaan left from there seeing their fight. Ufff daddy thought muskaan.

Maan held geet's wrist and pulled her to him and she collided to his rock chest.

I am sorry geet apologized maan.

Geet with teary eyes asked I am your wife na, then how can you say its your personal matter. Don't I mean anything to you.

Maan is shocked listening to her and told nothing like that geet, woo I don't know what I was talking at that time. I promise I will never repeat it again.

Geet looked at him and hugged him tight. If she asks about that matter again, then there will be a problem. For time being geet thought to be quiet. Maan too hugged her back and kissed her forehead.

Later at night, all the 3 maan, geet and their princess went to restaurant for dinner. They enjoyed the food and after that they went to icecream parlour and ordered their favorite icecream. And enjoyed the cool breeze having icecream. They all got into the car and muskaan slept on maan's shoulders. He slowly made her sleep on the back seat, maan and geet settled in the driver and passenger seat. After half and hour journey, they reached home. Geet carried muskaan in her arms and placed her on the bed in her room. Geet went to her room and changed. Maan too changed and lied on the bed beside geet.

Geet rested her head on maan's chest and they both slept peacefully after making love. 1 month has passed everything is going well. Muskaan went to dance class with maan to practice dance for her school function. She is very excited. She danced with her daddy. Maan is very impressed by her dancing skills. She learned every step very fast.

Later in the evening they went back home. Muskaan is so excited, she went to geet who is doing her work in the kitchen talking with rano on phone.

Mama.. called muskaan.

Coming beta geet shouted back and told to rano she will call later.

Geet went to hall and saw very much excited muskaan.

Geet hugged muskaan and asked what happened? My baby is so happy.

Mama, today I did dance with daddy. You know I learned many steps told muskaan. And showed what she learned. Geet and maan smiled at their princess and they both hugged her tight.

Its been 3 month after the Raj incident and geet is all nervous thinking about that incident. As expected the worst day has come. Geet is at home and that day maan came home for lunch. They heard the door bell ring. Geet went and opened the door. There are some officers on the door.

Yes??

Is Mr. Khurana at home? Asked one of the officer.

Yes, plz come in told geet and went in for calling maan.

They came in and maan has come to hall.

Mr. Khurana?

Yes..

Are you the one who signed the surety papers for Mr. Raj asked the officer.

Yes sir told maan.

I am sorry Mr. Khurana, Mr. Raj didn't pay his loan account from past 3 months. We tried to contact him but he is unavailable. Now as you signed these papers its you who have pay the loan amount with interest told officer.

Maan and geet are utterly shocked hear this. Maan has nothing to say, he has to pay the amount at any cost.

We have to put your house and dance school for auction Mr. Khurana and we are giving you one week time to leave this house told officer and gave some papers to him and left from there.

Maan stood there rooted and geet collapsed on the couch. Geet remembered how her mamaji cheated her dad. And here Raj cheated Maan. Again the same history repeated. Babaji, now what should we do? How can we pay 5 crores. If we leave this house where should we go? Thought geet and cried.

Maine kaha tha maan, just think once you do anything. But no you never think anything before helping and see the consequences now. where we should go now? speak up maan cried geet.

Maan looked at geet with pain, how can this happen? No raj cant do this. Maan tried calling Raj, how his phone is unavailable. He called his office, but no one is picking the call. Geet called rano and told what all happened. Rano is sad hearing this and asked maan and geet to come to their house with muskaan.

And maan tried for money but he didn't get 5 crores any where. And one week passed with the same. Muskaan and geet are with rano. Rano tried to control geet but geet's anger is rising day by day. Finally it's the day maan and geet have to leave their house forever and the house is kept under auction. Maan is so shattered and adi came there to talk to maan. But adi cant do anything other than consoling him.

Maan is so guilty and don't know what to do. Geet came to maan and sat beside him. Maan hugged geet and told I am sorry geet, I never expected Raj will cheat me.

Geet caressed his back and told shhh maan, calm down. We will think some way to come out of this problem.

May be geet is angry on maan, but at this time maan needs her and she should be his strength but not weakness.


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Chapter 28



P.S.: The medical issues are purely my imagination.. 😛

Maan is so guilty and don't know what to do. Geet came to maan and sat beside him. Maan hugged geet and told I am sorry geet, I never expected Raj will cheat me.

