Maneet,Do you remember ( fiction)Chp 20 pg 34

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Chp 1 : ghost from the past

The past is not just a word , its full of our memory the good and ones the bad one,our success and our failure, and a lot of people that we used to know or the ones we still do ,we will always know that our past lead us to our phase today and made us the person that we are .
But what if we lose part of that past and that part comeback to hunt us again



" something is going to happen today , i have that feeling " Geet said to herself before she get out from her small green car ,she was dressed in a beautiful green saree with all her jewels on looking like a indian princess, she was looking breath taking that passing men couldn't stop themself from looking at her,her phone ring its her mom , she answer "I know mom im late for my engagement party but sorry i was lost was it necessary to throw the party in his uncle's hotel ?"
Rano " If you had stay at home today you would have come with us but no, you couldn't miss a day of work"
Geet" you know that i had a very important order today i couldn't let everybody down , you know im the best ,if i let them handled things would turn to a mess, by the way in any floor are you?"
Rano said with after she take a deep breath" 15 , you are going to drive me crazy "
Geet said joking
" You are saying that since the day we meet when exactly that is going to happen ?"
Rano said " stop your jocks and come here right now"
Geet laugh and end the call , she start running inside the hotel without caring of the people that look at her , she stop infront of the elevator puch the Button having no idea that she is opening the door to her past , a past start and end with one name Maan Singh Khurana


Geet was waiting for the door to open while looking at the floors numbers above the elevator murmuring with a smile " ...11, 10, 9,8,7,6,5..." not aware that she is doing countdown to meet him again .
Maan was alone in the elevator talking on the phone with a cold tone "Dev im coming ,yes i signed the deal,just prepare the car then start to prepare my private plane, im going back to India today "
Dev " ok ,Maan"
Maan " By the way did get rid of all the bodyguards like i told you"
Dev " no , sir"
Maan " why , they are so much , im not the president of the united state"
Dev laugh and said " i know sir, but your father ask me to protect you"
Maan said without showing a small change in his cold expressions
" Get rid of them im not a ..."
Geet " 2, 1"
suddenly he stop talking when he saw her, a girl enter in the levator not eny girl its GEET, Maan was shocked that he drop his cell phone, Geet was looking to her wristwatch but when she hear the sound of the cell fall she turn to see the guy who was next to her , and she think " this guy look like he just had to shock of his life"
then she pick up the phone from the floor and hand it over Maan
saying " Sir , your cell , sir here is your phone " but Maan was just standing there like a statue , then she said " are you ok sir ? you look like you just see a ghost , sir ? "
Maan just take the phone on silence without stoping looking at her , then when he was about to hold her hand the door open and Geet rush to get out since she was late , while she was walking Maan finally find the strength to scream " Geet"
Geet stop turn and look at him , they keep looking at each other intil the door of the elevator close ,
Geet said " Did that guy just call my name ?" a voice of an employee of the hotel cut her thought "exuse me mam are you Miss Geet ?"
Geet said in a wanderer " yes , iam "
he said " everybody is waiting for you, could you please fallow me " ,Geet" ok "and she fallow him , while her eyes still looking in the elevator direction, and ask herself " Do i know him ?"
Maan was still in a shock state , then he ask himself " was that girl realy Geet ?, maybe just a look alike but she stop when i call her name , but her parents have told me that she died during the surgery"
Maan's shock and confuse turn into anger and say " How dare they lie to me and told me that my wife is dead "


The past is a strong word , it will always hunt us ,as a memory, as a feeling or as a person, we cannot run from it ,specialy if we are the most important part in someone else past

chp 2 calm before the storm , Page 1

chp 3: come with me , page 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75914968

chp 4 falshbacks , page 3

chp 6 : The very beginning, page 5

chp 7 : the notebooks

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75950799


chp 8 : First love part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3431470/maneet-do-you-remember-fiction-chp-20-pg-34?pn=8

chp 9 : First love part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76060179

chp 10: childhood's pains

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76066535

chp 11 : One last time of love

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76073088

chp 12 : friends

Chp 13: Falling in love again

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76100594

chp 14: Don't You Remember ?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76160454
chp 15 : Will you marry me ?


