MG SS : Dastaan -E- Wafa *|| Part 18 @ Page 74 ||* 21-June-15

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mishtib

@mishtib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

beautiful story

i think geet will land in his company for the architect post

then the real story will start

nice update

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

nice dear😊

plz update soon👏

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

plss do let me know ..if u want it to be an OS ..like i can end it in 2 parts or SS ..plss plss plsss ...but yes it wont be a very happy happy dastaan ..me warning u already n those u can't handle mystery plss stay away as maan's character is like that till the end ...NOW DECIDE WHAT U WANT ...😃

SOBIA LOVED THE START

MAAN IS A RUDE ARROGANT MAN

BUT AN ANGEL WILL CHANGE HIM

MAKE IT AN SS AND A MYSTERY BUT LET IT BE A HAPPY ENDING

IF IT IS SAD THEN I WILL NOT LIKE TO READ IT

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

lovely start
and the poems r awesome

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-gurtimaniac-

@-gurtimaniac-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Congrats for the new story

I would like to read as SS

Beautifully written

Grrr Leena - want to kill her as she had played with Geet Career due to jealousy

Maan is now in guilt of not listening to Geet

As per the 1st poem -

Maan will be the saviour of Geet but will not come in front of her and will helped her out in all the difficult times and situation