Geet caressed his back and told shhh maan, calm down. We will think some way to come out of this problem.

May be geet is angry on maan, but at this time maan needs her and she should be his strength but not weakness.

Shhh maan relax, what has happened is happened. We cant change it now. Pls aap shaant hojayiye tried geet to convince him.

Seeing geet near him made him feel relax, he didn't expect that raj will cheat on him. He is hell angry on him but cant do anything. Maan slept on geet's lap mumbling sorry continously. Geet is caressing his hair making him feel relax.

In the evening adi came to meet maan. They both talked for some time.

I need to find a job yaar told maan.

Maan, are you sure? Asked adi.

Yes adi, I have my architecture degree with me. I will apply in any firms. I don't want to trouble rano maa more told maan.

Maan if you need any help then tell me ok? Told adi.

Maan nodded and thanked him.

Its been a month since that incident, maan took a small flat and they shifted there. Maan got a job in one of the construction firm but its useful for their expenses and muskaan school fee. At present they are not having any problem. Rano and Pari supported them in every way. Yash insisted that he will pay back that money but maan told

Yash I am happy that you came forward to help me but dude everything is fine now. And if at all I needed I will ask you for sure told maan.

Yash hugged maan and told remember maan, I you need anything you just call me, I will be there ok??

Maan nodded and thanked him. Pari saw this and looked at yash with a proud smile and mouthed a thanku. Yash nodded in assurance. Here muskaan, joined her school back and geet too applied for a job where she resigned before. She will be getting her call letter in a month or two.

One day maan and geet are in the hall relaxing. Its been month maan joined office, just then muskaan came from school. She is looking very happy.

Daddy.. shouted muskaan and jumped on his lap.

Hii princess, how was the day today? Asked maan.

Fine daddy, tomorrow there is a sports day in our school and I am participating told muskaan smiling.

Wow that's great, I know you will come first this time too told maan and kissed her forehead.

Daddy you know, I liked this place very much. All my friends are here and I can play with them daily told muskaan smiling broadly.

Acha, really?? Nice smiled maan. But sad that their life is not like before where he can give all the luxuries to his princess. Geet noticed the pain in his face and placed her hand on his shoulder blinking her eyes. Maan smiled and nodded.

Muski, go and change your dress I will brings milk for you told geet. Muskaan nodded and left from there.

Maan, you please don't think of what happened. See now everything is fine told geet and smiled.

Thanku for understanding geet but sorry for what I did told maan feeling guilty.

Maan please don't be sorry. But think before what you do told geet nervously. Maan looked at her with serious face and then smiled.

Yes geet I will told maan and hugged her.

Geet gave milk to muskaan and she drank making faces. But geet is stubborn.

Next day:

Muskaan is very excited for her sports day and even parents are allowed to watch the event. So maan and geet too accompanied her to the school. The events have started in the school and muskaan is busy with her friends. Maan and geet are settled in the audience encouraging muskaan. Now it's the time for running race and muskaan is participating.

The race has started and muskaan is leading, and all are shouting muskaan muskaan, maan and geet too. She looked at maan and waved. Maan smiled and waved back.

But all of a sudden she fell down. Maan and Geet got worried and got up.

Muskaan' shouted maan. But to their relief, muskaan got up and smiled at them. They both sighed in relief. But the next moment they are hell shocked to see the blood coming out of her nose. Muskaan sense something wet near her nose and touches it. Maan rushes to muskaan and takes out his hand kerchief and wipes the blood.

Daddy' called muskaan and fainted in his arms.

Muskaan muskaan called maan but listening no response from her maan took her in his arms and both maan and geet rushed to the hospital in a taxi. Maan is calling her but she is not at all responding.

Maan, what happened to her. why she is not opening her eyes asked geet in the verge of crying and maan is also in the same condition. Soon they reached hospital.

They admitted muskaan and doctor checked her. he cleaned the blood and completed few tests. Here maan is sitting beside muskaan caressing her hair. Geet is outside as muskaan is in ICU and only one person is allowed. Soon rano and pari reached hospital only to see crying geet.

Geet beta what happened? Asked rano.

Maa.. cried geet and hugged her. I don't know maa, its been 2 hours we came here and no one is saying anything told geet.

Di, where is jiju? Asked pari.

He is with muskaan inside told geet.

