Maneet,Do you remember ( fiction)Chp 20 pg 34 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read all 3 parts
Loved it
So maan & geet already married
And geet lost her some memory and forgot that she married to maan
And now maan is taking her away to india
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@All thanks for your comments 😳
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chp 4 falshbacks






falshbacks are a past incident recurring vivdly in the mind,its like a movie made by our collected memories , talk about it may take a long time but see it take just a second


Everybody on the hall were still on the state of shock " Did this actully happen ?" Rajji said breaking the silence
Then Vikram 's mother Rupinder say with anger " Yes , that realy happened , this rishta is cursed this is the second time that someting bad happen and stop us from completing , this marriage is not supposed to happing , let's go "
Rupinder start walking away while Vikram and his Father follow her , in the car Vikram start to see flasshbacks from his past with Geet

Flashback 1
It was almost 2 years when he saw her for the first time ,when his parents choose a girl for him for marriage and he doesn't want that intil his father menace him to cut money from him, then he decide to meet to girl on an aranged date just the 2 of them before saying "no" so he can just tell his parents that he " doesn't like her " , Vikram say while sitting in the restaurant waiting for her " she look pretty on the photo maybe i will not feel boring talking to her "
Vikram was a big Wolf the kind of guy who date so many girls at onces , cheat on all of them and break up with them when he start feeling boring, he doesn't want to get married , he was " one woman's man" he was the " ladies's man ", suddly a sweet voice speak to him "excuse me sir, are you Vikram who come for the date ? " Vikram turn to see Geet looking breath taking in a pink salwar kameez, he said " Yes , Geet right ? "she take a chair and sit down to his table saying" thank god you look exactly like the Pic and you set in this table , i was i afraid not to find you "
Vikram " you look more beautiful than your pic "
Geet " thanks , you are a big flirt right ?"
Vikram said when he was lost on her beauty " yes , i mean no , i mean ..."
Geet said " relax , im just joking, is it your first date ?"
Vikram "no, yes , no yes"
Geet keep laugthing at his confuse answers
Vikram then said " i mean this my first arranged date , i mean blind date, i dated before but not arranged , and not to much actully to much but what i mean is ..."
Geet said " chill , take a class of water, you are not in police station im not questioning you "
Vikram said to him self " thats weird , usully i dont get confuse when im talking with girls "
Geet said " infact thats my first date ever and im more cool than you, ok lets start with an easy things like your hobbies?"
Vikram smile and siad " Ladies first "
Geet said ok " I play hockey in the week end with my friends infact i was part of the hockey team in my college days and i won a few middales , i also love to read books , watching movies especially horror ones and series like " House" and "How i meet your mother" and my all time favorite " friends " what about you ?"
Vikram smile and siad " wow , as for i like to ..." they keep talkng for a while that they lose the track of time , Geet has this ability to make people comfort talking , Vikram talk to her like he know her for years he doesn't know how they reach their but he start telling her his first love story " I was in hight school she was my math's teacher, i was a brat who doesn't care about study intill i meet her, she was a brillions teacher i start to love math infact all her students start too, she was so nice and beautiful, i try my best to be one of the best student in the school to impress her, every time she say to me " good work " , " you are showing a big progress " my heart beat fast , i love to watch her on school and i go to her class to do so ,i pass to finale exam and i was accepted in a good college so i decide to confess my love to her, but when i go to end of the year party i saw everybody Congratulation her because she got married i was shocked i spend to summer playing sad love song again and again i even start drinking alcohol for the first time in my life , my friends call me " Devdas " but then i go to college and i move on , thats weird i did not to tell this story to enyone before how we reach this ? "
Geet said " i have no idea too" and they start laughing
" what about you Geet tell me the story of your first love "
Geet smile " i was 14 years old , i have got a scholarship to stady art in one of the best high school in india , it was for the rich people, then one day some girls start Bullying me because im not from a rich fammily , then he come , he was 16 years old , i never saw him before that day he stop them and help me ,that was the first time i saw him, then i find out than he study economy and his the Popular boy there , because his was the Richest student there, also always the first on the school so very smart, so hansome and has an attitute make girls drool over him , but i did not love him because of that , he was a nice person thats what i saw that day on him , and thats why i start to like him , i use to watch him from distance , sometime i even follow him like a crazy but he never notice me , i was just invisible in his world , i dont blame him , in those day i use to put big Eyeglasses , i had a very short hair i was so skinny and i smell like " art" because my long hours of work at art projects i keep my first sided love for 3 years , we talk a few times but never more than a few minutes, then i hear that he will go to college so like you i decide to confess my love for him on the party of the end of the year , i go there i say " Hi " , he was friendly with me then when i was about to see the ILU a boy with camera come and he ask him to take a photo to us after than he say to me " Have fun in the party " and go with his friends later i know that he never collect our pic but i do , and i still have the pic of the last time i saw him on my room in a red frame i still follow his news on Journals and net his is a very famous and rich businessman" she laught
Vikram said " we both have a miserable first love stories "
Geet laugh and said " Wow , we just found our first common point "
Vikram said " wait a minute you still fallow his news , are you still in love with him ? "
Geet said escape his question " im hungry "
Vikram said " o yes ,we keep talking and we forget to order " after they order and have lunch they keep talking Geet " i will not stop working after mariage " Vikram " me too" they laugh then he add " I dont mind you are very talented and your works on publicity are great, the company that you work at is very famous , and you are popular in your Field"
Geet " thanks , you cannot believe the work behind a 30 second of pub , what about do you enjoy working on familly hotels?"
Vikram" no one ask me that before people dont ask me if i enjoy my work , at first i was not but now im more comfortable i help to make 2 of our hotels to be 5 starts after they were 4 , and i hope the do the same with to rest too"
Geet " you are good at your work too"
Vikram said with smile " Thanks "