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome first part
geet is getting engaged and
in the lift she meets her husband whom she does not recognise
and maan comes to know his wife his alive
and her parents told him she died in the operation
want to see how maan will stop the engagement
and how will geet recognize maan
please update soon
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HI !!!!!!!!!!! awesome ... thank u thank u ...
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chp 2 calm before the storm

As human we love to own , its a naturale desire , we all want to have someting , maybe own materials ( stuff, money ..) ,or own our freedom , or own someone, that why Slavery was a huge part of human's history , but we the most great way to own someone is by " Love ", somehow our parent own a part of us, so the rest of our familly and when it come to the relationship between man and woman this desire become stronger , marriage is way to say " i own you , you are mine " , this become easier if we are in love , but what if we forgot love and someone still own us ?


Geet enter the dress room , when her mother Rano and sister Rajji were waiting
Rajji said when she saw her " Finally , everybody is waiting for you for more than 30 minute "
Geet " Chill Sis, im here its not like im late to my wedding day , and im fully dressed, its great that i took my clothes with me" she laugh
Rano " in your wedding dear you are going nowhere Young lady, you gonna stay at home with us , no work "
Geet " ok , mom , but tell me how do i look ? " before they could answer Geet said with an evil smile " i know im saxy ,but somebody has the do it "
Rajji and Rano look at each other's then start laughing
Rajji said trying to controle her laugh " o god geet im gonna miss your weird and fanny talks " , when Rano hear that she become emotional and said " we realy gonna miss you Geet beta "
Geet look at her mother who was about to cry and said " mom, please dont cry , atlest think about your make up" Rano smile and Rajji said " O god Geet, you never stop joking " and start to get emotional too, Geet said " not you too, come on im getting married not travelling to the Mars, there is somethings call it phone , internet , FB , skype , so comedown , also you can cry in the wedding day im just engagement and you are the ones who arrange this marriage not me, i was realy happy being single if you dont stop crying im going to stop this vivah "
Rano and RAjji smile when every joke Geet said , then Rano said "no dear it took us a long time to convince you so let go of your singlehood, i want to see your kids before i die " everybody start to laugh , Geet was happy to see them smiling , their smile was the most important thing for her , they are her family, they save her and give her a new life when she was a lonely kid in the Orphanage, the day they adopted her was the day of her second birth.

Maan was looking for Geet like a crazy , then he stop and ask employee about a girl in a green saree, the destiny love the play with this 2 , that employee was the same one who show Geet the dressing room
" o yes sir , she is Miss Geet and her engagement party is today in that hall"
he said that went away and left Maan on shock " engagement, are they kidding me ?"
he take his cell and call Dev " The Guards that you brought have guns ? "
Dev say in shock " why ? "
Maan " dont answer my question by another "
Dev " yes , but why ?"
Maan "Listen carefully and do exactly what i will said without questions "


Geet walk into Vikram while everybody were looking at her beauty, her mother and sister were with her
she stop infront of him
Vikram said on Whisper " You are late "
Geet said " sorry , i will let you come late in our wedding day "
Vikram smile " Its ok, just let me throw a bachelor's party"
Geet " only if you let me throw one for me too "
They start laughing, then Rajji start pulling their legs " you seem to miss each's other , just put the rings and we will let you talk alone "
The ceremony start and Geet and Vikram start to exchange the rings Geet was smiling but she was thinking to whole time
"I dont love him but my parents arranged our marriage, and they are happy,he seem nice, and his family too and they said" choose the man that your mind love not your heart and you will never get hurt " so i will do it"
she suddenly wake up from her thought when Vikram hug her, she feel uncomfortable while everybody were claping Geet start thinking "O god when their clap will end,when this hug will end , please god end this hug im starting to Smother, this man has realy strong arms"


Suddenly a Silence Spread in the hall when Maan scream with anger
" Take off your hands of my wife bas***d"


We enjoy awning things and people but when we lose something priceless , that use to be ours we gonna do everything to have it back specialy if that was person , and not eny person our
soulmate
Edited by kholita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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When will we get next update??
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Don't tell me maan is going to kidnap Geet?
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Wow...awswe start,seems geet forget her past which is related to maan,I love this attitude of msk.he will never let go his geet again.loved it.thanx fr pm.I going to send u a buddy request plz add me pm me next part also.cnt sn.
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hey dear
u started in maaneet froum
thanxzz 4 writing her
awesome i just love to read it again again
Edited by fiano - 12 years ago
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chp 3: come with me