Geet, don't worry everything will be fine told rano and made her drink some water.

Maan came out and saw rano and pari with geet. Geet looked at maan and rushed to him.

Maan, how is muskaan? What doctor told? Asked geet.

Geet, relax doctor called us to his cabin, come lets go told maan.

Maa.. muskaan'

Don't worry maan, we will be there with her told rano.

Maan and geet went to doctors cabin.

Doctor what happened to my daughter? Asked maan.

Mr. Khurana the wounds are not that serious told doctor.

Maan smiled but frowned when doctor said but..

But what doctor? Asked maan.

Maan relax, when we doing her check up we observed that she is having breathing problem told doctor.

Breathing problem? Asked maan confused.

Yes Mr. maan, then Dr. Mehra asked us to do some tests. And your daughter is having some problem. See Mr. Khurana some children have a narrow valve from birth and that will become more narrow as they grow up' but he was cut by maan.

See doctor I am maan and my daughter is muskaan, pls check the reports once again. I think the reports are mis-placed told maan not able to believe what doctor is saying.

No Mr. Khurana, we are not wrong. Your daughter is in critical condition told doctor.

Just stop it doctor, you people are lying. Till today she didn't had any problem and all of a sudden you are saying that she has a heart problem. Are you guys joking asked maan angrily.

Look maan, why do we lie. Its true that your daughter is having problem and she should be operated immediately told doctor.

I know this, I am expecting something like this. See doctor my daughter is perfectly alright. My muskaan is fine, she don't have any problem don't try to cheat me told maan and got up.

Come geet we will go to told maan.

Go we are not stopping you told Dr. Mehra who is silent till now.

Maan turned back.

You can go now, but after a week or so don't come with your daughter again who will be in critical condition told Dr. Mehra.

How dare you doctor. How can you say like that? Roared maan.

Geet got tensed listening to him.

Look maan, we saw your daughters condition that's why we are saying. If we didn't observe then we could have just treated for her wounds and prescribe some medicines but we didn't do that. We care for each and every patient who come here told Dr. Mehra.

Doctor that means our daughter is really having problem asked geet.

Yes ma'am she really has, its truth and we have to believe told Dr. M.

Maan collapsed on the chair.

He then looked at maan and told we have to do operation in a week. Nahi tho her condition will be more critical.

Doctor but till yesterday she was fine then all of a sudden? Asked maan not able to believe his daughter, his muskaan is in critical condition.

Maan, some things we don't observe till it reaches last stage told doctor.

Maan closed his eyes in pain and got up and walked out of the cabin like a life less body. Geet followed him. He directly went to muskaan's ward and held her hand and kissed it.

Muskaan opened her eyes and smiled at maan. Maan too smiled at her and kissed her forehead.

Sorry daddy told muskaan.

Maan looked at her confused.

I lost the race this time. But I will win next time pakka told muskaan making cute face.

Maan smiled at her and told I know darling, you will win for sure.

Daddy when we will go home, I am liking the hospital smell told muskaan.

We will go soon muskaan told maan trying hard to control his tears. Baby I will come now, you take rest told maan and muskaan nodded and closed her eyes. Adi who came to hospital listened what doctor told. He followed him to muskaan's ward. He had tears in his eyes seeing them.

Maan came out and saw adi there. He hugged him and cried his heart out.

Adi.. my muskaan. What happened to her? she will be fine na, nothing will happen to her na? asked maan.

Maan calm down nothing will happen to her. be strong maan told adi. Come we will go and talk to doctor.

Maan and adi went to doctors cabin.

I am sorry doctor, I overreacted before apologized maan.

Its ok maan, we understand. All of a sudden when you listen your daughter is not well it happens told doctor.

Doctor what we should do now? asked adi.

See the operation which charge very high, we have buy the valves from other country as we don't get in india. And each valve will be 6 lakhs and we need 2. And the doctor at present he is in abroad. We have to call him and he will charge high. So totally we need 25 lakhs for operation and we have to do it in 1 week told doctor.

Maan is shocked. if his didn't cheated on him then 25 lakhs he would arrange in within hours. But now his salary is enough for daily expenses then 25 lakhs is impossible for him but he didn't loose his strength. He can do anything for his muskaan.

Doctor you arrange for operation, I will arrange money told maan and got up.

Precap: We are'


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