then in the date end and Vikram accompanied Geet to her car and when they were Shaking hands, Vikram said " i like you , are you ok if we keep up on this marriage ?"
Geet said " ok , why not , lets do it"
Vikram said " ok "
Geet " ok " after a while Geet said " Vikram i have to go can you please let my hand ?"
Vikram said " ok , sorry bye"
Vikram keep looking at her car intil it turn , his parents were happy to know that he like tthe girl , they decide that engagment will be in 3 week and he was happy .
But after 10 days he was shocked when Geet call him telling him that she cannot marry him and that she is sorry then end to call , his parents then tell him that they talk with her parents the day before she call him,his parents decide not to complete this since Geet is very sick , and her parents want to take her away for treatment and she may not survive , Vikram has many questions but his mother end all his curiosity when she said " i dont want a sick bahu what if she die , what if my grandchildren were sick too, no way " and that was the end for his first engagement with Geet , it end days before to engagement party , Vikram back to reality when he hear his mother saying
" Veku we are home get out from the car and stop tinking i will find a new bahu in no time , i have told you before not to try to marry her again , but you were stuborn , you meet her again after a long time and say " i want her again" crazy kid"

Meanwhile Rano and Mohinderlaal were in the car with Rajji , Teji was driving, everybody was silence , Rano start to see flashbacks of the day when everything , she start to remember to start of all this