Everybody live in their little world but what if we find that our world is not like we picture it , and that the people that we trust the most hide the biggest truth of our life from us


everybody were shoched , while the doors of the hall were closing and a lot of men Surrounded the people while some of fallow Maan who was heading to Geet and looking at her while Dev was telling everybod " comedown everybody its not an attak it a familly affair please if enyone is not from the direct familly leave from that door , we have something private to discuss"
Guests start heading the only door that was left oppen and when the last guest was left Dev close the door , and the only ones who were in the hall are Geet , Vikram and their Families , Maan was still heading to Geet who was shocked while Mohinderlaal , Rano and Vikram were Frightened looking at him coming with anger in his face , Maan push Vikram take Geet's hand, take off her ring and throw it on the floor , and tell her with anger while he keep holding her hand " What the hell are you doing ?"
Geet said " wow can you read minds thats exactly what i was about to ask you , add the that WHO THE HELL ARE YOU ? "
Maan answer " your husband "
Geet said " Yeh " and start laughing then " Realy and im JKR nice to meet you " husband" "
Maan pull her to him in anger and look at her eyes she was looking at him like a stranger ,then let her go saying " You dont remember right ? "
Geet said " remember what ?" then look to her parents who were full of guilt that was clear to their face
then Rano look at him with anger and said " She is not your wife , not enymore "
Geet look at her mother with shock and said " what you mean by " not enymore " why didn't stop in " she is not your wife " "
Rano look down while Mohinderlaal said to Maan " Rano is right she is not your wife enymore , you have got a divorce "
Geet feel dizzy when her father said " divorce" , then Vikram tell Maan too " Did you hear she is not your wife "
Rajji said " Geet signed the divorce paper that you had send to her what else do you want ? you had hurting her enough "
Rajji's husband Teji said " im a lawyer and since Geet signed the papers i cannot see what are you doing here "
Geet was looking at everybody with an open mouth then said
" What, how , when , o god im speechless , for the first time in my life i have nothing to said "
Maan smile looking at Geet then look and Teji and say " so you are a lawyer , so you should know that for a divorce to be complete both parties must signe Geet did signe but i did not , so legally we still married "
Mohinderlaal said to him " you jerk "
Maan smile and said " Jerk i just save your daugther from commeting a crime , a woman married to two men is illegal here and on india too, right Teji "
Vikram's mother look at her son and said " were going to married a married woman ? " Vikram said " all i know that she get divorced "
Geet look at Vikram and said " you know , my familly know, only me and your mother who has no idea that i was married and signed divorce's papers but im still married , ok when exactly did that happen wait a minute is that happen in the years that i dont remember..."
Rano said to Geet " sorry dear we were trying to protect you"
Geet " Protect me , you lie to me you said to me after the operation that " nothing interesting happen to you,you dont have to worry about those memories that you lost chill " i think that the fact that i got married is quiet interesting " Geet look at her mother in a way she never does before she was hurt her world was not the same enymore , Maan look at her and said " Adi and Pinky were right the operation did Remove part of your memories "

Geet said " now i feel like im in one of the Ekta shows "

Maan smile then hold her and said " Come with me "

Geet said " No , let me go , we maybe married but i dont know you let me go "
Maan " I had let you go once and im not going to do it again "
Nobody could help Geet since the guards with guns were there
But Maan stop look at Rano and said " Sorry maa , i will make sure that we all have dinner sometimes like a familly and clear up this misunderstanding i will contct you later , dont worry Geet will be fine with me " then he said to Vikram " The only reason that stop me from beating you up to dead for what you are trying to do now is your parents so i will say this just once stay away from Geet "
Then he add " Mr Mohinderlaal , Rano ma , Bahbhi , and Teji see you later and take care"
Geet said " "see you later and take " where are taking me ?"
Maan said " our home "
Geet " our home ?"
Maan " yes dear, our home in india "
Geet then start screaming while Maan was holding her hand and pulling her " Help , somebody call 911 , this man is kidnaping me "
But no one could move Rano and Rajji keep looking at Geet intill the doors opened again but it was late Geet has gone with Maan surrounded by his bodyguards


We cannot hide the truth forever and the lie still be a lie even if we come up with it to protect our loved ones, specialy if the hidding truth can turn their world upside down

Edited by kholita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ooo wow
sweets thax 4 this maaneet fiction😃😃
its amzing
read abt maanu's memory loss bt its geet
n god she getting engaged with some gadha
n she already married to my maanu
hehr family lied to maanu that she died
y wwts the reason
n maanu wow wt a punch he gave that gadha
aur nhi toh kya kisi aur ki wife no mere maanu ki wife ke saath eng. n hug chi chi
bt maanu me disappointed only one puch maza nhi aaya😆😆
chlo maanu geet ko le gya yee
waise me lvd geet's ch here n her dialoges muaahh too god
lvd it
as i said before
its amzing
n now me in lv with this

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