MG SS : Dastaan -E- Wafa *|| Part 18 @ Page 74 ||* 21-June-15

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

congrats dear...

part 1
nice start...
oh ho its gonna be a painful story...
poor Geet...
and Maan that was so rude of him...
he should pay for it and think thats what hes doing now...
1st Anni?
what wrong with Geet or is it Maan?
cont soon dear...

PS - well if its a happy waala one then make it as an SS or FF but if its a sad one OS would be fine...i cant take sad ones that easily...u know that too...

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

beautiful part1

congrates on new SS

thanx for the pm dear

cont soon

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shabnam

@shabnam22

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

congrats for new ss...
What happened to Geet??
so maan will try to find her and will help her without her knowledge...

Amazing update...
Loved d poems...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Congo for New Story 😊
Nice Start Sobi 👏

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

That was an amazing update..
geet has a disease.. kya hua geet ko?
ye maan bhi na.. uske wajah se meri geet ki career barbaad ho gayi na..
but i loved her confidence!!

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snehadingoe

@snehadingoe

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

sobia... frstly congo... u are back vd a bang.. i surely need an ss... if possible ff... loved each n every bit of ths part... yaar the poems were vry b'fully written... frst part se hi irthni curiosity create kardi... kounsa disease..?? geet kaha gayi... ? ab maan kya karega..? kaise milenge... nd hw vl ds mst romantic couple fall in luv... plz yaar iss baar jaldi j😛aldi update karde... nd min 15 parts likh... plz ...

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Mind blowinggg start Sobi...
Very well written update...
The poem is really mesmerisinggg...
Aghhh..i am feeling like banging Maan's head somewhere...
Duffer..hamesha apni feelings chupaane ke chakkar me mwri Geet ko hurt karta hai..
& Leena Thaapar..kamini..uske toh mai tukde tukde kar ke kutto ko khila doon..
But loved the way Geet replied tht bloody b****..
Maan has realized his mistake..
Lekin Geet ne Maan ko aasani se maaf nahi karna chahiye..

& Sobi it's my humble request plzzz make it a ff..
I want to experience all the thick & thin moments of Maaneet's journey..plzzz..

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

ha ha Geet ne Thaapar ko thappar mara...very good Geet...so she is not damsel in distress type of girl...she can give slap to a person who mess with her...

after so much humiliation geet is gone...Maan is repenting after knowing truth...lekin AB PACHTAAYE HOT KYA JAB CHIDIYA CHUG GAYI KHET...

anyway jab Maan Geet se ulta-seedha behave karega then only he will repent and keep on remembering her in his guilt...and this will become foundation for their love...

what is Geet's illness...why she is so weak...

see what ever u make this story FF, SS, OS but please it should be happy ending...

thanx for pm...