Flashback 2
Rano was on the phone worried talking to Rajji " Geet will meet the boy today , they both want to meet first on a date before accepting im so worry , Geet hardly accept to go she say she doesn't want to get married "
Rajji " Dont worry mom, if this marriage is mean to be everything will be ok,Geet never fail on eny of her deals , she gonna be ok just relax and pray for the best "
Rano " i realy pray for the best dear, o god i hear Geet car she is her , i will go to find out how thing go "
Rajji " Dont forget to call and give the latest information , Bye ma"
Rano " ok dear bye "
Geet come in the house she was shock to see her mother on the door waiting for her then said " Mom you scare me , im not used to see you as long as i open the door "
Rano " sorry dear , i did not mean to scare you i was just waiting for you honey "
Geet smile and said when she was heading to the living room puting her purse down while Rano was following " " sorry dear", " i was witing for you haney", wow you realy want to know what happen on the date right ? "
Rano set down and sofa saying" ok Geet set down and tell me exactly what happen in detail "
Geet set and say " mom you know me im not good at " girls talk" so i will just go to the point he like me and he want to keep up on this rishta so mom , be happy you will have a long weaks of shopping"
Rano said " realy im so happy , what about do you like him ? "
Geet " his a nice a guy , i can see myself as his wife ok mom im tired tell dad im going to my room to have a shower" Geet leave the room as Sobha was trying to stop her saying " Geet come on, you had gone for hours tell me about to date on more details Geet ,Geet"but all she hear is the door of Geet room get closed,then Rano said to herself " was she just joking ? she was cold ,Rajji in her first date with Teji keep speaking for days about it , but my Geet is different"
Then Mr Mohinderlaal come saying " Vikram's father just call he told me that we will continue on this vivah, also Rupinderji will call you tonight to talk about the engagement and the wedding "
Rano" Great, our second daugther is getting married "
Mohinderlaal said " yes our second daugther is getting married " they start to get ementional ,Mohinderlaal said to change that feeling of sadness mixed with joy " I will let you handle everything with Vikram's mother , the women are more expert in those things"
Rano " trust me with this i did a great job on Rajji marriage"
Mohinderlaal " yes , you did"
Rano " im going to call Rajji , she must be waiting for the news, but first i will prepare the dinner"
Rano spend hours preparing Geet favorite plate for dinners she was happy then she call Rano and tell her everything then what Geet said
" She just said that , when i come from my first date with Tejji i tell everything with details , Geet is just .. . what can i said thats typical from her "
Rano laugh and said" yeh thats typical from Geet, im happy that the guy like her , she love the talk but not the " girls talk " , i had to use emotionally blackmails to make her go to the date ,and she refuse to put eny make-up, i may have to kidnap her if i want her to come with me for shopping to the wedding "
Geet suddenly come take the phone from her mother and said " hi Sis are you ok ? gess what im getting married but i think my mom told you that, so you are coming right ?"
Rano " Congraz sis , of course im coming i cannot miss that for the world "
Geet " the kids and Teji baya have to come too"
Rajji " ok Geet evrybody will come, but please make things easy for mom, dont toture her on shopping or on all the preparations act like a perfect girl just for once "
Geet said " Sorry sis , i cannot promise you that im a girl with a personality of a dude " Rano who was hearing their conversation while she was preparing for dinner start to laugh of Geet last ligne so does Rajji who said " Geet you will never change " Geet said when she saw the plates that Rano was puting on table " Ok sis , bye kiss the kids for me, and give Teji a hi 5 also from me '" Rajji laugh and said " bye Geet but why this hurry you use to talk with me for hours "
Geet sorry sis " i have to go to eat my Rewards, mom say bye too " Geet close to phone give it to Rano and said " im gonna Wash my hand , if i knew that you would prepare all this for me , i would go to blind dates more often " Geet kiss Rano on her Cheek and went to wash her hand saying " no one touch enything before i comeback"

Next morning Rano ,Mohinderlaal and Geet were having breakfast when Rano said to Mohinderlaal " I talk with Rupinderji last night to engagement will be in 3 weak and the wedding in 1 month"
Mohinderlaal " that fast ? "
Geet " atlest someone is gonna miss me in that house , see Dad they want to get rid of me as soon as possible "
Rano " its not like that they are the ones in hurry, Rupinderji tell me that she want to see her Veku get married as soon as possible be happy that she give us that time at first she want less"
Geet " who is Veku ?"
Rano " its Vikram ,Rupinderji keep saying Veku , Veku all the call that it stuck on my head "
Geet " Veku?, yak, i will definitely change his nick name after the marriage"
Rano and Mohinderlaal laugh while Geet get up and start to clear to table
Rano " Look our daugther is doing her best to be perfect house wife "
Geet "mom i just collect to plate not preparing Feast , and i dont have to try to be perfect at house work, iam perfect you always said that i cook better that you "
Rano " yeh you cook in an amezing way but when it come to cleaning you are completly clumsy you break all my favorite glass ,plates and furniture that is Breakable"
Mohinderlaal "infact you are clumsy when you doing nothing,when you are just walking or sitting , you fall all the time and hit the wallsatlest 2 time a day " and he and Rano laugh
Geet say while heading to the Kitchen with the plates on her hands "im not clumsy the floor just hates me , the tables and chair are bullies and the walls get in my way "
Rano and Mohinderlaal keep laughing tell they hear a voice of plate falling on the floor , Rano " see , i told you, im going to see if we still have plate for breakfast "
Mohinderlaal " ok , just dont scold her please" Rano smile at him then head to the Kitchen , suddenly Mohinderlaal hear her sceaming " Geet , Geet open your eyes"
Mohinderlaal run to the Kitchen when he found Geet on the floor unconscious with blood on her nose, and Rano holding her, he was shocked because Geet in her whole years with them never pass out then he said taking his phone " Im gonna call for an Ambulance"

It was night and on the hospital Rano was holding Geet's hand , this one was sleeping on the hospital's bed Mohinderlaal was standing next to her , then he put his hand on Rano shoulder and said " Dont worry the doctors has done all the tests and give her the treatment soon she will wake up, and the doctors will come with the results its probably just fatigue"
Rano said " not its not stress or fatigue, Geet get tired a lot in the past , she had Fever and flu but she never pass out , never "
Geet slowly open her eyes and said " where am i ? mom ,dad what happened ? "
Rano " we are at the hospital you passed out this morning , dont worry doctors do some tast for you now we wait for the results "
Geet " atlest now i have a good reason for breaking all your plates on the morning " then she laugh
Mohinderlaal " i Told you she will be ok Rano , look at her start her jokes " then look at Geet and said " are you feeling better dear ?"
Geet smile get up from the bed and see "much better dad look at me im walking again "
Rano " lie down on bed you need rest "
Geet " No i dont need rest i feel perfectly fine, what i need is a pic "
Mohinderlaal " a pic ? "
Geet " this is first time that i pass out ,i know that you 2 did not
take a pic for me in that position, i know you were freaking out,
the first thing we will do when we go to the home is faking a pass out you take pic of me,and then i will add it to my album of photo , of course after i show the pic the Adi and Pinky "
Geet hit her forehead and said
"o my god i forgot to call Adi and Pinky and tell them that im
getting married , how can I ? they are my best friends since college o god they will get realy angry, what wrong with me i keep forgotten things this days? "
Rano said " aarti stop talking and stop your madness for a while you need rest please lie down, you will call them later "
Mohinderlaal "by the way i call your work and talk to Adi,he was so worry about you and he said he will handle everything, at work also he will come with Pinky at the hospital after he pick her from her work too, they keep calling when you were sleeping and they are on the way to the hospital too"
Geet " they dont have to come im fine, but dad you didn't tell them
about my vivah news "
Mohinderlaal " No dear dont worry "
Geet " good because i want to tell them myself " The door open and 2 doctor come in , Mohinderlaal " Hi is everyting is ok ?"
Rano " Nothing is wrong with our daughter ? "
The doctors look at each other and one of them said " I have some news for you could you come with me at my office "
Geet said " Come on Doc im awake and im 26 years old , just tell us all its a bad news right ? you guys dont look happy , please tell that because you had work so many hour "
One of the Doctore smile head on the bed and stand next to it and say " Hi miss Geet you are finally awake, Hi im Dr Khanna Neurosurgeon , how do feel ? "
Geet " Scary ,you work on brains right ?"
The Doctor said " yes miss Geet and im sorry to said that i have some bad news for you "


Rano suddenly stop her thoughts when she hear Rajji calling her
" Mom we are home please lets go , dont worry Geet is gonna be
ok with Maan "


Our flashbacks are not always happy we dont call only to see our happy days or tortoring our self with the bad ons ,we just want to analyze the situation, and finally end with to questions like " What if ..? " " Why we dont have those happy time enymore? " and "Why all that had happen to us ?"
Edited by kholita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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JUST READ THIS
QUITE AN INTERESTING STORY
GEET FORGOT HER MARRIAGE TO MAAN
HER PARENTS LIED TO MAAN THAT SHE DIED IN THE ACCIDENT AND LIED TO HER THAT THERE WERE NO OLD MEMORIES THAT SHE NEEDED TO KNOW
WANT TO KNOW THE PAST
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful start...dear can u pls reduce the font size??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting story...continue soon...thanx for the PM
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awesome wow amazing start want more soon thx for om
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awesome updates

but y dey hide dis thing from maan that geet is died??

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geet's sense of humour is awesome ! love the stories on memory loss. continue pl...
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Chp 5 : Second first kiss


The fist time of doing enything is special to us -our first day at school , the first time we ride a back ,first day at work, our first time reading a good book, our first love , our first kiss- that feeling that we have when we do enything for the first time is one of the best feelings, we all wish the feel it again , and we are lucky if we have a chance to do so

Geet keep screaming " Help , somebody call 911 , this man is kidnaping me " but soon she realize that all her sceams are in vain , Maan was just leading her by holding her hand he didn't stop or look at her he just keep going ,while the bodyguards keep following them, everything was so fast she suddly realize when he stop, that they were on the park infront of a black limozin car, Maan finally let her hand go to open the door of the car for her and say with Tone full of command " Get in "
Geet look at him in a face that scream " how dare you talk to me like that ?" then she add " Hell no "
" Just get in " Maan
Geet said" Look , i know that if i refuse you gonna force me, its only me and there so many of you " said that looking at the Guards standing next to them , " lets try to talk first before going enywhere im sure we gonna find a solution,dont put yourself on troubles i mean kidnapping is a crime , you seem to be from a good family and rich too so why are doing this ?"
Maan " you are my wife im not kidnapping you im just taking you home ,our home "
Geet said trying to controle her anger " Dont call me your wife i need more proofs to believe on that, thing is i dont know you , i had some health probleme cause me a Amnesia even if im your wife i dont remember it , please let me go and later we may talk or let our lawyers do to talk im sure we gonna find a way to end this marriage"
" End the marriage " Maan said with anger pulling her to him tell their eyes meet " You are to one who enter first in my life planning to make your memories a part of me , we didn't meet by chance , you planned everything , gess what you have successed a way too much you are not just a part of my memories now, you are part for my soul, you wanted that , there no way to end this marriage not after what you have done to me ,not after i found you again " Maan suddenly realize the fear in her eyes, then he just let her go
and said " Sorry its not your fault that you had Amnesia, its not your fault that you loved me and i couldn't see that, all you want from me is i remember you , so i remind you in time like this, sorry because i yall at you it just i could control my self when you said " end this marriage "
Geet was shocked to see his way of talking , its not his anger that shock its his possessive eyes the way he was looking at her his tone when he get angry then when he Apologize to her , she could see evey part of him sreaming " you are mine only mine " , this is was just strange feeling , she know that he wasn't going to let her go , she also undestand from his talk that she was the one who wake this desire on him , the one who make him becomming like that,she just get on car on silence and he does to same , they were sitting on the large limozine silenced ,she can feel his eyes looking her , so she look down trying to avoid his gaze for the first time in her life she feel out of words , just so many questions in her mind " Did I realy does that , and why ? why my parents lie to me and hide this ? how could i make a guy like him feel this way for me , im just a crazy, weird , clumsy girl with a boring Habits and simple dreams ? was i someone else before the operation ? before the Amnesia ? but my family told me that loosing years from my memeory had not changing me at all as a person , how could i lose control like that and set quietly in his car ? "
He was setting look at her and feeling guilty " was i harsh to her ? did i said to much ? will she ever remember me ? forgive me for expeling her from my life Twice, the first when i did not remember her when , he need me to do so , and the second when i didn't hear explanation,and just leting her go , but i swear today since destiny has give another chance with her , i will not miss it this time, Geet i will do enything to make you happy , just dont ask me to let you go not for the 3 time " he keep having all this ideas , but he couldn't stop looking at her, he still can't believe that she there ,alive and with him ,he couldn't even blink while looking at her, as if he does she may Disappear, he was living like a living dead, after she left his life, the only reason that he doesn't go insane after losing her is her family and her last letter to him , his days was just full of work , he couldn't stop his memories with her , from sweeping all his existence, he just can't lose her agian , the car stop Geet get out open to door for her he pull his hand to help her out, but she didn't she was " Where are we ? " for her surprise she saw a private plane infrond of her they were on an a private part from the airport , she just ask him again" Are we going to travel on this ?"
Maan smile and siad " yes "
Geet " where are you taking me exactly ?"
Maan" i already told you home "
Geet just start to feel her old self back to her ,as the anger start to
fill her ,she look at him and said " Dont you think im going to make things easy for you "
He give her en evil smile and said " I know "
They keep looking at each other on silence for a for a while , till Dev come, he caugh to have their attention then say to Maan
" Maan , the plane is ready " then he look at Geet with a friendly smile "O god , Geet babhi you are alive, im glad to see you again "
Geet look at the guy with a stem smile " let me gess , you are my brother-in law "
Maan look at Geet with a smile " Dev Geet has some memory problemes so let me intruduce you again, Geet this is Dev your brother-in law "
Dev and Maan were not a real brothers, but they grow up toghter , Dev's mother was yash's nanny ( and thats is another story for later 😉)
Geet with sarcasm in her tone " Nice to meet you Dev baya "
Dev was a little confuse when Maan tell him about the memory problem then when Geet talk to him with sarcasm but he try to be friendly and talk to her like he use to do " So bahbhi whats up ?"
Geet think "this guy also talk to me like he realy know me " so she answer him with her sarcasm's tone again
" Nothing much baya ,i was about the get engaged when a man come of no where, stop the party and Claimed that im his wife and gess what everybody on my family agree somehow with him and the best part that i dont know him or remember when and why i get married to him , as you can see he kidnap me and now he is taking me somewhere that he keep calling home "
Dev and Maan try hard to control their laugh , Geet has a very funny sarcasm's tone ,then we she realize that this 2 men try the control their laugh , she just said
" Just laugh before the 2 of you explodes "
they just blast from laughing, Geet was not the kind of girl to feel sad or offended if people laugh at her talks or actions, she know that she has the talent of making enyone laugh without even trying sometimes she think that the life that she creat around her will be a great comic serie, her mother Roma use to tell her all time that sometime she look like she was born and raised in the cartoon world

Then Maan add after a long laugh " You did not change at all Geet "
Geet just said " Great now you are talking like you knew me,im going to the plane " she said that heading to the open door of the plane but stop and turn to anwser Maan when he said
" Just like that , you are not going to scream " Hell noo " again or trying to,agrue with me ? "
Geet then answer him before keep wolking " I watch a lot of movies and serials, i know after the filmy way that you acted today, that if i do that you gonna probably carry me in your arms , while im screaming " Put me down " till we got inside the plane put me down saying probably " as you wish " like the hero said, then im just gonna realize that to door of plane start to close and there is nothing i could do about it, so im giving both of us a break by going by my own self to get into the plane without me being a drama queen "
Maan start to laugh again while Geet start walking, he was watching her with treat, but when she take the stairs and head to the small door of the plane he remember something that had happened with her in their past days when she was trying to do that for the first time, he run to warn her but it was too late, she has already hit her head with door while trying to enter , Maan run to her thinking " O god why is that happening with her every time "
Geet just enter to the plane holding her forehead saying " outch
thats realy hurt now i have to add hiting the door of a private plane to my clumsy list"
" You had already done that dear , are you ok ? " Maan said taking her by surprise she doesn't now that he was right behinde her, then he said " Set down im gonna bring some ice " he said after he make her sit on one of the sets on the plane before he go to a small cabin there ,she was shocked to see his care , and before she could said that she its ok now no need for ice he comeback with a small bag of ice then he lean to her
puting the bag to red bump on her forehead and looking to her in to eyes scolting her like a small kid " O god Geet you never pay attention you are always on harry , does it hurt ?" he said that while she was all shocked to see all that care from him, and the way he scolt her , remind her of her mother Rano , but she couldn't stop looking at his black eyes that were looking at hers with love, she doesn't realize that they were standing in that position for a while till the ice start to melt ,since a weird hit start to spread on her face , then she realize that she was blushing she said to her self , " What is happening to me ? im not the kind of girl who blush easily , this man what the hell is he doing to me ?, his eyes are controling me "
Maan was looking at her with love then a desire to touch her lips ,
he just want a kiss to bileave that he wasn't dreaming about her again that she was actually there, he lean over her more that their lips almost touch , Geet's heart start beating fast in a way she never experienced before even when Vikram hug her in the engarement party ,her heart beat were normal so why when Maan was so close to her , and his lips almost touching hers , she feel
that way , " Whats wrong with me ?" her brain scream ,and before she could said enything his lips were already on hers, he kissed her with a crazy passion, her eyes were wide open from the shock " he is kissing me" her brain sream , the sound of the falling ice bag was the last thing she heared before she close her eyes and start kissing him back , she doesn't remember kissing
eny man before, she never know that she could kiss like that,she doesn't know how she help him to make their kiss perfect , they were kissing with passion ,they were alone on the plane the door was close ,the pailot was not there yet , Geet feel his hand pulling her from her chair while they keep kissing eachother standing there , he put his arm aroud her waist, and the only thing she could do is puting hers around his neck.
But suddenly when he start kssing her neck , she open her eyes wide open again then scream while trying to push him " Stop "

What Geet doesn't realize that this kiss, is her second first kiss on her life , her memory lose give a chance, the experience again all the first times that she had with Maan ,she has a chance to fall in love with the love of her life all over again 😉

Edited by kholita - 12 years ago

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